Comments received on poems by Dove



Alone In Grief
Neville said:

You just confirmed and simultaneously helped prove that an old fella like me can do two things at once .. firstly, as I read each one of these words slow and drank them in .. I found myself thinking and correspondingly wishing that nothing untoward had befallen you .. and that your fine poem is rather the product of your increasingly well wielded pen .. ๐Ÿ’•

February 2nd, 2023 02:34

Alone In Grief
Doggerel Dave said:

\'๐˜“๐˜ช๐˜ฌ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ข ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต ๐˜ ๐˜ธ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ต๐˜ฆ
๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ\'
Let\'s be honest here - should read:
As ๐˜ข ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต ๐˜ ๐˜ธ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ต๐˜ฆ
๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ
Because you are one as evidenced in your smooth beautiful lines, Dove.

February 1st, 2023 22:23

Alone In Grief
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dove.
No dark joke from me - \'Ear, ear, Van Gogh!\'

February 1st, 2023 14:27

Alone In Grief
Fay Slimm. said:

A haunt of a read and so clearly expressed --- a moving write Dove and thank you for sharing it.

February 1st, 2023 13:37

That Perfect Moment
Crowns4Christ said:

Totally agree with Neville this is so beautiful, keep it up Dove

November 23rd, 2022 22:14

That Perfect Moment
Neville said:


excuse me missy .. now this is wot we around these parts call beautiful .. x

November 23rd, 2022 09:59

My Heart Beats to the Sounds of Your Whisper
Neville said:


This fine example of a Triolet that you have so generously shared with us all here, is a truly, truly beautiful composition dear Dove .................. Neville :)

November 18th, 2022 03:42

My Heart Beats to the Sounds of Your Whisper
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the lilt to this triolet Dove - - so artfully romantic - - thank you for sharing those heart-heard whispers.

November 14th, 2022 17:29


Forever in my Soul
Neville said:



this is an excellent example of a Villanelle .. indeed, muchly enjoyed โค๏ธ

October 15th, 2022 11:42

Forever in my Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Dove.

Andy

September 28th, 2022 01:39

Forever in my Soul
darknessandlight said:

This is the most beautiful poem I\'ve read this morning. I feel your love shining through your rhythm, your flow, and the captivating way you have brought your feelings to paper. Makes me wish the imprint on my heart and soul would have never went away, she remains forever on the canvas of my heart and soul, but no longer is she physically around anymore.

September 27th, 2022 09:31

Forever in my Soul
orchidee said:

Ohhh, you mean me?! Swoon! lol.

September 27th, 2022 09:23

Butterflies
Neville said:


I bet nobody who visits this page can leave it without taking the smile it gave their face with them ... I\'m still wearing mine ... Neville โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘

September 27th, 2022 02:59

Butterflies
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful writing , dove ๐Ÿ™‚

September 26th, 2022 12:27

Butterflies
orchidee said:

I would be a flutterby! lol. Good write Dove.

September 26th, 2022 02:59

Butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Dove. I saw a Red Admiral yesterday, it was beautiful.

Andy

September 26th, 2022 01:03

My Beloved Ziggy
Neville said:


I am so sorry to learn of your sad loss my friend ................................ x

August 17th, 2022 08:04

My Beloved Ziggy
Goldfinch60 said:

Such sad words Dove but remember the good times as many of us do about our passed loved ones.

Andy

August 17th, 2022 01:20

My Beloved Ziggy
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a sad loss for you Dove - - the shock alone must be taking its toll ---- - love hurts the more when there was no goodbye but know that Ziggy will always live on in your heart

August 16th, 2022 16:47

My Beloved Ziggy
orchidee said:

Ohh, it\'s too sad.
Don\'t feel you let Ziggy down if you get a \'replacement\' cat - maybe in time.

August 16th, 2022 14:22

My Beloved Ziggy
Fewer_true_words said:

Almost all know this feeling and it never fades, R.I.P Ziggy.

August 16th, 2022 13:45

Breathless
Dove said:

That awesome Bella, the format of the villanelle, I learned a year ago myself! It amazes me the many forms there areโ€ฆ best to u

August 16th, 2022 12:51

Breathless
Bella Shepard said:

I confess, I did not know what a villanelle was, so I googled it, and I\'m so happy to be learning new things. This poem has such a gentle warmth and beauty, it\'s like being wrapped in a loving blanket. Thank you!

July 24th, 2022 10:40

Breathless
Accidental Poet said:

The writing of love poetry gives a glimpse within the heart of the poet who writes it, and here you\'ve penned a masterpiece dove. Very nice work. ๐Ÿ˜‰

July 24th, 2022 09:09

Breathless
Doggerel Dave said:

While not interested in love poetry (feel I am always apologising) , the villanelle is a different matter.. Your unforced coherence here, given the strict form, is faultless, Dove.

July 24th, 2022 06:02

Breathless
orchidee said:

Good write Dove.
My, erm, less interesting poem starts: \'One day I was breathless, running to catch a bus....\' lol.


July 24th, 2022 05:29

Breathless
Neville said:



Hey JK you are indeed the mistress of the villanelle .. which of course, is very near almost .. an anagram of me ..

Well a guy can wish can\'t he Nevillanelle :)


July 24th, 2022 02:08

Breathless
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Dove, love is so very special.

Andy

July 24th, 2022 01:45

Breathless
Fay Slimm. said:

What a gem of a love-song written so well in the villanelle style and full of romantic invite - - loved the fervour in the final stanza - great read Dove.

July 24th, 2022 01:33

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