Comments received on poems by diamonddagger
In the Haze
diamonddagger said:
My daughter died two years ago. This was a remembrance poem, Thanks for the comments.
March 16th, 2013 12:56
diamonddagger said:
My daughter died two years ago. This was a remembrance poem, Thanks for the comments.
March 16th, 2013 12:56
The Storm
baj-a said:
I love storms...the bigger the better and you captured the mixed feelings people have during storms wonderfully in your poem. I love natures child's things... what an inspired and magical line!
March 16th, 2013 08:18
baj-a said:
I love storms...the bigger the better and you captured the mixed feelings people have during storms wonderfully in your poem. I love natures child's things... what an inspired and magical line!
March 16th, 2013 08:18
My Deer
baj-a said:
what a lovely and gentle moment to have experienced! thanks for sharing it with us!
March 16th, 2013 08:14
baj-a said:
what a lovely and gentle moment to have experienced! thanks for sharing it with us!
March 16th, 2013 08:14
The Storm
diamonddagger said:
I don't understand the fusion...but you go ahead and teach me the ins and outs of this site. I can't wait to see what you do with this poem.
March 15th, 2013 20:53
diamonddagger said:
I don't understand the fusion...but you go ahead and teach me the ins and outs of this site. I can't wait to see what you do with this poem.
March 15th, 2013 20:53
The Storm
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Linda... I love your poem I am going to fusion it then pass it back to you. I hope you will like my thoughts. This is a wonderful piece for such an exercise of wit.
BWP... James...
March 15th, 2013 19:46
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Linda... I love your poem I am going to fusion it then pass it back to you. I hope you will like my thoughts. This is a wonderful piece for such an exercise of wit.
BWP... James...
March 15th, 2013 19:46
Stand Alone (a pantoum)
baj-a said:
what a beautiful poem of love and truth... I only wish a the grown man with drawn sword could remember how safe he felt in his mothers arms.
March 15th, 2013 07:55
baj-a said:
what a beautiful poem of love and truth... I only wish a the grown man with drawn sword could remember how safe he felt in his mothers arms.
March 15th, 2013 07:55
In the Haze
baj-a said:
beautiful and intriguing poem! love the images the words paint. I found these lines especially haunting...
I find you here your skirts all washed in water
the colors of your skirts has misted, too
down to pale white my daughter
the pale white now of your shoe
March 14th, 2013 07:46
baj-a said:
beautiful and intriguing poem! love the images the words paint. I found these lines especially haunting...
I find you here your skirts all washed in water
the colors of your skirts has misted, too
down to pale white my daughter
the pale white now of your shoe
March 14th, 2013 07:46
The Portcullis of Your Blessed Calender
baj-a said:
what a conundrum you present to us. how do we know and how does the calendar know and how does time know...and in the end what does it all mean anyway?
March 13th, 2013 06:59
baj-a said:
what a conundrum you present to us. how do we know and how does the calendar know and how does time know...and in the end what does it all mean anyway?
March 13th, 2013 06:59
Eyes Turned Around
colin said:
So beautifull Diamond it very true the beauty we would see if we open our eye's
March 12th, 2013 20:52
colin said:
So beautifull Diamond it very true the beauty we would see if we open our eye's
March 12th, 2013 20:52
The Balance of Harmony (a Lento)
bigwolf said:
good write, let's keep everything in balance
March 12th, 2013 08:11
bigwolf said:
good write, let's keep everything in balance
March 12th, 2013 08:11
The Balance of Harmony (a Lento)
baj-a said:
such a calming and gentle poem. especially love the first verse.
March 12th, 2013 07:47
baj-a said:
such a calming and gentle poem. especially love the first verse.
March 12th, 2013 07:47
A Tickle In my Brain
BrokenWordsPoet said:
This has happened to me so often; on top of that it seems as I get older I lose things way to easy and I continue to walk in circles. My keys just the other day, I put on a pair of sweat pants and slipped a pair of jeans over them due to it being so cold, got ready to go outside and I could not find my keys. I looked everywhere in the pockets of my jeans but not in the pocket of my sweat pants.
I got a chuckle out of this poem. BWP... James...
March 8th, 2013 19:02
BrokenWordsPoet said:
This has happened to me so often; on top of that it seems as I get older I lose things way to easy and I continue to walk in circles. My keys just the other day, I put on a pair of sweat pants and slipped a pair of jeans over them due to it being so cold, got ready to go outside and I could not find my keys. I looked everywhere in the pockets of my jeans but not in the pocket of my sweat pants.
I got a chuckle out of this poem. BWP... James...
March 8th, 2013 19:02
The Gentle Touch
baj-a said:
if only all words could contain that gentle touch. beautifully written.
March 8th, 2013 08:52
baj-a said:
if only all words could contain that gentle touch. beautifully written.
March 8th, 2013 08:52
The Gentle Touch
sokibgb said:
The touch is gentle and you got it, Loved it, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:41
sokibgb said:
The touch is gentle and you got it, Loved it, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:41
Kiss The Back Of My Neck
sokibgb said:
Sweet and subtle love poem. as gentle as a summer breeze, soki
March 7th, 2013 06:46
sokibgb said:
Sweet and subtle love poem. as gentle as a summer breeze, soki
March 7th, 2013 06:46
Kiss The Back Of My Neck
baj-a said:
so sweet and so sensual with great beauty in the words.
March 6th, 2013 18:51
baj-a said:
so sweet and so sensual with great beauty in the words.
March 6th, 2013 18:51
Eyes Turned Around
baj-a said:
This is so true! we either don't look inside at ourselves or don't want to see what is there, but the world would be so much better if people really looked inside themselves at what they are and tried to change what is bad and then they would look at the entire world differently. well written and expressed.
March 5th, 2013 08:09
baj-a said:
This is so true! we either don't look inside at ourselves or don't want to see what is there, but the world would be so much better if people really looked inside themselves at what they are and tried to change what is bad and then they would look at the entire world differently. well written and expressed.
March 5th, 2013 08:09
A Tickle In my Brain
sokibgb said:
I too have tickles in my brain I guess it comes with age instead od wisdom LOL.I love laughing ar myself and your poem made me laugh when I realized my own tickles in my brain moments ( I was talking on the phone with a friend and was looking around for my cell, suddenly I realizes I was using it),LOL
March 5th, 2013 07:21
sokibgb said:
I too have tickles in my brain I guess it comes with age instead od wisdom LOL.I love laughing ar myself and your poem made me laugh when I realized my own tickles in my brain moments ( I was talking on the phone with a friend and was looking around for my cell, suddenly I realizes I was using it),LOL
March 5th, 2013 07:21
The Beauty Of The Sprite
sokibgb said:
Wonderful. Took me back to my childhood and the bautiful stories of the littli sprites tha lived in the woods. Loved it.
March 5th, 2013 07:10
sokibgb said:
Wonderful. Took me back to my childhood and the bautiful stories of the littli sprites tha lived in the woods. Loved it.
March 5th, 2013 07:10
Eyes Turned Around
sokibgb said:
Your are so right; In only we could open our eyes and see the beauty around us our world would be so different. Loved your poem.
March 5th, 2013 07:05
sokibgb said:
Your are so right; In only we could open our eyes and see the beauty around us our world would be so different. Loved your poem.
March 5th, 2013 07:05
The Beauty Of The Sprite
baj-a said:
oh wouldn't it be wonderful if there were tree sprites that could change a persons heart and help them appreciate the beauty instead of destroying it to build another house, or make another tablet or roll of paper towels... we need our forests and our forest sprites! lovely piece of poetry!
March 4th, 2013 18:19
baj-a said:
oh wouldn't it be wonderful if there were tree sprites that could change a persons heart and help them appreciate the beauty instead of destroying it to build another house, or make another tablet or roll of paper towels... we need our forests and our forest sprites! lovely piece of poetry!
March 4th, 2013 18:19
A Tickle In my Brain
baj-a said:
sounds like what we call brain farts :-). lol! yep, I know exactly what you mean! a fun read!
March 3rd, 2013 16:18
baj-a said:
sounds like what we call brain farts :-). lol! yep, I know exactly what you mean! a fun read!
March 3rd, 2013 16:18
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