Comments received on poems by Samer Amin
Soulmate
Goldfinch60 said:
In spite of your not being on here for a while your words say so much.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
In spite of your not being on here for a while your words say so much.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:36
Soulmate
Jerry Reynolds said:
Mysterious write, Samer.
Reminds me of \"Long Black Veil\" a Kentucky folk poem written from a dead mans point of view.
June 14th, 2021 16:25
Jerry Reynolds said:
Mysterious write, Samer.
Reminds me of \"Long Black Veil\" a Kentucky folk poem written from a dead mans point of view.
June 14th, 2021 16:25
In the Name of Defiance
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wrench there with that towel, Samer.
Delightful morning read.
March 5th, 2021 09:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wrench there with that towel, Samer.
Delightful morning read.
March 5th, 2021 09:03
In the Name of Defiance
L. B. Mek said:
\'Going beyond our limits can give us a deep sense of glory and an indescribable sense of victory.
Regardless of our gender or any ideological background, this glorious feeling never changes whenever we overcome an insurmountable challenge.\'
wise words, truly!
March 5th, 2021 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'Going beyond our limits can give us a deep sense of glory and an indescribable sense of victory.
Regardless of our gender or any ideological background, this glorious feeling never changes whenever we overcome an insurmountable challenge.\'
wise words, truly!
March 5th, 2021 05:17
Homo texting
L. B. Mek said:
ah, we\'re all just jealous
of their proprioception - genius!
lol, a fun write to vent what\'s a very relatable frustration, dear poet
March 4th, 2021 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
ah, we\'re all just jealous
of their proprioception - genius!
lol, a fun write to vent what\'s a very relatable frustration, dear poet
March 4th, 2021 06:21
Homo texting
Doggerel Dave said:
Very witty , Samer. They don\'t collide with me because I sidestep to avoid collision - although I\'m pretty good at cutting it fine so I manage to clip their shoulder....
Mouse wheel running hot.....
March 4th, 2021 06:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Very witty , Samer. They don\'t collide with me because I sidestep to avoid collision - although I\'m pretty good at cutting it fine so I manage to clip their shoulder....
Mouse wheel running hot.....
March 4th, 2021 06:15
Just Keep Insulting Them!
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, we are not all blessed with \'parents\' dear poet,
some children are made to feel as mere accidents at best
and deprived of worth
with every psychological or verbal or physical abuse
inflicted upon them,
though most times subjected to all three - simultaneously..
oppressed by adults who choose to perceive their \'role\' as \'guardian\'s\', a gateway to their assumed \'Right\' for viewing those in their \'care\' as an excuse to act-out their self-resentment fuelled vicious atrocities..
but I know - too
you are not referring to those actual victims, in your write;
you\'re merely venting your frustration
at those on the \'other\' end of scale - entitled children, who
exemplify the trappings in a spoilt upbringing..
its just, \'us scribbler\'s\' need to qualify exactly who we are referring to, as best as we can, dear poet
or else we are guilty of self creating the misunderstanding that acts as a barrier between our writing\'s accessible potential
and our readers ability: to relate..
still, a very passionate write you\'ve penned,
thanks for haring
March 4th, 2021 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, we are not all blessed with \'parents\' dear poet,
some children are made to feel as mere accidents at best
and deprived of worth
with every psychological or verbal or physical abuse
inflicted upon them,
though most times subjected to all three - simultaneously..
oppressed by adults who choose to perceive their \'role\' as \'guardian\'s\', a gateway to their assumed \'Right\' for viewing those in their \'care\' as an excuse to act-out their self-resentment fuelled vicious atrocities..
but I know - too
you are not referring to those actual victims, in your write;
you\'re merely venting your frustration
at those on the \'other\' end of scale - entitled children, who
exemplify the trappings in a spoilt upbringing..
its just, \'us scribbler\'s\' need to qualify exactly who we are referring to, as best as we can, dear poet
or else we are guilty of self creating the misunderstanding that acts as a barrier between our writing\'s accessible potential
and our readers ability: to relate..
still, a very passionate write you\'ve penned,
thanks for haring
March 4th, 2021 05:05
Lion\'s Den
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet, I know you have a preference for breaking up your stanzas or paragraphs, but I think for write\'s like this one it might be better to present your work in a more traditionally straightforward SA or short story format,
because I imagine a lot of people that would have enjoyed this particular read may be deterred at having to scroll down for every line..
personally I found this an engaging read, really subtle - written in the tradition of Japanese minimalism or Tanka form, a wonderfully contemplative write imbued with your unique signature of scientifically argued theological views..
forgive me if you find my suggestions or comments rude dear poet, I mean no disrespect..
thanks for sharing!
March 2nd, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet, I know you have a preference for breaking up your stanzas or paragraphs, but I think for write\'s like this one it might be better to present your work in a more traditionally straightforward SA or short story format,
because I imagine a lot of people that would have enjoyed this particular read may be deterred at having to scroll down for every line..
personally I found this an engaging read, really subtle - written in the tradition of Japanese minimalism or Tanka form, a wonderfully contemplative write imbued with your unique signature of scientifically argued theological views..
forgive me if you find my suggestions or comments rude dear poet, I mean no disrespect..
thanks for sharing!
March 2nd, 2021 05:41
The Big Bang Theory
FredPeyer said:
Samer, I do like this poem. Your \'non-existent\' mind came up with a \'non-existent\' idea, exploded and created this \'non-existent\' poem!
March 1st, 2021 15:51
FredPeyer said:
Samer, I do like this poem. Your \'non-existent\' mind came up with a \'non-existent\' idea, exploded and created this \'non-existent\' poem!
March 1st, 2021 15:51
The Big Bang Theory
orchidee said:
I don\'t believe in \'luck\' myself
Then it\'s said: \'Ahh, who caused the Big Bang then?\' Or what caused it, if we only believe in some force or something impersonal.
March 1st, 2021 03:03
orchidee said:
I don\'t believe in \'luck\' myself
Then it\'s said: \'Ahh, who caused the Big Bang then?\' Or what caused it, if we only believe in some force or something impersonal.
March 1st, 2021 03:03
Rebirth
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us, many people will not accept that it is there.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us, many people will not accept that it is there.
Andy
February 28th, 2021 02:44
The Disagreement between Body Parts
orchidee said:
A useful write Samer.
I\'m reading recently: scientists are finding out the \'how\' of things - diseases, etc; but can they find out the \'what\', the things a you have said here?
I\'m no scientist. This may go over my head soon. But there surely has to be a Creator God, or \'god\' over the whole lot
February 27th, 2021 02:47
orchidee said:
A useful write Samer.
I\'m reading recently: scientists are finding out the \'how\' of things - diseases, etc; but can they find out the \'what\', the things a you have said here?
I\'m no scientist. This may go over my head soon. But there surely has to be a Creator God, or \'god\' over the whole lot
February 27th, 2021 02:47
The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Samer.
I find the format of your entries here difficult to cope with, so I rarely add to your score of views.
That out of the way, I do occasionally visit, as this time.
Since you\'ve just \'blinded me with science\', I believe it only fair to ask if you wouldn\'t mind placing some detail in the \'about me\' on your profile page.
This and your other entries need context before I\'d contemplate making my visits more regular.
No hard feelings, I hope........ !
February 26th, 2021 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Samer.
I find the format of your entries here difficult to cope with, so I rarely add to your score of views.
That out of the way, I do occasionally visit, as this time.
Since you\'ve just \'blinded me with science\', I believe it only fair to ask if you wouldn\'t mind placing some detail in the \'about me\' on your profile page.
This and your other entries need context before I\'d contemplate making my visits more regular.
No hard feelings, I hope........ !
February 26th, 2021 19:46
The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dear, Dear Samer. I just try to make it rhyme. Good write.
February 26th, 2021 10:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dear, Dear Samer. I just try to make it rhyme. Good write.
February 26th, 2021 10:23
The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands
L. B. Mek said:
me, I\'m just happy when I can butter my toast before it gets too cold
or sip my tea, without blanching my tongue, badly... lol
(I don\'t mean to undermine or disrespect your points dear poet, just having a little fun, my go-to reaction when things get too serious for me..)
and sorry, but rationalisation using genome molecular biology is something I want nothing to do with!
for in our fear of un-answerable questions to existence, we\'ve stumbled upon our roadmap to changing that same self-diagnosed inadequate - self, at molecular level
that\'s just incomprehensively idiotic - in my humble estimation.. especially when you contemplate those of us who can\'t give up cigarettes while coughing blood, from lung cancer, as-in
that\'s how little restraint and self-control most of us posses and we want to start poking at our very core connection to existence..
what if we mess with our \'system for reproduction\' by mistake... lol
behold our unrivalled capability for manifesting: our very own self-destruction...
February 26th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
me, I\'m just happy when I can butter my toast before it gets too cold
or sip my tea, without blanching my tongue, badly... lol
(I don\'t mean to undermine or disrespect your points dear poet, just having a little fun, my go-to reaction when things get too serious for me..)
and sorry, but rationalisation using genome molecular biology is something I want nothing to do with!
for in our fear of un-answerable questions to existence, we\'ve stumbled upon our roadmap to changing that same self-diagnosed inadequate - self, at molecular level
that\'s just incomprehensively idiotic - in my humble estimation.. especially when you contemplate those of us who can\'t give up cigarettes while coughing blood, from lung cancer, as-in
that\'s how little restraint and self-control most of us posses and we want to start poking at our very core connection to existence..
what if we mess with our \'system for reproduction\' by mistake... lol
behold our unrivalled capability for manifesting: our very own self-destruction...
February 26th, 2021 06:50
The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands
orchidee said:
It\'s a bit like part of a book I\'m reading. I don\'t know if I will understand all of THAT either!
February 26th, 2021 03:51
orchidee said:
It\'s a bit like part of a book I\'m reading. I don\'t know if I will understand all of THAT either!
February 26th, 2021 03:51
The Divided Kingdom that Still Stands
orchidee said:
The picture looks like a game of bingo or something, to lesser mortals(?)!
I recall some of this, though it\'s as if: Erm, say all that again. please!
February 26th, 2021 02:50
orchidee said:
The picture looks like a game of bingo or something, to lesser mortals(?)!
I recall some of this, though it\'s as if: Erm, say all that again. please!
February 26th, 2021 02:50
Dynamic Unity of Reality
L. B. Mek said:
look how foolish nature makes us all look, here dear insightful poet, you\'ve brilliantly and painstakingly outlined the parameters within our grasp of existence to quantify your belief in the unfathomable but seemingly possible..
where as nature: simply has a child pick up a seashell in the dessert, place it by their ear and listen - in awe, at the remnant waves from century\'s past..
it is us that choose to complicate existence, when in reality: its all there for us to see, just not with our eyes, or mind\'s...
another wonderfully changeling write you\'ve shared dear poet, I laud your geometric proofing style
February 25th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
look how foolish nature makes us all look, here dear insightful poet, you\'ve brilliantly and painstakingly outlined the parameters within our grasp of existence to quantify your belief in the unfathomable but seemingly possible..
where as nature: simply has a child pick up a seashell in the dessert, place it by their ear and listen - in awe, at the remnant waves from century\'s past..
it is us that choose to complicate existence, when in reality: its all there for us to see, just not with our eyes, or mind\'s...
another wonderfully changeling write you\'ve shared dear poet, I laud your geometric proofing style
February 25th, 2021 06:16
Stalingrad
L. B. Mek said:
I truly appreciate the war cry element\'s in this galvanising read. I can only imagine how deep your inspiration for this write must be..
but, my insightful friend let\'s not be too harsh on those who lack some of that gusto you\'re calling for in your last line, sadly
we\'re all built differently and \'real men\' come in all shapes and sizes of bravery and loyalty,
you see some, have spent all their lives - surviving, just so they can be the hero: in their homes,
so yes they\'ll choose to skedaddle and scrape a pathetic path - back, into to the arms of those family members, who have no one else..
a wonderful read dear poet, and a moving tribute to those brave heroes who sacrificed themselves in the name of freedom
February 25th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
I truly appreciate the war cry element\'s in this galvanising read. I can only imagine how deep your inspiration for this write must be..
but, my insightful friend let\'s not be too harsh on those who lack some of that gusto you\'re calling for in your last line, sadly
we\'re all built differently and \'real men\' come in all shapes and sizes of bravery and loyalty,
you see some, have spent all their lives - surviving, just so they can be the hero: in their homes,
so yes they\'ll choose to skedaddle and scrape a pathetic path - back, into to the arms of those family members, who have no one else..
a wonderful read dear poet, and a moving tribute to those brave heroes who sacrificed themselves in the name of freedom
February 25th, 2021 04:40
Stalingrad
Jerry Reynolds said:
Heroic write, Samer. The words scram and skedaddle I would not associate with you somehow.
February 24th, 2021 09:25
Jerry Reynolds said:
Heroic write, Samer. The words scram and skedaddle I would not associate with you somehow.
February 24th, 2021 09:25
Rebellion
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dreams are as perennial as the grass. Good writing, Samer
February 22nd, 2021 16:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
Dreams are as perennial as the grass. Good writing, Samer
February 22nd, 2021 16:51
Rebellion
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the essence of chaos so well here Samer but the positive finalé will lift every reader to see life retrieved from such \"barriers of fear\" - - a fine write.
February 22nd, 2021 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the essence of chaos so well here Samer but the positive finalé will lift every reader to see life retrieved from such \"barriers of fear\" - - a fine write.
February 22nd, 2021 04:51
Rebellion
Mary Peters said:
very powerful , very thought-provoking, very real life like, and highly evocative, Samer Amin! This is also full of strong images and symbols capturing one\'s interest and attention. I have really enjoyed it!
February 22nd, 2021 01:17
Mary Peters said:
very powerful , very thought-provoking, very real life like, and highly evocative, Samer Amin! This is also full of strong images and symbols capturing one\'s interest and attention. I have really enjoyed it!
February 22nd, 2021 01:17
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