Comments received on poems by Pacifique Niyitanga
Smokes and Love
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to that. Some of the best words a the silent spaces in between.
November 3rd, 2023 03:47
Garth Rakumakoe said:
We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to that. Some of the best words a the silent spaces in between.
November 3rd, 2023 03:47
Phobia
Parisab said:
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear to “bliss of rose” I’m glad to see your new work peer friend
November 1st, 2023 20:02
Parisab said:
Great imagery: after breathing so that the “story” of phobia and fear to “bliss of rose” I’m glad to see your new work peer friend
November 1st, 2023 20:02
Lost Love
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such as this knows no boundaries and respects no time, present and future... That humble refrain \"In next life, I wilt own thou\" speaks from such a humble heart, I don\'t see how anyone can not be moved by it.
October 24th, 2023 10:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such as this knows no boundaries and respects no time, present and future... That humble refrain \"In next life, I wilt own thou\" speaks from such a humble heart, I don\'t see how anyone can not be moved by it.
October 24th, 2023 10:07
Lazy Day
Parisab said:
‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’ block-I hope you can connect with a novel source of inspiration…
September 14th, 2023 14:01
Parisab said:
‘Papers catch no ink’ I love this description of the writers’ block-I hope you can connect with a novel source of inspiration…
September 14th, 2023 14:01
At 10 pm, Theory of Smokes
Kathryn Amaka said:
Really, Who cares?
Nice read.
Thanks for sharing ❤️
June 20th, 2023 08:05
Kathryn Amaka said:
Really, Who cares?
Nice read.
Thanks for sharing ❤️
June 20th, 2023 08:05
Smokes and Love
L. B. Mek said:
keep growing, your poetry is soaring dear Poet
insightful, brave, deep, deep lines
packaged in succinct poetic artistry
so impressive
(I read and learn)
June 19th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
keep growing, your poetry is soaring dear Poet
insightful, brave, deep, deep lines
packaged in succinct poetic artistry
so impressive
(I read and learn)
June 19th, 2023 04:09
N
Parisab said:
Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain
Nailing the Door” yet it “Nourished
My Inner beast” I found myself curious about a part II and how the conflict is resolved: Is the rain the beloved or the rain and beloved are also in conflict since it is interrupting an important encounter: so much can come out of this, yet it is a strong piece standing on its own: thanks for sharing poet friend…
June 17th, 2023 11:35
Parisab said:
Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain
Nailing the Door” yet it “Nourished
My Inner beast” I found myself curious about a part II and how the conflict is resolved: Is the rain the beloved or the rain and beloved are also in conflict since it is interrupting an important encounter: so much can come out of this, yet it is a strong piece standing on its own: thanks for sharing poet friend…
June 17th, 2023 11:35
At Mars Hotel
Parisab said:
I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to tell one “story” I like that your poetry reflects your age and I hope that you stay with that sophistication of youth
June 14th, 2023 11:39
Parisab said:
I like your enigmatic style, please don’t let anyone to force you to tell one “story” I like that your poetry reflects your age and I hope that you stay with that sophistication of youth
June 14th, 2023 11:39
At 10 pm
Parisab said:
Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness: molecular cells or a prisoner’s tale in a cell: I liked the poem either way
June 12th, 2023 10:41
Parisab said:
Few words instructing scenes to come alive: I like the vagueness: molecular cells or a prisoner’s tale in a cell: I liked the poem either way
June 12th, 2023 10:41
At 10 pm
L. B. Mek said:
really like the sparse wording
insight delivered with succinct precision
wonderfully creative, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 12th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
really like the sparse wording
insight delivered with succinct precision
wonderfully creative, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
June 12th, 2023 04:06
For Them
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
But I don\'t know why people can\'t stop fighting or killing others. It was a genocide and I hope it won\'t happen again. Thanks for reading.
April 16th, 2022 13:22
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
But I don\'t know why people can\'t stop fighting or killing others. It was a genocide and I hope it won\'t happen again. Thanks for reading.
April 16th, 2022 13:22
For Them
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Niyatanga.
Why cannot man ever stop warring!
Andy
April 16th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good words Niyatanga.
Why cannot man ever stop warring!
Andy
April 16th, 2022 01:19
For Them
Dahlia said:
a well written wholehearted
commemoration to all the ills that have attacked and continue to attack our societies, well done poet!
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:27
Dahlia said:
a well written wholehearted
commemoration to all the ills that have attacked and continue to attack our societies, well done poet!
Dahlia
April 15th, 2022 18:27
For Them
Crowns4Christ said:
Wars and rumors of war, nation will rise against nation, and Kingdom against kingdom,
Jesus is coming quickly my friend
April 15th, 2022 15:25
Crowns4Christ said:
Wars and rumors of war, nation will rise against nation, and Kingdom against kingdom,
Jesus is coming quickly my friend
April 15th, 2022 15:25
For Them
dusk arising said:
Such is the terrible cost of war. And it seems perpetual. Will mankind ever learn to live in eternal peace?
April 15th, 2022 12:28
dusk arising said:
Such is the terrible cost of war. And it seems perpetual. Will mankind ever learn to live in eternal peace?
April 15th, 2022 12:28
Spider-Man
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I too
relate, most
with the lore of Spiderman
and that everyman, capacity
of humble capability
waiting for opportunity
allowing, him or her or non binary
to showcase, themselves
at their full, potential
of seemingly, limitless possibility..
(a true didactive tale
wrapped in entertaining fantasy)
loved how rigid you kept your stanzas, dear poet
resembled that thick string of knotted web
peter parker uses to climb, out
of his everyday normality
to reach, for that superhuman
fantastical, ideal
April 14th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I too
relate, most
with the lore of Spiderman
and that everyman, capacity
of humble capability
waiting for opportunity
allowing, him or her or non binary
to showcase, themselves
at their full, potential
of seemingly, limitless possibility..
(a true didactive tale
wrapped in entertaining fantasy)
loved how rigid you kept your stanzas, dear poet
resembled that thick string of knotted web
peter parker uses to climb, out
of his everyday normality
to reach, for that superhuman
fantastical, ideal
April 14th, 2022 05:26
Life: A Precious Gift
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this, and it covers everything, great piece
April 11th, 2022 14:51
Crowns4Christ said:
I love this, and it covers everything, great piece
April 11th, 2022 14:51
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