Comments received on poems by arobot
A Strain -- Dream in Dream
L. B. Mek said:
this is genuinely special!
and thankfully, more meaningfully
you already know this, to be true
June 28th, 2021 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
this is genuinely special!
and thankfully, more meaningfully
you already know this, to be true
June 28th, 2021 07:10
The Going as Upcoming
Whirlpool said:
Motivating poem. Love the Chinese version more, though I\'m sure I couldn\'t get the full meaning thanks to google translate.
June 21st, 2021 18:38
Whirlpool said:
Motivating poem. Love the Chinese version more, though I\'m sure I couldn\'t get the full meaning thanks to google translate.
June 21st, 2021 18:38
CRUSH
L. B. Mek said:
its no wonder Voltaire, claimed
that Newton \'was buried like a King\'
and considered him, the finest \'Mind\' to have ever lived...
a wonderful dedication, thank you for sharing
May 11th, 2021 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
its no wonder Voltaire, claimed
that Newton \'was buried like a King\'
and considered him, the finest \'Mind\' to have ever lived...
a wonderful dedication, thank you for sharing
May 11th, 2021 04:58
Spring, for whom
L. B. Mek said:
surely a window\'s Spring scented views of bloom
surpass those pixel screen imitation\'s of zoom..
lol a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
surely a window\'s Spring scented views of bloom
surpass those pixel screen imitation\'s of zoom..
lol a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 04:46
Spring, for whom
heatherbee said:
Love tulips my fav flower so the poem had me hooked at the word tulip
March 31st, 2021 17:18
heatherbee said:
Love tulips my fav flower so the poem had me hooked at the word tulip
March 31st, 2021 17:18
MyArk
L. B. Mek said:
there is hope, excavated from the overcome perils of life\'s stormy sea\'s infused within your insightful words, dear poet
a battle cry, willing us all to grab our own fate\'s and manifest our life\'s ark of introspection toiled: independence
March 15th, 2021 07:09
L. B. Mek said:
there is hope, excavated from the overcome perils of life\'s stormy sea\'s infused within your insightful words, dear poet
a battle cry, willing us all to grab our own fate\'s and manifest our life\'s ark of introspection toiled: independence
March 15th, 2021 07:09
Memory Trace
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow! Undeniably brilliant!
thank you for sharing
*Everyday during his honeymoon
I was expecting some sudden turn
And watched in misery, mercy, and mirth
Until the cake turned to colorful moulds
As if a glorious dynasty decayed into earth\'
*\'Where do memories reside?
In the eyes, the ears, or somewhere inside?
Some birds are said to migrate magnetized
feet of old horses lead the teem homebound
People used to relay feelings to the heart
But science locates them in the brain part
Yet my memory clings to my shoe laces
It happened one summer at the beach oasis\'
*\'How I miss him whenever I see shoelace
That is the way he left in me memory trace
Tide and Time since had erased our footprints
I was left, with dark water around, on A oasis\'
January 19th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow! Undeniably brilliant!
thank you for sharing
*Everyday during his honeymoon
I was expecting some sudden turn
And watched in misery, mercy, and mirth
Until the cake turned to colorful moulds
As if a glorious dynasty decayed into earth\'
*\'Where do memories reside?
In the eyes, the ears, or somewhere inside?
Some birds are said to migrate magnetized
feet of old horses lead the teem homebound
People used to relay feelings to the heart
But science locates them in the brain part
Yet my memory clings to my shoe laces
It happened one summer at the beach oasis\'
*\'How I miss him whenever I see shoelace
That is the way he left in me memory trace
Tide and Time since had erased our footprints
I was left, with dark water around, on A oasis\'
January 19th, 2021 04:52
Memory Trace
Doggerel Dave said:
For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in.
I don\'t usually go for love thwarted poetry, but yours, rich in imagery, grabbed me, in particular the concept of a memory trace - something so small providing a key to a big memory.
Dave
January 18th, 2021 16:30
Doggerel Dave said:
For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in.
I don\'t usually go for love thwarted poetry, but yours, rich in imagery, grabbed me, in particular the concept of a memory trace - something so small providing a key to a big memory.
Dave
January 18th, 2021 16:30
High Tea @ Low Tea
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tea stew\'
rings home, especially when making ginger tea at this time of year,
a fun read
January 18th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tea stew\'
rings home, especially when making ginger tea at this time of year,
a fun read
January 18th, 2021 04:57
To my child
Samer Amin said:
Just a wonderful poem!
It can express honestly the intermingled feelings between love and concern pertaining to our beloved ones.
As well as, the mutual emotional support that could be engendered between the inseparably connected hearts.
January 9th, 2021 06:47
Samer Amin said:
Just a wonderful poem!
It can express honestly the intermingled feelings between love and concern pertaining to our beloved ones.
As well as, the mutual emotional support that could be engendered between the inseparably connected hearts.
January 9th, 2021 06:47
X’MAS
FineB said:
Hi Arobot,
A wonderful Christmas poem
Its an unusual Christmas for us all given the pandemic this year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:48
FineB said:
Hi Arobot,
A wonderful Christmas poem
Its an unusual Christmas for us all given the pandemic this year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:48
To my child
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow!
reading your words is like reading that first and most earnest mantra of any worthwhile parent,
how we all quickly forget the wonderous majesty within that first breath...
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow!
reading your words is like reading that first and most earnest mantra of any worthwhile parent,
how we all quickly forget the wonderous majesty within that first breath...
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:50
To my child
Poetic Dan said:
Wow..... goosebumps all over! What a soulful out poor that I just nodded along, thank you for the inspiration and keep writing on!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 02:13
Poetic Dan said:
Wow..... goosebumps all over! What a soulful out poor that I just nodded along, thank you for the inspiration and keep writing on!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 02:13
To my child
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arobot. All we can do for our children is the best we can and hope that their lives progress with love and wonder.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arobot. All we can do for our children is the best we can and hope that their lives progress with love and wonder.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:27
To my child
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father verses here and which surely will be treasured by his growing child. Thank you for sharing it with us arobot
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father verses here and which surely will be treasured by his growing child. Thank you for sharing it with us arobot
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
To my child
Clara said:
This is a beautiful dedication to your child. Speaks of unconditional love and commitment in this unsecured world, as you say. Wonderful piece.
December 23rd, 2020 12:47
Clara said:
This is a beautiful dedication to your child. Speaks of unconditional love and commitment in this unsecured world, as you say. Wonderful piece.
December 23rd, 2020 12:47
After the snow
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, arobot. I love your imagination.
December 13th, 2020 13:26
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, arobot. I love your imagination.
December 13th, 2020 13:26
The First Snow
Doggerel Dave said:
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward and very vivid.
Also cooled me down a few degrees.
Dave
Australia
November 30th, 2020 17:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward and very vivid.
Also cooled me down a few degrees.
Dave
Australia
November 30th, 2020 17:59
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