Comments received on poems by Dove
When You Were Mine: Villanelle
Rocky Lagou said:
Ooof! The refrain \"When you were mine, I felt so complete\" really hits. I can almost sense that hole that must be lingering in the heart from the absence of the lover. But either way, a gracious villanelle and you once again executed it with finesse. 💖✨
March 4th, 2022 09:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Ooof! The refrain \"When you were mine, I felt so complete\" really hits. I can almost sense that hole that must be lingering in the heart from the absence of the lover. But either way, a gracious villanelle and you once again executed it with finesse. 💖✨
March 4th, 2022 09:10
When You Were Mine: Villanelle
dusk arising said:
Aha another villanelle... i\'m thinking you\'re enjoying composing these - it shows in the end result here which is joyous and bounces along.
A delight to read, thank you.
March 4th, 2022 09:10
dusk arising said:
Aha another villanelle... i\'m thinking you\'re enjoying composing these - it shows in the end result here which is joyous and bounces along.
A delight to read, thank you.
March 4th, 2022 09:10
Railway Station: Villanelle
Neville said:
a most impressive example of this poetic model ma\'am .. and no kidding .. Nev illanelle :) x
March 3rd, 2022 12:20
Neville said:
a most impressive example of this poetic model ma\'am .. and no kidding .. Nev illanelle :) x
March 3rd, 2022 12:20
Railway Station: Villanelle
dusk arising said:
I guess you got railroaded. I\'d bever heard of a villanelle so googled. It flows along really nicely.
March 3rd, 2022 10:55
dusk arising said:
I guess you got railroaded. I\'d bever heard of a villanelle so googled. It flows along really nicely.
March 3rd, 2022 10:55
Railway Station: Villanelle
Rocky Lagou said:
So well done! Villanelles are such a fun form and you did it wonderfully! The love and the loss of love and the image of the train was all so creative and engaging to read! Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:44
Rocky Lagou said:
So well done! Villanelles are such a fun form and you did it wonderfully! The love and the loss of love and the image of the train was all so creative and engaging to read! Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:44
Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dove, love\'s pleasure is so wonderful.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dove, love\'s pleasure is so wonderful.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:33
Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
dusk arising said:
The kiss between two who are in love is the true kiss of life. A thought which came to me having read your lovely piece today.
February 26th, 2022 10:30
dusk arising said:
The kiss between two who are in love is the true kiss of life. A thought which came to me having read your lovely piece today.
February 26th, 2022 10:30
Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful piece - a great form and must write some more when I get time - you\'ve inspired me.
February 26th, 2022 10:02
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful piece - a great form and must write some more when I get time - you\'ve inspired me.
February 26th, 2022 10:02
Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Neville said:
I can not for the life of me imagine your lips being lonely .. Such a sweet little Rondelet Dove me luv .. forgive me, but I imagine yours taste of sweet cherries or lychee\'s maybe .. x
February 26th, 2022 05:05
Neville said:
I can not for the life of me imagine your lips being lonely .. Such a sweet little Rondelet Dove me luv .. forgive me, but I imagine yours taste of sweet cherries or lychee\'s maybe .. x
February 26th, 2022 05:05
Baller Oni
Neville said:
Well I never .. I do seem to learn summat different almost every day .. I dont know what kind of competition you were up against Dove, but I\'m surprised you never took gold ... next time, give us a shout, I\'m all up for a bit of match fixing ............ Oni & out for now :) 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:23
Neville said:
Well I never .. I do seem to learn summat different almost every day .. I dont know what kind of competition you were up against Dove, but I\'m surprised you never took gold ... next time, give us a shout, I\'m all up for a bit of match fixing ............ Oni & out for now :) 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:23
Baller Oni
Rocky Lagou said:
I like how playful this poem is. You did a great job, should\'ve been the winner. But oh well! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:51
Rocky Lagou said:
I like how playful this poem is. You did a great job, should\'ve been the winner. But oh well! 💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:51
I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love is such a wonderful feeling Dove, may it last forever.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Falling in love is such a wonderful feeling Dove, may it last forever.
Andy
February 22nd, 2022 01:44
I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Neville said:
I am learning something new every day from you mistress Dove .. a fine example of this particular poetic form ..
February 21st, 2022 13:40
Neville said:
I am learning something new every day from you mistress Dove .. a fine example of this particular poetic form ..
February 21st, 2022 13:40
I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Fay Slimm. said:
Great and impressive style dear Dove - I love reading bold repetition.
February 21st, 2022 08:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Great and impressive style dear Dove - I love reading bold repetition.
February 21st, 2022 08:52
I Fell in Love : Rondelet
L. B. Mek said:
these words are imbued
by that Spring beginning, feeling
of a romance\'s, budding Love...
a great shorty, dear Poet
thank you!
February 21st, 2022 07:42
L. B. Mek said:
these words are imbued
by that Spring beginning, feeling
of a romance\'s, budding Love...
a great shorty, dear Poet
thank you!
February 21st, 2022 07:42
Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Rozina said:
Very nice lines. An enjoyable read.
February 21st, 2022 00:43
Rozina said:
Very nice lines. An enjoyable read.
February 21st, 2022 00:43
Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Neville said:
I know for a fact these aint easy .. but I know you love a challenge & you certainly excel at them my friend ........... Top notch ma\'am .. N x
February 20th, 2022 08:13
Neville said:
I know for a fact these aint easy .. but I know you love a challenge & you certainly excel at them my friend ........... Top notch ma\'am .. N x
February 20th, 2022 08:13
Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Fay Slimm. said:
A very good style of telling and showing by Villanelle spacing a scene where dreams can feel like frightening real - wonderful read Dove and thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2022 07:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A very good style of telling and showing by Villanelle spacing a scene where dreams can feel like frightening real - wonderful read Dove and thank you for sharing.
February 20th, 2022 07:41
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Neville said:
this is rather special my dear friend & I have more than just a sneaking suspicion that this is but a demonstration of your poetic versatility & far from autobiographical ........... x5 *****\'s :)
February 18th, 2022 14:42
Neville said:
this is rather special my dear friend & I have more than just a sneaking suspicion that this is but a demonstration of your poetic versatility & far from autobiographical ........... x5 *****\'s :)
February 18th, 2022 14:42
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a soulful superb vilanelle for the broken hearted, such appealing words longing and missing love, must be terrible, can only imagine how it feels , though having love in life is not piece of cake for all yet having none is more painful. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a soulful superb vilanelle for the broken hearted, such appealing words longing and missing love, must be terrible, can only imagine how it feels , though having love in life is not piece of cake for all yet having none is more painful. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:53
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Rozina said:
Very nice. Learnt something new today, villanelle, another style of poetry. Thank you.
February 9th, 2022 06:14
Rozina said:
Very nice. Learnt something new today, villanelle, another style of poetry. Thank you.
February 9th, 2022 06:14
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that you are not the broken hearted Dove and that love is always with you.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that you are not the broken hearted Dove and that love is always with you.
Andy
February 9th, 2022 01:46
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you right now, Dove.
February 9th, 2022 00:15
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you right now, Dove.
February 9th, 2022 00:15
My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice. Villanelles are such a fun poetic form that I often avoid but when someone can create a meaningful one it is amazing. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 13:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice. Villanelles are such a fun poetic form that I often avoid but when someone can create a meaningful one it is amazing. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 13:32
Dimples - Acrostic
Rozina said:
Now I understand the meaning of dimples! Great lines.
January 25th, 2022 21:01
Rozina said:
Now I understand the meaning of dimples! Great lines.
January 25th, 2022 21:01
Dimples - Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the clever quadruple acrostics on gentle erotica - -=- am sure they will get your male fans hot under the collar methinks dear Dove. Great stuff.
January 25th, 2022 12:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the clever quadruple acrostics on gentle erotica - -=- am sure they will get your male fans hot under the collar methinks dear Dove. Great stuff.
January 25th, 2022 12:25
Dimples - Acrostic
Neville said:
this reminds me of a pack of four old time sausages .. each one of em a sizzler just waiting to happen :)
.. each one of em sizzling in their own write :)
... they are not only unique scintillating acrostics .. they are fine examples of gentle erotica in my book ........... well in anybodies book actually ... :) x
January 25th, 2022 12:22
Neville said:
this reminds me of a pack of four old time sausages .. each one of em a sizzler just waiting to happen :)
.. each one of em sizzling in their own write :)
... they are not only unique scintillating acrostics .. they are fine examples of gentle erotica in my book ........... well in anybodies book actually ... :) x
January 25th, 2022 12:22
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