Comments received on poems by Pacifique Niyitanga
Naive, A Sijo
sorenbarrett said:
There are poems that every once in a while jump out and grab you this is one. Short but with a surprising punch at the end. Love it definately a fave
February 10th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
There are poems that every once in a while jump out and grab you this is one. Short but with a surprising punch at the end. Love it definately a fave
February 10th, 2025 17:28
Naive, A Sijo
Poetic Licence said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing.
February 10th, 2025 16:01
Poetic Licence said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing.
February 10th, 2025 16:01
Green, Limerick
sorenbarrett said:
Love limericks and this one sounds like it is a grazing animal maybe a cow.
February 4th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Love limericks and this one sounds like it is a grazing animal maybe a cow.
February 4th, 2025 05:03
Smokes and Love
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to that. Some of the best words a the silent spaces in between.
November 3rd, 2023 03:47
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to that. Some of the best words a the silent spaces in between.
November 3rd, 2023 03:47
Phobia I
Parisab said:
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear to “bliss of rose” I’m glad to see your new work peer friend
November 1st, 2023 20:02
Parisab said:
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear to “bliss of rose” I’m glad to see your new work peer friend
November 1st, 2023 20:02
Lost Love
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such as this knows no boundaries and respects no time, present and future... That humble refrain \"In next life, I wilt own thou\" speaks from such a humble heart, I don\'t see how anyone can not be moved by it.
October 24th, 2023 10:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such as this knows no boundaries and respects no time, present and future... That humble refrain \"In next life, I wilt own thou\" speaks from such a humble heart, I don\'t see how anyone can not be moved by it.
October 24th, 2023 10:07
Lazy Day
Parisab said:
‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’ block-I hope you can connect with a novel source of inspiration…
September 14th, 2023 14:01
Parisab said:
‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’ block-I hope you can connect with a novel source of inspiration…
September 14th, 2023 14:01
At 10 pm, Theory of Smokes
Kathryn Amaka said:
Really, Who cares?
Nice read.
Thanks for sharing ❤️
June 20th, 2023 08:05
Kathryn Amaka said:
Really, Who cares?
Nice read.
Thanks for sharing ❤️
June 20th, 2023 08:05
Smokes and Love
L. B. Mek said:
keep growing, your poetry is soaring dear Poet
insightful, brave, deep, deep lines
packaged in succinct poetic artistry
so impressive
(I read and learn)
June 19th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
keep growing, your poetry is soaring dear Poet
insightful, brave, deep, deep lines
packaged in succinct poetic artistry
so impressive
(I read and learn)
June 19th, 2023 04:09
N
Parisab said:
Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain
Nailing the Door” yet it “Nourished
My Inner beast” I found myself curious about a part II and how the conflict is resolved: Is the rain the beloved or the rain and beloved are also in conflict since it is interrupting an important encounter: so much can come out of this, yet it is a strong piece standing on its own: thanks for sharing poet friend…
June 17th, 2023 11:35
Parisab said:
Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain
Nailing the Door” yet it “Nourished
My Inner beast” I found myself curious about a part II and how the conflict is resolved: Is the rain the beloved or the rain and beloved are also in conflict since it is interrupting an important encounter: so much can come out of this, yet it is a strong piece standing on its own: thanks for sharing poet friend…
June 17th, 2023 11:35
At Mars Hotel
Parisab said:
I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to tell one “story” I like that your poetry reflects your age and I hope that you stay with that sophistication of youth
June 14th, 2023 11:39
Parisab said:
I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to tell one “story” I like that your poetry reflects your age and I hope that you stay with that sophistication of youth
June 14th, 2023 11:39
At 10 pm
Parisab said:
Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness: molecular cells or a prisoner’s tale in a cell: I liked the poem either way
June 12th, 2023 10:41
Parisab said:
Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness: molecular cells or a prisoner’s tale in a cell: I liked the poem either way
June 12th, 2023 10:41
At 10 pm
L. B. Mek said:
really like the sparse wording
insight delivered with succinct precision
wonderfully creative, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 12th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
really like the sparse wording
insight delivered with succinct precision
wonderfully creative, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 12th, 2023 04:06
For Them
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
But I don\'t know why people can\'t stop fighting or killing others. It was a genocide and I hope it won\'t happen again. Thanks for reading.
April 16th, 2022 13:22
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
But I don\'t know why people can\'t stop fighting or killing others. It was a genocide and I hope it won\'t happen again. Thanks for reading.
April 16th, 2022 13:22
For Them
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Niyatanga.
Why cannot man ever stop warring!
Andy
April 16th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Niyatanga.
Why cannot man ever stop warring!
Andy
April 16th, 2022 01:19
For Them
Dahlia said:
a well written wholehearted
commemoration to all the ills that have attacked and continue to attack our societies, well done poet!
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:27
Dahlia said:
a well written wholehearted
commemoration to all the ills that have attacked and continue to attack our societies, well done poet!
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:27
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