Comments received on poems by Dove



Tin Man
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dove. may that heart be within him soon.

Andy

May 8th, 2022 01:39

Tin Man
Rozina said:

I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

May 7th, 2022 18:21

Tin Man
GON said:

absolutely love your structure, this is my kind of poetry

May 7th, 2022 14:27

Tin Man
Neville said:



If he only had a heart, my guess is he woulda shared it between you dear Dove n Dorothy ............ Neville :)


May 7th, 2022 10:40

Underneath The Moon-kissed Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Dove dancing in the moonlight is wonderful.

Andy

April 20th, 2022 00:53

Underneath The Moon-kissed Night
blue orchid said:

How lovely, love is grand

April 19th, 2022 21:27

Underneath The Moon-kissed Night
Neville said:


she\'s back and yes, she\'s gone un dunnit, Dove\'s just gone and dun another sonnet ...... tis splendid too I might just add ................ N :)

April 19th, 2022 13:04

Underneath The Moon-kissed Night
orchidee said:

Good write Dove.

April 19th, 2022 11:31

Beauty Upon The Sea
Dahlia said:

so lovely
a great read
enjoyed
Dahlia

April 9th, 2022 11:50

Beauty Upon The Sea
shamrocker ☘️❤️☘️ said:

Well written!

April 9th, 2022 07:51

Beauty Upon The Sea
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful writing , dove 🙂 love your poem

April 9th, 2022 07:03

Blood-Red Rose: Villanelle
Neville said:



deceptively deep & deliciously daring the reader to delve beneath those outer layers or petals and savour the nectar loosely hidden therein .............. Villanelle\'s like roses, appear to be growing on me .... Neville 😎 :)


March 5th, 2022 07:45

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Dove.

Andy

March 5th, 2022 02:11

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Rozina said:

Very good poem. Another type to learn about, this Villanelle. Thank you.

March 4th, 2022 22:20

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Doggerel Dave said:

Dove, you really are a master of the Villanelle, so very well formed.
And despite my misgivings re love poetry, these are on a totally different level. So smooth without an engineered adjustment in sight.

I tried one very early on. Found it extremely difficult.

Seems Villanelle was just waiting for you to come along.
Multi thanks.

March 4th, 2022 19:10

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Neville said:


I see what you mean Dove me luv .. but I must insist that yours are not only sweeter but bloomin neater and more completer ... too .......... :) x


March 4th, 2022 12:26

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words , dove )) sounds like a soulmate or a twin flame

I like your poem

March 4th, 2022 10:06

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Christina8 said:

oh I love this style of poetry and you did it so well! I can sense that deep sense of loss you must be feeling where your lover used to be. Great poem!

March 4th, 2022 09:14

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Rocky Lagou said:

Ooof! The refrain \"When you were mine, I felt so complete\" really hits. I can almost sense that hole that must be lingering in the heart from the absence of the lover. But either way, a gracious villanelle and you once again executed it with finesse. 💖✨

March 4th, 2022 09:10

When You Were Mine: Villanelle
dusk arising said:

Aha another villanelle... i\'m thinking you\'re enjoying composing these - it shows in the end result here which is joyous and bounces along.

A delight to read, thank you.

March 4th, 2022 09:10

Railway Station: Villanelle
Neville said:



a most impressive example of this poetic model ma\'am .. and no kidding .. Nev illanelle :) x


March 3rd, 2022 12:20

Railway Station: Villanelle
dusk arising said:

I guess you got railroaded. I\'d bever heard of a villanelle so googled. It flows along really nicely.

March 3rd, 2022 10:55

Railway Station: Villanelle
Rocky Lagou said:

So well done! Villanelles are such a fun form and you did it wonderfully! The love and the loss of love and the image of the train was all so creative and engaging to read! Well done! 💖

March 3rd, 2022 10:44

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Dove, love\'s pleasure is so wonderful.

Andy

February 27th, 2022 01:33

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
dusk arising said:

The kiss between two who are in love is the true kiss of life. A thought which came to me having read your lovely piece today.

February 26th, 2022 10:30

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful piece - a great form and must write some more when I get time - you\'ve inspired me.

February 26th, 2022 10:02

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Teddy.15 said:

Very nicely done 💖

February 26th, 2022 08:11

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Neville said:


I can not for the life of me imagine your lips being lonely .. Such a sweet little Rondelet Dove me luv .. forgive me, but I imagine yours taste of sweet cherries or lychee\'s maybe .. x


February 26th, 2022 05:05

Baller Oni
Neville said:

Well I never .. I do seem to learn summat different almost every day .. I dont know what kind of competition you were up against Dove, but I\'m surprised you never took gold ... next time, give us a shout, I\'m all up for a bit of match fixing ............ Oni & out for now :) 💖

February 23rd, 2022 10:23

Baller Oni
Rocky Lagou said:

I like how playful this poem is. You did a great job, should\'ve been the winner. But oh well! 💖

February 22nd, 2022 11:51

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