Comments received on poems by diamonddagger



Soft Hands
baj-a said:

beautifully written and so very very sweet with the picture.

March 18th, 2013 07:35

Soft Hands
bigwolf said:

a well written poem

March 17th, 2013 18:03

In the Haze
diamonddagger said:

My daughter died two years ago. This was a remembrance poem, Thanks for the comments.

March 16th, 2013 12:56

My Deer
bigwolf said:

Isn't nature such a wondrous affair

March 16th, 2013 12:06

The Storm
baj-a said:

I love storms...the bigger the better and you captured the mixed feelings people have during storms wonderfully in your poem. I love natures child's things... what an inspired and magical line!

March 16th, 2013 08:18

My Deer
baj-a said:

what a lovely and gentle moment to have experienced! thanks for sharing it with us!

March 16th, 2013 08:14

The Storm
diamonddagger said:

I don't understand the fusion...but you go ahead and teach me the ins and outs of this site. I can't wait to see what you do with this poem.

March 15th, 2013 20:53

The Storm
BrokenWordsPoet said:

Linda... I love your poem I am going to fusion it then pass it back to you. I hope you will like my thoughts. This is a wonderful piece for such an exercise of wit.

BWP... James...

March 15th, 2013 19:46

Stand Alone (a pantoum)
baj-a said:

what a beautiful poem of love and truth... I only wish a the grown man with drawn sword could remember how safe he felt in his mothers arms.

March 15th, 2013 07:55

In the Haze
colin said:

A beautifull poem for your daughter

March 14th, 2013 16:40

In the Haze
baj-a said:

beautiful and intriguing poem! love the images the words paint. I found these lines especially haunting...

I find you here your skirts all washed in water
the colors of your skirts has misted, too
down to pale white my daughter
the pale white now of your shoe

March 14th, 2013 07:46

The Portcullis of Your Blessed Calender
baj-a said:

what a conundrum you present to us. how do we know and how does the calendar know and how does time know...and in the end what does it all mean anyway?

March 13th, 2013 06:59

Eyes Turned Around
colin said:

So beautifull Diamond it very true the beauty we would see if we open our eye's

March 12th, 2013 20:52

The Balance of Harmony (a Lento)
bigwolf said:

good write, let's keep everything in balance

March 12th, 2013 08:11

The Balance of Harmony (a Lento)
baj-a said:

such a calming and gentle poem. especially love the first verse.

March 12th, 2013 07:47

A Tickle In my Brain
BrokenWordsPoet said:

This has happened to me so often; on top of that it seems as I get older I lose things way to easy and I continue to walk in circles. My keys just the other day, I put on a pair of sweat pants and slipped a pair of jeans over them due to it being so cold, got ready to go outside and I could not find my keys. I looked everywhere in the pockets of my jeans but not in the pocket of my sweat pants.

I got a chuckle out of this poem. BWP... James...

March 8th, 2013 19:02

The Gentle Touch
baj-a said:

if only all words could contain that gentle touch. beautifully written.

March 8th, 2013 08:52

The Gentle Touch
sokibgb said:

The touch is gentle and you got it, Loved it, soki

March 8th, 2013 08:41

Kiss The Back Of My Neck
sokibgb said:

Sweet and subtle love poem. as gentle as a summer breeze, soki

March 7th, 2013 06:46

Kiss The Back Of My Neck
colin said:

Very sensual he is a lucky man

March 6th, 2013 20:22

Kiss The Back Of My Neck
baj-a said:

so sweet and so sensual with great beauty in the words.


March 6th, 2013 18:51

I Love Your Flavor
baj-a said:

sensual and beautifully written.

March 6th, 2013 08:46

I Love Your Flavor
colin said:

Simply beautifull

March 5th, 2013 20:10

I Love Your Flavor
sokibgb said:

Beautiful. I love your poem.

March 5th, 2013 16:49

Eyes Turned Around
baj-a said:

This is so true! we either don't look inside at ourselves or don't want to see what is there, but the world would be so much better if people really looked inside themselves at what they are and tried to change what is bad and then they would look at the entire world differently. well written and expressed.

March 5th, 2013 08:09

A Tickle In my Brain
sokibgb said:

I too have tickles in my brain I guess it comes with age instead od wisdom LOL.I love laughing ar myself and your poem made me laugh when I realized my own tickles in my brain moments ( I was talking on the phone with a friend and was looking around for my cell, suddenly I realizes I was using it),LOL

March 5th, 2013 07:21

The Beauty Of The Sprite
sokibgb said:

Wonderful. Took me back to my childhood and the bautiful stories of the littli sprites tha lived in the woods. Loved it.

March 5th, 2013 07:10

Eyes Turned Around
sokibgb said:

Your are so right; In only we could open our eyes and see the beauty around us our world would be so different. Loved your poem.

March 5th, 2013 07:05

The Beauty Of The Sprite
baj-a said:

oh wouldn't it be wonderful if there were tree sprites that could change a persons heart and help them appreciate the beauty instead of destroying it to build another house, or make another tablet or roll of paper towels... we need our forests and our forest sprites! lovely piece of poetry!

March 4th, 2013 18:19

The Beauty Of The Sprite
colin said:

Excellent Diamond i love nature

March 3rd, 2013 22:59

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