Comments received on poems by arobot
How Much Is a Soul
jarcher54 said:
The infamous effort to weigh the soul was silly, just like \"experiments\" to determine if praying for gravely ill patients affects their outcomes. Imagine if God let those not prayed for die but helped the others, or if the earth were to spin out of its orbit from all the mass lost as souls escape to their eternity elsewhere during the pandemic! But whatever one believes or doubts, it is clear that your final couplet is inspired by something! It is in a word divine:
Or for Heaven’s sake, ready for the flight
A soul should rid the gravity to travel light
May 17th, 2020 00:49
jarcher54 said:
The infamous effort to weigh the soul was silly, just like \"experiments\" to determine if praying for gravely ill patients affects their outcomes. Imagine if God let those not prayed for die but helped the others, or if the earth were to spin out of its orbit from all the mass lost as souls escape to their eternity elsewhere during the pandemic! But whatever one believes or doubts, it is clear that your final couplet is inspired by something! It is in a word divine:
Or for Heaven’s sake, ready for the flight
A soul should rid the gravity to travel light
May 17th, 2020 00:49
How Much Is a Soul
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
When PEACE like a River attendeth My Way
When SORROWS like Seas Billows roll
Whatever My Lot - GOD has taught me to know
It is well - It is well with my SOUL !
HI AROBOT - Angela & Here ! Brian & I are committed Christians so we are assured *It is well with our SOULS* not for the Years of Time alone - BUT for Eternity. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *MAGPIES ....... !* Thanks A & B
May 16th, 2020 04:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
When PEACE like a River attendeth My Way
When SORROWS like Seas Billows roll
Whatever My Lot - GOD has taught me to know
It is well - It is well with my SOUL !
HI AROBOT - Angela & Here ! Brian & I are committed Christians so we are assured *It is well with our SOULS* not for the Years of Time alone - BUT for Eternity. Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
Please check *MAGPIES ....... !* Thanks A & B
May 16th, 2020 04:18
Life’s Events
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes so true, in life you have the time to enjoy it all, there is no need to race through it.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes so true, in life you have the time to enjoy it all, there is no need to race through it.
Andy
May 16th, 2020 00:27
Life’s Events
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Great Poem. I once worked @ a PE College and there is whole World of difference between TRACK & FIELD ~ Just as there is between Swimming & Diving. In Track & Swimming You are in group and beating the GROUP is the issue. You can winn Olympic Gold in a SLOW TIME as long as you win the FINAL ! But in FIELD (& Diving) its You against the World & the World Records ! You need to Jump further & higher and throw things further and execute the perfect DIVE ! In my experience *That is just how LIFE is* Thanks for the analogy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours !
Love ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please check *Ler Freedom Reign* Thanks !
May 15th, 2020 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Great Poem. I once worked @ a PE College and there is whole World of difference between TRACK & FIELD ~ Just as there is between Swimming & Diving. In Track & Swimming You are in group and beating the GROUP is the issue. You can winn Olympic Gold in a SLOW TIME as long as you win the FINAL ! But in FIELD (& Diving) its You against the World & the World Records ! You need to Jump further & higher and throw things further and execute the perfect DIVE ! In my experience *That is just how LIFE is* Thanks for the analogy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours !
Love ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please check *Ler Freedom Reign* Thanks !
May 15th, 2020 16:39
Life’s Events
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Great Poem. I once worked @ a PE College and there is whole World of difference between TRACK & FIELD ~ Just as there is between Swimming & Diving. In Track & Swimming You are in group and beating the GROUP is the issue. You can winn Olympic Gold in a SLOW TIME as long as you win the FINAL ! But in FIELD (& Diving) its You against the World & the World Records ! You need to Jump further & higher and throw things further and execute the perfect DIVE ! In my experience *That is just how LIFE is* Thnaks for the analogy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours !
Love ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
May 15th, 2020 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Great Poem. I once worked @ a PE College and there is whole World of difference between TRACK & FIELD ~ Just as there is between Swimming & Diving. In Track & Swimming You are in group and beating the GROUP is the issue. You can winn Olympic Gold in a SLOW TIME as long as you win the FINAL ! But in FIELD (& Diving) its You against the World & the World Records ! You need to Jump further & higher and throw things further and execute the perfect DIVE ! In my experience *That is just how LIFE is* Thnaks for the analogy !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours !
Love ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
May 15th, 2020 16:39
Publish or Perish
Poetic Dan said:
Another interesting read really love the flow, don\'t let it go or do it\'s up to you...
May 14th, 2020 05:04
Poetic Dan said:
Another interesting read really love the flow, don\'t let it go or do it\'s up to you...
May 14th, 2020 05:04
Dream as a Horse
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe will always be there for us to explore.
Andy
May 14th, 2020 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe will always be there for us to explore.
Andy
May 14th, 2020 02:02
Birds’ lingua franca
Goldfinch60 said:
Birds songs are so wonderful as are the words in your poem.
Andy
May 13th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Birds songs are so wonderful as are the words in your poem.
Andy
May 13th, 2020 00:59
Birds’ lingua franca
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AROBOT - BRIAN HERE - Thanks for a lovely Poem all about the SOUNDS of Nature. When we were in the Boy Scouts when we were in our Teens all the Patrols were named after Birds & Animals and the Girls were named after Trees & Flowers. Ours was the PEEWIT Patrol and its call sounds like its name PEEEEEE - WIIIIT PEEEEEE WIIIIT We had to recognise the Birds (and Animals) by Sight - Habitat & Sound. The first time you camp out at night in a Field remote from Traffic - You hear all sorts of NEW SOUNDS - SEE NEW SIGHTS - SMELL NEW SCENTS - TOUCH NEW TEXTURES & SAVOUR NEW TASTES ! Skills we lose if we become urbanised. We tried to live WITH NATURE just like the European Gypsies & the North American Indians & the Maoris in New Zealand which Angela & I have visited and lived among ! Thnaks for remind ing us of the LANGUAGE of the Mouse - Cuckoo - Francolin (Asian Gamebird like a Partridge) - Magpies & Thers and thanks for sharing some Chinese Folk Lore - AMEN. Angela & I have bought our First House ! We have made it very Bird & Wild Animal friendly. We have only been in it six weeks but have seen 20 Species so far - AMEN ! Thnaks for all yiour lovely POEMS - You are a BLESSING to this SITE !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
May 12th, 2020 15:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI AROBOT - BRIAN HERE - Thanks for a lovely Poem all about the SOUNDS of Nature. When we were in the Boy Scouts when we were in our Teens all the Patrols were named after Birds & Animals and the Girls were named after Trees & Flowers. Ours was the PEEWIT Patrol and its call sounds like its name PEEEEEE - WIIIIT PEEEEEE WIIIIT We had to recognise the Birds (and Animals) by Sight - Habitat & Sound. The first time you camp out at night in a Field remote from Traffic - You hear all sorts of NEW SOUNDS - SEE NEW SIGHTS - SMELL NEW SCENTS - TOUCH NEW TEXTURES & SAVOUR NEW TASTES ! Skills we lose if we become urbanised. We tried to live WITH NATURE just like the European Gypsies & the North American Indians & the Maoris in New Zealand which Angela & I have visited and lived among ! Thnaks for remind ing us of the LANGUAGE of the Mouse - Cuckoo - Francolin (Asian Gamebird like a Partridge) - Magpies & Thers and thanks for sharing some Chinese Folk Lore - AMEN. Angela & I have bought our First House ! We have made it very Bird & Wild Animal friendly. We have only been in it six weeks but have seen 20 Species so far - AMEN ! Thnaks for all yiour lovely POEMS - You are a BLESSING to this SITE !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
May 12th, 2020 15:12
Birds’ lingua franca
Neville said:
an entertaining and otherwise thoroughly enjoyed poem my friend..
May 12th, 2020 12:49
Neville said:
an entertaining and otherwise thoroughly enjoyed poem my friend..
May 12th, 2020 12:49
Birdy Talk
Goldfinch60 said:
The notes of birds great me every morning, it is so wonderful.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
The notes of birds great me every morning, it is so wonderful.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:20
Birdy Talk
dusk arising said:
One of my biggest regrets was my inability to mimic parts of a blackbirds repertoire once they removed one of my teeth. The birds nearby are far happier now though i fear.
May 11th, 2020 11:40
dusk arising said:
One of my biggest regrets was my inability to mimic parts of a blackbirds repertoire once they removed one of my teeth. The birds nearby are far happier now though i fear.
May 11th, 2020 11:40
mommy restaraunt
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - GOOD EVENING AROBOT ~ Thanks for an interesting but very true Poem. As an Educationalist I am familiar with the GAOKAO which is a Chinese examination for entrance into Higher Education. The implication in the Poem being that when ones Child passed the GAOKAO - They would FLEE THE NEST and go to UNIVERSITY ! Mommys Restaurant would no longer be needed !
For a healthy Child a good Breakast is important . Please check our Poem TODAY - THANKS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
May 10th, 2020 14:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - GOOD EVENING AROBOT ~ Thanks for an interesting but very true Poem. As an Educationalist I am familiar with the GAOKAO which is a Chinese examination for entrance into Higher Education. The implication in the Poem being that when ones Child passed the GAOKAO - They would FLEE THE NEST and go to UNIVERSITY ! Mommys Restaurant would no longer be needed !
For a healthy Child a good Breakast is important . Please check our Poem TODAY - THANKS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
May 10th, 2020 14:27
Publish or Perish
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Thanks for your Poem ! *Publish or Perish* is a big Mantra in the Scentifiic World (where I work) If the College doesnt publish its research then it doesnt attract Funding or competant Students on its Post Graduate Programmes. On MPS we have all built up a Portfolio of e-Poems or we can self-publish. Producing Cyber Books & having Cyber Friends is ideal for LOCKDOWN. But one hopes teo write a Best-selling Novel or a Collection of Poetry !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 15:33
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good evening AROBOT - Thanks for your Poem ! *Publish or Perish* is a big Mantra in the Scentifiic World (where I work) If the College doesnt publish its research then it doesnt attract Funding or competant Students on its Post Graduate Programmes. On MPS we have all built up a Portfolio of e-Poems or we can self-publish. Producing Cyber Books & having Cyber Friends is ideal for LOCKDOWN. But one hopes teo write a Best-selling Novel or a Collection of Poetry !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 15:33
Coronation of the New Year
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE AROBOT ~ We have already had friends die prematurely ~ through a pinhead virus (COVID 19) we cant see and noone fully understands ! Que Sera Sera ~ we all just hope & pray it wont have our name (or the names of our Family) on it. Isolate (if you can) and be Vigilant. My Wife ANGELA works in a Hospital (PHYSIO) so she is vulnerable. She is clothed Head to Toe ~ Not only in PPE but also in PRAYER ~ AMEN. Thnaks for caring & Sharing.
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 09:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE AROBOT ~ We have already had friends die prematurely ~ through a pinhead virus (COVID 19) we cant see and noone fully understands ! Que Sera Sera ~ we all just hope & pray it wont have our name (or the names of our Family) on it. Isolate (if you can) and be Vigilant. My Wife ANGELA works in a Hospital (PHYSIO) so she is vulnerable. She is clothed Head to Toe ~ Not only in PPE but also in PRAYER ~ AMEN. Thnaks for caring & Sharing.
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
May 6th, 2020 09:54
awomanisawomanisawoman
arobot said:
inspired by pizza and paste she makes, and envious her of her omnipotence
and by\"a rose is a rose is a rose is arose\"
hence \"a woman is a woman is a woman is a woman\"
May 5th, 2020 12:42
arobot said:
inspired by pizza and paste she makes, and envious her of her omnipotence
and by\"a rose is a rose is a rose is arose\"
hence \"a woman is a woman is a woman is a woman\"
May 5th, 2020 12:42
Science or Humanity
Goldfinch60 said:
Arts are so valuable in this time of isolation. There will be a cure in time but we must all be patient.
Andy
May 4th, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Arts are so valuable in this time of isolation. There will be a cure in time but we must all be patient.
Andy
May 4th, 2020 00:11
Science or Humanity
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING AROBOT - Angela & I are both *Scientists* so we found the subject of your Poem very interesting ! To be a PHYIOTHERAPIST I have studied Human Anatomy & Physiology - Brian is an Organic Chemist. The Scientists who are developing the CORVID 19 Vaccines are Biochemists & Viroologists. A Vaccine works by training the bodies immune system to recognise and combat PATHOGENS like COVID 19. ANTIGENS can be synthesised from molecules present in COVID 19. When ANTIGENS are injected into the Patient - their immune systen recognises them and uses them to attack & imobolise the Pathogen (COVID 19). Virologists are working to develop a VACCINE but like all Scientific Research it takes time.
Whatever our Academic Discipline we all have a part to play in Society during this frustrating period of Lockdown. I (31) am working @ the Hospital in the Physio Clinic (not with CORVID 19 Patients) and Brian (36) who is on furlough from College is involved with the Food Bank and in delivering Groceries to the over 70s. We can all do our bit - but we all need to exercise Patience.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
May 3rd, 2020 14:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING AROBOT - Angela & I are both *Scientists* so we found the subject of your Poem very interesting ! To be a PHYIOTHERAPIST I have studied Human Anatomy & Physiology - Brian is an Organic Chemist. The Scientists who are developing the CORVID 19 Vaccines are Biochemists & Viroologists. A Vaccine works by training the bodies immune system to recognise and combat PATHOGENS like COVID 19. ANTIGENS can be synthesised from molecules present in COVID 19. When ANTIGENS are injected into the Patient - their immune systen recognises them and uses them to attack & imobolise the Pathogen (COVID 19). Virologists are working to develop a VACCINE but like all Scientific Research it takes time.
Whatever our Academic Discipline we all have a part to play in Society during this frustrating period of Lockdown. I (31) am working @ the Hospital in the Physio Clinic (not with CORVID 19 Patients) and Brian (36) who is on furlough from College is involved with the Food Bank and in delivering Groceries to the over 70s. We can all do our bit - but we all need to exercise Patience.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
May 3rd, 2020 14:55
Elysium --lost and found
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks AROBOT for Poem No. 2. I think you speak for 7.8 Billiion People (through your Poem) we are ALL sick & tired of COVID 19 & especially the LOCKDOWN its like an SF Film Im OK because I get to go to work (as a PHYSIO) but my Husband Brian is Housebound and has morphed into a House Husband - Hes a good Cook.
ELYSIUM is defined as *A Place or State of Perfect Happiness !* I am so so pleased that You consider MPS as ELYSIUM ! It is a great site and I hope you get some more comments on your interesting Poems !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
May 2nd, 2020 15:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks AROBOT for Poem No. 2. I think you speak for 7.8 Billiion People (through your Poem) we are ALL sick & tired of COVID 19 & especially the LOCKDOWN its like an SF Film Im OK because I get to go to work (as a PHYSIO) but my Husband Brian is Housebound and has morphed into a House Husband - Hes a good Cook.
ELYSIUM is defined as *A Place or State of Perfect Happiness !* I am so so pleased that You consider MPS as ELYSIUM ! It is a great site and I hope you get some more comments on your interesting Poems !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
May 2nd, 2020 15:11
Tulip
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening AROBOT welcome to MPS it is a proactive site and functions by reading and commenting on each other Poems - OK Thanks you for your first Poem. Well penned drawing an analogy between the LIFE of a TULIP and *LOVE*. It is true what you say *A full blown Tulip* is - in effect - a dead one. Its glory lies in the developement from BUD to almost FULL BLOOM ! Our experience reflects that ! When we met (over three years ago) it was our first engagement - Brian was 33 and I was 28 ! Our LOVE was in BUD. Weve been married SIX weeks and the bud is beginning to OPEN ! Our Golden Wedding is in April 2070 (Brian 86 and I 82) ! Our Tulips will be Almost Fully Open by then but we hope & pray neither of us completely ! Thanks for sharing it made me think about our future ! Please check our site - Thank You ! We have our first Home and in the Garden opposite is a magnificent stand of 60 tulips half of Yellow & half of Red. I work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital - and it inspires Me every day in these sad days of Lockdown.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
May 1st, 2020 14:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening AROBOT welcome to MPS it is a proactive site and functions by reading and commenting on each other Poems - OK Thanks you for your first Poem. Well penned drawing an analogy between the LIFE of a TULIP and *LOVE*. It is true what you say *A full blown Tulip* is - in effect - a dead one. Its glory lies in the developement from BUD to almost FULL BLOOM ! Our experience reflects that ! When we met (over three years ago) it was our first engagement - Brian was 33 and I was 28 ! Our LOVE was in BUD. Weve been married SIX weeks and the bud is beginning to OPEN ! Our Golden Wedding is in April 2070 (Brian 86 and I 82) ! Our Tulips will be Almost Fully Open by then but we hope & pray neither of us completely ! Thanks for sharing it made me think about our future ! Please check our site - Thank You ! We have our first Home and in the Garden opposite is a magnificent stand of 60 tulips half of Yellow & half of Red. I work as a Physiotherapist in a Hospital - and it inspires Me every day in these sad days of Lockdown.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
May 1st, 2020 14:12
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