Comments received on poems by diamonddagger
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Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the comparisons paired sweetly leading to that most tender reality of love's better half, whether by friendship or marriage/romance. Beautifully rendered. Thanks for sharing. If I might be so bold as to offer constructive criticism, I'd suggest using regular meter, which lends good flow and rhythm. If that's too bold, please forgive my cheekiness.
ttfn,
Jenny
P.S. I am inactive here, and publish/hang out regularly at Poetfreak.com under my real name "Jenny Gordon" if you or anyone else cares to see my recent work.
April 3rd, 2013 19:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the comparisons paired sweetly leading to that most tender reality of love's better half, whether by friendship or marriage/romance. Beautifully rendered. Thanks for sharing. If I might be so bold as to offer constructive criticism, I'd suggest using regular meter, which lends good flow and rhythm. If that's too bold, please forgive my cheekiness.
ttfn,
Jenny
P.S. I am inactive here, and publish/hang out regularly at Poetfreak.com under my real name "Jenny Gordon" if you or anyone else cares to see my recent work.
April 3rd, 2013 19:20
The Gentle Touch
baj-a said:
lovely write! you captured the mind of the poet very well in this one.
April 3rd, 2013 07:30
baj-a said:
lovely write! you captured the mind of the poet very well in this one.
April 3rd, 2013 07:30
Peace and Harmony (a pantoum)
bigwolf said:
such a nice dream, I hope we all will see this one come true
April 2nd, 2013 22:09
bigwolf said:
such a nice dream, I hope we all will see this one come true
April 2nd, 2013 22:09
Twister (a lento)
diamonddagger said:
I love form poetry. I like the lento which was invented by Lencio Rodrigues. Actually, my favorite form is the pantoum. I have written a few of those. They are easier than the lento. You can make double and triple lentos. I make triple haikus also. I know it is unconventional but a poet has leniency nowadays called the modern haiku. I have been enjoying reading your poetry. Thanks for becoming my friend. diamond (Linda)
April 1st, 2013 21:48
diamonddagger said:
I love form poetry. I like the lento which was invented by Lencio Rodrigues. Actually, my favorite form is the pantoum. I have written a few of those. They are easier than the lento. You can make double and triple lentos. I make triple haikus also. I know it is unconventional but a poet has leniency nowadays called the modern haiku. I have been enjoying reading your poetry. Thanks for becoming my friend. diamond (Linda)
April 1st, 2013 21:48
Twister (a lento)
Cheeky Missy said:
A novel form I am presently entirely unfamiliar and utterly unacquainted with, it presents, nonetheless, an interesting tale of love's heady highs and subsequent chagrin, as little Sis ruined the fun. Very interesting with great imagery. Thanks for sharing.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 1st, 2013 21:03
Cheeky Missy said:
A novel form I am presently entirely unfamiliar and utterly unacquainted with, it presents, nonetheless, an interesting tale of love's heady highs and subsequent chagrin, as little Sis ruined the fun. Very interesting with great imagery. Thanks for sharing.
ttfn,
Jenny
April 1st, 2013 21:03
Peace and Harmony (a pantoum)
sokibgb said:
Lovely poem Diamond, I share that dream you, maybe one day it will come true. Hve a nice day, soki
April 1st, 2013 11:51
sokibgb said:
Lovely poem Diamond, I share that dream you, maybe one day it will come true. Hve a nice day, soki
April 1st, 2013 11:51
Peace and Harmony (a pantoum)
baj-a said:
and maybe someday it will be more than a story :-). nice pantoum by the way.
April 1st, 2013 07:47
baj-a said:
and maybe someday it will be more than a story :-). nice pantoum by the way.
April 1st, 2013 07:47
Twister (a lento)
baj-a said:
lento's are not easy but are a fun form. this one was a fun and intriguing read.
March 31st, 2013 08:13
baj-a said:
lento's are not easy but are a fun form. this one was a fun and intriguing read.
March 31st, 2013 08:13
The Air So Oddly Foul
baj-a said:
you said it all! there are times I feel invisible and even ask doesn't anyone see me? people will walk right into me and not say sorry or anything and keep walking as if they hadn't done it. as if i was the only one to notice. yes, there are days that go perfectly and then the ones where everything is wrong follow :-). enjoyed this poem!
March 30th, 2013 08:54
baj-a said:
you said it all! there are times I feel invisible and even ask doesn't anyone see me? people will walk right into me and not say sorry or anything and keep walking as if they hadn't done it. as if i was the only one to notice. yes, there are days that go perfectly and then the ones where everything is wrong follow :-). enjoyed this poem!
March 30th, 2013 08:54
And The Band Played On
sokibgb said:
I loved your poem and music and dance. If you so another woman wearing a red dress there, then it was probably me, soki
March 28th, 2013 15:32
sokibgb said:
I loved your poem and music and dance. If you so another woman wearing a red dress there, then it was probably me, soki
March 28th, 2013 15:32
And The Band Played On
baj-a said:
I felt a little breathless as I read this poem :-). What a wonderfully inspired dance!
March 28th, 2013 07:08
baj-a said:
I felt a little breathless as I read this poem :-). What a wonderfully inspired dance!
March 28th, 2013 07:08
Going To The Land Of Forever
sokibgb said:
Beautiful Diamond, While reading I could almost hear the sweet music of a Spanish guitar and the beatings of drums with gypsies dancing in jubilation at the thought of returning home.
March 27th, 2013 11:22
sokibgb said:
Beautiful Diamond, While reading I could almost hear the sweet music of a Spanish guitar and the beatings of drums with gypsies dancing in jubilation at the thought of returning home.
March 27th, 2013 11:22
Going To The Land Of Forever
baj-a said:
i love the flow of this... like a song! i could hear music as I read.
March 27th, 2013 07:54
baj-a said:
i love the flow of this... like a song! i could hear music as I read.
March 27th, 2013 07:54
Where Do You Go
baj-a said:
sad and sweet ... the feeling of being shut out of part of the life of someone you love.
March 26th, 2013 07:18
baj-a said:
sad and sweet ... the feeling of being shut out of part of the life of someone you love.
March 26th, 2013 07:18
Stand Up and Take It
sokibgb said:
You got that right diamond, faith, courage and the guts to take it makes dreams come true. Loved it!
March 24th, 2013 11:07
sokibgb said:
You got that right diamond, faith, courage and the guts to take it makes dreams come true. Loved it!
March 24th, 2013 11:07
Stand Up and Take It
bigwolf said:
Nicely written diamond, let's all dream on.
March 24th, 2013 08:53
bigwolf said:
Nicely written diamond, let's all dream on.
March 24th, 2013 08:53
Stand Up and Take It
baj-a said:
you got that right! too many sit and wait for their dreams to come to them and then feel sorry for themselves that they never came true. you have to make it happen! good write!
March 24th, 2013 06:55
baj-a said:
you got that right! too many sit and wait for their dreams to come to them and then feel sorry for themselves that they never came true. you have to make it happen! good write!
March 24th, 2013 06:55
Winter Bone
sokibgb said:
I fully understand what you mean I am a child of the big city and hid in the middle many times. sometimes is the eafest place. Good write.
March 23rd, 2013 16:24
sokibgb said:
I fully understand what you mean I am a child of the big city and hid in the middle many times. sometimes is the eafest place. Good write.
March 23rd, 2013 16:24
Winter Bone
baj-a said:
intriguing scenario presented with this poem. i understand the winter bone as I often said it chilled me to the bone when the winds blew hard and cold. hiding in the middle is an interesting thought.
March 23rd, 2013 07:08
baj-a said:
intriguing scenario presented with this poem. i understand the winter bone as I often said it chilled me to the bone when the winds blew hard and cold. hiding in the middle is an interesting thought.
March 23rd, 2013 07:08
The Waters Of Forever
colin said:
Beautifull I love the picture though go hand in hand
March 22nd, 2013 14:47
colin said:
Beautifull I love the picture though go hand in hand
March 22nd, 2013 14:47
If I Couldn't Hear Your Laughter
baj-a said:
bitter sweet and filled with love. beautiful poem!
March 22nd, 2013 07:09
baj-a said:
bitter sweet and filled with love. beautiful poem!
March 22nd, 2013 07:09
The Waters Of Forever
sokibgb said:
Wonderful poem, Melancholy yet full of life. Loved it.
March 20th, 2013 10:09
sokibgb said:
Wonderful poem, Melancholy yet full of life. Loved it.
March 20th, 2013 10:09
The Waters Of Forever
baj-a said:
deep and insightful poem. like forever summers the waters of forever also end. beautifully written.
March 20th, 2013 07:14
baj-a said:
deep and insightful poem. like forever summers the waters of forever also end. beautifully written.
March 20th, 2013 07:14
I Followed The Rainbow
baj-a said:
what a lovely whimsical piece! i hope your wishing star works soon!
March 19th, 2013 07:06
baj-a said:
what a lovely whimsical piece! i hope your wishing star works soon!
March 19th, 2013 07:06
Soft Hands
baj-a said:
beautifully written and so very very sweet with the picture.
March 18th, 2013 07:35
baj-a said:
beautifully written and so very very sweet with the picture.
March 18th, 2013 07:35
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