Comments received on poems by arobot
A Hundred Years of Solitude
RDS said:
Like a mournful dirge your poem plays eloquently with words and heartfelt urges I like it a lot thanks arobot.
J
November 25th, 2020 07:05
RDS said:
Like a mournful dirge your poem plays eloquently with words and heartfelt urges I like it a lot thanks arobot.
J
November 25th, 2020 07:05
Weekend Blue
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
\'free of love\'s
Yeah, sometimes, love can be a bondage. Nice write!
November 11th, 2020 15:41
Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach said:
\'free of love\'s
Yeah, sometimes, love can be a bondage. Nice write!
November 11th, 2020 15:41
Winter spouse
L. B. Mek said:
wish I understood it all, enjoyed reading your first stanza very much
November 6th, 2020 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
wish I understood it all, enjoyed reading your first stanza very much
November 6th, 2020 05:37
Everyday is Halloween
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if you live in the UK, or have an equivalent to Job Centres. But going there makes every day like Halloween. Thankfully, we don\'t have to go EVERY day. I thought your poem was going to be about that! lol.
November 2nd, 2020 02:50
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if you live in the UK, or have an equivalent to Job Centres. But going there makes every day like Halloween. Thankfully, we don\'t have to go EVERY day. I thought your poem was going to be about that! lol.
November 2nd, 2020 02:50
Drunk Trecking
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written scene here, have done a fair bit of drunk trekking myself, so I can totally relate, also parts of your poem remind of the work of John Wilmot (\"A Ramble in St. James\' Park\" in particular) which is always a good thing in my book.
Keep up the good work arobot, and please do take care in the continuing madness.
Ben.
November 1st, 2020 17:53
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written scene here, have done a fair bit of drunk trekking myself, so I can totally relate, also parts of your poem remind of the work of John Wilmot (\"A Ramble in St. James\' Park\" in particular) which is always a good thing in my book.
Keep up the good work arobot, and please do take care in the continuing madness.
Ben.
November 1st, 2020 17:53
Everyday is Halloween
dusk arising said:
Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It cost me a small fortune in treats. I even had to give my wellies away. Well it was raining.
November 1st, 2020 17:52
dusk arising said:
Halloween was wild here in UK. I wish everday could be so invigorating. It cost me a small fortune in treats. I even had to give my wellies away. Well it was raining.
November 1st, 2020 17:52
Everyday is Halloween
FineB said:
Hello arobot,
A deep, poignant write.
Very good.
It was a hit dead in London where I live no trick or treaters.
England will be going through a national lockdown from 5.11.2020.
Keep writing โ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:08
FineB said:
Hello arobot,
A deep, poignant write.
Very good.
It was a hit dead in London where I live no trick or treaters.
England will be going through a national lockdown from 5.11.2020.
Keep writing โ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 1st, 2020 13:08
On duty
dusk arising said:
You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in him...... and teeth!
August 23rd, 2020 13:28
dusk arising said:
You may pull the wool over my eyes but the dawg has the supernatural in him...... and teeth!
August 23rd, 2020 13:28
On duty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT - Thanks for posting an interesting Poem about Canine Intuition ! Dogs make good GUARDS and they instintively know if something is amiss ! Hence their use as GUARD DOGS ! You never hear of GUARD CATS ! We dont have a Dog because we are out all day MON to FRI. We have a c at SMOKEY but he wants to be a FRIEND to everyone - even BURGLERS ! Thanks for posting ~ Please check our SITE - Thanks.
Love - Joy - Peace .
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 23rd, 2020 11:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT - Thanks for posting an interesting Poem about Canine Intuition ! Dogs make good GUARDS and they instintively know if something is amiss ! Hence their use as GUARD DOGS ! You never hear of GUARD CATS ! We dont have a Dog because we are out all day MON to FRI. We have a c at SMOKEY but he wants to be a FRIEND to everyone - even BURGLERS ! Thanks for posting ~ Please check our SITE - Thanks.
Love - Joy - Peace .
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 23rd, 2020 11:59
jealousy
MaddieJ said:
This was so entertaining to read. I love the interaction you have with the swallow as though she is a friend and a fo at the same time.
August 21st, 2020 00:02
MaddieJ said:
This was so entertaining to read. I love the interaction you have with the swallow as though she is a friend and a fo at the same time.
August 21st, 2020 00:02
Proportional?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B here ~ Good Evening AROBOT ~ Thanks for your short but very sweet *Ode in Praise of All Animals* God took just as much time & trouble to CREATE an ANT or a MOSQUITO as He did to create an Elephant ! More in fact becoase MINITURISATION aint EASY. Just as GOD considers all HUMANS equal in the sameway He treats all ~ Animals & Plants as equl ! A DANDYLION is just as important to GOD asa Mighty Oak Tree ~ AMEN. HUMANS devalue ANIMALS and just see them as FOOD (like Chickens) or cheap LABOUR ~ like Horses & Elephants ! We see TREES as Wood for furniture AND Wood for fuel etc. Instead of CONSERVING NATURE we destroy it AND Global Warming & COVID 19 are just two examples of Mother Nature striking back ~ think about it ~ AMEN !
B lessings * Peace & Joy ~ to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ๐๐๐
Please check our FUSION & add a POEM ~ Thanks A & B
August 10th, 2020 15:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B here ~ Good Evening AROBOT ~ Thanks for your short but very sweet *Ode in Praise of All Animals* God took just as much time & trouble to CREATE an ANT or a MOSQUITO as He did to create an Elephant ! More in fact becoase MINITURISATION aint EASY. Just as GOD considers all HUMANS equal in the sameway He treats all ~ Animals & Plants as equl ! A DANDYLION is just as important to GOD asa Mighty Oak Tree ~ AMEN. HUMANS devalue ANIMALS and just see them as FOOD (like Chickens) or cheap LABOUR ~ like Horses & Elephants ! We see TREES as Wood for furniture AND Wood for fuel etc. Instead of CONSERVING NATURE we destroy it AND Global Warming & COVID 19 are just two examples of Mother Nature striking back ~ think about it ~ AMEN !
B lessings * Peace & Joy ~ to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ๐๐๐
Please check our FUSION & add a POEM ~ Thanks A & B
August 10th, 2020 15:13
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning FRIEND ~ does the Sun shine on You today ? I am always mesmerised by the Chinese Script ~ SO SO Elegant. How big is your KEYBOARD ?
QURANTINE is something most people hate ~ being SHUT IN ~ with just TV - CD - Books for company ~ OK for a week but soon becomes tedious. Your ODE describes th effects of it perectly ~ Thnaks for share ! SPAIN is a very beautiful Country (see todays Poem *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA) & peferred Holiday Destination of millions of Brits each YEAR. AS soon as it was OK to go again Thousands of Brits Flew Off ~ now told tht when they come back *TWO WEEK QUARANTINE !* They wont lose JOB but all will lose MONEY ~ How Sad. Please pray for SPAIN !
Love ~ Joy ~ Peace to YOU & YOURS
Angela ~ Brian ~ Smokey Cat ~ AMEN
July 28th, 2020 02:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning FRIEND ~ does the Sun shine on You today ? I am always mesmerised by the Chinese Script ~ SO SO Elegant. How big is your KEYBOARD ?
QURANTINE is something most people hate ~ being SHUT IN ~ with just TV - CD - Books for company ~ OK for a week but soon becomes tedious. Your ODE describes th effects of it perectly ~ Thnaks for share ! SPAIN is a very beautiful Country (see todays Poem *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA) & peferred Holiday Destination of millions of Brits each YEAR. AS soon as it was OK to go again Thousands of Brits Flew Off ~ now told tht when they come back *TWO WEEK QUARANTINE !* They wont lose JOB but all will lose MONEY ~ How Sad. Please pray for SPAIN !
Love ~ Joy ~ Peace to YOU & YOURS
Angela ~ Brian ~ Smokey Cat ~ AMEN
July 28th, 2020 02:56
She and He
DianeKey6 said:
it took me two reads but yes you write so well and made me stop for a minute to get all the x\'s and y\'s in the right sequence. maybe they will have twins? Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:46
DianeKey6 said:
it took me two reads but yes you write so well and made me stop for a minute to get all the x\'s and y\'s in the right sequence. maybe they will have twins? Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:46
God at creation
dusk arising said:
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a living insect so that it may suffer the agonies of being eaten alive. Did your god turn his back on the suffering of innocents over the centuries before and after the life of jesus.
Why worship or hold in exaltation such a cruel god?
Unless you were brainwashed into it as a small child.
June 29th, 2020 11:46
dusk arising said:
Did your god carefully create the spider which injects its eggs into a living insect so that it may suffer the agonies of being eaten alive. Did your god turn his back on the suffering of innocents over the centuries before and after the life of jesus.
Why worship or hold in exaltation such a cruel god?
Unless you were brainwashed into it as a small child.
June 29th, 2020 11:46
Love must be quantum
Fay Slimm. said:
A good piece of apt reminder that love lasts forever and not just ten years -- well written and really enjoyed the thoughts in the read.
June 26th, 2020 14:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A good piece of apt reminder that love lasts forever and not just ten years -- well written and really enjoyed the thoughts in the read.
June 26th, 2020 14:14
Well
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT Thnks for an interesting Poem ! Water H~O~H is a simple but very interesting and essential substance. Planet Earth is different form the other Solar Planets because of its abaundance of liquid water. There are millions of gallons of liquid water (mainly salty ~ 3.5 % salt) for every Human being on the Planet. To be potable water has to be purified and in the Developed Countries in the West we take it for granted that Tapwater is drinkable. I once drank Well Water in Mexico and ended up with MONTAZUMAS REVENGE ~ bad tummy ! The Global population is growing and water pollutin is increasing. WE must conserve water and ensure evone of us has access to an adequate supply of PURE POTABLE WATER ~ AMEN NO WATER = DEATH !
Love & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN
Please visit our site ~ THANKS
June 14th, 2020 14:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening AROBOT Thnks for an interesting Poem ! Water H~O~H is a simple but very interesting and essential substance. Planet Earth is different form the other Solar Planets because of its abaundance of liquid water. There are millions of gallons of liquid water (mainly salty ~ 3.5 % salt) for every Human being on the Planet. To be potable water has to be purified and in the Developed Countries in the West we take it for granted that Tapwater is drinkable. I once drank Well Water in Mexico and ended up with MONTAZUMAS REVENGE ~ bad tummy ! The Global population is growing and water pollutin is increasing. WE must conserve water and ensure evone of us has access to an adequate supply of PURE POTABLE WATER ~ AMEN NO WATER = DEATH !
Love & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN
Please visit our site ~ THANKS
June 14th, 2020 14:59
S
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Greeting AROBOT - Thank you for a very delicate Poem descibing your sojourn with one of nature most elegant of creatures - a SNAKE. Snakes have a bad press ! I have a yellow snake (about 1 meter long) I take into PRIMARY SCHOOLS so children can see how it moves on a polished floor and handle it if they wish. The Female Teachers are most scared of it. It is harmless and in the end about 50% of the children are prapred to touch & handle it ! We should be at one with nature but know which ANIMALS & INSECTS are safe & which are dangeous ! Thanks for posting your Poem in your own Language - Beautiul ! Please check our site and our FUSION (Click on DEVELOPING) ON Cats & Dogs - thanks
PEACE & JOY & LOVE
Angela & Brian ๐๐๐
June 13th, 2020 14:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Greeting AROBOT - Thank you for a very delicate Poem descibing your sojourn with one of nature most elegant of creatures - a SNAKE. Snakes have a bad press ! I have a yellow snake (about 1 meter long) I take into PRIMARY SCHOOLS so children can see how it moves on a polished floor and handle it if they wish. The Female Teachers are most scared of it. It is harmless and in the end about 50% of the children are prapred to touch & handle it ! We should be at one with nature but know which ANIMALS & INSECTS are safe & which are dangeous ! Thanks for posting your Poem in your own Language - Beautiul ! Please check our site and our FUSION (Click on DEVELOPING) ON Cats & Dogs - thanks
PEACE & JOY & LOVE
Angela & Brian ๐๐๐
June 13th, 2020 14:52
Nobility
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning AROBOT - Thank you for a very stimulating POEM to wake up too ! A Feather is a beautiful example of Creative Form & Function. Every species of BIRD has its own specific set of Feathers to enable it to play its part in the AVIAN order of things - BUT - a single Feather can fill us with Awe & Wonder. Manmade artifacts fade into olivion. Im always collecting Feathers - each one is a miracle. Thanks for sharing. Beauty & Nobility are in the Eye & Heart of the Beholder - Enlightenment - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS !
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey !
Please check Todays Poem - EXPECTATIONS - THANKS - A B & S !
June 8th, 2020 01:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning AROBOT - Thank you for a very stimulating POEM to wake up too ! A Feather is a beautiful example of Creative Form & Function. Every species of BIRD has its own specific set of Feathers to enable it to play its part in the AVIAN order of things - BUT - a single Feather can fill us with Awe & Wonder. Manmade artifacts fade into olivion. Im always collecting Feathers - each one is a miracle. Thanks for sharing. Beauty & Nobility are in the Eye & Heart of the Beholder - Enlightenment - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS !
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey !
Please check Todays Poem - EXPECTATIONS - THANKS - A B & S !
June 8th, 2020 01:03
MLK, the world still not live up to your dream
AwHec8 said:
Loved Your Poem! Don
June 7th, 2020 08:51
AwHec8 said:
Loved Your Poem! Don
June 7th, 2020 08:51
MLK, the world still not live up to your dream
AwHec8 said:
When trump was elected & started the project of putting a wall around the USA with the rest surrounded by an ocean (moat) I sent letters to the president, vp, house, senate, government officials to ask questions,
1)Did they realize putting a wall around America was in effect making the US a prison. As the only thing I could think of with a wall like they proposed was a prison.
2)Did they realize that & decide yes they wanted to live in a prison, along with all of US.
3)Could they just please renounce their Citizenship now. As I wanted to renounce mine as long as they were in office.
Oh yeah now Drumpf has a wall around the White House. Damn!
trump is only the symptom of what we have become here in the USA. Don\'t know why the \"white\" race so called evangelicals can\'t see that. As in why are their 2 Christian Churches 1 wants to dominate & control through some kinda of manifest destiny bull crap, the other is very Loving & Welcoming to all us sinners, kinda Christlike.
June 7th, 2020 08:49
AwHec8 said:
When trump was elected & started the project of putting a wall around the USA with the rest surrounded by an ocean (moat) I sent letters to the president, vp, house, senate, government officials to ask questions,
1)Did they realize putting a wall around America was in effect making the US a prison. As the only thing I could think of with a wall like they proposed was a prison.
2)Did they realize that & decide yes they wanted to live in a prison, along with all of US.
3)Could they just please renounce their Citizenship now. As I wanted to renounce mine as long as they were in office.
Oh yeah now Drumpf has a wall around the White House. Damn!
trump is only the symptom of what we have become here in the USA. Don\'t know why the \"white\" race so called evangelicals can\'t see that. As in why are their 2 Christian Churches 1 wants to dominate & control through some kinda of manifest destiny bull crap, the other is very Loving & Welcoming to all us sinners, kinda Christlike.
June 7th, 2020 08:49
MLK, the world still not live up to your dream
dusk arising said:
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy
MLK 28th Aug 1963
Solidarity.
June 6th, 2020 13:56
dusk arising said:
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy
MLK 28th Aug 1963
Solidarity.
June 6th, 2020 13:56
Found and Lost
ForeverJesus7 said:
I really liked this piece, and it is so true. We must never put things first in our lives, because when we die we cannot take them with us. Everything will eventually turn to dust. Again, this piece was very enjoyable.
Put and keep the Lord first in your life.
Persistence is key
May 27th, 2020 15:40
ForeverJesus7 said:
I really liked this piece, and it is so true. We must never put things first in our lives, because when we die we cannot take them with us. Everything will eventually turn to dust. Again, this piece was very enjoyable.
Put and keep the Lord first in your life.
Persistence is key
May 27th, 2020 15:40
Fireside traveler
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AROBOT ~ BRIAN HERE ! Angela & I love to travel and prior to LOCKDOWN ~ From the UK for ยฃ300 ($400) we could fly to any European Capital (Athens - Paris - Rome - Madrid etc) with half-borad in a HOTEL ! We want to visit India - China - Japan etc and will when the EMBARGO is lifted ! We have stayead in 15 American States & each one is very very different ~ especially Hawaii & Alaska ! We consider money spent on TRAVEL is ALWAYS money well spent ~ AMEN ! You cant take you Money to Heaven with YOU ~ But you can take you MEMORIES !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐๐๐
Pleease check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks A & B
May 25th, 2020 14:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AROBOT ~ BRIAN HERE ! Angela & I love to travel and prior to LOCKDOWN ~ From the UK for ยฃ300 ($400) we could fly to any European Capital (Athens - Paris - Rome - Madrid etc) with half-borad in a HOTEL ! We want to visit India - China - Japan etc and will when the EMBARGO is lifted ! We have stayead in 15 American States & each one is very very different ~ especially Hawaii & Alaska ! We consider money spent on TRAVEL is ALWAYS money well spent ~ AMEN ! You cant take you Money to Heaven with YOU ~ But you can take you MEMORIES !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐๐๐
Pleease check *LIFE IS LIKE A CROSSWORD* Thanks A & B
May 25th, 2020 14:24
Morning Glory
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must live in the now as it is the only time we are in at any moment and every moment is special.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we must live in the now as it is the only time we are in at any moment and every moment is special.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 23:55
Fish to Chips
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to go fishing many years ago and went trout fishing. When I caught and ate the fish it was wonderful.
Recently I went trout fishing again with a friend, I did not catch any that day but about a week later the thought came to me that if I had caught a trout I would not have been able to kill it. I will not go fishing again.
May 22nd, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to go fishing many years ago and went trout fishing. When I caught and ate the fish it was wonderful.
Recently I went trout fishing again with a friend, I did not catch any that day but about a week later the thought came to me that if I had caught a trout I would not have been able to kill it. I will not go fishing again.
May 22nd, 2020 00:13
The Trees
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, if only trees could talk they would have some wonderful stories to tell us.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, if only trees could talk they would have some wonderful stories to tell us.
Andy
May 21st, 2020 00:34
Survive Me, but Forget Me Not
Goldfinch60 said:
You will return to see it in all its glory one day.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 23:52
Goldfinch60 said:
You will return to see it in all its glory one day.
Andy
May 19th, 2020 23:52
Anguish of Sapho
Goddess of the Mist said:
Ha ha! I love this. Can totally relate to the message.
May 17th, 2020 21:32
Goddess of the Mist said:
Ha ha! I love this. Can totally relate to the message.
May 17th, 2020 21:32
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