Comments received on poems by RDS
Werther\'s Lament
Poetic Dan said:
First book I picked up was in my 30s and it was all about dog psychology but I enjoyed your words profusely....
Sorry couldn\'t help myself lol
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write!
November 29th, 2020 01:09
Poetic Dan said:
First book I picked up was in my 30s and it was all about dog psychology but I enjoyed your words profusely....
Sorry couldn\'t help myself lol
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write!
November 29th, 2020 01:09
Facebook fun in lockdown
Poetic Dan said:
Facefuck is definitely just for work and fun, it\'s why I\'m on my 3rd account brotherslim Dan and from rainbow Island... I don\'t make shit up (to old for that) but I can tell you one thing...
When you win a competition, it\'s hard when the ask for identification!!
Luckily good looks and charms was enough, with a bank card...
Thanks for inspiration, may post this one!
November 29th, 2020 01:01
Poetic Dan said:
Facefuck is definitely just for work and fun, it\'s why I\'m on my 3rd account brotherslim Dan and from rainbow Island... I don\'t make shit up (to old for that) but I can tell you one thing...
When you win a competition, it\'s hard when the ask for identification!!
Luckily good looks and charms was enough, with a bank card...
Thanks for inspiration, may post this one!
November 29th, 2020 01:01
Helping hands
Poetic Dan said:
O the days that took me back...
Play on player, I needed that giggle... And a Sky hook!
November 29th, 2020 00:53
Poetic Dan said:
O the days that took me back...
Play on player, I needed that giggle... And a Sky hook!
November 29th, 2020 00:53
Shadows & reflections
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...... Don\'t stop my friend please!
November 29th, 2020 00:48
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...... Don\'t stop my friend please!
November 29th, 2020 00:48
Shadows & reflections
Poetic Dan said:
I hit save after 2 seconds in my friend... Even had to take a deep breath, not sure if I\'m ready for this after the last one but I\'m tears say face that fear!! As it was the \"wounded animal\" that brought the goosebumps and now I see my fight or flight in front of me.... Shit I\'m 5 again at 5 on the morning, dude this is truly trippy lol
You truly give from the soul!! And here I goooooo
November 29th, 2020 00:44
Poetic Dan said:
I hit save after 2 seconds in my friend... Even had to take a deep breath, not sure if I\'m ready for this after the last one but I\'m tears say face that fear!! As it was the \"wounded animal\" that brought the goosebumps and now I see my fight or flight in front of me.... Shit I\'m 5 again at 5 on the morning, dude this is truly trippy lol
You truly give from the soul!! And here I goooooo
November 29th, 2020 00:44
Reflections on ecstasy
Poetic Dan said:
Remind me perfectly of the experience on dmt and then that special time of year when the shrooms come and help with mother nature recipe!!
My top 10 of all time..
Thanks for taking me back on a ride!!
November 29th, 2020 00:37
Poetic Dan said:
Remind me perfectly of the experience on dmt and then that special time of year when the shrooms come and help with mother nature recipe!!
My top 10 of all time..
Thanks for taking me back on a ride!!
November 29th, 2020 00:37
Quarks and larks in apple trees
Poetic Dan said:
What a flow and my thoughts are exploding I can\'t catch them all.... Theses words sat down, deep with my soul!! It\'s 5am I\'m ready to go....
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
November 28th, 2020 23:49
Poetic Dan said:
What a flow and my thoughts are exploding I can\'t catch them all.... Theses words sat down, deep with my soul!! It\'s 5am I\'m ready to go....
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
November 28th, 2020 23:49
Quarks and larks in apple trees
Neville said:
an interesting postulation in prose and enjoyed by me no end .............
November 28th, 2020 17:48
Neville said:
an interesting postulation in prose and enjoyed by me no end .............
November 28th, 2020 17:48
20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for
Neville said:
Having now read these words through three times back on back, I maybe feel more alive than I did yesterday ..
November 28th, 2020 17:42
Neville said:
Having now read these words through three times back on back, I maybe feel more alive than I did yesterday ..
November 28th, 2020 17:42
20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for
Fay Slimm. said:
A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this life and versed with style as the twist in its tail-end raises a smile at how often this read has done just that - - leapt without looking.......... another inspiring read RDS.
November 28th, 2020 05:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this life and versed with style as the twist in its tail-end raises a smile at how often this read has done just that - - leapt without looking.......... another inspiring read RDS.
November 28th, 2020 05:03
20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for
orchidee said:
In a \'meanwhile\' moment of madness - Oohh, I tried all those; I didn\'t feel very well after them!\' Doh!
A jolly write there RDS. Oops!
I\'m more concerned about them motorised wheelchairs on the PATH, than getting run over by a car on the ROAD. They come straight at ya at 100mph it seems!
November 28th, 2020 03:19
orchidee said:
In a \'meanwhile\' moment of madness - Oohh, I tried all those; I didn\'t feel very well after them!\' Doh!
A jolly write there RDS. Oops!
I\'m more concerned about them motorised wheelchairs on the PATH, than getting run over by a car on the ROAD. They come straight at ya at 100mph it seems!
November 28th, 2020 03:19
Covid 19 pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'Covid was the cruelest blow to your lifestyle of pleasures retired, mired in the isolation of lonely houses.
I can\'t be at your graveside but I revere the good to times I can bring to mind.
Farewell my friend\'
sorry for your loss, but what a wonderful dedication you have penned,
thanks for sharing
November 27th, 2020 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'Covid was the cruelest blow to your lifestyle of pleasures retired, mired in the isolation of lonely houses.
I can\'t be at your graveside but I revere the good to times I can bring to mind.
Farewell my friend\'
sorry for your loss, but what a wonderful dedication you have penned,
thanks for sharing
November 27th, 2020 02:47
Covid 19 pain
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute RDS, he will always be with you.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute RDS, he will always be with you.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:27
Covid 19 pain
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I have goosebumps, such a genuine gentle flow. Perfect tribute to how me have you spirit in your life, made me think of many I miss... Sadly even school friends!
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
November 26th, 2020 19:17
Poetic Dan said:
Wow I have goosebumps, such a genuine gentle flow. Perfect tribute to how me have you spirit in your life, made me think of many I miss... Sadly even school friends!
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
November 26th, 2020 19:17
Quarks and larks in apple trees
L. B. Mek said:
\'We could build an end to humanity yet discover no sense of identity\'
some truly enlightening commentary,
the duality of all things humanity is ever an unnerving realisation to dwell
November 26th, 2020 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'We could build an end to humanity yet discover no sense of identity\'
some truly enlightening commentary,
the duality of all things humanity is ever an unnerving realisation to dwell
November 26th, 2020 04:28
Quarks and larks in apple trees
RDS said:
Thanks orchidee! I don\'t sweat and lose sleep from not knowing \'it\', be they quarks, or birds whose flight I don\'t recognise . Quarks fascinate me simply because there are strange and charmed ones! There is no science to poetry only passion. Enjoy the feelings my friend!
J
November 25th, 2020 19:23
RDS said:
Thanks orchidee! I don\'t sweat and lose sleep from not knowing \'it\', be they quarks, or birds whose flight I don\'t recognise . Quarks fascinate me simply because there are strange and charmed ones! There is no science to poetry only passion. Enjoy the feelings my friend!
J
November 25th, 2020 19:23
Quarks and larks in apple trees
orchidee said:
Oohh, I dunno. I best stay with the larks in the apple trees. I will be with the cuckoos in cuckoo land with that mc2 stuff. Is it algebra? See, I\'m confused already! lol.
I heard it briefly at school, then forgot it. I doubt many of us will lose any sleep over not remembering it.
November 25th, 2020 10:10
orchidee said:
Oohh, I dunno. I best stay with the larks in the apple trees. I will be with the cuckoos in cuckoo land with that mc2 stuff. Is it algebra? See, I\'m confused already! lol.
I heard it briefly at school, then forgot it. I doubt many of us will lose any sleep over not remembering it.
November 25th, 2020 10:10
Werther\'s Lament
Neville said:
Werther\'s a will there\'s a way sir ....
and having read the good book many years ago, much of it came flooding back to me ...
I must also just add, a most original post ... thoroughly enjoyed...
Neville
November 25th, 2020 05:52
Neville said:
Werther\'s a will there\'s a way sir ....
and having read the good book many years ago, much of it came flooding back to me ...
I must also just add, a most original post ... thoroughly enjoyed...
Neville
November 25th, 2020 05:52
Shadows & reflections
Samreen Chowdhury said:
wow, this is a great write! Your use of superlatives really engaged me in the spiritual take of this beautiful poem. every sensation in life is indeed reflective and thrilling in a sense, life itself is an emotional rollercoaster and this poem enacted as an epitome of the meaning of life!
November 24th, 2020 08:38
Samreen Chowdhury said:
wow, this is a great write! Your use of superlatives really engaged me in the spiritual take of this beautiful poem. every sensation in life is indeed reflective and thrilling in a sense, life itself is an emotional rollercoaster and this poem enacted as an epitome of the meaning of life!
November 24th, 2020 08:38
Facebook fun in lockdown
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This is cracked me up ;). your use of alliterative sounds and words is fantastic! keep up the good work and oh this is definitely my type of vibe (humour), enjoyed it!
November 24th, 2020 08:33
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This is cracked me up ;). your use of alliterative sounds and words is fantastic! keep up the good work and oh this is definitely my type of vibe (humour), enjoyed it!
November 24th, 2020 08:33
Helping hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t throw some light on \'Estuarine\' could you? How it has replaced, modified, added to cockney?
Been away so long now...
Regards Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t throw some light on \'Estuarine\' could you? How it has replaced, modified, added to cockney?
Been away so long now...
Regards Dave
November 24th, 2020 05:57
Helping hands
L. B. Mek said:
great read!
thirty years a Londoner and I still revel in any reveal of the street lingo turtledove we hold so dear
November 23rd, 2020 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
great read!
thirty years a Londoner and I still revel in any reveal of the street lingo turtledove we hold so dear
November 23rd, 2020 03:57
Helping hands
Goldfinch60 said:
The cockney language is so good, I come from Kent and in the place where I was raised there is an area called Luton where Eastenders used to come down and stay when they went out picking hops. Many ended up living in the town and there is a distinct cockney accent there. I now live in the Midlands and people can sometime hear a cockney twang in my speaking.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
The cockney language is so good, I come from Kent and in the place where I was raised there is an area called Luton where Eastenders used to come down and stay when they went out picking hops. Many ended up living in the town and there is a distinct cockney accent there. I now live in the Midlands and people can sometime hear a cockney twang in my speaking.
Andy
November 23rd, 2020 01:19
Helping hands
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~Good evening Friend. Every Profession has its own Language as does each Region of the UK and Winston Churchill said that the Britain & the USA are two Countries separated by a COMMON LANGUAGE ~ which is very true. Cockney Rhyming slang is pretty universal in the Towns & Cities near London. The initial problem is that the word replacing the normal one does not always rhyme with it as wih NEVILLE & LEVEL. One could say pass me the GARY ! But the BOSS is on the DOG (PHONE) as in Dog & Bone ~ and She*s gone up the APPLES (STAIRS) as in the Apples & Pears ~ and look at his BOAT (FACE) as in Boat Race etc etc ! WICKED now means GREAT ~ *The English Language is a Many Splendoured Thing* ~ Loved the BLUES very stimulating ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 22nd, 2020 15:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~Good evening Friend. Every Profession has its own Language as does each Region of the UK and Winston Churchill said that the Britain & the USA are two Countries separated by a COMMON LANGUAGE ~ which is very true. Cockney Rhyming slang is pretty universal in the Towns & Cities near London. The initial problem is that the word replacing the normal one does not always rhyme with it as wih NEVILLE & LEVEL. One could say pass me the GARY ! But the BOSS is on the DOG (PHONE) as in Dog & Bone ~ and She*s gone up the APPLES (STAIRS) as in the Apples & Pears ~ and look at his BOAT (FACE) as in Boat Race etc etc ! WICKED now means GREAT ~ *The English Language is a Many Splendoured Thing* ~ Loved the BLUES very stimulating ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 22nd, 2020 15:22
Helping hands
Michael Edwards said:
Love this one being a Londoner myself and whilst I\'m familiar with a Neville I must confess I haven\'t a clue about Shola Ama - must google it.
November 22nd, 2020 06:32
Michael Edwards said:
Love this one being a Londoner myself and whilst I\'m familiar with a Neville I must confess I haven\'t a clue about Shola Ama - must google it.
November 22nd, 2020 06:32
Helping hands
orchidee said:
Bit of French there, that you didn\'t understand? The Neville item. lol.
I\'m upper class myself - jolly hockey sticks; OK yah, that sort of thing! heehee. A spiffing poem there.
November 22nd, 2020 04:48
orchidee said:
Bit of French there, that you didn\'t understand? The Neville item. lol.
I\'m upper class myself - jolly hockey sticks; OK yah, that sort of thing! heehee. A spiffing poem there.
November 22nd, 2020 04:48
Shadows & reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words RDS, we live our lives in this up and down world but in time we find our way to belong in our world and then we can look forward to the good life that we have earned.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words RDS, we live our lives in this up and down world but in time we find our way to belong in our world and then we can look forward to the good life that we have earned.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:13
Shadows & reflections
RDS said:
Thank you Neville, I think that\'s what I\'m after, a kind of roller-coaster ride.
November 21st, 2020 15:42
RDS said:
Thank you Neville, I think that\'s what I\'m after, a kind of roller-coaster ride.
November 21st, 2020 15:42
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