Comments received on poems by arobot
White Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
Pursuit of Immortality
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Pursuit of Immortality
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
Higanbana
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
Long Death, Liberty
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
His Concert
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
His Concert
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
Angkor Wat
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Angkor Wat
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
Stone to Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
Where is Spring?
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
Where is Spring?
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Shelf life
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
Elon Musk
mvvenkataraman said:
Earlier Twitter had a variety of Tweets,
Now only Tesla and Elon Musk fully,
Okay. He had paid 43 billion dollars,
So, let him enjoy, but let me quit,
Everything will change in life,
So, no use in lamenting sadly!
April 25th, 2023 10:11
mvvenkataraman said:
Earlier Twitter had a variety of Tweets,
Now only Tesla and Elon Musk fully,
Okay. He had paid 43 billion dollars,
So, let him enjoy, but let me quit,
Everything will change in life,
So, no use in lamenting sadly!
April 25th, 2023 10:11
March
Lorna said:
One ripping the other’s hair like weeds.... made me laugh out loud......
April 5th, 2023 04:06
Lorna said:
One ripping the other’s hair like weeds.... made me laugh out loud......
April 5th, 2023 04:06
Greenhouse Childhood
Doggerel Dave said:
Solid message I like. Sooner or later those fragile beings surely must get out into a real world experience........... But perhaps they won\'t?
February 26th, 2023 19:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Solid message I like. Sooner or later those fragile beings surely must get out into a real world experience........... But perhaps they won\'t?
February 26th, 2023 19:54
Greenhouse Childhood
thinkerbell said:
Interesting title for a poem on a very relevant issue..well written ,dear poet😍🥰
February 26th, 2023 08:36
thinkerbell said:
Interesting title for a poem on a very relevant issue..well written ,dear poet😍🥰
February 26th, 2023 08:36
The Dawn is just a Cobweb away
arobot said:
it is about a recent tragedy. one night this highshooler was missing from his dorm despite all the security cameras. A massive search went on for more than three months afterwards. I t was recently found out the body had been hanging right in the small wood grove at the schoolyard. the student had recorded his attempts of suicide in his recording device for being unendurable of the pressure of school and meaninglessness of life.
February 19th, 2023 05:11
arobot said:
it is about a recent tragedy. one night this highshooler was missing from his dorm despite all the security cameras. A massive search went on for more than three months afterwards. I t was recently found out the body had been hanging right in the small wood grove at the schoolyard. the student had recorded his attempts of suicide in his recording device for being unendurable of the pressure of school and meaninglessness of life.
February 19th, 2023 05:11
The Dawn is just a Cobweb away
David Wakeling said:
This reads like the author wants to give some life advice.Unfortunately nothing is explained.It is not clear how the advice should be put into practice.But hey what would I know
February 19th, 2023 04:50
David Wakeling said:
This reads like the author wants to give some life advice.Unfortunately nothing is explained.It is not clear how the advice should be put into practice.But hey what would I know
February 19th, 2023 04:50
Trust
Parisab said:
Your words can describe the strength and vulnerability of our bond to others: as is the toddler’s bond to her mother. This poem also seems to live in the mother’s own childhood struggles. Keep writing about this most essential topic. Thank you dear Poet.
February 12th, 2023 11:00
Parisab said:
Your words can describe the strength and vulnerability of our bond to others: as is the toddler’s bond to her mother. This poem also seems to live in the mother’s own childhood struggles. Keep writing about this most essential topic. Thank you dear Poet.
February 12th, 2023 11:00
tough pear
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing dear poet
(all that is Spring, viewed
upon its Autumnal demise
should be treasured
for surviving without being consumed
by that chaos of existence...)
November 28th, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful metaphor
thanks for sharing dear poet
(all that is Spring, viewed
upon its Autumnal demise
should be treasured
for surviving without being consumed
by that chaos of existence...)
November 28th, 2022 05:19
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