Comments received on poems by arobot
小满
Poetic Licence said:
Very well crafted write with deep meaning and sentiment, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
Very well crafted write with deep meaning and sentiment, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:38
小满
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphor and great images in the poetic form. Loved it a fave for the metaphor that carries through so well throughout the poem
May 25th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphor and great images in the poetic form. Loved it a fave for the metaphor that carries through so well throughout the poem
May 25th, 2025 08:36
Tie-Break
Poetic Licence said:
We the the human are wrapping ourselves up in a plastic world, slowly suffocating to death, nicely written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
We the the human are wrapping ourselves up in a plastic world, slowly suffocating to death, nicely written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 07:09
Tie-Break
sorenbarrett said:
Both whales and ourselves entangled in the plastic of modern civilization life threatening they imprison us and their poison we swallow could end the species. A lovely write
May 11th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Both whales and ourselves entangled in the plastic of modern civilization life threatening they imprison us and their poison we swallow could end the species. A lovely write
May 11th, 2025 06:30
White Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
Pursuit of Immortality
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Pursuit of Immortality
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
Higanbana
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
Long Death, Liberty
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
His Concert
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
His Concert
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
Angkor Wat
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Angkor Wat
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
Stone to Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
Where is Spring?
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
Where is Spring?
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Shelf life
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
Elon Musk
mvvenkataraman said:
Earlier Twitter had a variety of Tweets,
Now only Tesla and Elon Musk fully,
Okay. He had paid 43 billion dollars,
So, let him enjoy, but let me quit,
Everything will change in life,
So, no use in lamenting sadly!
April 25th, 2023 10:11
mvvenkataraman said:
Earlier Twitter had a variety of Tweets,
Now only Tesla and Elon Musk fully,
Okay. He had paid 43 billion dollars,
So, let him enjoy, but let me quit,
Everything will change in life,
So, no use in lamenting sadly!
April 25th, 2023 10:11
March
Lorna said:
One ripping the other’s hair like weeds.... made me laugh out loud......
April 5th, 2023 04:06
Lorna said:
One ripping the other’s hair like weeds.... made me laugh out loud......
April 5th, 2023 04:06
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