Comments received on poems by Pacifique Niyitanga



Untitled
L. B. Mek said:

\'learning to glide with the inevitability of life\'s gusty changes\'..
a wonderful message to share

March 26th, 2021 04:01

Untitled
Goldfinch60 said:

We have a dovecote near us and the \'doves of peace\' attack the other birds in our garden when they are feeding.

Peace can certainly be found with love though.

Andy

March 26th, 2021 01:38

Creative Life
Goldfinch60 said:

May those dreams bring you success in your life.

Andy

March 20th, 2021 01:35

Life And Death
Goldfinch60 said:

Death can lead to the new life that lasts for eternity.

Andy

March 13th, 2021 01:10

Decision
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write NP but one day the true one in your life will appear and that destruction will be come a construction so solid it will never fail.

Andy

March 10th, 2021 01:34

Decision
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, N.P.

March 9th, 2021 19:59

Decision
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh that\'s great, NP - not only clever, but also this poem\'s last section has a very sound determination...

March 9th, 2021 18:06

Respect Her
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful dedication, timely and so innately: relatable

March 9th, 2021 05:31

Respect Her
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words of tribute to all mothers Niyitanga.

Andy

March 9th, 2021 01:24

Respect Her
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful poem celebrating everybody\'s mother. Well done, Niyitanga!

March 8th, 2021 11:41

Question
L. B. Mek said:

\'yes, simply study their intentions at origination and when applicable, add \'wilful\' to their display of ignorance, if
they demonstrate a capacity to comprehend and still \'choose\' to ignore, their opportunity: to act humanely..\'
a fine write dear poet, thanks for inspiring my little reply, some insightful and pertinent questions you ask

March 8th, 2021 04:51

Question
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words Niyitanga, and such a true question.

Andy

March 8th, 2021 01:23

Question
Doggerel Dave said:

An especially good question, very well put here.
Now, what is to be done? Seems both are equally dangerous....

March 7th, 2021 17:10

Question
FredPeyer said:

That is a good question Niyitanga. Well written.

March 7th, 2021 16:13

Question
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, good read.

March 7th, 2021 12:25

Rainbow
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words 🙂

March 3rd, 2021 12:37

Disguiser
L. B. Mek said:

\'why do we fall Bruce?\'
\'so we can learn to pick ourselves up!\'..
a quote from Batman begins (2015 movie)..
a good read, thanks for sharing dear poet

March 2nd, 2021 05:02

Disguiser
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we have our ups and downs but every time we get up we move forward into a better life, our own better life.
Very good write NP.

Andy

March 2nd, 2021 01:36

Disguiser
Doggerel Dave said:

Make yourself vulnerable (when it\'s safe to do so)?
If I\'ve got that right, then I\'d vote for the third stanza there.
Good thoughts all through.

March 1st, 2021 16:26

Disguiser
FredPeyer said:

What is the saying? It doesn\'t matter how often you fall, what matters is how often you get back up.

March 1st, 2021 16:15

Old Enough
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately age comes to us all NP.

Andy

February 27th, 2021 01:32

Old Enough
Jerry Reynolds said:

Nice observation, N.P.

February 26th, 2021 09:35

Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words NP.

Andy

February 25th, 2021 01:14

Fear
Jerry Reynolds said:

Graceful write, N.P.

February 24th, 2021 08:54

Go Get Lost
Doggerel Dave said:

Language there singes the eyebrows a bit. And I can be quite potty mouthed sometimes, so I think it\'s the context.
Perhaps the problem will resolve itself when the girls become women and the boys become men. A hard wait, believe me; I remember....
Poem well constructed though.
Take care.

February 23rd, 2021 18:52

Go Get Lost
AlitaOpal said:

Now, I\'m sure this learning curve allows you to really understand what you really want in a relationship and in life.. 🎈

February 23rd, 2021 16:55

Go Get Lost
Jerry Reynolds said:

Angry write, N.P. Good one.

February 23rd, 2021 09:23

Do Not Tell
Goldfinch60 said:

Good thoughts NP, those things done in your past give you experience, experience cannot be taught. We musty all have our dreams and head towards them in our lives, many do coem true.

Andy

February 20th, 2021 02:28

Do Not Tell
Doggerel Dave said:

It\'s a balance, isn\'t it? Between conciliation and forgiveness, and the need to be aware of the past enough to ensure the same does no occur again.
I hope I initially understood you correctly - if not, don\'t hesitatee to let me know.

February 19th, 2021 20:52

There Are Two
Goldfinch60 said:

We chose the one of us that is right in any changing situation.

Andy

February 13th, 2021 02:06

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