Comments received on poems by arobot
ghosts are good
sorenbarrett said:
So clever as a poem of the season incorporating so many things in a collage even using famous poems lines. A fave
October 19th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
So clever as a poem of the season incorporating so many things in a collage even using famous poems lines. A fave
October 19th, 2025 06:07
timeless timepiece
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has more than one level of interpretation but the first and obvious is more than enough for a fave. So well said in so few words it rings with truth. And a sundial casts its shadow but not at night or cloudy days.
October 9th, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has more than one level of interpretation but the first and obvious is more than enough for a fave. So well said in so few words it rings with truth. And a sundial casts its shadow but not at night or cloudy days.
October 9th, 2025 06:44
Pilgrim’s Progress
sorenbarrett said:
The title of a rather famous old book this poem followed a different path that feels almost Buddhist in its focus on nature and its inherent beauty. A most lovely creation and work.
June 8th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
The title of a rather famous old book this poem followed a different path that feels almost Buddhist in its focus on nature and its inherent beauty. A most lovely creation and work.
June 8th, 2025 06:28
小满
Poetic Licence said:
Very well crafted write with deep meaning and sentiment, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
Very well crafted write with deep meaning and sentiment, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 09:38
小满
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphor and great images in the poetic form. Loved it a fave for the metaphor that carries through so well throughout the poem
May 25th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphor and great images in the poetic form. Loved it a fave for the metaphor that carries through so well throughout the poem
May 25th, 2025 08:36
Tie-Break
Poetic Licence said:
We the the human are wrapping ourselves up in a plastic world, slowly suffocating to death, nicely written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
We the the human are wrapping ourselves up in a plastic world, slowly suffocating to death, nicely written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 07:09
Tie-Break
sorenbarrett said:
Both whales and ourselves entangled in the plastic of modern civilization life threatening they imprison us and their poison we swallow could end the species. A lovely write
May 11th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Both whales and ourselves entangled in the plastic of modern civilization life threatening they imprison us and their poison we swallow could end the species. A lovely write
May 11th, 2025 06:30
White Noise
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one is old in its newness and complex in its simplicity. A new analogy for an old feeling and well written
April 20th, 2025 07:02
Pursuit of Immortality
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Sunshinefalling said:
Plato thinks the same- man’s pursuit of immortality
April 19th, 2025 05:49
Pursuit of Immortality
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are right we all seek immortality in our own way. I have no fear of dying or being forgotten but I would like to feel that I had contributed to something good while I was here and in this there is a sense of immortality. I usually define poetry as something that evokes feeling but this time it has evoked thought a fave
April 19th, 2025 04:15
Higanbana
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25
Long Death, Liberty
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body to form life. A beautiful poem of unification and liberation in death. Well done
April 17th, 2025 06:24
His Concert
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
April 16th, 2025 10:32
His Concert
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas falling in place, gained my devotion. A most lovely short that feels longer than it is. A marvelous poem that is a definite fave
April 16th, 2025 07:18
Angkor Wat
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that has made the reader think, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 07:50
Angkor Wat
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the first I had the bizarre thought of how we that destroy nature are destroyed by its invasion of our past civilizations overtaken by the foliage. A great read. well done
April 15th, 2025 05:23
Stone to Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Entropy rules. A beautiful poem that seems so Tao oriented it speaks in metaphor and is read by the mind through the senses. Lovely
April 14th, 2025 04:58
Where is Spring?
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this is full of beautiful images and the natural flow of seasons. Very well done deserves a fave
March 9th, 2025 08:02
Where is Spring?
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful and beautifully written piece around the importance of nature and the struggles it goes through to survive, really enjoyed the read
March 9th, 2025 06:01
Shelf life
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
Bobby O said:
It switched to metaphor at the end and I’m thinking that conclusion may benefit from another line or two of transition support. ??
April 30th, 2023 07:54
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