Comments received on poems by DianeKey6
Crushed by your Hate
TWENTY3 said:
well constructed piece showing the evil that resides underneath the Christian poet. Sorry you have suffered at the hands of a two-faced monster. Don\'t leave us you are more popular than he already.
July 22nd, 2020 05:08
TWENTY3 said:
well constructed piece showing the evil that resides underneath the Christian poet. Sorry you have suffered at the hands of a two-faced monster. Don\'t leave us you are more popular than he already.
July 22nd, 2020 05:08
Crushed by your Hate
L. B. Mek said:
Isn\'t it wonderful, some pay hundreds of dollars an hour to sit across a stranger and blurt out their feelings, to be asked \'what do you think, it means?\' (therapist sessions)
While we lucky few, drum the cadence of our untamed emotions into our keyboard and create works of rhythmic self-awareness.
Sadly, our world is full of those that promote discord and attempt to afflict others with the asinine hate they live with.
The simple fact that you have the ability to transfer your rage and disappointment into fuelling works of creative self-expression, is an asset you must cherish and rejoice-in!
well done my friend, keep that mighty pen busy
July 21st, 2020 01:30
L. B. Mek said:
Isn\'t it wonderful, some pay hundreds of dollars an hour to sit across a stranger and blurt out their feelings, to be asked \'what do you think, it means?\' (therapist sessions)
While we lucky few, drum the cadence of our untamed emotions into our keyboard and create works of rhythmic self-awareness.
Sadly, our world is full of those that promote discord and attempt to afflict others with the asinine hate they live with.
The simple fact that you have the ability to transfer your rage and disappointment into fuelling works of creative self-expression, is an asset you must cherish and rejoice-in!
well done my friend, keep that mighty pen busy
July 21st, 2020 01:30
Crushed by your Hate
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a and Unsub have said, do not let the words of such an ignorant bully send you from this site, it is great to read your poetry, just put that person in a box and send him away. We are here for you.
Keep writing and showing us your wonderful words Diane.
Andy
July 20th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what d a and Unsub have said, do not let the words of such an ignorant bully send you from this site, it is great to read your poetry, just put that person in a box and send him away. We are here for you.
Keep writing and showing us your wonderful words Diane.
Andy
July 20th, 2020 00:12
Crushed by your Hate
dusk arising said:
So sad to read this. I have witnessed some of the shameful bullying inflicted on you by a man who dares to call himself a christian.
I saw your apology where you were willing to sacrifice your pride to pour oil on troubled waters but with increased vehemence your attacker continued.
Honestly I hope you will come to see that individual for the aggressive troll type personality they are.
Most MPS contributors are gentle free thinking creative people, many of us treating poetry as a self healing therapy. We enjoy complimentary comments to and from each other which lifts us in confidence to post more.
Sadly there are one or two who try to pervert our thoughts with preaching their questionable directives and exhibit the desire to be nasty to all who question in the slightest any one sentence of their work.
You will find warmth and support on MPS from all but a tiny minority.
Please stay.
July 19th, 2020 12:58
dusk arising said:
So sad to read this. I have witnessed some of the shameful bullying inflicted on you by a man who dares to call himself a christian.
I saw your apology where you were willing to sacrifice your pride to pour oil on troubled waters but with increased vehemence your attacker continued.
Honestly I hope you will come to see that individual for the aggressive troll type personality they are.
Most MPS contributors are gentle free thinking creative people, many of us treating poetry as a self healing therapy. We enjoy complimentary comments to and from each other which lifts us in confidence to post more.
Sadly there are one or two who try to pervert our thoughts with preaching their questionable directives and exhibit the desire to be nasty to all who question in the slightest any one sentence of their work.
You will find warmth and support on MPS from all but a tiny minority.
Please stay.
July 19th, 2020 12:58
Quality Control: FAIL
peto said:
Only advice I\'d give on rhyme
Is
Keep at it
Personally
I think it adds something
Enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2020 07:11
peto said:
Only advice I\'d give on rhyme
Is
Keep at it
Personally
I think it adds something
Enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2020 07:11
Quality Control: FAIL
Goldfinch60 said:
L.B.Mek has made some sound suggestions but your rhyming scheme has worked very well.
Your words are showing yourself and this is where poetry can be strong whether it rhymes or not.
Do not stop writing it is great to see your words.
Andy
July 18th, 2020 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
L.B.Mek has made some sound suggestions but your rhyming scheme has worked very well.
Your words are showing yourself and this is where poetry can be strong whether it rhymes or not.
Do not stop writing it is great to see your words.
Andy
July 18th, 2020 01:32
Quality Control: FAIL
TWENTY3 said:
I remember the fax machine. Great metaphor. This is the great to read with rhyme and substance.
July 17th, 2020 06:07
TWENTY3 said:
I remember the fax machine. Great metaphor. This is the great to read with rhyme and substance.
July 17th, 2020 06:07
Quality Control: FAIL
orchidee said:
You could try shuffling words around in sentences, to make them rhyme, if you have difficult final words, e.g. \"ing\" and \"ed\" endings seem quite easy to rhyme.
We may not speak in actual conversation as we speak in poetry, but that\'s partly why it is poetry I suppose!
Nothing gets a \'fail\' mark in this poem! :)
July 17th, 2020 06:07
orchidee said:
You could try shuffling words around in sentences, to make them rhyme, if you have difficult final words, e.g. \"ing\" and \"ed\" endings seem quite easy to rhyme.
We may not speak in actual conversation as we speak in poetry, but that\'s partly why it is poetry I suppose!
Nothing gets a \'fail\' mark in this poem! :)
July 17th, 2020 06:07
Quality Control: FAIL
L. B. Mek said:
I found this a brave and engaging window into the vulnerabilities we all carry around
although, your idea/voice has more potential I think,
if you feel this work is complete then please, ignore my suggestions
however, if you want to squeeze a little more out of the solid foundations you\'ve already built
may I humbly suggest you try writing in a loose sonnet form (maybe a heroic sonnet), since you have utilised end-rhyme so well already,
then just to add a bit more spice have a contradictory few lines juxtaposing a more hopeful tone to your voice
July 17th, 2020 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
I found this a brave and engaging window into the vulnerabilities we all carry around
although, your idea/voice has more potential I think,
if you feel this work is complete then please, ignore my suggestions
however, if you want to squeeze a little more out of the solid foundations you\'ve already built
may I humbly suggest you try writing in a loose sonnet form (maybe a heroic sonnet), since you have utilised end-rhyme so well already,
then just to add a bit more spice have a contradictory few lines juxtaposing a more hopeful tone to your voice
July 17th, 2020 05:25
LORD
Goldfinch60 said:
I can relate to your words Diane, My Spirit is with me and will always be with me. I have dismissed others in organised religions who try and show me a different way through organised religion.
May YOUR God go with you.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
I can relate to your words Diane, My Spirit is with me and will always be with me. I have dismissed others in organised religions who try and show me a different way through organised religion.
May YOUR God go with you.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 00:01
LORD
dusk arising said:
Refreshing to read you have found a worthwhile spiritual essence which is not restricted by falseness nor tainted by a shameful history as is identified in the establishment christianity/catholicism.
July 15th, 2020 16:02
dusk arising said:
Refreshing to read you have found a worthwhile spiritual essence which is not restricted by falseness nor tainted by a shameful history as is identified in the establishment christianity/catholicism.
July 15th, 2020 16:02
LORD
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Day DIANE - Thanks for sharing a very beautiful & spiriual second Poem. What it tells Me is that you have found the LORD - & He has found You ~ wihout the aid of any Priest or Church or the BIBLE ~ but that the LORD has chosen to reveal HIMSELF to YOU ~ AWESOME !
As your Poem relates - The LORD does seek & find US when we are LOW and shows us the PATH to Inner Peace we should follow ! The LORD is everything to YOU ~ He sees your Inner Beauty and takes time to talk with YOU and restore your SOUL ! You and Your Lord resonate in Spiritual Harmony. Love this Poem because this mirrors the relationship I too have with GOD ! I have saved it as a FAVE ! Please check our POEM on COVID 19 Masks - called *MASQUERADE* Thanks A !
Peace & Joy & Happiness
LOVE - ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
July 15th, 2020 08:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Day DIANE - Thanks for sharing a very beautiful & spiriual second Poem. What it tells Me is that you have found the LORD - & He has found You ~ wihout the aid of any Priest or Church or the BIBLE ~ but that the LORD has chosen to reveal HIMSELF to YOU ~ AWESOME !
As your Poem relates - The LORD does seek & find US when we are LOW and shows us the PATH to Inner Peace we should follow ! The LORD is everything to YOU ~ He sees your Inner Beauty and takes time to talk with YOU and restore your SOUL ! You and Your Lord resonate in Spiritual Harmony. Love this Poem because this mirrors the relationship I too have with GOD ! I have saved it as a FAVE ! Please check our POEM on COVID 19 Masks - called *MASQUERADE* Thanks A !
Peace & Joy & Happiness
LOVE - ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
July 15th, 2020 08:36
Skin to Skin
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing in your own style - this reads so well and I\'m certainly not offended - nothing vulgar just sensuous and a good read. Keep posting.
July 12th, 2020 06:09
Michael Edwards said:
Keep writing in your own style - this reads so well and I\'m certainly not offended - nothing vulgar just sensuous and a good read. Keep posting.
July 12th, 2020 06:09
Skin to Skin
ForeverJesus7 said:
Wow, this is some piece. Unfortunately, I can\'t remember what that is like (haha). Add a bit more information to your profile, and I might add you as a friend. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 11th, 2020 16:16
ForeverJesus7 said:
Wow, this is some piece. Unfortunately, I can\'t remember what that is like (haha). Add a bit more information to your profile, and I might add you as a friend. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 11th, 2020 16:16
Skin to Skin
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Dion - Welcome to MPS - Thanks for your first Poem - very sensual ! Angela & I have been married four Months and share this site. Your elegantly penned Ballad rang many Bells ! Technically it should have been labelled *18* because we have Younger Members. Thanks for your comment on our Poem *A Walk in the Woods* MPS operates by reading each others Poems and commenting. There is no restriction on Subject (provided its not offensive !) or Style of Poetry !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela ~ SE England UK
Where are you currently based ?
July 11th, 2020 15:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Dion - Welcome to MPS - Thanks for your first Poem - very sensual ! Angela & I have been married four Months and share this site. Your elegantly penned Ballad rang many Bells ! Technically it should have been labelled *18* because we have Younger Members. Thanks for your comment on our Poem *A Walk in the Woods* MPS operates by reading each others Poems and commenting. There is no restriction on Subject (provided its not offensive !) or Style of Poetry !
Love - Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela ~ SE England UK
Where are you currently based ?
July 11th, 2020 15:39
