Comments received on poems by Dove



Dimples - Acrostic
Neville said:

this reminds me of a pack of four old time sausages .. each one of em a sizzler just waiting to happen :)

.. each one of em sizzling in their own write :)

... they are not only unique scintillating acrostics .. they are fine examples of gentle erotica in my book ........... well in anybodies book actually ... :) x



January 25th, 2022 12:22

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Dove said:

Thanks Andy

January 5th, 2022 07:19

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words Dove.

Andy

January 5th, 2022 01:40

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Rozina said:

A very sad poem, beautifully written.

January 4th, 2022 21:02

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
dusk arising said:

The magic is that the beauty of those stars is something which will never leave you for if it were so, then too would the memory of finest love\'s beauty be gone from you.

January 4th, 2022 15:03

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dove.
If it wasn\'t such a sad theme - \'OK, I\'ll come back; dunno why I went away in the first place. Probably cos someone couldn\'t bear my singing!\' heehee.

January 4th, 2022 11:35

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Neville said:



she has such a way with words does our Dove .. x

January 4th, 2022 08:41

My Heart is Heavy : Villanelle
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Truly beautiful words … with so much sadness .

A good poem ))

January 4th, 2022 07:47

Mermaid- Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful acrostic(s) Dove.

Andy


January 4th, 2022 01:34

Mermaid- Acrostic
Rozina said:

Wow this is very interesting. I\'ve learnt something new about poetry writing styles. Thank you.

January 3rd, 2022 23:56

Mermaid- Acrostic
spilleronsheet said:

Such a beautiful multi-acrostic
My mind kept playing “the little mermaid” very engaging tale you wrote with your pen

January 3rd, 2022 14:25

Mermaid- Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

Your mermaid has much appeal Dove and a deal of pity as well - a super read and clever multi-acrostic

January 3rd, 2022 11:32

Mermaid- Acrostic
dusk arising said:

M esmerised
E nriched
R elated
M eaningfully
A ttached
I nstantly
D evoted

It\'s all in the swish of your mermaid\'s tail.

January 3rd, 2022 10:09

Mermaid- Acrostic
Neville said:


I was hooked from the off ... Never seen a quadruple acrostic before .. plenty of mermaids for sure, but never a whole shoal of em like these .... N :)


January 3rd, 2022 09:27

Missing Moonlight
Dove said:

Thanks for the read! Much appreciated

January 3rd, 2022 07:57

Missing Moonlight
spilleronsheet said:

The question of what ifs always dazed my mind
But the connection of your what ifs to the cloud made it so special
A wonderful read dear poet…


December 28th, 2021 22:55

Missing Moonlight
Goldfinch60 said:

What if……? The most unanswered question ever asked.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 14:41

Missing Moonlight
Neville said:



Delightful Dove ... and I rays me glass to you with best wishes for the coming new year ............................. N


December 28th, 2021 13:04

Missing Moonlight
orchidee said:

Good write Dove.
My poem went: \'I missed you, sweet moon, as I looked above\' -
it was the night of a full eclipse of the Moon. Doh! It just had to be me that looked for the moon on THAT night! lol.

December 28th, 2021 12:01

Missing Moonlight
dusk arising said:

But there are all of these things and more, for the moon has placed romance in our hearts and wherever we wander, whatever the story, whoever the boy and girl.... the moon shines within us.

December 28th, 2021 10:45

Missing Moonlight
Fay Slimm. said:

Thanks for this bouquet of \"what ifs\" that remind us of gifts like the pale moonlight - -- a lovely read Dove.

December 28th, 2021 08:56


𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤
orchidee said:

A fine atmospheric write Dove.
I did a similar poem (did I?). I wrote \'The cool(ish) winter winds cutting me ears off, then burning when they re-heated, so it felt like!\' Doh! :)

December 3rd, 2021 13:52

𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤
dusk arising said:

mmm \"the soft glow of dusk\" .... what secrets have i been letting slip?

Nice winter playful romance with the snow. Wouldn\'t it be nice to actually get a white christmas now and again.

December 3rd, 2021 13:09

𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤
Neville said:


gentle she does it and perfectly too .. these few are from me and meant only for you ................... I am gonna give one of these a try one day .... maybe .................... x


December 3rd, 2021 12:48

𝕌𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕝𝕝 𝕠𝕗 ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕞𝕒𝕤
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely read Dove - Christmas has a special place for everyone under its spell.

December 3rd, 2021 12:35


A Treasure within my Soul
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words ) love your poem

December 3rd, 2021 10:47


Dandelions
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Dove, dandelions are such wondrous things.

Andy

November 30th, 2021 01:43



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