Comments received on poems by Pacifique Niyitanga
Humble
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that, very neatly put, NP. To be unassuming can be a sign of strength.
April 9th, 2021 18:58
Doggerel Dave said:
I get that, very neatly put, NP. To be unassuming can be a sign of strength.
April 9th, 2021 18:58
Dad Kid
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat little story, NP. I would think it is an experience some men and women would find familiar...
Also liked your rhymes and structure.
March 30th, 2021 19:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat little story, NP. I would think it is an experience some men and women would find familiar...
Also liked your rhymes and structure.
March 30th, 2021 19:52
Untitled
L. B. Mek said:
\'learning to glide with the inevitability of life\'s gusty changes\'..
a wonderful message to share
March 26th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'learning to glide with the inevitability of life\'s gusty changes\'..
a wonderful message to share
March 26th, 2021 04:01
Untitled
Goldfinch60 said:
We have a dovecote near us and the \'doves of peace\' attack the other birds in our garden when they are feeding.
Peace can certainly be found with love though.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We have a dovecote near us and the \'doves of peace\' attack the other birds in our garden when they are feeding.
Peace can certainly be found with love though.
Andy
March 26th, 2021 01:38
Creative Life
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams bring you success in your life.
Andy
March 20th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams bring you success in your life.
Andy
March 20th, 2021 01:35
Life And Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Death can lead to the new life that lasts for eternity.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Death can lead to the new life that lasts for eternity.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:10
Decision
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write NP but one day the true one in your life will appear and that destruction will be come a construction so solid it will never fail.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write NP but one day the true one in your life will appear and that destruction will be come a construction so solid it will never fail.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:34
Decision
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that\'s great, NP - not only clever, but also this poem\'s last section has a very sound determination...
March 9th, 2021 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that\'s great, NP - not only clever, but also this poem\'s last section has a very sound determination...
March 9th, 2021 18:06
Respect Her
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication, timely and so innately: relatable
March 9th, 2021 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication, timely and so innately: relatable
March 9th, 2021 05:31
Respect Her
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of tribute to all mothers Niyitanga.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of tribute to all mothers Niyitanga.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:24
Respect Her
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem celebrating everybody\'s mother. Well done, Niyitanga!
March 8th, 2021 11:41
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful poem celebrating everybody\'s mother. Well done, Niyitanga!
March 8th, 2021 11:41
Question
L. B. Mek said:
\'yes, simply study their intentions at origination and when applicable, add \'wilful\' to their display of ignorance, if
they demonstrate a capacity to comprehend and still \'choose\' to ignore, their opportunity: to act humanely..\'
a fine write dear poet, thanks for inspiring my little reply, some insightful and pertinent questions you ask
March 8th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'yes, simply study their intentions at origination and when applicable, add \'wilful\' to their display of ignorance, if
they demonstrate a capacity to comprehend and still \'choose\' to ignore, their opportunity: to act humanely..\'
a fine write dear poet, thanks for inspiring my little reply, some insightful and pertinent questions you ask
March 8th, 2021 04:51
Question
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Niyitanga, and such a true question.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Niyitanga, and such a true question.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:23
Question
Doggerel Dave said:
An especially good question, very well put here.
Now, what is to be done? Seems both are equally dangerous....
March 7th, 2021 17:10
Doggerel Dave said:
An especially good question, very well put here.
Now, what is to be done? Seems both are equally dangerous....
March 7th, 2021 17:10
Disguiser
L. B. Mek said:
\'why do we fall Bruce?\'
\'so we can learn to pick ourselves up!\'..
a quote from Batman begins (2015 movie)..
a good read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 2nd, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'why do we fall Bruce?\'
\'so we can learn to pick ourselves up!\'..
a quote from Batman begins (2015 movie)..
a good read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 2nd, 2021 05:02
Disguiser
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have our ups and downs but every time we get up we move forward into a better life, our own better life.
Very good write NP.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
In life we have our ups and downs but every time we get up we move forward into a better life, our own better life.
Very good write NP.
Andy
March 2nd, 2021 01:36
Disguiser
Doggerel Dave said:
Make yourself vulnerable (when it\'s safe to do so)?
If I\'ve got that right, then I\'d vote for the third stanza there.
Good thoughts all through.
March 1st, 2021 16:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Make yourself vulnerable (when it\'s safe to do so)?
If I\'ve got that right, then I\'d vote for the third stanza there.
Good thoughts all through.
March 1st, 2021 16:26
Disguiser
FredPeyer said:
What is the saying? It doesn\'t matter how often you fall, what matters is how often you get back up.
March 1st, 2021 16:15
FredPeyer said:
What is the saying? It doesn\'t matter how often you fall, what matters is how often you get back up.
March 1st, 2021 16:15
Go Get Lost
Doggerel Dave said:
Language there singes the eyebrows a bit. And I can be quite potty mouthed sometimes, so I think it\'s the context.
Perhaps the problem will resolve itself when the girls become women and the boys become men. A hard wait, believe me; I remember....
Poem well constructed though.
Take care.
February 23rd, 2021 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Language there singes the eyebrows a bit. And I can be quite potty mouthed sometimes, so I think it\'s the context.
Perhaps the problem will resolve itself when the girls become women and the boys become men. A hard wait, believe me; I remember....
Poem well constructed though.
Take care.
February 23rd, 2021 18:52
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