Comments received on poems by Dove



The Mighty Jungle- Haiku Sets
orchidee said:

A fine write Dove.

September 16th, 2021 10:36

The Mighty Jungle- Haiku Sets
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dove.
Take a look at Senryu and Tercet you may like them.

September 16th, 2021 09:06

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L. B. Mek said:

beautifully measured, introvert in its contemplative tone and yet bold, in its unflinching capacity for baring one of our most secretive, and relatable fears..
how many of our beloved wordsmith\'s picked up a pen
for a shot at posterity fame?
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)

September 9th, 2021 03:35

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Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories of you will never fade from those who love you and those who read your wonderful words on this site Dove.

Andy

September 9th, 2021 00:07

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Doggerel Dave said:

Me, you can forget - memories of me are no good to the me that I am now. My pieces here? Well if one or two stand the test of time, and are unearthed, that would be good, but I\'m not banking on it. See - this is all about me - since I won\'t be remembered, I\'ve got to make the most of it now....
Thanks Dove, for another loverley word presented with clarity, which is more than can be said of the commentary above....

September 8th, 2021 19:55

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orchidee said:

We won\'t forget ya! We\'re more likely to forget that athaz... word. See, I\'ve forgotten it already. Doh!

September 8th, 2021 10:55

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dusk arising said:

Will your poetry live on after you Dove. There are ways to ensure it will and if it does, so will you.

Frame a few poems for your grandchildren.

September 8th, 2021 10:19

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Neville said:



a sad song sung & so very well .. but never fear, there aint no way its gonna happen to you Dove .. we just aint gonna let it ............... N x


September 8th, 2021 10:15

Clouds of Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Dove, so meaningful and so enthralling to read.

Andy

September 8th, 2021 00:38

Clouds of Destiny
Saxon Crow said:

Very well written poem Dove. I enjoyed reading this over and over.

September 7th, 2021 23:09

Clouds of Destiny
Fay Slimm. said:

Such an appealing read my friend -
your imagery deserves applause. Wishing the same as Neville does for you dear Dove - that fate will bring love back into your life again.

September 7th, 2021 15:29

Clouds of Destiny
Neville said:


Having read these words over and over .. I absolutely insist that you shall find the love that served as the inspiration for this most desperate plea ................ I don\'t think you need look too far though :)

.. Neville

September 7th, 2021 14:43

Clouds of Destiny
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Dove.

September 7th, 2021 13:59

A - Z Love’s Breath
Neville said:


You really are such a clever Dove x

September 1st, 2021 10:50

A - Z Love’s Breath
Goldfinch60 said:

Loves breath will always be there for you Dove.

Andy

August 31st, 2021 14:51

A - Z Love’s Breath
orchidee said:

Good write Dove.

August 31st, 2021 09:23

A - Z Love’s Breath
L. B. Mek said:

maybe a mantra for life, a guide
to hang on the door
and read, before we open ourselves
to the trials - awaiting us, on the other side..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 31st, 2021 06:32

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L. B. Mek said:

indeed, so very true
your at your most natural best
as a love poet, I feel
thank you, for sharing
this understated, gem of a read

August 26th, 2021 02:32


α΄‡α΄˜Κœα΄‡α΄α΄‡Κ€α΄€ΚŸ α΄€sΒ  ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ
Doggerel Dave said:

Love passes to abiding regard and care....Or am I missing the point?\'
The sinuously sexy \'S\' definitely has more to say....

August 25th, 2021 20:00


α΄‡α΄˜Κœα΄‡α΄α΄‡Κ€α΄€ΚŸ α΄€sΒ  ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ
Neville said:


this is lovely my lovely & so bloomin true ................................................... x

August 25th, 2021 11:14

α΄‡α΄˜Κœα΄‡α΄α΄‡Κ€α΄€ΚŸ α΄€sΒ  ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ
Dove said:

Loved the metaphors! Way better than my poem! Thanks for the read and comment DA

August 25th, 2021 10:00

α΄‡α΄˜Κœα΄‡α΄α΄‡Κ€α΄€ΚŸ α΄€sΒ  ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡ ᴍᴀʏ ʙᴇ
dusk arising said:

What point in visiting the ocean and not getting wet?
Soak it up and relish the buoyancy before walking over the gritty sand and the painful peddles of regret.

Aye \"better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all\".

August 25th, 2021 09:55

A Dream
L. B. Mek said:

Beautifully worded!
Sensuality, at its most wholesome and refined.
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 23rd, 2021 04:11

A Dream
Doggerel Dave said:

Lust, (sorry) - Last stanza got me to perfection. The rest? Yeh well, if from a slightly different viewpoint, I\'ll have that as well....


August 22nd, 2021 19:45

A Dream
dusk arising said:

Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could continue.... but slowly the brain wave patterns of sleep mould into daytime patterns and last nights bliss becomes intangible. Frustration ensues..... but tonite, those places will be alive again... and.... and.... que sera sera.

August 22nd, 2021 14:07

Joy Awaits
The elder poet said:

I\'m fairly new to this place but found that I really like it here . Quick to mak friends . And a place to enjoy . Poems that tell a story. I\'m glad you too find this place .Your poetic side.

August 22nd, 2021 11:00

A Dream
The elder poet said:

Very well written. We can\'t seem to request our dreams. If we could we would never get out of the bed. Dreams of love come to us all. I write of these often .I go to bed each night hoping that a dream will bring back a lost love . Just for an instant. I enjoyed your poen very much. Thank you for sharing your dream.


August 22nd, 2021 10:57

A Dream
orchidee said:

Now you knew I would swoon! What can I do? Read it again! heehee.

August 22nd, 2021 10:36



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