Comments received on poems by Dove



Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful piece - a great form and must write some more when I get time - you\'ve inspired me.

February 26th, 2022 10:02

Love it\'s Sweet Warmth- Rondelet
Neville said:


I can not for the life of me imagine your lips being lonely .. Such a sweet little Rondelet Dove me luv .. forgive me, but I imagine yours taste of sweet cherries or lychee\'s maybe .. x


February 26th, 2022 05:05

Baller Oni
Neville said:

Well I never .. I do seem to learn summat different almost every day .. I dont know what kind of competition you were up against Dove, but I\'m surprised you never took gold ... next time, give us a shout, I\'m all up for a bit of match fixing ............ Oni & out for now :) ๐Ÿ’–

February 23rd, 2022 10:23

Baller Oni
Rocky Lagou said:

I like how playful this poem is. You did a great job, should\'ve been the winner. But oh well! ๐Ÿ’–

February 22nd, 2022 11:51

I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Jane Clemons said:

Well done ! It is lovely

February 22nd, 2022 06:32

I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Goldfinch60 said:

Falling in love is such a wonderful feeling Dove, may it last forever.

Andy

February 22nd, 2022 01:44

I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Neville said:


I am learning something new every day from you mistress Dove .. a fine example of this particular poetic form ..

February 21st, 2022 13:40

I Fell in Love : Rondelet
Fay Slimm. said:

Great and impressive style dear Dove - I love reading bold repetition.

February 21st, 2022 08:52

I Fell in Love : Rondelet
L. B. Mek said:

these words are imbued
by that Spring beginning, feeling
of a romance\'s, budding Love...
a great shorty, dear Poet
thank you!

February 21st, 2022 07:42

Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Dove.

Andy

February 21st, 2022 02:03

Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Rozina said:

Very nice lines. An enjoyable read.

February 21st, 2022 00:43

Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Neville said:


I know for a fact these aint easy .. but I know you love a challenge & you certainly excel at them my friend ........... Top notch ma\'am .. N x


February 20th, 2022 08:13

Moonlit Heavens: A Villanelle
Fay Slimm. said:

A very good style of telling and showing by Villanelle spacing a scene where dreams can feel like frightening real - wonderful read Dove and thank you for sharing.

February 20th, 2022 07:41

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Neville said:


this is rather special my dear friend & I have more than just a sneaking suspicion that this is but a demonstration of your poetic versatility & far from autobiographical ........... x5 *****\'s :)

February 18th, 2022 14:42

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
๐Ÿคs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ŸŒท๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜ฝ said:

Wow a soulful superb vilanelle for the broken hearted, such appealing words longing and missing love, must be terrible, can only imagine how it feels , though having love in life is not piece of cake for all yet having none is more painful. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

And
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 05:53

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Rozina said:

Very nice. Learnt something new today, villanelle, another style of poetry. Thank you.

February 9th, 2022 06:14

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that you are not the broken hearted Dove and that love is always with you.

Andy

February 9th, 2022 01:46

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Doggerel Dave said:

I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you right now, Dove.

February 9th, 2022 00:15

My Valentine\'s Dreams Leave Me Teary-eyed
Rocky Lagou said:

Nice. Villanelles are such a fun poetic form that I often avoid but when someone can create a meaningful one it is amazing. Good job! ๐Ÿ‘

February 8th, 2022 13:32

Dimples - Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Four very good acrostics Dove.

Andy

January 26th, 2022 01:47

Dimples - Acrostic
Rozina said:

Now I understand the meaning of dimples! Great lines.

January 25th, 2022 21:01

Dimples - Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the clever quadruple acrostics on gentle erotica - -=- am sure they will get your male fans hot under the collar methinks dear Dove. Great stuff.

January 25th, 2022 12:25

Dimples - Acrostic
Neville said:

this reminds me of a pack of four old time sausages .. each one of em a sizzler just waiting to happen :)

.. each one of em sizzling in their own write :)

... they are not only unique scintillating acrostics .. they are fine examples of gentle erotica in my book ........... well in anybodies book actually ... :) x



January 25th, 2022 12:22

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Dove said:

Thanks Andy

January 5th, 2022 07:19

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words Dove.

Andy

January 5th, 2022 01:40

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Rozina said:

A very sad poem, beautifully written.

January 4th, 2022 21:02

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
dusk arising said:

The magic is that the beauty of those stars is something which will never leave you for if it were so, then too would the memory of finest love\'s beauty be gone from you.

January 4th, 2022 15:03

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dove.
If it wasn\'t such a sad theme - \'OK, I\'ll come back; dunno why I went away in the first place. Probably cos someone couldn\'t bear my singing!\' heehee.

January 4th, 2022 11:35

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Neville said:



she has such a way with words does our Dove .. x

January 4th, 2022 08:41

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Caring dove said:

Truly beautiful words โ€ฆ with so much sadness .

A good poem ))

January 4th, 2022 07:47



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