Comments received on poems by tylerintheclouds
purge
L. B. Mek said:
agree
we\'ve gotta fight for what we want,
thanks for sharing
July 26th, 2022 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
agree
we\'ve gotta fight for what we want,
thanks for sharing
July 26th, 2022 02:57
ALL BITE ALL BARK
L. B. Mek said:
\'iām feral to the point of sanity\'..
complex feeling, expressed with
eloquence and hard earned skill..
but at such a young age
all that I have to offer you
in terms of support or advise
would be impotent, in the face
of your youthful vehemence..
so I\'ll just simply say
these write\'s, are a step
in the right direction, I just hope
your path is more flat lands
than obstacle climbs...
stay Strong!
in the words of robert frost
\'and miles to go before I sleep\'
pace yourself, dear Poet
cherish the journey
soon, you\'ll be too life weary
to even feel your bruises and scars
that\'s when, the struggle really begins
trust me, on that!
do what you can to delay
your descent
to those quicksand, paths
of life...
(please, forgive me
for my obnoxious and opinionated
sermon of a comment
try to imagine I meant well
sorry if you find anything
I wrote as being toxic or discriminating
against your young age, truly
I\'m just an old fool)
lol
thank for sharing, such
a great read!
a mission statement for a life
as an impassioned poem, fantastic!
July 25th, 2022 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'iām feral to the point of sanity\'..
complex feeling, expressed with
eloquence and hard earned skill..
but at such a young age
all that I have to offer you
in terms of support or advise
would be impotent, in the face
of your youthful vehemence..
so I\'ll just simply say
these write\'s, are a step
in the right direction, I just hope
your path is more flat lands
than obstacle climbs...
stay Strong!
in the words of robert frost
\'and miles to go before I sleep\'
pace yourself, dear Poet
cherish the journey
soon, you\'ll be too life weary
to even feel your bruises and scars
that\'s when, the struggle really begins
trust me, on that!
do what you can to delay
your descent
to those quicksand, paths
of life...
(please, forgive me
for my obnoxious and opinionated
sermon of a comment
try to imagine I meant well
sorry if you find anything
I wrote as being toxic or discriminating
against your young age, truly
I\'m just an old fool)
lol
thank for sharing, such
a great read!
a mission statement for a life
as an impassioned poem, fantastic!
July 25th, 2022 03:10
would it be better to die silently?
L. B. Mek said:
crazy
we keep a lock on our doors
sleep behind alarms and shut windows
yet we allow, others to swagger
into our heart
cos their eyebrows, be just right?
we gotta get smarter
make wiser choices
before they ransack us, of all
the love we have to give..
(thanks for sharing
I relate to your writing\'s anguish)
\'we can\'t change, Them
so we must Choose, ourselves\'
June 17th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
crazy
we keep a lock on our doors
sleep behind alarms and shut windows
yet we allow, others to swagger
into our heart
cos their eyebrows, be just right?
we gotta get smarter
make wiser choices
before they ransack us, of all
the love we have to give..
(thanks for sharing
I relate to your writing\'s anguish)
\'we can\'t change, Them
so we must Choose, ourselves\'
June 17th, 2022 04:03
crepuscular
Rocky Lagou said:
Great verse! I love the diction used. Keep making great work! š
February 4th, 2022 11:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Great verse! I love the diction used. Keep making great work! š
February 4th, 2022 11:42
crepuscular
sophin said:
good write, took my attention from the very first lines
February 4th, 2022 11:06
sophin said:
good write, took my attention from the very first lines
February 4th, 2022 11:06
crepuscular
L. B. Mek said:
simply, beautiful!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 4th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
simply, beautiful!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 4th, 2022 05:43
please cut the fucking grass
Paul Bell said:
So, once the grass is cut, and you can see the woods for the trees, I foresee good times ahead. Now, just to find someone to cut the fucking grass.
January 29th, 2022 05:42
Paul Bell said:
So, once the grass is cut, and you can see the woods for the trees, I foresee good times ahead. Now, just to find someone to cut the fucking grass.
January 29th, 2022 05:42
files 10
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, it\'s time to whisper yourself a different tune of self-owned lullaby\'s
to comfort and nurture what warmth you have to call upon from within,
then maybe: that \'fated\' other will be drawn to that furnace you\'ve armed yourself with
or maybe - not...
maybe, your pillow will be forced to reenvisage its learned melodies of trust
and intrust in that truth, that you\'re brave enough to traverse this life, alone - if need be
but never enforced to subjugate yourself to misery\'s chosen vassal of perceived loneliness...
(thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply,
I apologise if you find my insistence on acceptance and positivity as adversely \'toxic\': that was never my intent)
Happy New year
January 4th, 2021 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
maybe, it\'s time to whisper yourself a different tune of self-owned lullaby\'s
to comfort and nurture what warmth you have to call upon from within,
then maybe: that \'fated\' other will be drawn to that furnace you\'ve armed yourself with
or maybe - not...
maybe, your pillow will be forced to reenvisage its learned melodies of trust
and intrust in that truth, that you\'re brave enough to traverse this life, alone - if need be
but never enforced to subjugate yourself to misery\'s chosen vassal of perceived loneliness...
(thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply,
I apologise if you find my insistence on acceptance and positivity as adversely \'toxic\': that was never my intent)
Happy New year
January 4th, 2021 07:05
carousel
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Rilke has a poem about a carousel that\'s my favorite poem on the subject, ever since I read it in German when I lived in Germany when I was 15, back in 1955. Here\'s a pretty good translation, but the page is worth visiting just for the pictures of merry-go-round horses.
https://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/ujf/blog/carousel.html
January 1st, 2021 20:19
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Rilke has a poem about a carousel that\'s my favorite poem on the subject, ever since I read it in German when I lived in Germany when I was 15, back in 1955. Here\'s a pretty good translation, but the page is worth visiting just for the pictures of merry-go-round horses.
https://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/ujf/blog/carousel.html
January 1st, 2021 20:19
carousel
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Rilke has a poem about a carousel that\'s my favorite poem on the subject, ever since I read it in German when I lived in Germany when I was 15, back in 1955. Here\'s a pretty good translation, but the page is worth visiting just for the pictures of merry-go-round horses.
https://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/ujf/blog/carousel.html
January 1st, 2021 20:14
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Rilke has a poem about a carousel that\'s my favorite poem on the subject, ever since I read it in German when I lived in Germany when I was 15, back in 1955. Here\'s a pretty good translation, but the page is worth visiting just for the pictures of merry-go-round horses.
https://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/ujf/blog/carousel.html
January 1st, 2021 20:14
countless little heartbreaks
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Stay safe and Have a Happy New Year.
December 29th, 2020 14:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Stay safe and Have a Happy New Year.
December 29th, 2020 14:34
christmas eve
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Tyler,
Thank you for a charming poem on Xmas eve
Keep writing ā and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:53
FineB said:
Merry Xmas Tyler,
Thank you for a charming poem on Xmas eve
Keep writing ā and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 24th, 2020 19:53
christmas eve
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:39
investments
L. B. Mek said:
\'you were born to win, but I
was born to shine
projecting myself
into the core of the earth
and watch my diamond, reflect
in the waters, on the shore\'
some seriously empowering poetry, full of immersive imagery and encrypted with such depth of meaning,
what talent you choose to share with the world dear Poet, Brilliant!
Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'you were born to win, but I
was born to shine
projecting myself
into the core of the earth
and watch my diamond, reflect
in the waters, on the shore\'
some seriously empowering poetry, full of immersive imagery and encrypted with such depth of meaning,
what talent you choose to share with the world dear Poet, Brilliant!
Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2020 05:44
waiting
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 16:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe.
December 21st, 2020 16:21
pyromaniac
L. B. Mek said:
yup, we yearn and then when we finally claim: we grasp too tight, or too light and it all dissolves,
with just the burn marks left, for us to remember it by...
brilliantly poetic!
Happy Holidays dear Poet
December 21st, 2020 07:17
L. B. Mek said:
yup, we yearn and then when we finally claim: we grasp too tight, or too light and it all dissolves,
with just the burn marks left, for us to remember it by...
brilliantly poetic!
Happy Holidays dear Poet
December 21st, 2020 07:17
pomegranate
FredPeyer said:
Well said Tyler! The mind is a curious thing. While reading your poem an old joke surfaced: What is the difference between a Pomegranate and a Handgranate? The Pomegranate tastes better!
December 19th, 2020 12:24
FredPeyer said:
Well said Tyler! The mind is a curious thing. While reading your poem an old joke surfaced: What is the difference between a Pomegranate and a Handgranate? The Pomegranate tastes better!
December 19th, 2020 12:24
pomegranate
Clara said:
Oh this is an intriguing one. I like the imagery, the use of the fruit - entirely stubborn when it wants to be, to yield its fruit. I think, you use this to represent getting to know someone, to share oneself with another, good and bad. You want to share, to open up with this person. Perhaps they have an element of control over you, which you want to submit to... Ah that\'s just my thoughts... It\'s very clever. I like this.
December 19th, 2020 10:28
Clara said:
Oh this is an intriguing one. I like the imagery, the use of the fruit - entirely stubborn when it wants to be, to yield its fruit. I think, you use this to represent getting to know someone, to share oneself with another, good and bad. You want to share, to open up with this person. Perhaps they have an element of control over you, which you want to submit to... Ah that\'s just my thoughts... It\'s very clever. I like this.
December 19th, 2020 10:28
nails
FredPeyer said:
Love everything about this poem. The words and the layout. Well done!
December 17th, 2020 15:02
FredPeyer said:
Love everything about this poem. The words and the layout. Well done!
December 17th, 2020 15:02
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