Comments received on poems by RDS
Space ground place
Goldfinch60 said:
There is truth in what you have said RDS.
Andy
December 3rd, 2020 05:19
Goldfinch60 said:
There is truth in what you have said RDS.
Andy
December 3rd, 2020 05:19
Space ground place
Michael Edwards said:
Humour it is but there\'s more than a grain of truth in this great little write.
December 3rd, 2020 04:21
Michael Edwards said:
Humour it is but there\'s more than a grain of truth in this great little write.
December 3rd, 2020 04:21
In reflection
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful nature walk: within words,
immersive writing in the contemplative tradition of Thoreau\'s \'Walden\'
December 3rd, 2020 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful nature walk: within words,
immersive writing in the contemplative tradition of Thoreau\'s \'Walden\'
December 3rd, 2020 03:56
In reflection
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely word-entanglement which flows and gyrates to captivate readers in your rich reflections -
thank you for sharing them dear poet-friend.
December 2nd, 2020 16:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely word-entanglement which flows and gyrates to captivate readers in your rich reflections -
thank you for sharing them dear poet-friend.
December 2nd, 2020 16:51
In reflection
Jerry Reynolds said:
Just love doing it.
Yep owe my English teachers an apology.
December 2nd, 2020 09:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Just love doing it.
Yep owe my English teachers an apology.
December 2nd, 2020 09:23
In reflection
Michael Edwards said:
I know what you are doing writing poetry - you are crafting words in a way that appeals to others and long may you continue to do so.
December 2nd, 2020 04:57
Michael Edwards said:
I know what you are doing writing poetry - you are crafting words in a way that appeals to others and long may you continue to do so.
December 2nd, 2020 04:57
In reflection
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to cause me to \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\' as they say, with fine poems about rivers on here!
Well, I do get out more, but mainly on milder days, and clement weather. I blame Clement for bad weather. Who is he?! lol.
December 2nd, 2020 03:19
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to cause me to \'get my coat\' and \'get out more\' as they say, with fine poems about rivers on here!
Well, I do get out more, but mainly on milder days, and clement weather. I blame Clement for bad weather. Who is he?! lol.
December 2nd, 2020 03:19
In reflection
Goldfinch60 said:
As you may have gathered I too walk by My River and it inspires me to be at one with Nature.
I can fully understand where you are coming from with your words RDS.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
As you may have gathered I too walk by My River and it inspires me to be at one with Nature.
I can fully understand where you are coming from with your words RDS.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 03:14
My Poetic Side
Poetic Dan said:
The stray flies of replies can pull a 3 day corpse back to life.
So many great line and you definitely bring a crowd, no energy to type more as you middy know but I\'ll say it anyway!
Don\'t lose that rawness
Stay creative
J
Much peace and respect!
Ps giggled at the dog bit but I wasn\'t my mind to shut off.... To much inspiration!
December 1st, 2020 18:17
Poetic Dan said:
The stray flies of replies can pull a 3 day corpse back to life.
So many great line and you definitely bring a crowd, no energy to type more as you middy know but I\'ll say it anyway!
Don\'t lose that rawness
Stay creative
J
Much peace and respect!
Ps giggled at the dog bit but I wasn\'t my mind to shut off.... To much inspiration!
December 1st, 2020 18:17
My Poetic Side
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ ANGELA HERE ~ Because of the facility to comment - and reply to comments - MPS is both a very popular& proactive site and also very very addictive ! When we met - Brian was already a Member so we decided to share the site. Because we have been married for nearly a Year most of our poems (which are largely factual - we are both Scientists) are collaborations ! Because the MUSE is exponential this gives us ten times the inspiration ! We have no difficulty posting a Poem on this - that & the other ~ but choosing an appropriate VISUAL & a VIDEO can ofen take more time ! WE like to encourage NEW MEMBERS - especially when no one else bothers to comment ! It is a great site and we should respect all contributions and seek to be CONSTRUCTIVE in our comments and GRACIOUS in our replies - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 1st, 2020 18:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ ANGELA HERE ~ Because of the facility to comment - and reply to comments - MPS is both a very popular& proactive site and also very very addictive ! When we met - Brian was already a Member so we decided to share the site. Because we have been married for nearly a Year most of our poems (which are largely factual - we are both Scientists) are collaborations ! Because the MUSE is exponential this gives us ten times the inspiration ! We have no difficulty posting a Poem on this - that & the other ~ but choosing an appropriate VISUAL & a VIDEO can ofen take more time ! WE like to encourage NEW MEMBERS - especially when no one else bothers to comment ! It is a great site and we should respect all contributions and seek to be CONSTRUCTIVE in our comments and GRACIOUS in our replies - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 1st, 2020 18:05
My Poetic Side
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah RD: It’s all the same with you arty types; you need focus here, Lexical and Kleptomania (whoever they are) might be OK, but they’re not bringing in the readies are they? (I’ve got a mate who fixes things I’m sure he could have a chat to the MPS rep and get you a good deal – for a percentage).
Dave
December 1st, 2020 17:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah RD: It’s all the same with you arty types; you need focus here, Lexical and Kleptomania (whoever they are) might be OK, but they’re not bringing in the readies are they? (I’ve got a mate who fixes things I’m sure he could have a chat to the MPS rep and get you a good deal – for a percentage).
Dave
December 1st, 2020 17:00
My Poetic Side
L. B. Mek said:
like I say, when all else fails, lean on the words of true genius: alas, if anyone asks my opinion of this wonderful platform titled My Poetic Side, I shall ever refer them to this page...
Brilliant!
December 1st, 2020 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
like I say, when all else fails, lean on the words of true genius: alas, if anyone asks my opinion of this wonderful platform titled My Poetic Side, I shall ever refer them to this page...
Brilliant!
December 1st, 2020 06:23
OF LOVE WRITTEN
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly well crafted, couplets weaved seamlessly aside off-rhyming stanza\'s and all wrapped in the warmth of love\'s poetic integrity, to keep it all flowing from your imagination\'s ink onto our mind\'s tongue: effortlessly
December 1st, 2020 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly well crafted, couplets weaved seamlessly aside off-rhyming stanza\'s and all wrapped in the warmth of love\'s poetic integrity, to keep it all flowing from your imagination\'s ink onto our mind\'s tongue: effortlessly
December 1st, 2020 04:48
My Poetic Side
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, the x-rated stuff causes me to swoon! heehee.
December 1st, 2020 03:04
orchidee said:
Oohh, I know, the x-rated stuff causes me to swoon! heehee.
December 1st, 2020 03:04
My Poetic Side
Goldfinch60 said:
It is certainly a great site that you have described and is very true, been on her for a few years now and have always enjoyed it.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It is certainly a great site that you have described and is very true, been on her for a few years now and have always enjoyed it.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 02:04
OF LOVE WRITTEN
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write RDS, that love is so strong and may it always be so.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write RDS, that love is so strong and may it always be so.
Andy
December 1st, 2020 01:34
My Poetic Side
Michael Edwards said:
I recognise this piece of light verse - I\'m with you all the way. Great stuff indeed. Love the term \'creative vehicles\' for lies .
December 1st, 2020 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
I recognise this piece of light verse - I\'m with you all the way. Great stuff indeed. Love the term \'creative vehicles\' for lies .
December 1st, 2020 01:14
My Poetic Side
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you got an appropriate fee for this ad.
I did recognise the place so you\'ve painted a good picture.
Dave
PS: anyone know how to do a \'smiley\' here?
December 1st, 2020 00:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Hope you got an appropriate fee for this ad.
I did recognise the place so you\'ve painted a good picture.
Dave
PS: anyone know how to do a \'smiley\' here?
December 1st, 2020 00:57
OF LOVE WRITTEN
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian Here ~ Good Evening FRIEND ~ love the music ~ it sure ameliorates the Poem ~ pulsating with experiential love ! Having been married for less than a Year - Angela & I are still exploring the Height - Length - Breadth & Depth of Physical & Spiritual Love ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ some of your lines did strke a chord ! Our fave line - as we shared our Love - was *Gentle heart what art do you bring to life besides the flesh & bones you hide beneath ?* You have to remember that Angela is a qualified Masseuse & Aromatherapist ~ Say no more ! Saved as a Faved !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 16:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian Here ~ Good Evening FRIEND ~ love the music ~ it sure ameliorates the Poem ~ pulsating with experiential love ! Having been married for less than a Year - Angela & I are still exploring the Height - Length - Breadth & Depth of Physical & Spiritual Love ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ some of your lines did strke a chord ! Our fave line - as we shared our Love - was *Gentle heart what art do you bring to life besides the flesh & bones you hide beneath ?* You have to remember that Angela is a qualified Masseuse & Aromatherapist ~ Say no more ! Saved as a Faved !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 16:43
OF LOVE WRITTEN
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful scent of foreverness pervades the read of this tribute to gentle Love Written. Sensual dignity in every line makes this a piece to read again ......... so into my list of faves its flavour goes.
November 30th, 2020 13:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful scent of foreverness pervades the read of this tribute to gentle Love Written. Sensual dignity in every line makes this a piece to read again ......... so into my list of faves its flavour goes.
November 30th, 2020 13:35
OF LOVE WRITTEN
orchidee said:
At your first line, the title of a song came to my mind: \'Ah, sweet mystery of life, at last I\'ve found thee\'. Dunno why exactly. And I don\'t know much of it beyond the title.
But Mario Lanza sings one of the versions of it. Was one of my Mum\'s favourite singers.
November 30th, 2020 08:39
orchidee said:
At your first line, the title of a song came to my mind: \'Ah, sweet mystery of life, at last I\'ve found thee\'. Dunno why exactly. And I don\'t know much of it beyond the title.
But Mario Lanza sings one of the versions of it. Was one of my Mum\'s favourite singers.
November 30th, 2020 08:39
OF LOVE WRITTEN
Poetic Dan said:
\"Gentle heart what art do you bring to life beside the bones and flesh you hide beneath\" that was then I took a breath of relief!!
Power as ever good sir!
November 30th, 2020 07:57
Poetic Dan said:
\"Gentle heart what art do you bring to life beside the bones and flesh you hide beneath\" that was then I took a breath of relief!!
Power as ever good sir!
November 30th, 2020 07:57
A beggars banquet
L. B. Mek said:
\'Plucking sour grapes, unripened off the vine. Making bitter wine with fruity tones of revenge and torment. A tang of might fallen on the tongue. Fresh, like something new to despise. A compliment to hard cheese and cold boiled rice.\'
a set of lines weaved with such insightfully raw self-introspection, inked so tantalisingly vivid I could taste the words on my tongue and they are not even my favourite lines of this write, what a finale last four lines to finish on,
Brilliant!
November 30th, 2020 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Plucking sour grapes, unripened off the vine. Making bitter wine with fruity tones of revenge and torment. A tang of might fallen on the tongue. Fresh, like something new to despise. A compliment to hard cheese and cold boiled rice.\'
a set of lines weaved with such insightfully raw self-introspection, inked so tantalisingly vivid I could taste the words on my tongue and they are not even my favourite lines of this write, what a finale last four lines to finish on,
Brilliant!
November 30th, 2020 05:41
A beggars banquet
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words RDS but as you fade away new life suddenly appears and you know that all will be well.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words RDS but as you fade away new life suddenly appears and you know that all will be well.
Andy
November 30th, 2020 01:15
A beggars banquet
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Your use of caesura has tied this poem up very beautifully! It takes me back to old Shakespeares play ‘king Lear’ and his protagonist Poor Old Tom who was a beggar in madness and deprivation and erratic thoughts. Thanks for sharing!
November 29th, 2020 20:00
Samreen Chowdhury said:
Your use of caesura has tied this poem up very beautifully! It takes me back to old Shakespeares play ‘king Lear’ and his protagonist Poor Old Tom who was a beggar in madness and deprivation and erratic thoughts. Thanks for sharing!
November 29th, 2020 20:00
A beggars banquet
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - couldn\'t be bettered - such a kick of new breath in this amended end line my friend,
November 29th, 2020 10:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - couldn\'t be bettered - such a kick of new breath in this amended end line my friend,
November 29th, 2020 10:16
A beggars banquet
orchidee said:
You on that gin RDS?! Only if you go to Waitrose - not for \'common peasants\'. lol. It\'s M&S who are tops in snobbery though. A newspaper slagged them off, took them down a peg or two.
A good write.
November 29th, 2020 10:12
orchidee said:
You on that gin RDS?! Only if you go to Waitrose - not for \'common peasants\'. lol. It\'s M&S who are tops in snobbery though. A newspaper slagged them off, took them down a peg or two.
A good write.
November 29th, 2020 10:12
A beggars banquet
Fay Slimm. said:
The fuel of fantastic imagery makes this verse a delight to read though the subject be taken as true that beggers too have a feast of what ifs and regrets - - another feather in your cap of written
winners must be this one R.D..
November 29th, 2020 08:49
Fay Slimm. said:
The fuel of fantastic imagery makes this verse a delight to read though the subject be taken as true that beggers too have a feast of what ifs and regrets - - another feather in your cap of written
winners must be this one R.D..
November 29th, 2020 08:49
20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for
Poetic Dan said:
2pac would be proud! I\'m going to have another few goes because I know each time music starts to evolve...
I could say more but your words is like to divulge, you definitely know you are a poetic soul!
Thanks for joining and an absolute pleasure my friend..
In your words
Stay creative!
Much peace and respect
November 29th, 2020 01:23
Poetic Dan said:
2pac would be proud! I\'m going to have another few goes because I know each time music starts to evolve...
I could say more but your words is like to divulge, you definitely know you are a poetic soul!
Thanks for joining and an absolute pleasure my friend..
In your words
Stay creative!
Much peace and respect
November 29th, 2020 01:23
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