Comments received on poems by jarcher54
ELEGY FOR ANN
Raymond shawa said:
The aroma of your imagination suffocates the mind with ideas... impressive piece to reflect on...I like it
September 9th, 2022 03:07
Raymond shawa said:
The aroma of your imagination suffocates the mind with ideas... impressive piece to reflect on...I like it
September 9th, 2022 03:07
A Fragment
Neville said:
in view of you bumping into me earlier, whether intentionally or by accident, I subsequently felt somewhat obliged to return to a page where I felt really most comfortable for another peek, you understand .. and yes indeed .. they remain just as I previously left them .. darn near perfect ... Neville
September 9th, 2022 02:28
Neville said:
in view of you bumping into me earlier, whether intentionally or by accident, I subsequently felt somewhat obliged to return to a page where I felt really most comfortable for another peek, you understand .. and yes indeed .. they remain just as I previously left them .. darn near perfect ... Neville
September 9th, 2022 02:28
ELEGY FOR ANN
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gahh fantastic imaginings, haunting read with all those real people popping up in hallucinatory way but all which made the poem so enthralling. Ironical that you didn\'t believe in ghosts she saw but ended up seeing ghosts after her passing away. Kudos!
September 9th, 2022 01:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gahh fantastic imaginings, haunting read with all those real people popping up in hallucinatory way but all which made the poem so enthralling. Ironical that you didn\'t believe in ghosts she saw but ended up seeing ghosts after her passing away. Kudos!
September 9th, 2022 01:46
A Fragment
arqios said:
Grieving is such a familiar stranger, like an unopen\'d book gathering dust on a shelf. But once \'unfolded\' can be closed again and put away for good. There it goes in a shelf of other books on other circumstances of grief. Thanks for sharing, J. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 20:25
arqios said:
Grieving is such a familiar stranger, like an unopen\'d book gathering dust on a shelf. But once \'unfolded\' can be closed again and put away for good. There it goes in a shelf of other books on other circumstances of grief. Thanks for sharing, J. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 20:25
ELEGY FOR ANN
Goddess of the Mist said:
I came to the party a little late but wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this piece of poetry you wrote. The way you described things really brought the visuals to mind and I felt like I was there. I think we are always surrounded by ghosts and spirits - in one way or another. I think your friend Ann really appreciates this :-)
April 19th, 2022 00:10
Goddess of the Mist said:
I came to the party a little late but wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this piece of poetry you wrote. The way you described things really brought the visuals to mind and I felt like I was there. I think we are always surrounded by ghosts and spirits - in one way or another. I think your friend Ann really appreciates this :-)
April 19th, 2022 00:10
A Fragment
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
An award winning write,..as far as I\'m concerned🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🏆🍾🕊
January 30th, 2022 22:18
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
An award winning write,..as far as I\'m concerned🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🏆🍾🕊
January 30th, 2022 22:18
ELEGY FOR ANN
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we laugh when people say they see the dead. The conflict is when the visions appear before us, and we sort of have to admit, maybe to ourselves that she was right.
October 26th, 2021 04:05
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes we laugh when people say they see the dead. The conflict is when the visions appear before us, and we sort of have to admit, maybe to ourselves that she was right.
October 26th, 2021 04:05
All on a pleasant meadow
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed this first time round (second time today!) Glad I got here via the usual process (‘ Sow and ye shall..’) Great job – you couldn’t up your output could you? I appreciate you are busy, but you have the goods plus a commitment to this site, so…..?
While here, your reference to Blake got me going… Beyond Tyger, his poetry was a little two mystical for my somewhat literal mind, so I never got into him. However your reference to The Chimney Sweeper pushed me to investigate. Two TCS’s on Poetry Foundation - are there any more? Of the two I’d be voting for ‘A little black thing…..’. That your choice too?
September 13th, 2021 01:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed this first time round (second time today!) Glad I got here via the usual process (‘ Sow and ye shall..’) Great job – you couldn’t up your output could you? I appreciate you are busy, but you have the goods plus a commitment to this site, so…..?
While here, your reference to Blake got me going… Beyond Tyger, his poetry was a little two mystical for my somewhat literal mind, so I never got into him. However your reference to The Chimney Sweeper pushed me to investigate. Two TCS’s on Poetry Foundation - are there any more? Of the two I’d be voting for ‘A little black thing…..’. That your choice too?
September 13th, 2021 01:15
ELEGY FOR ANN
Jay-Lee Jane said:
speechless...no other way to express other then: i love it!
September 12th, 2021 23:41
Jay-Lee Jane said:
speechless...no other way to express other then: i love it!
September 12th, 2021 23:41
A Fragment
Neville said:
I came back to check and hit the heart shaped button while I was here .. and yes, it is still truly excellent my friend .................Neville
September 12th, 2021 02:59
Neville said:
I came back to check and hit the heart shaped button while I was here .. and yes, it is still truly excellent my friend .................Neville
September 12th, 2021 02:59
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful and inspired.
August 10th, 2021 14:29
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful and inspired.
August 10th, 2021 14:29
ELEGY FOR ANN
Neville said:
if I could hit that red heart shaped icon up there a dozen times, or more even .. it would hardly register anywhere near how much I enjoyed the journey you just took me on ........................... a real gut wrenching bit of seemingly real nostalgia .. far better than just damned good in my most humble opinion .............................. Neville
July 20th, 2021 17:07
Neville said:
if I could hit that red heart shaped icon up there a dozen times, or more even .. it would hardly register anywhere near how much I enjoyed the journey you just took me on ........................... a real gut wrenching bit of seemingly real nostalgia .. far better than just damned good in my most humble opinion .............................. Neville
July 20th, 2021 17:07
ELEGY FOR ANN
L. B. Mek said:
its definitely a Poem! and more - meaningfully
a rustic inking, of a life\'s raw nerve-ending: feeling\'s
in short, its simply amazing and thank you for sharing!
\'If I get brave enough I may go visit Rogelio’s Cafe
Haven’t been there in way over a year
Rogelio may have forgotten me by now
and order shrimp and mole poblano enchiladas
--They aren\'t on the menu, you have to ask--
And sit with the ghosts of my Mom and Dad
And wave across the street at Ricky Flores and his mom Minnie
Rocking with big Flores smiles on the front porch of their tidy white casita\'
May 24th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
its definitely a Poem! and more - meaningfully
a rustic inking, of a life\'s raw nerve-ending: feeling\'s
in short, its simply amazing and thank you for sharing!
\'If I get brave enough I may go visit Rogelio’s Cafe
Haven’t been there in way over a year
Rogelio may have forgotten me by now
and order shrimp and mole poblano enchiladas
--They aren\'t on the menu, you have to ask--
And sit with the ghosts of my Mom and Dad
And wave across the street at Ricky Flores and his mom Minnie
Rocking with big Flores smiles on the front porch of their tidy white casita\'
May 24th, 2021 04:45
ELEGY FOR ANN
Doggerel Dave said:
It matters, of course, little whether a poem or just musings. It is rich in detail of people and places you have known which may be just images in your head or….
Great work.
May 23rd, 2021 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
It matters, of course, little whether a poem or just musings. It is rich in detail of people and places you have known which may be just images in your head or….
Great work.
May 23rd, 2021 07:38
ELEGY FOR ANN
dusk arising said:
Wonderful compelling reading. Superb imagery, story telling and message.
A really enjoyable read for me and i know I shall enjoy rediscovering this piece which is why it goes into my favourites.
Thank you for this super entertaining read.
May 23rd, 2021 04:48
dusk arising said:
Wonderful compelling reading. Superb imagery, story telling and message.
A really enjoyable read for me and i know I shall enjoy rediscovering this piece which is why it goes into my favourites.
Thank you for this super entertaining read.
May 23rd, 2021 04:48
IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT
Accidental Poet said:
And you were the friend that Tracy needed, and you were there for him. Great tribute jarcher. ; )
May 9th, 2021 14:23
Accidental Poet said:
And you were the friend that Tracy needed, and you were there for him. Great tribute jarcher. ; )
May 9th, 2021 14:23
All on a pleasant meadow
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lot of great attributes with this write
May 9th, 2021 09:42
ron parrish aka wordman said:
lot of great attributes with this write
May 9th, 2021 09:42
A Fragment
Neville said:
I am quite sure, being the lover of words and more specifically of poetry, that I am ...
I was almost certain to gravitate back to this little gem ...
It is after all, one that can easily stand the test of time ...
Neville
May 8th, 2021 04:26
Neville said:
I am quite sure, being the lover of words and more specifically of poetry, that I am ...
I was almost certain to gravitate back to this little gem ...
It is after all, one that can easily stand the test of time ...
Neville
May 8th, 2021 04:26
IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is a touching poem written in adoring your naughty fun friend who you must be missing. Its so sweet and fantastic even we are wishing he could be just swimming at the falls. Kudos for how you narrated and expressed it in elegy.
May 8th, 2021 03:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is a touching poem written in adoring your naughty fun friend who you must be missing. Its so sweet and fantastic even we are wishing he could be just swimming at the falls. Kudos for how you narrated and expressed it in elegy.
May 8th, 2021 03:15
A Fragment
Andy Hunter said:
A brief and perfectly phrased beautiful poem. Love it !!!
May 3rd, 2021 12:59
Andy Hunter said:
A brief and perfectly phrased beautiful poem. Love it !!!
May 3rd, 2021 12:59
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
John Prophet said:
Nice work.. sophisticated....
March 26th, 2021 12:05
John Prophet said:
Nice work.. sophisticated....
March 26th, 2021 12:05
All on a pleasant meadow
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ahan you too write light anx playful songs that can be enjoyed both as youthful rhymes and grownup stuff too. The imagery is fabulous. Kudos.!!
Oh and i just noted that you are a poet not poetess. And maybe you are Texan?
February 17th, 2021 06:09
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ahan you too write light anx playful songs that can be enjoyed both as youthful rhymes and grownup stuff too. The imagery is fabulous. Kudos.!!
Oh and i just noted that you are a poet not poetess. And maybe you are Texan?
February 17th, 2021 06:09
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I was born there so i find it more concerning and interesting. You wrote a great fab thoughtful tribute chronicling his life stages from poet to war. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I was born there so i find it more concerning and interesting. You wrote a great fab thoughtful tribute chronicling his life stages from poet to war. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:41
Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
Neville said:
a fine poetic tribute .. I have certainly learnt something from you today .. thank you .............
January 20th, 2021 11:25
Neville said:
a fine poetic tribute .. I have certainly learnt something from you today .. thank you .............
January 20th, 2021 11:25
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