Comments received on poems by jarcher54



The Small Space
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Well crafted.

May 29th, 2024 15:47

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Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

May 27th, 2024 23:45

All on a pleasant meadow
sorenbarrett said:

Great poem and artwork the poem has a Scottish of English flavor and though all others say Blake I sense a little Hieronymus Bosch. Loved especially the last line.

May 22nd, 2024 20:05

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sorenbarrett said:

This was masterfully written and crafted. A wonderful write.

May 22nd, 2024 15:35

The Small Space
Neville said:


This is still one of my all time jarcher54 faves and no kidding .. Neville

May 17th, 2024 08:36

A Fragment
Neville said:



I deliberately made my way back here to pay my respects again to an amazing little gem of a poem .. and also to Fay .. who is no longer with us .. Neville

January 16th, 2024 02:08

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Parisab said:

So exquisite! I also would like nothing more than your insight about the classics on this site…

November 19th, 2023 15:41

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Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work. The theme resonates.

November 18th, 2023 20:29

The Small Space
Firefall said:

Your poem really resonated with me.

November 4th, 2023 16:34

The Small Space
Michaelpoet said:

Hell of a write

November 2nd, 2023 10:56

The Small Space
Eileen Clark said:

Hi, thought I would stop by to see what your up to and I\'m so gl;ad I did, I love this one! I\'m looking forward to reading more of your poems.

October 26th, 2023 15:17

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Quemis said:

Awesome!

Really love this one. The flow is perfect. Reminds me of a mix of Dahl and Robert Service.

Perfect, to the point. Funny.

October 19th, 2023 19:40

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Norman Flagtea said:

I came across your poem only now and like it a lot!!
Please post some more,,

October 17th, 2023 07:19

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Bobby O said:

I really like the piece, even more so after reading it’s history and appliqué .

September 23rd, 2023 13:36

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hzugman said:

Love it!

September 23rd, 2023 13:33

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aDarkerMind said:

and what a share this is;
a true work of art.

September 16th, 2023 09:45

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Neville said:


I am delighted that you should honour said war poet .. I have long been a fan .. not only of him but of Wilfred Owen, Siegfried Sassoon and so very many others .. each one worthy of a read .. I am glad I passed by this way today my friend ... Neville

September 16th, 2023 03:48

ELEGY FOR ANN
Teddy.15 said:

Incredibly beautiful in every way. And very relatable too. Outstanding poetry. 💖

September 16th, 2023 02:18

ELEGY FOR ANN
Lorenz said:

Time is one way -street .
Death id one-way door .
Rod Sterling in his dimension ,
is waiting for us ...


September 16th, 2023 02:10

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Jon Nakapalau said:

Well done!

September 15th, 2023 16:03

All on a pleasant meadow
Alex Praw said:

Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow with lambs to hell. And it\'s you who created the picture... It\'s such a piece of art!!!

September 9th, 2023 14:45

All on a pleasant meadow
Alex Praw said:

Such an interesting contrast. From a pleasant meadow
with lambs to hell.

September 9th, 2023 14:44

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Doggerel Dave said:

\"should\" - hasn\'t - will.
Reflection? No, definitely a refutation.
Which doesn\'t alter my intention as above.
A smooth gem full of truth - Thanks.


August 21st, 2023 01:50

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sorenbarrett said:

I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and hits me deep. The second stanza grabbed me and said it all. I thank you for putting it in context with your note. It truly reads as a classic.

August 20th, 2023 12:43

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orchidee said:

Good write J.

August 20th, 2023 11:58

Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo
Jane Frye said:

I think this is better than good. There is a poetry group called \"Rattle\". You can find them on the internet. They publish poems and award prizes. I hope you will consider sharing this poem with them.

August 19th, 2023 09:19

The Small Space
sorenbarrett said:

The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon inspection. The simple and complex united.

August 18th, 2023 00:00

ELEGY FOR ANN
Kinsley Lee said:

HI! Thank you for you r poem. It\'s imaginary and rather fantastic. Like to read a story.. Thank you so much.

August 8th, 2023 17:25

The Small Space
hzugman said:



August 7th, 2023 09:14

The Small Space
Neville said:



another re-visit .. not just because I can and I care, but because these words & the accompanying artwork are worth it ... Neville



August 3rd, 2023 16:33

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