Comments received on poems by arobot
Gleaner i
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, a strong voice!
thanks for sharing
October 31st, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, a strong voice!
thanks for sharing
October 31st, 2022 05:01
Last cicada at odds
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow. Nice job. Those creatures are so loud, though.
September 9th, 2022 09:21
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wow. Nice job. Those creatures are so loud, though.
September 9th, 2022 09:21
water melon
L. B. Mek said:
\'I suppose it is not because you don’t like me
But because this melon is not big enough.”
how this line applies, to most of life..
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share
such a timely, witty
and most gentle, poetic caress
to all-things, youthful
in summer and romance
August 12th, 2022 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'I suppose it is not because you don’t like me
But because this melon is not big enough.”
how this line applies, to most of life..
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share
such a timely, witty
and most gentle, poetic caress
to all-things, youthful
in summer and romance
August 12th, 2022 02:19
A Midsummer Dream
L. B. Mek said:
lovely imagery, weaved
in-to
such a seamless flow..
thanks for sharing
June 3rd, 2022 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
lovely imagery, weaved
in-to
such a seamless flow..
thanks for sharing
June 3rd, 2022 04:30
Sakura，Sakura
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I enjoy this analogy of a cherry blossom representing this maiden. It feels quite hopeless however seeing that there\'s \"no tomb\" and \"no fruits.\" I feel the fruits could represent children, so like a longing to create a family. Sad yet touching.
April 26th, 2022 08:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, I enjoy this analogy of a cherry blossom representing this maiden. It feels quite hopeless however seeing that there\'s \"no tomb\" and \"no fruits.\" I feel the fruits could represent children, so like a longing to create a family. Sad yet touching.
April 26th, 2022 08:31
crow over
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Aha then I read in a different light
Your translation is fine
If you would like to discuss a couple of finer points please inbox me
for this is not the forum
April 18th, 2022 11:26
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Aha then I read in a different light
Your translation is fine
If you would like to discuss a couple of finer points please inbox me
for this is not the forum
April 18th, 2022 11:26
crow over
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Nice writing
If I may be bold and suggest
a couple of Chinese translations
that I feel depict more fully the English
You might feel wickedly delicious 你可會覺到厲害得得意
And verdant grass scorches my eyes 深綠草暴曬我眼
And can be 而 but is superfluous in Chinese and makes it clumsy
What is your opinion?
Are you student of Chinese or are
you Chinese?
I am half Compilation English
Thank you
Zengda
April 17th, 2022 17:02
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Nice writing
If I may be bold and suggest
a couple of Chinese translations
that I feel depict more fully the English
You might feel wickedly delicious 你可會覺到厲害得得意
And verdant grass scorches my eyes 深綠草暴曬我眼
And can be 而 but is superfluous in Chinese and makes it clumsy
What is your opinion?
Are you student of Chinese or are
you Chinese?
I am half Compilation English
Thank you
Zengda
April 17th, 2022 17:02
Rain & Cuckoo
Rocky Lagou said:
These are both so picturesque and marvelous. You truly utilize imagery splendidly and your emotions are conveyed to precision. Amazing.
April 14th, 2022 09:58
Rocky Lagou said:
These are both so picturesque and marvelous. You truly utilize imagery splendidly and your emotions are conveyed to precision. Amazing.
April 14th, 2022 09:58
No-mad
Rocky Lagou said:
We\'re all searching. Some for a purpose and others out of selfishness. But I sense this poem\'s power. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:21
Rocky Lagou said:
We\'re all searching. Some for a purpose and others out of selfishness. But I sense this poem\'s power. Great job!
April 11th, 2022 09:21
“April is a cruel time of the year...”
Christina8 said:
I have friends that would agree that April is a cruel time of year....but here the flowers don\'t bloom till May, so...But I do love your poem, very nice!
April 10th, 2022 09:52
Christina8 said:
I have friends that would agree that April is a cruel time of year....but here the flowers don\'t bloom till May, so...But I do love your poem, very nice!
April 10th, 2022 09:52
the tea’s got cold
LMTobin said:
This was beautiful. Poems like this are why I love poetry.
Well done!
March 31st, 2022 19:17
LMTobin said:
This was beautiful. Poems like this are why I love poetry.
Well done!
March 31st, 2022 19:17
the tea’s got cold
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful reflection on loss. I can relate as my mother passed three years ago, it\'s a challenging but we have to push through. Just know it\'s okay to cry, and as you mention, remember that they\'re in a better place.
March 31st, 2022 09:39
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful reflection on loss. I can relate as my mother passed three years ago, it\'s a challenging but we have to push through. Just know it\'s okay to cry, and as you mention, remember that they\'re in a better place.
March 31st, 2022 09:39
Heavenly Library
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. I believe so too. Libraries are probably one of the few places that are quiet and calm. 💖
March 29th, 2022 13:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. I believe so too. Libraries are probably one of the few places that are quiet and calm. 💖
March 29th, 2022 13:05
Affordable Sins
Rocky Lagou said:
Yup. Well done. Pretty much everything is \"sinful,\" it\'s almost impossible to escape it.
March 28th, 2022 12:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Yup. Well done. Pretty much everything is \"sinful,\" it\'s almost impossible to escape it.
March 28th, 2022 12:57
Story and glory
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a story and the title was very clever! A journey through this urn\'s life! Well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:30
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a story and the title was very clever! A journey through this urn\'s life! Well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:30
WAR & PEACE
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen dear poet! What a fine poem you\'ve crafted! It really speaks to our current situation and your tone is powerful! We need change! Great job! 💖
March 1st, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen dear poet! What a fine poem you\'ve crafted! It really speaks to our current situation and your tone is powerful! We need change! Great job! 💖
March 1st, 2022 13:26
Entropy of Tea
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this metaphorical journey your poem took me on. The way we were both connected on our posts today (I posted about coffee 😅) Anyhow, I love the way you expressed this simple cup of tea as a meaningful message for life.
February 24th, 2022 11:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this metaphorical journey your poem took me on. The way we were both connected on our posts today (I posted about coffee 😅) Anyhow, I love the way you expressed this simple cup of tea as a meaningful message for life.
February 24th, 2022 11:27
Epitaph
Christina8 said:
Well done, Short and to the point but well expressed!
February 22nd, 2022 13:15
Christina8 said:
Well done, Short and to the point but well expressed!
February 22nd, 2022 13:15
Epitaph
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was written to glory and the way you described life after death is so passionate and vivid. Bravo! 🌠💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was written to glory and the way you described life after death is so passionate and vivid. Bravo! 🌠💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:13
prairies lost
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! What an image! I love the transition from beast to motorcycle. Really well done! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:53
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! What an image! I love the transition from beast to motorcycle. Really well done! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:53
Canny Snow
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting read, insightful
and well written
thanks for sharing
and Happy Ney Year
January 4th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting read, insightful
and well written
thanks for sharing
and Happy Ney Year
January 4th, 2022 04:06
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