Comments received on poems by Romantic Bloom



“ Alluette” Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:

Heaven awaits us all and we will shine down on our loved ones.

Andy

September 30th, 2020 00:17

“ Alluette” Heaven
Neville said:


wot a lark eh\'...

impossible to read without smiling and without doubt, one of my favourite words ... mon petit fleur :)

September 29th, 2020 10:43

“ Promises of Vows
Romantic Bloom said:

Thank you kindly! Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the matter, and your compliments,

Best to you

September 29th, 2020 09:57

“Palindrome” Passion
L. B. Mek said:

creative, has a meditatively warming element to it as well

September 28th, 2020 04:49

“ Promises of Vows
L. B. Mek said:

truly captured the duality that exists in the remnants of broken (though rarely - if ever: completely) love,
it is strange how your words from both voices resonate: maybe I have played both roles in the past (though not in terms of vows, merely promises and assurances)? I relate with the need to linger in what nostalgic reverie remains, while wondering how the other could have changed (so much) and left all these feelings of raw intoxicating wonder - behind,
a beautiful interpretation of feelings we all know far too intimately, delivered with such simple elegance


September 28th, 2020 04:02

“ Promises of Vows
Goldfinch60 said:

Distance can be so hard between lovers. Great write RB.

Andy

September 28th, 2020 00:15

“ Promises of Vows
MendedFences27 said:

Vows, promises, etc.. They are meant, only as long as their intent. It\'s like a contact with unlimited loopholes. If gone, he probably had to go, and I\'m sure he felt justified.
Your poem depicts a much too common occurrence, the breaking of a promise or vow. The way in which you presented it is clever and your words ask all the right questions. Enjoyed reading this one. - Phil A.

September 27th, 2020 19:02

“ Promises of Vows
Fay Slimm. said:

Triolet or not this write about vows raises many a question in the hearts of those who are waiting........ a compelling read my friend.

September 27th, 2020 13:20

“ Promises of Vows
Neville said:


as a man of my word, as a rule, I vow never to make em ...

however, if you have ever been let down ma\'am feel free to point me in his direction ...

... if you reckon its a triolet, then its a triolet .... Nice un R B :)

September 27th, 2020 12:07

“ Promises of Vows
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por este Poema ~ Trioleta ! Thnaks for colour coding ~ Sad content. Brian & I were 11,500 miles apart for 15 months (New Zealand) but we diid ZOOM most days which helped ! Separation is the hardest WORD ! Physical contact is so so important when you*re just newly engaged ! It would be even harder now we are married and have tasted the JOYS of intimacy ! For an ENGLISH (& American ?) TRIOLET the rhyme pattern shouuld be ABa Aab AB the one you have posted is ABc Acc AB but it doesnt matter there is always POETIC LICENSE even in Classic Poetic Forms ! The important thing ina TRIOLET and a VILLNELLE is the REPETITION ~ OK !
Love the VISUAL ~ DREAMY !

Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Con Amor A & B & El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛

September 27th, 2020 11:51

“ Promises of Vows
Michael Edwards said:

Doesn\'t matter what it is - It\'s still a great write.

September 27th, 2020 11:23

“ Promises of Vows
orchidee said:

I dunno if it\'s a Triolet either - well, it\'s not a Toilet! lol. A fine write RB.

September 27th, 2020 10:25

“ Promises of Vows
Romantic Bloom said:

Changed the words , so don’t know if it’s still a Triolet

September 27th, 2020 07:40

“Palindrome” Passion
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful and clever write RB.

Andy

September 27th, 2020 00:50

“Palindrome” Passion
Trenz Pruca said:

Very sensuous. I enjoy the words and the musing generated.

September 26th, 2020 15:22

“a kyrielle “ New Start
Neville said:


I think without doubt, this is the most perfectly crafted kyrielle that I have checked into for quite a while .... a fine example of yet another poetic form I have never yet attempted .... my hats still off to ya since the last one of yours I read earlier .... N :)

September 26th, 2020 11:19

“Palindrome” Passion
Neville said:


How absolutely amazing Romantic Bloom ...
I have noted on several occasions how you have the knack, skill & ability to shape, craft and solve puzzles etc ...

Something I am not very good at ...

Neville

September 26th, 2020 11:14

“Palindrome” Passion
orchidee said:

Good write RB, and I\'m glad some one(s) having fun here. Fido is fanning me, as I have swooned! lol.

September 26th, 2020 11:03

“a kyrielle “ New Start
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words RB.

Andy

September 26th, 2020 01:29

One Summer’s Day
Trenz Pruca said:

A good day should always be remembered.

September 25th, 2020 13:41

“a kyrielle “ New Start
orchidee said:

Good write RB.
A thousand times I said Hello - Hello, Hello, etc....! (Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol).

September 25th, 2020 10:42

One Summer’s Day
L. B. Mek said:

it\'s all fun and games until they mess with my \'Wotsits\': then it\'s out with my arrow kit,
and I would never, ever - harm more than than one seagull - at a time! ha, those nature lovers ain\'t got nothing on my empathy spectrum..
lol, sorry to mess around in your comments, I\'m just in a goofy Friday morning mood (Wotsits are scrumptious cheesy snacks/crisps btw)
good write

September 25th, 2020 03:23

One Summer’s Day
orchidee said:

Good write of happy days RB.

September 25th, 2020 02:02

One Summer’s Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Time spent be the sae can show so many different things but it gives peace and love to us all.

Andy

September 25th, 2020 00:40

“ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks
Neville said:



I used to do a lot of mountain climbing .. this made me shiver just remembering some of those dizzy heights ...



September 24th, 2020 14:09

“ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful sonnet RB, those mountain tops can be so wonderful in all seasons.

Andy

September 24th, 2020 00:27

“ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks
orchidee said:

Good write RB.

September 23rd, 2020 12:24

“ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN AQUI ~ Gracias por esta Poema bonita. Love the Form & Function of the KYRIELLE. In the USA & the UK we have to understand that Fell Walking is different in each Season ! Spring ~ wrap up well & enjoy the Flowers & bright green New Foliage. Summer ~ take care in the Sun & Sun-showers. Autumn the Aspens in Colorado are stunning. Winter in the Mountains anywhere is a WONDERLAND. Frozen Waterfalls take your breath away ! BUT Fell Walking and Rock Climbinng need great care & proper gear in WINTER. However the views and the Purity of the Air is worth the RISK ~ AMEN.

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours ~
Con Amor y Abrazos y Beaos de Nos a Tu
Angela y Brian y El Gato Ahumido 💛💛💛

September 23rd, 2020 10:49

In the Shades of Darkness
orchidee said:

A fine write RB. I\'m the weed between two roses. lol.

September 23rd, 2020 01:50

In the Shades of Darkness
orchidee said:

A fine write RB. I\'m the weed between two roses. lol.

September 23rd, 2020 01:50

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