Comments received on poems by arobot
the tea’s got cold
LMTobin said:
This was beautiful. Poems like this are why I love poetry.
Well done!
March 31st, 2022 19:17
LMTobin said:
This was beautiful. Poems like this are why I love poetry.
Well done!
March 31st, 2022 19:17
the tea’s got cold
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful reflection on loss. I can relate as my mother passed three years ago, it\'s a challenging but we have to push through. Just know it\'s okay to cry, and as you mention, remember that they\'re in a better place.
March 31st, 2022 09:39
Rocky Lagou said:
A beautiful reflection on loss. I can relate as my mother passed three years ago, it\'s a challenging but we have to push through. Just know it\'s okay to cry, and as you mention, remember that they\'re in a better place.
March 31st, 2022 09:39
Heavenly Library
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. I believe so too. Libraries are probably one of the few places that are quiet and calm. 💖
March 29th, 2022 13:05
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. I believe so too. Libraries are probably one of the few places that are quiet and calm. 💖
March 29th, 2022 13:05
Affordable Sins
Rocky Lagou said:
Yup. Well done. Pretty much everything is \"sinful,\" it\'s almost impossible to escape it.
March 28th, 2022 12:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Yup. Well done. Pretty much everything is \"sinful,\" it\'s almost impossible to escape it.
March 28th, 2022 12:57
Mini fire balloon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poem 🙂
March 6th, 2022 10:42
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poem 🙂
March 6th, 2022 10:42
Story and glory
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a story and the title was very clever! A journey through this urn\'s life! Well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:30
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a story and the title was very clever! A journey through this urn\'s life! Well done! ✨
March 3rd, 2022 10:30
WAR & PEACE
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen dear poet! What a fine poem you\'ve crafted! It really speaks to our current situation and your tone is powerful! We need change! Great job! 💖
March 1st, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen dear poet! What a fine poem you\'ve crafted! It really speaks to our current situation and your tone is powerful! We need change! Great job! 💖
March 1st, 2022 13:26
Entropy of Tea
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this metaphorical journey your poem took me on. The way we were both connected on our posts today (I posted about coffee 😅) Anyhow, I love the way you expressed this simple cup of tea as a meaningful message for life.
February 24th, 2022 11:27
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this metaphorical journey your poem took me on. The way we were both connected on our posts today (I posted about coffee 😅) Anyhow, I love the way you expressed this simple cup of tea as a meaningful message for life.
February 24th, 2022 11:27
Epitaph
Christina8 said:
Well done, Short and to the point but well expressed!
February 22nd, 2022 13:15
Christina8 said:
Well done, Short and to the point but well expressed!
February 22nd, 2022 13:15
Epitaph
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was written to glory and the way you described life after death is so passionate and vivid. Bravo! 🌠💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! This was written to glory and the way you described life after death is so passionate and vivid. Bravo! 🌠💖
February 22nd, 2022 12:13
prairies lost
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! What an image! I love the transition from beast to motorcycle. Really well done! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:53
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! What an image! I love the transition from beast to motorcycle. Really well done! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:53
Canny Snow
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting read, insightful
and well written
thanks for sharing
and Happy Ney Year
January 4th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting read, insightful
and well written
thanks for sharing
and Happy Ney Year
January 4th, 2022 04:06
A Strain -- Dream in Dream
L. B. Mek said:
this is genuinely special!
and thankfully, more meaningfully
you already know this, to be true
June 28th, 2021 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
this is genuinely special!
and thankfully, more meaningfully
you already know this, to be true
June 28th, 2021 07:10
The Going as Upcoming
Whirlpool said:
Motivating poem. Love the Chinese version more, though I\'m sure I couldn\'t get the full meaning thanks to google translate.
June 21st, 2021 18:38
Whirlpool said:
Motivating poem. Love the Chinese version more, though I\'m sure I couldn\'t get the full meaning thanks to google translate.
June 21st, 2021 18:38
CRUSH
L. B. Mek said:
its no wonder Voltaire, claimed
that Newton \'was buried like a King\'
and considered him, the finest \'Mind\' to have ever lived...
a wonderful dedication, thank you for sharing
May 11th, 2021 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
its no wonder Voltaire, claimed
that Newton \'was buried like a King\'
and considered him, the finest \'Mind\' to have ever lived...
a wonderful dedication, thank you for sharing
May 11th, 2021 04:58
Spring, for whom
L. B. Mek said:
surely a window\'s Spring scented views of bloom
surpass those pixel screen imitation\'s of zoom..
lol a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
surely a window\'s Spring scented views of bloom
surpass those pixel screen imitation\'s of zoom..
lol a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2021 04:46
Spring, for whom
heatherbee said:
Love tulips my fav flower so the poem had me hooked at the word tulip
March 31st, 2021 17:18
heatherbee said:
Love tulips my fav flower so the poem had me hooked at the word tulip
March 31st, 2021 17:18
MyArk
L. B. Mek said:
there is hope, excavated from the overcome perils of life\'s stormy sea\'s infused within your insightful words, dear poet
a battle cry, willing us all to grab our own fate\'s and manifest our life\'s ark of introspection toiled: independence
March 15th, 2021 07:09
L. B. Mek said:
there is hope, excavated from the overcome perils of life\'s stormy sea\'s infused within your insightful words, dear poet
a battle cry, willing us all to grab our own fate\'s and manifest our life\'s ark of introspection toiled: independence
March 15th, 2021 07:09
High Tea @ Low Tea
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I liked reading this 🙂
March 14th, 2021 17:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I liked reading this 🙂
March 14th, 2021 17:19
Memory Trace
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow! Undeniably brilliant!
thank you for sharing
*Everyday during his honeymoon
I was expecting some sudden turn
And watched in misery, mercy, and mirth
Until the cake turned to colorful moulds
As if a glorious dynasty decayed into earth\'
*\'Where do memories reside?
In the eyes, the ears, or somewhere inside?
Some birds are said to migrate magnetized
feet of old horses lead the teem homebound
People used to relay feelings to the heart
But science locates them in the brain part
Yet my memory clings to my shoe laces
It happened one summer at the beach oasis\'
*\'How I miss him whenever I see shoelace
That is the way he left in me memory trace
Tide and Time since had erased our footprints
I was left, with dark water around, on A oasis\'
January 19th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
just Wow! Undeniably brilliant!
thank you for sharing
*Everyday during his honeymoon
I was expecting some sudden turn
And watched in misery, mercy, and mirth
Until the cake turned to colorful moulds
As if a glorious dynasty decayed into earth\'
*\'Where do memories reside?
In the eyes, the ears, or somewhere inside?
Some birds are said to migrate magnetized
feet of old horses lead the teem homebound
People used to relay feelings to the heart
But science locates them in the brain part
Yet my memory clings to my shoe laces
It happened one summer at the beach oasis\'
*\'How I miss him whenever I see shoelace
That is the way he left in me memory trace
Tide and Time since had erased our footprints
I was left, with dark water around, on A oasis\'
January 19th, 2021 04:52
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