Comments received on poems by Pacifique Niyitanga
Still You
Crystal Hope said:
aww so very sweet and moving . Something many want to hear.
April 5th, 2022 15:11
Crystal Hope said:
aww so very sweet and moving . Something many want to hear.
April 5th, 2022 15:11
Still You
Crowns4Christ said:
So sweet and beautiful, I pray that you get an answer
April 5th, 2022 14:52
Crowns4Christ said:
So sweet and beautiful, I pray that you get an answer
April 5th, 2022 14:52
Before You
L. B. Mek said:
\'My life was nothing—
but a boring highway,
I was just a rolling stone.\'
wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'My life was nothing—
but a boring highway,
I was just a rolling stone.\'
wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 06:28
Good: Evil
Rocky Lagou said:
All the things it could be. Life is quite perplex like that isn\'t it? Good job!
March 28th, 2022 12:36
Rocky Lagou said:
All the things it could be. Life is quite perplex like that isn\'t it? Good job!
March 28th, 2022 12:36
At Festival
L. B. Mek said:
\'Make it enjoyment
Not a quiet funeral\'
\'Taste the food and
Use jugs for drinks\'
\'X factors are talking!
Yes, we will miss this
Zone of comfort soon.\'
Brilliant!
(what a tranquil, meditative
appreciation and mourning
for those brilliantly bright
yet, effervescent
highlight mementos
of our far too - fleeting, Now
of life...)
Great execution!
March 24th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Make it enjoyment
Not a quiet funeral\'
\'Taste the food and
Use jugs for drinks\'
\'X factors are talking!
Yes, we will miss this
Zone of comfort soon.\'
Brilliant!
(what a tranquil, meditative
appreciation and mourning
for those brilliantly bright
yet, effervescent
highlight mementos
of our far too - fleeting, Now
of life...)
Great execution!
March 24th, 2022 04:00
Heart Decides
L. B. Mek said:
...how I mourn, feel of your skin
that still lingers
like your fingertips, on my heart...
(a wonderfully succinct write, dear poet
forgive me
but I couldn\'t help try and add a few lines
to showcase, just how much I relate)
thanks for sharing..
Happy world poetry day!
March 21st, 2022 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
...how I mourn, feel of your skin
that still lingers
like your fingertips, on my heart...
(a wonderfully succinct write, dear poet
forgive me
but I couldn\'t help try and add a few lines
to showcase, just how much I relate)
thanks for sharing..
Happy world poetry day!
March 21st, 2022 07:26
Brain: A Monster Within
Crowns4Christ said:
So true my friend,if we can\'t do it ourselves who can, except our powerful Lord
March 18th, 2022 21:21
Crowns4Christ said:
So true my friend,if we can\'t do it ourselves who can, except our powerful Lord
March 18th, 2022 21:21
Brain: A Monster Within
dean langmuir said:
Wow is right,I didn\'t see it as a acrostic,I love trying to write them,good birthdate.take care.
March 18th, 2022 10:21
dean langmuir said:
Wow is right,I didn\'t see it as a acrostic,I love trying to write them,good birthdate.take care.
March 18th, 2022 10:21
Brain: A Monster Within
dean langmuir said:
noone but you can free you,very true,thanks for poem.poem on.
March 18th, 2022 10:01
dean langmuir said:
noone but you can free you,very true,thanks for poem.poem on.
March 18th, 2022 10:01
Brain: A Monster Within
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was spectacular. I love a good acrostic and this one was beyond. Very true to many nowadays. \"Sometimes you wish to— Turn off your brain,\" is such an impactful line. Very well done!
March 18th, 2022 09:30
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was spectacular. I love a good acrostic and this one was beyond. Very true to many nowadays. \"Sometimes you wish to— Turn off your brain,\" is such an impactful line. Very well done!
March 18th, 2022 09:30
Courage
Crowns4Christ said:
There is always hope a a way to break free, with God in your life my friend,
March 16th, 2022 12:15
Crowns4Christ said:
There is always hope a a way to break free, with God in your life my friend,
March 16th, 2022 12:15
Courage
Rocky Lagou said:
What a hopeful message! I love the way you worded this poem and your rhymes are great. Well done!
March 16th, 2022 12:09
Rocky Lagou said:
What a hopeful message! I love the way you worded this poem and your rhymes are great. Well done!
March 16th, 2022 12:09
Pray For Me
L. B. Mek said:
trust in yourself, dear poet
choose to believe
whatever deity you follow
made no mistake
in giving you a chance
at experiencing, life
cherish that chance, dream Big
aim high and strive
to find the best You
you have it in you, to be
and live the rest
in the hands of faith and hope
for there is so much in life
we can\'t control..
all we need do, is our part
the rest we need to just let go
what\'s not meant to be
was never meant, to be
and that\'s just fine..
it\'s just us getting, one step closer
to finding, all those things
meant for us..
(stay strong, stay humble
and remember to smile
and appreciate, Nature\'s free gifts
dear poet)
March 10th, 2022 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
trust in yourself, dear poet
choose to believe
whatever deity you follow
made no mistake
in giving you a chance
at experiencing, life
cherish that chance, dream Big
aim high and strive
to find the best You
you have it in you, to be
and live the rest
in the hands of faith and hope
for there is so much in life
we can\'t control..
all we need do, is our part
the rest we need to just let go
what\'s not meant to be
was never meant, to be
and that\'s just fine..
it\'s just us getting, one step closer
to finding, all those things
meant for us..
(stay strong, stay humble
and remember to smile
and appreciate, Nature\'s free gifts
dear poet)
March 10th, 2022 04:10
Pray For Me
Crowns4Christ said:
Just trust in God my friend, believe that Jesus Christ is God\'s son and that he died for your sins,
Oh Heavenly Father, please give this hurting soul peace, forgive him for all that he has done and didn\'t do that is righteous in your eyes,bring this man the salvation that only you can give heavenly father,
In the name of Jesus Christ I pray AMEN
March 9th, 2022 18:56
Crowns4Christ said:
Just trust in God my friend, believe that Jesus Christ is God\'s son and that he died for your sins,
Oh Heavenly Father, please give this hurting soul peace, forgive him for all that he has done and didn\'t do that is righteous in your eyes,bring this man the salvation that only you can give heavenly father,
In the name of Jesus Christ I pray AMEN
March 9th, 2022 18:56
Party\'s A Witch
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve missed your wonderful writing, thanks for sharing, dear poet
really enjoyed this portrayal
of the limitations
in our chosen, escapism routines...
March 8th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ve missed your wonderful writing, thanks for sharing, dear poet
really enjoyed this portrayal
of the limitations
in our chosen, escapism routines...
March 8th, 2022 04:51
When A Vagabond Loves
Lorna said:
This carried me away to magical places.....
November 8th, 2021 06:42
Lorna said:
This carried me away to magical places.....
November 8th, 2021 06:42
When A Vagabond Loves
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Brilliant!
what a wonderful fusion, of empathetic Poetic voices;
such an effortlessly, relatable Poem
thank you! for choosing to share
November 8th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Brilliant!
what a wonderful fusion, of empathetic Poetic voices;
such an effortlessly, relatable Poem
thank you! for choosing to share
November 8th, 2021 05:47
Healing
jarcher54 said:
I used to see scars on my wife, like on her knees, or on her back where her running bra would leave a mark, or on her belly from minor surgery, as little flaws. Now that we are both older I see them as beauty marks from a life well lived. Scars hopefully bring strength! Thanks for sharing your own take on that.
November 7th, 2021 14:32
jarcher54 said:
I used to see scars on my wife, like on her knees, or on her back where her running bra would leave a mark, or on her belly from minor surgery, as little flaws. Now that we are both older I see them as beauty marks from a life well lived. Scars hopefully bring strength! Thanks for sharing your own take on that.
November 7th, 2021 14:32
When A Vagabond Loves
jarcher54 said:
Parts of this, like the beginning and the end, are a fresh take on the folk song or ancient pastoral poetry. Superficially sweet and idealized, full of references to pre-human nature, and reflecting deep feelings of love, joy, or sorrow. Parts of it are modern and almost too conversational, like calling oneself a jerk, or referring to owning the place or your comfort zone. This was fun to read, pretty but painful. Thanks for putting it together for us!
November 7th, 2021 14:28
jarcher54 said:
Parts of this, like the beginning and the end, are a fresh take on the folk song or ancient pastoral poetry. Superficially sweet and idealized, full of references to pre-human nature, and reflecting deep feelings of love, joy, or sorrow. Parts of it are modern and almost too conversational, like calling oneself a jerk, or referring to owning the place or your comfort zone. This was fun to read, pretty but painful. Thanks for putting it together for us!
November 7th, 2021 14:28
Find The One
Goldfinch60 said:
That person is out there for you and will be forever with you.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That person is out there for you and will be forever with you.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 01:15
Love, The Holocaust
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful
I think your evocative title, although attention grabbing
detracts, from the poetic beauty of your write..
(we must be ever aware of the context, inferred
in our word choices, and \'holocaust\' shouldn\'t be one we utilise, easily)
should you, \'Choose\' to retitle this work
you\'ll find a lot more people actually connect with the sentiments and emotions, you\'ve so eloquently portrayed in this write
in my humble opinion..
\'Compressed between, I
no longer protest a thing
For I\'m surrounded, by her presence
This river is flowing for good, I can tell
She, took my heart away
Fulfilled, my \'every need\' with her thought\'s
And none
of my walls is still standing, I cannot resist\'
September 13th, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
this is wonderful
I think your evocative title, although attention grabbing
detracts, from the poetic beauty of your write..
(we must be ever aware of the context, inferred
in our word choices, and \'holocaust\' shouldn\'t be one we utilise, easily)
should you, \'Choose\' to retitle this work
you\'ll find a lot more people actually connect with the sentiments and emotions, you\'ve so eloquently portrayed in this write
in my humble opinion..
\'Compressed between, I
no longer protest a thing
For I\'m surrounded, by her presence
This river is flowing for good, I can tell
She, took my heart away
Fulfilled, my \'every need\' with her thought\'s
And none
of my walls is still standing, I cannot resist\'
September 13th, 2021 05:43
Nightmare
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, really liked your flow
great use of contradiction in your imagery:
\'One day longer than a 1000 years;\'
\'And the seas were a single rain drop\'
to highlight
how removed from reality you felt, in that moment..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 3rd, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, really liked your flow
great use of contradiction in your imagery:
\'One day longer than a 1000 years;\'
\'And the seas were a single rain drop\'
to highlight
how removed from reality you felt, in that moment..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 3rd, 2021 04:18
Healing
L. B. Mek said:
\'I sometimes feel pain but the healing-
Numbs it and I feel alright with the scars-
Growing on my skin, strengthening..\'
Empowering!
imbued with that resurgent spirit
of one, who has survived
the worst of torments in life,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'I sometimes feel pain but the healing-
Numbs it and I feel alright with the scars-
Growing on my skin, strengthening..\'
Empowering!
imbued with that resurgent spirit
of one, who has survived
the worst of torments in life,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 03:18
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