Comments received on poems by tylerintheclouds
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L. B. Mek said:
rings home, loud - although I somehow can\'t put a finger to the source I\'m relating it to, but still this reads like a sample of the solace that can be found when we tilt our mind\'s into a meditative state,
thought provoking read, at least to me
December 17th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
rings home, loud - although I somehow can\'t put a finger to the source I\'m relating it to, but still this reads like a sample of the solace that can be found when we tilt our mind\'s into a meditative state,
thought provoking read, at least to me
December 17th, 2020 05:50
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FredPeyer said:
Well written, Tyler.
Wouldn\'t it be nice if we could just press a \'default\' button sometimes?
December 16th, 2020 11:37
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Tyler.
Wouldn\'t it be nice if we could just press a \'default\' button sometimes?
December 16th, 2020 11:37
fuck! it could’ve been love
MelissaJA said:
It\'s a mixture of emotions swirling beautifully in this poem. Very relatable, for those of us who have been in this place. Well done.
December 14th, 2020 20:57
MelissaJA said:
It\'s a mixture of emotions swirling beautifully in this poem. Very relatable, for those of us who have been in this place. Well done.
December 14th, 2020 20:57
tell me from the beginning
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow, took me many places in my mind!
Not sure if your ended ment the same as mine, in the eye of the beholder... Theses labels are for conditioned minds!!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 14th, 2020 08:53
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic flow, took me many places in my mind!
Not sure if your ended ment the same as mine, in the eye of the beholder... Theses labels are for conditioned minds!!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 14th, 2020 08:53
free therapy
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational stuff!
Thanks for sharing...
Much peace and respect
On to the next lol
December 14th, 2020 08:48
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational stuff!
Thanks for sharing...
Much peace and respect
On to the next lol
December 14th, 2020 08:48
fuck! it could’ve been love
Poetic Dan said:
\"so i start romanticising my trauma
for a little affection\"
You got me there I first laughed then a cry!
Many great lines from a poetic mind, keep up the write!
December 14th, 2020 08:40
Poetic Dan said:
\"so i start romanticising my trauma
for a little affection\"
You got me there I first laughed then a cry!
Many great lines from a poetic mind, keep up the write!
December 14th, 2020 08:40
fuck! it could’ve been love
L. B. Mek said:
cleverly woven between melodic poetic ambition and a gravely-throat\'s pride of vehemence for saying-it - exactly, as you feel it! sing-on dear Poet, may you never lose your passion!
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2020 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
cleverly woven between melodic poetic ambition and a gravely-throat\'s pride of vehemence for saying-it - exactly, as you feel it! sing-on dear Poet, may you never lose your passion!
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2020 06:12
yours
L. B. Mek said:
witty, a clever write and a wonderful read
your pertinent use of \'quite eyes\' sings: to the very essence of what I find fantastical, in all Poetry
December 14th, 2020 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
witty, a clever write and a wonderful read
your pertinent use of \'quite eyes\' sings: to the very essence of what I find fantastical, in all Poetry
December 14th, 2020 05:24
black dea(th/f)
dusk arising said:
I read your poem \'free therapy\' as the first of yours that i had seen. Impressed, i decided to see some more of your stuff. You are an exceptional poet. I\'m a nobody but really like your stuff.
This one tells a love story in a delightfully detached air as if written with a wry smile in reminiscence.
December 11th, 2020 19:54
dusk arising said:
I read your poem \'free therapy\' as the first of yours that i had seen. Impressed, i decided to see some more of your stuff. You are an exceptional poet. I\'m a nobody but really like your stuff.
This one tells a love story in a delightfully detached air as if written with a wry smile in reminiscence.
December 11th, 2020 19:54
eye of the storm
dusk arising said:
Yes, giving your vulnerability to a lover means overcoming this fear. Love hurts and hurts as it teaches you about what love really is.
December 11th, 2020 19:48
dusk arising said:
Yes, giving your vulnerability to a lover means overcoming this fear. Love hurts and hurts as it teaches you about what love really is.
December 11th, 2020 19:48
free therapy
dusk arising said:
I\'m not really sure why but i like this a lot. It\'s certainly a bit twisted and comes in below the belt. But any poet who has put his heart, fears, tears and love into words for others eyes will find themselves walking with your words within them.
December 11th, 2020 19:45
dusk arising said:
I\'m not really sure why but i like this a lot. It\'s certainly a bit twisted and comes in below the belt. But any poet who has put his heart, fears, tears and love into words for others eyes will find themselves walking with your words within them.
December 11th, 2020 19:45
static future
L. B. Mek said:
wow, seriously good poetry!
\'broken language on the rocks\' that\'s got me imagining/remembering so many situations:
like ice drowning in alcohol, melting sweet sentiment\'s and intentions, into bitter words of tomorrow\'s regret - cause I wouldn\'t change and she couldn\'t relent...
December 10th, 2020 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
wow, seriously good poetry!
\'broken language on the rocks\' that\'s got me imagining/remembering so many situations:
like ice drowning in alcohol, melting sweet sentiment\'s and intentions, into bitter words of tomorrow\'s regret - cause I wouldn\'t change and she couldn\'t relent...
December 10th, 2020 04:19
black dea(th/f)
MelissaJA said:
I really like how this is written, and I can definitely relate. \" i guess you looked nice
under asteroid lights\" is a really good line
December 9th, 2020 22:58
MelissaJA said:
I really like how this is written, and I can definitely relate. \" i guess you looked nice
under asteroid lights\" is a really good line
December 9th, 2020 22:58
boys! vol.1
RDS said:
A fine stream it is, plenty of moral issues on and under the surface of your words and a little bit of politics to pick through. Thanks for sharing this potted panorama of the social landscape.
J
December 2nd, 2020 12:44
RDS said:
A fine stream it is, plenty of moral issues on and under the surface of your words and a little bit of politics to pick through. Thanks for sharing this potted panorama of the social landscape.
J
December 2nd, 2020 12:44
traffic light boy
L. B. Mek said:
like that you purposely group your imagery and metaphors to make your writing as accessible as it can be, such an undervalued trait
December 1st, 2020 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
like that you purposely group your imagery and metaphors to make your writing as accessible as it can be, such an undervalued trait
December 1st, 2020 05:09
convert
RDS said:
A really nice read of thoughts going up and down, maybe left then right and nicely lifted at the end. Good writing
J
November 29th, 2020 06:01
RDS said:
A really nice read of thoughts going up and down, maybe left then right and nicely lifted at the end. Good writing
J
November 29th, 2020 06:01
convert
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ God Morning Tyler ! Thanks you for an intriguing *Poeme Mystique* WE are all traveliing (N E W S) through Space - Time - Life & Love and often end up *Back where we began ! Older but often *None the Wiser* !
We end up CONVERTS to Forces higher than Ourselves ~ QUE SERA SERA. Thanks for sharing ~ more please !
Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ God Morning Tyler ! Thanks you for an intriguing *Poeme Mystique* WE are all traveliing (N E W S) through Space - Time - Life & Love and often end up *Back where we began ! Older but often *None the Wiser* !
We end up CONVERTS to Forces higher than Ourselves ~ QUE SERA SERA. Thanks for sharing ~ more please !
Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ! !
November 28th, 2020 01:31
underworld
Goldfinch60 said:
Utopia is as always within use all we need is the ability to find it as you have done.
Welcome to MPS.
November 27th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Utopia is as always within use all we need is the ability to find it as you have done.
Welcome to MPS.
November 27th, 2020 01:49
underworld
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll be honest - I don\'t usually get along at all well with the poetry which spends interminable lines examining the poet\'s internal workings. I want to shout \'Get out there and examine the world\'.
However I found myself in synchronicity with this one, so...
Now I don\'t feel qualified to say\'Welcome to MPS\' - haven\'t got the seniority. However someone will assuredly be along soon. In the meantime, Good Luck anyway.
Dave
November 26th, 2020 18:48
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll be honest - I don\'t usually get along at all well with the poetry which spends interminable lines examining the poet\'s internal workings. I want to shout \'Get out there and examine the world\'.
However I found myself in synchronicity with this one, so...
Now I don\'t feel qualified to say\'Welcome to MPS\' - haven\'t got the seniority. However someone will assuredly be along soon. In the meantime, Good Luck anyway.
Dave
November 26th, 2020 18:48
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