“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
Goldfinch60 said:

I too look up at the stars and know that My Joyce is up there looking down on me. Looking at the stars is so comforting, after all the stars are holes in Heavens Floor.

Andy

September 15th, 2020 00:21

“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
dusk arising said:

So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look into the wonderous night sky, where more unanswered questions are found. But there is comfort for confronted with the vastness of the visible universe it\'s easy to feel the presence of your lost soul as if they were looking down upon your face.... and it\'s within our nature to demonstrate, one to one, feelings of love and sadness.
It\'s all there in your post, a lot more poetically though.

September 14th, 2020 12:31

“Terzanelle” A Million Stars
orchidee said:

A sensitive write R.

September 14th, 2020 10:51

“ Villanelle “ Shall I call it Defeat?
orchidee said:

Good write R.
Ok, I\'ll come back. I\'ll stay. It won\'t be defeat. lol.

September 13th, 2020 14:25

“ A Kyrielle “ Contented Hearts
orchidee said:

A fine write R.

September 12th, 2020 13:26

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woww what a stellar bright imaginative poem riding on stars so poetically with a fine refrain and musing dreamily. It was a delight to have spotted it and not missed out on your talent. Kudos!!

Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

September 11th, 2020 00:56

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA ROMANTICA ~ Gracias por esta Poema muy classica ! VILLANELLES are an excellent Poetic Form with lots of Repetition and only two Rhyming words (choose carefully !) in this case LIGHT & LIPS. The Rhyme pattern - and number of lines (19 ~ 5 triplets & a quatrain) is always the same. It is an excellent form for a Romantic or Spiritual Ode ~ because of the Repetition. In your case:

In darkness I knew i could touch the light
Floating on the stars on a heavenly flight

Very romantic. Brian & I loved this Poem ~ thanks for Sharing !
Your Poem sounds like *A Spiritual Translation* like ENOCH
getting to Heaven without Physical Death ~ AWESOME !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Con Amor Angela - Brian y El Gato Ahumado ! ! !


September 10th, 2020 15:31

A “Villanelle” Touch the Light
Trenz Pruca said:

Good use of that interesting form.

September 10th, 2020 14:08

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:

Thanks Unsub, it’s a beautiful way of phrasing it! Glad my poem could relax you!
I usually like writing sad poetry, moving people’s heart’s! But I also like soothing romantic tones!

Anyhow hope you had a great day at work!
Thanks for the read and comment!

September 10th, 2020 06:44

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Dove said:

Thanks Dusk, I highlighted the line!
So that it would stand out! Just following
The rules,! It’s French, I’ll be posting a plain
Kyrielle, , and Rondelet, soon!

Thanks again


September 9th, 2020 19:00

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ROMANTIC BLOOM (awesome name !) Thanks for sharing a very ELEGANT KYRIELLE SONNET ! Love the Rhyme Pattern aabB ccbB ddbB bB. Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry ! I will remember *Whose petals never fall apart* ! Thank for sharing.

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛

September 9th, 2020 09:53

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Dove said:

Again, thank you kindly!

Have a great Day!

September 7th, 2020 23:00

A Treasure within my Soul
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully rhythmic and blessed with that rare quality of effortless flow

September 7th, 2020 04:06

La’ libertas : Fantasies
Goldfinch60 said:

One day those fantasies may be come real and the love will come to fruition.

Andy

September 7th, 2020 00:46

A Treasure within my Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

May that treasure be forever in your soul.

Welcome to MPS.

September 6th, 2020 01:24