Comments received on poems by arobot
Memory Trace
Doggerel Dave said:
For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in.
I don\'t usually go for love thwarted poetry, but yours, rich in imagery, grabbed me, in particular the concept of a memory trace - something so small providing a key to a big memory.
Dave
January 18th, 2021 16:30
Doggerel Dave said:
For me your poem had a satisfying structure which drew me in.
I don\'t usually go for love thwarted poetry, but yours, rich in imagery, grabbed me, in particular the concept of a memory trace - something so small providing a key to a big memory.
Dave
January 18th, 2021 16:30
High Tea @ Low Tea
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tea stew\'
rings home, especially when making ginger tea at this time of year,
a fun read
January 18th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'a tea stew\'
rings home, especially when making ginger tea at this time of year,
a fun read
January 18th, 2021 04:57
To my child
Samer Amin said:
Just a wonderful poem!
It can express honestly the intermingled feelings between love and concern pertaining to our beloved ones.
As well as, the mutual emotional support that could be engendered between the inseparably connected hearts.
January 9th, 2021 06:47
Samer Amin said:
Just a wonderful poem!
It can express honestly the intermingled feelings between love and concern pertaining to our beloved ones.
As well as, the mutual emotional support that could be engendered between the inseparably connected hearts.
January 9th, 2021 06:47
X’MAS
FineB said:
Hi Arobot,
A wonderful Christmas poem
Its an unusual Christmas for us all given the pandemic this year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:48
FineB said:
Hi Arobot,
A wonderful Christmas poem
Its an unusual Christmas for us all given the pandemic this year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:48
To my child
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow!
reading your words is like reading that first and most earnest mantra of any worthwhile parent,
how we all quickly forget the wonderous majesty within that first breath...
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow!
reading your words is like reading that first and most earnest mantra of any worthwhile parent,
how we all quickly forget the wonderous majesty within that first breath...
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:50
To my child
Poetic Dan said:
Wow..... goosebumps all over! What a soulful out poor that I just nodded along, thank you for the inspiration and keep writing on!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 02:13
Poetic Dan said:
Wow..... goosebumps all over! What a soulful out poor that I just nodded along, thank you for the inspiration and keep writing on!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 02:13
To my child
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arobot. All we can do for our children is the best we can and hope that their lives progress with love and wonder.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Arobot. All we can do for our children is the best we can and hope that their lives progress with love and wonder.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:27
To my child
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father verses here and which surely will be treasured by his growing child. Thank you for sharing it with us arobot
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father verses here and which surely will be treasured by his growing child. Thank you for sharing it with us arobot
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
To my child
Clara said:
This is a beautiful dedication to your child. Speaks of unconditional love and commitment in this unsecured world, as you say. Wonderful piece.
December 23rd, 2020 12:47
Clara said:
This is a beautiful dedication to your child. Speaks of unconditional love and commitment in this unsecured world, as you say. Wonderful piece.
December 23rd, 2020 12:47
After the snow
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, arobot. I love your imagination.
December 13th, 2020 13:26
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, arobot. I love your imagination.
December 13th, 2020 13:26
The First Snow
Doggerel Dave said:
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward and very vivid.
Also cooled me down a few degrees.
Dave
Australia
November 30th, 2020 17:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Real - enjoyed this very much. Great construction. Clean, straightforward and very vivid.
Also cooled me down a few degrees.
Dave
Australia
November 30th, 2020 17:59
A Hundred Years of Solitude
RDS said:
Like a mournful dirge your poem plays eloquently with words and heartfelt urges I like it a lot thanks arobot.
J
November 25th, 2020 07:05
RDS said:
Like a mournful dirge your poem plays eloquently with words and heartfelt urges I like it a lot thanks arobot.
J
November 25th, 2020 07:05
Weekend Blue
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
\'free of love\'s
Yeah, sometimes, love can be a bondage. Nice write!
November 11th, 2020 15:41
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
\'free of love\'s
Yeah, sometimes, love can be a bondage. Nice write!
November 11th, 2020 15:41
Winter spouse
L. B. Mek said:
wish I understood it all, enjoyed reading your first stanza very much
November 6th, 2020 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
wish I understood it all, enjoyed reading your first stanza very much
November 6th, 2020 05:37
Everyday is Halloween
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if you live in the UK, or have an equivalent to Job Centres. But going there makes every day like Halloween. Thankfully, we don\'t have to go EVERY day. I thought your poem was going to be about that! lol.
November 2nd, 2020 02:50
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if you live in the UK, or have an equivalent to Job Centres. But going there makes every day like Halloween. Thankfully, we don\'t have to go EVERY day. I thought your poem was going to be about that! lol.
November 2nd, 2020 02:50
Drunk Trecking
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written scene here, have done a fair bit of drunk trekking myself, so I can totally relate, also parts of your poem remind of the work of John Wilmot (\"A Ramble in St. James\' Park\" in particular) which is always a good thing in my book.
Keep up the good work arobot, and please do take care in the continuing madness.
Ben.
November 1st, 2020 17:53
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written scene here, have done a fair bit of drunk trekking myself, so I can totally relate, also parts of your poem remind of the work of John Wilmot (\"A Ramble in St. James\' Park\" in particular) which is always a good thing in my book.
Keep up the good work arobot, and please do take care in the continuing madness.
Ben.
November 1st, 2020 17:53
Everyday is Halloween
dusk arising said:
Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It cost me a small fortune in treats. I even had to give my wellies away. Well it was raining.
November 1st, 2020 17:52
dusk arising said:
Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It cost me a small fortune in treats. I even had to give my wellies away. Well it was raining.
November 1st, 2020 17:52
Everyday is Halloween
FineB said:
Hello arobot,
A deep, poignant write.
Very good.
It was a hit dead in London where I live no trick or treaters.
England will be going through a national lockdown from 5.11.2020.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:08
FineB said:
Hello arobot,
A deep, poignant write.
Very good.
It was a hit dead in London where I live no trick or treaters.
England will be going through a national lockdown from 5.11.2020.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:08
On duty
dusk arising said:
You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in him...... and teeth!
August 23rd, 2020 13:28
dusk arising said:
You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in him...... and teeth!
August 23rd, 2020 13:28
On duty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT - Thanks for posting an interesting Poem about Canine Intuition ! Dogs make good GUARDS and they instintively know if something is amiss ! Hence their use as GUARD DOGS ! You never hear of GUARD CATS ! We dont have a Dog because we are out all day MON to FRI. We have a c at SMOKEY but he wants to be a FRIEND to everyone - even BURGLERS ! Thanks for posting ~ Please check our SITE - Thanks.
Love - Joy - Peace .
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 23rd, 2020 11:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT - Thanks for posting an interesting Poem about Canine Intuition ! Dogs make good GUARDS and they instintively know if something is amiss ! Hence their use as GUARD DOGS ! You never hear of GUARD CATS ! We dont have a Dog because we are out all day MON to FRI. We have a c at SMOKEY but he wants to be a FRIEND to everyone - even BURGLERS ! Thanks for posting ~ Please check our SITE - Thanks.
Love - Joy - Peace .
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 23rd, 2020 11:59
jealousy
MaddieJ said:
This was so entertaining to read. I love the interaction you have with the swallow as though she is a friend and a fo at the same time.
August 21st, 2020 00:02
MaddieJ said:
This was so entertaining to read. I love the interaction you have with the swallow as though she is a friend and a fo at the same time.
August 21st, 2020 00:02
Proportional?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B here ~ Good Evening AROBOT ~ Thanks for your short but very sweet *Ode in Praise of All Animals* God took just as much time & trouble to CREATE an ANT or a MOSQUITO as He did to create an Elephant ! More in fact becoase MINITURISATION aint EASY. Just as GOD considers all HUMANS equal in the sameway He treats all ~ Animals & Plants as equl ! A DANDYLION is just as important to GOD asa Mighty Oak Tree ~ AMEN. HUMANS devalue ANIMALS and just see them as FOOD (like Chickens) or cheap LABOUR ~ like Horses & Elephants ! We see TREES as Wood for furniture AND Wood for fuel etc. Instead of CONSERVING NATURE we destroy it AND Global Warming & COVID 19 are just two examples of Mother Nature striking back ~ think about it ~ AMEN !
B lessings * Peace & Joy ~ to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
Please check our FUSION & add a POEM ~ Thanks A & B
August 10th, 2020 15:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B here ~ Good Evening AROBOT ~ Thanks for your short but very sweet *Ode in Praise of All Animals* God took just as much time & trouble to CREATE an ANT or a MOSQUITO as He did to create an Elephant ! More in fact becoase MINITURISATION aint EASY. Just as GOD considers all HUMANS equal in the sameway He treats all ~ Animals & Plants as equl ! A DANDYLION is just as important to GOD asa Mighty Oak Tree ~ AMEN. HUMANS devalue ANIMALS and just see them as FOOD (like Chickens) or cheap LABOUR ~ like Horses & Elephants ! We see TREES as Wood for furniture AND Wood for fuel etc. Instead of CONSERVING NATURE we destroy it AND Global Warming & COVID 19 are just two examples of Mother Nature striking back ~ think about it ~ AMEN !
B lessings * Peace & Joy ~ to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
Please check our FUSION & add a POEM ~ Thanks A & B
August 10th, 2020 15:13
莫道闭门绝俗流 谁人有心访岐幽 风流不在着衣多 裸奔何由扪虱羞
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning FRIEND ~ does the Sun shine on You today ? I am always mesmerised by the Chinese Script ~ SO SO Elegant. How big is your KEYBOARD ?
QURANTINE is something most people hate ~ being SHUT IN ~ with just TV - CD - Books for company ~ OK for a week but soon becomes tedious. Your ODE describes th effects of it perectly ~ Thnaks for share ! SPAIN is a very beautiful Country (see todays Poem *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA) & peferred Holiday Destination of millions of Brits each YEAR. AS soon as it was OK to go again Thousands of Brits Flew Off ~ now told tht when they come back *TWO WEEK QUARANTINE !* They wont lose JOB but all will lose MONEY ~ How Sad. Please pray for SPAIN !
Love ~ Joy ~ Peace to YOU & YOURS
Angela ~ Brian ~ Smokey Cat ~ AMEN
July 28th, 2020 02:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning FRIEND ~ does the Sun shine on You today ? I am always mesmerised by the Chinese Script ~ SO SO Elegant. How big is your KEYBOARD ?
QURANTINE is something most people hate ~ being SHUT IN ~ with just TV - CD - Books for company ~ OK for a week but soon becomes tedious. Your ODE describes th effects of it perectly ~ Thnaks for share ! SPAIN is a very beautiful Country (see todays Poem *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA) & peferred Holiday Destination of millions of Brits each YEAR. AS soon as it was OK to go again Thousands of Brits Flew Off ~ now told tht when they come back *TWO WEEK QUARANTINE !* They wont lose JOB but all will lose MONEY ~ How Sad. Please pray for SPAIN !
Love ~ Joy ~ Peace to YOU & YOURS
Angela ~ Brian ~ Smokey Cat ~ AMEN
July 28th, 2020 02:56
She and He
DianeKey6 said:
it took me two reads but yes you write so well and made me stop for a minute to get all the x\'s and y\'s in the right sequence. maybe they will have twins? Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:46
DianeKey6 said:
it took me two reads but yes you write so well and made me stop for a minute to get all the x\'s and y\'s in the right sequence. maybe they will have twins? Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:46
God at creation
dusk arising said:
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a living insect so that it may suffer the agonies of being eaten alive. Did your god turn his back on the suffering of innocents over the centuries before and after the life of jesus.
Why worship or hold in exaltation such a cruel god?
Unless you were brainwashed into it as a small child.
June 29th, 2020 11:46
dusk arising said:
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a living insect so that it may suffer the agonies of being eaten alive. Did your god turn his back on the suffering of innocents over the centuries before and after the life of jesus.
Why worship or hold in exaltation such a cruel god?
Unless you were brainwashed into it as a small child.
June 29th, 2020 11:46
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