Comments received on poems by jarcher54
Reply to A. E. Housman
aDarkerMind said:
and what a share this is;
a true work of art.
September 16th, 2023 09:45
aDarkerMind said:
and what a share this is;
a true work of art.
September 16th, 2023 09:45
Reply to A. E. Housman
Neville said:
I am delighted that you should honour said war poet .. I have long been a fan .. not only of him but of Wilfred Owen, Siegfried Sassoon and so very many others .. each one worthy of a read .. I am glad I passed by this way today my friend ... Neville
September 16th, 2023 03:48
Neville said:
I am delighted that you should honour said war poet .. I have long been a fan .. not only of him but of Wilfred Owen, Siegfried Sassoon and so very many others .. each one worthy of a read .. I am glad I passed by this way today my friend ... Neville
September 16th, 2023 03:48
ELEGY FOR ANN
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly beautiful in every way. And very relatable too. Outstanding poetry. 💖
September 16th, 2023 02:18
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly beautiful in every way. And very relatable too. Outstanding poetry. 💖
September 16th, 2023 02:18
ELEGY FOR ANN
Lorenz said:
Time is one way -street .
Death id one-way door .
Rod Sterling in his dimension ,
is waiting for us ...
September 16th, 2023 02:10
Lorenz said:
Time is one way -street .
Death id one-way door .
Rod Sterling in his dimension ,
is waiting for us ...
September 16th, 2023 02:10
All on a pleasant meadow
Alex Praw said:
Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow with lambs to hell. And it\'s you who created the picture... It\'s such a piece of art!!!
September 9th, 2023 14:45
Alex Praw said:
Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow with lambs to hell. And it\'s you who created the picture... It\'s such a piece of art!!!
September 9th, 2023 14:45
All on a pleasant meadow
Alex Praw said:
Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow
with lambs to hell.
September 9th, 2023 14:44
Alex Praw said:
Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow
with lambs to hell.
September 9th, 2023 14:44
Reply to A. E. Housman
Doggerel Dave said:
\"should\" - hasn\'t - will.
Reflection? No, definitely a refutation.
Which doesn\'t alter my intention as above.
A smooth gem full of truth - Thanks.
August 21st, 2023 01:50
Doggerel Dave said:
\"should\" - hasn\'t - will.
Reflection? No, definitely a refutation.
Which doesn\'t alter my intention as above.
A smooth gem full of truth - Thanks.
August 21st, 2023 01:50
Reply to A. E. Housman
sorenbarrett said:
I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and hits me deep. The second stanza grabbed me and said it all. I thank you for putting it in context with your note. It truly reads as a classic.
August 20th, 2023 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and hits me deep. The second stanza grabbed me and said it all. I thank you for putting it in context with your note. It truly reads as a classic.
August 20th, 2023 12:43
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
Jane Frye said:
I think this is better than good. There is a poetry group called \"Rattle\". You can find them on the internet. They publish poems and award prizes. I hope you will consider sharing this poem with them.
August 19th, 2023 09:19
Jane Frye said:
I think this is better than good. There is a poetry group called \"Rattle\". You can find them on the internet. They publish poems and award prizes. I hope you will consider sharing this poem with them.
August 19th, 2023 09:19
The Small Space
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon inspection. The simple and complex united.
August 18th, 2023 00:00
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon inspection. The simple and complex united.
August 18th, 2023 00:00
ELEGY FOR ANN
Kinsley Lee said:
HI! Thank you for you r poem. It\'s imaginary and rather fantastic. Like to read a story.. Thank you so much.
August 8th, 2023 17:25
Kinsley Lee said:
HI! Thank you for you r poem. It\'s imaginary and rather fantastic. Like to read a story.. Thank you so much.
August 8th, 2023 17:25
The Small Space
Neville said:
another re-visit .. not just because I can and I care, but because these words & the accompanying artwork are worth it ... Neville
August 3rd, 2023 16:33
Neville said:
another re-visit .. not just because I can and I care, but because these words & the accompanying artwork are worth it ... Neville
August 3rd, 2023 16:33
The Small Space
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one and identify with parts of it
\"The walled garden
of my lover\'s heart
The vain glory
of my petty art\"
This echo\'s my own feelings very well. This piece reveals more each time it is read.
August 3rd, 2023 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one and identify with parts of it
\"The walled garden
of my lover\'s heart
The vain glory
of my petty art\"
This echo\'s my own feelings very well. This piece reveals more each time it is read.
August 3rd, 2023 13:18
The Small Space
The Dreamer said:
Wow! I sure can learn a lot from you guys, i am thankful that I joined this community.
June 22nd, 2023 10:32
The Dreamer said:
Wow! I sure can learn a lot from you guys, i am thankful that I joined this community.
June 22nd, 2023 10:32
All on a pleasant meadow
Neville said:
when your muse eventually finds you .. be sure I shall still be here .. Neville
June 22nd, 2023 04:18
Neville said:
when your muse eventually finds you .. be sure I shall still be here .. Neville
June 22nd, 2023 04:18
The Small Space
Neville said:
I kinda had an inkling I would be back here .. and yes, its still as bloomin good as it was the first time ... Neville
June 21st, 2023 12:21
Neville said:
I kinda had an inkling I would be back here .. and yes, its still as bloomin good as it was the first time ... Neville
June 21st, 2023 12:21
The Small Space
Goddess of the Mist said:
So very relatable, and something to come back to again and again. I\'ve been gone too long. I really enjoy this poem. Hope all is well with you!
June 7th, 2023 00:28
Goddess of the Mist said:
So very relatable, and something to come back to again and again. I\'ve been gone too long. I really enjoy this poem. Hope all is well with you!
June 7th, 2023 00:28
The Small Space
MendedFences27 said:
\"to die,\" \"finish me, \"petty art,\" \"shame,\" these final stanza words present a bleak sadness within your poem. Coupled with your art, which to me seemed to paint a disappearing man, added to that sadness. Yet, the skill with which you articulate the feeling shows poetic mastery. A great poem. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:19
MendedFences27 said:
\"to die,\" \"finish me, \"petty art,\" \"shame,\" these final stanza words present a bleak sadness within your poem. Coupled with your art, which to me seemed to paint a disappearing man, added to that sadness. Yet, the skill with which you articulate the feeling shows poetic mastery. A great poem. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:19
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
sorenbarrett said:
The evolution of social progress is so slow in comparison to technological accomplishment. This gulf has created a threat to all of humanity. Such a beautiful yet fearful dream. It appears that Hermes left only some of his scrolls and the progress of the human soul for peace and human rights is up to us to discover.
May 7th, 2023 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
The evolution of social progress is so slow in comparison to technological accomplishment. This gulf has created a threat to all of humanity. Such a beautiful yet fearful dream. It appears that Hermes left only some of his scrolls and the progress of the human soul for peace and human rights is up to us to discover.
May 7th, 2023 06:57
The Small Space
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Thank you for your sharing your poem. Your poem has something and it impressed me. Thank you so much!
February 16th, 2023 06:47
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Thank you for your sharing your poem. Your poem has something and it impressed me. Thank you so much!
February 16th, 2023 06:47
The Small Space
Quemis said:
I know it is well made,
As It made me sad.
Very to the point.
Fitting watercolor too.
February 13th, 2023 13:37
Quemis said:
I know it is well made,
As It made me sad.
Very to the point.
Fitting watercolor too.
February 13th, 2023 13:37
A Fragment
Eileen Clark said:
I love this, in so few words and yet it fills me with with words I could never come up with in saying just the right thing at the right time, thank you
February 12th, 2023 12:28
Eileen Clark said:
I love this, in so few words and yet it fills me with with words I could never come up with in saying just the right thing at the right time, thank you
February 12th, 2023 12:28
ELEGY FOR ANN
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-Great composition! This poem conveys to me that she was your muse and you her connection to her journey on this earth-
February 10th, 2023 23:04
Parisab said:
I stumbled upon this-Great composition! This poem conveys to me that she was your muse and you her connection to her journey on this earth-
February 10th, 2023 23:04
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