Comments received on poems by Samer Amin
The Creature who Believes that a Bubble of Air is a Fortified Castle
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery.
November 3rd, 2023 17:08
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery.
November 3rd, 2023 17:08
Just Keep Silent!
ella said:
It was beautiful! I am looking forward to read more from you!
November 3rd, 2023 14:29
ella said:
It was beautiful! I am looking forward to read more from you!
November 3rd, 2023 14:29
The Creature who Believes that a Bubble of Air is a Fortified Castle
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. Home is where the heart is. Great poem.
October 19th, 2023 11:29
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. Home is where the heart is. Great poem.
October 19th, 2023 11:29
The Creature who Believes that a Bubble of Air is a Fortified Castle
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I recall reading about this spider but you\'ve detailed it superbly and poetically wow. A spider living in a bubble wow. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I recall reading about this spider but you\'ve detailed it superbly and poetically wow. A spider living in a bubble wow. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:36
The Creature who Believes that a Bubble of Air is a Fortified Castle
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was so fascinating! Truly intriguing and I enjoyed the way you presented it! I never knew about this until now and I find it odd yet astounding! Bravo! 👏🌟
February 18th, 2022 13:32
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was so fascinating! Truly intriguing and I enjoyed the way you presented it! I never knew about this until now and I find it odd yet astounding! Bravo! 👏🌟
February 18th, 2022 13:32
Wrinkles and Cracks Saved a Beautiful Face
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a brilliant poem on the fissures, cracks and volcanic geo of the earth. Kudos for this poem!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 14th, 2022 05:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a brilliant poem on the fissures, cracks and volcanic geo of the earth. Kudos for this poem!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 14th, 2022 05:07
Whoever Gets the Electron Gets Everything
Jay-Lee Jane said:
a fine write :)
\"The Absolute Essence, on the other hand, remains forever unchanging,
that is why it is called the glorious Ultimate Reality.\"
i love those lines ^^
February 8th, 2022 22:50
Jay-Lee Jane said:
a fine write :)
\"The Absolute Essence, on the other hand, remains forever unchanging,
that is why it is called the glorious Ultimate Reality.\"
i love those lines ^^
February 8th, 2022 22:50
Once You Leave
L. B. Mek said:
\'It could be wiser to speak
to the seemingly lifeless furniture
rather than your inattentive ears.
While venting
to indifferent ears, may
be benign
the ever-present opponent, ready
to attack
whenever a conversation, reveals
any exploitable weak points, is the most
repulsive
thing, that has ever existed on this planet.\'
(that need
to rebut, a sentence
before
ever hearing, a syllable
is modernity\'s
most depressing, innovation)
war\'s was necessary, at first
so one side
can have the Final word, nowadays
Wars
are meaninglessly manufactured, just
so one side, can have
their words, heard...
(and on: it devolves...)
thanks for sharing, your insightful wisdom
dear poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'It could be wiser to speak
to the seemingly lifeless furniture
rather than your inattentive ears.
While venting
to indifferent ears, may
be benign
the ever-present opponent, ready
to attack
whenever a conversation, reveals
any exploitable weak points, is the most
repulsive
thing, that has ever existed on this planet.\'
(that need
to rebut, a sentence
before
ever hearing, a syllable
is modernity\'s
most depressing, innovation)
war\'s was necessary, at first
so one side
can have the Final word, nowadays
Wars
are meaninglessly manufactured, just
so one side, can have
their words, heard...
(and on: it devolves...)
thanks for sharing, your insightful wisdom
dear poet
February 3rd, 2022 08:19
Nightmare
Crystal Hope said:
oooo very deep and gave me chills. brilliant writing
January 17th, 2022 18:05
Crystal Hope said:
oooo very deep and gave me chills. brilliant writing
January 17th, 2022 18:05
The Scavenger Vultures of Despair
L. B. Mek said:
\'The physical and emotional, needs
that must be burnt
on the surface of this flaming dust
of this, accursed world.
The flaming dust
that bears witness
to the most heinous
wasteful act\'s of folly.
The foolish act\'s, seeking
the water of meaning
in the middle of a dusty desert\'
(Happy New Year! dear poet
thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'The physical and emotional, needs
that must be burnt
on the surface of this flaming dust
of this, accursed world.
The flaming dust
that bears witness
to the most heinous
wasteful act\'s of folly.
The foolish act\'s, seeking
the water of meaning
in the middle of a dusty desert\'
(Happy New Year! dear poet
thanks for sharing)
January 13th, 2022 05:00
The Scavenger Vultures of Despair
jarcher54 said:
Samer, I quite enjoyed (or let\'s say appreciated!) this powerful tour de force. From the start the reader asks, how did this person become stranded in this desert?... thanks for an interesting and compelling way of looking at the fruits of folly and vanity. I appreciated especially the line \"Will they be able to maintain their grip on the sparkling stars?\" Strong metaphor indeed!
January 13th, 2022 00:52
jarcher54 said:
Samer, I quite enjoyed (or let\'s say appreciated!) this powerful tour de force. From the start the reader asks, how did this person become stranded in this desert?... thanks for an interesting and compelling way of looking at the fruits of folly and vanity. I appreciated especially the line \"Will they be able to maintain their grip on the sparkling stars?\" Strong metaphor indeed!
January 13th, 2022 00:52
The Shepherd
orchidee said:
Good write Samer.
We are sheep as in, e.g. Psalm 23, with the security of the Good Shepherd :)
January 4th, 2022 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write Samer.
We are sheep as in, e.g. Psalm 23, with the security of the Good Shepherd :)
January 4th, 2022 03:22
The Sheep and the Goats
orchidee said:
Good write Samer.
There ya go, or there we go - not to forget any of the \'least\'.
The sheep and goats look alike, it\'s said, so......
December 30th, 2021 09:51
orchidee said:
Good write Samer.
There ya go, or there we go - not to forget any of the \'least\'.
The sheep and goats look alike, it\'s said, so......
December 30th, 2021 09:51
The Holy Sacred Secret
Lorna said:
This happily filled me with lovely images
November 27th, 2021 12:49
Lorna said:
This happily filled me with lovely images
November 27th, 2021 12:49
The Holy Sacred Secret
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Aww, why they say (do they really? lol) \'When I sing is neither holy, sacred, or secret!\' heehee.
November 27th, 2021 05:52
orchidee said:
Good write S.
Aww, why they say (do they really? lol) \'When I sing is neither holy, sacred, or secret!\' heehee.
November 27th, 2021 05:52
The Imaginary Rusty Bars
Paul Bell said:
This poem is total dejection, and that\'s why I love it. You can actually feel the pain in it.
November 24th, 2021 12:09
Paul Bell said:
This poem is total dejection, and that\'s why I love it. You can actually feel the pain in it.
November 24th, 2021 12:09
You are Despicable
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - Phew, I thought you were writing about me for a moment! (heehee).
November 19th, 2021 14:45
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - Phew, I thought you were writing about me for a moment! (heehee).
November 19th, 2021 14:45
You are Despicable
orchidee said:
A thought - I suspect the devil will be some sort of beautiful being, to attract us, to deceive us, etc.
A beautiful serpent who hissed and \'spoke\' in the Garden of Eden?
If having forked tail and ugliness, etc, we would tend to run away from him and his lies, deceits, etc.
November 19th, 2021 14:44
orchidee said:
A thought - I suspect the devil will be some sort of beautiful being, to attract us, to deceive us, etc.
A beautiful serpent who hissed and \'spoke\' in the Garden of Eden?
If having forked tail and ugliness, etc, we would tend to run away from him and his lies, deceits, etc.
November 19th, 2021 14:44
A torch in the Wind
jarcher54 said:
I really like your conceit of the noble knight within her heart. May we all find a little bit of that noble, wise, brave champion within each of us. Thank you sir!
November 15th, 2021 03:13
jarcher54 said:
I really like your conceit of the noble knight within her heart. May we all find a little bit of that noble, wise, brave champion within each of us. Thank you sir!
November 15th, 2021 03:13
Your Wintry Breath
Charles_newOwner said:
A nice poem that expresses the care, features on has! Very nice!
November 4th, 2021 14:56
Charles_newOwner said:
A nice poem that expresses the care, features on has! Very nice!
November 4th, 2021 14:56
The Cities of Grief
iAli said:
Life is the continuous cycle of sorrow and happiness, worry and hope, doubt and satisfaction. The road of grief ends in the destination of happiness and the cycle will be going on...
October 22nd, 2021 03:41
iAli said:
Life is the continuous cycle of sorrow and happiness, worry and hope, doubt and satisfaction. The road of grief ends in the destination of happiness and the cycle will be going on...
October 22nd, 2021 03:41
The Singing Angel
annonymouswonder said:
Beautifully written, your words paint quite a picture.
October 12th, 2021 16:52
annonymouswonder said:
Beautifully written, your words paint quite a picture.
October 12th, 2021 16:52
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