Comments received on poems by Samer Amin
When the Bells Ring
Goldfinch60 said:
May justice be there for everybody Samer.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
May justice be there for everybody Samer.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:39
New Destiny
iAli said:
Each and every line means a lot ❤
A great work dear brother.🙂🙃
A wounded soul will heal when it\'s find the unconditional \"Devin love\" ❣.
August 2nd, 2021 12:38
iAli said:
Each and every line means a lot ❤
A great work dear brother.🙂🙃
A wounded soul will heal when it\'s find the unconditional \"Devin love\" ❣.
August 2nd, 2021 12:38
Reap What You Sow
L. B. Mek said:
\'That lava raging
across the towering mountain of injustice,
which has become an imposing edifice,
on which the fallen human nature prides itself.\'
\'This temple grows and grows,
forgets that beneath the ashes
is a latent fire,
and whoever sows thorns: reaps wounds.\'..
(insightfully, choice wording with arrowed precision
to crystalize that searching message
with diamond carat purity of wisdom\'s, poignant clarity...)
thanks for sharing, such a rewarding read!
(well worth the 5 mins, of 5 page length
endless scrolling
for a quarter page of writing, lol)
August 2nd, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'That lava raging
across the towering mountain of injustice,
which has become an imposing edifice,
on which the fallen human nature prides itself.\'
\'This temple grows and grows,
forgets that beneath the ashes
is a latent fire,
and whoever sows thorns: reaps wounds.\'..
(insightfully, choice wording with arrowed precision
to crystalize that searching message
with diamond carat purity of wisdom\'s, poignant clarity...)
thanks for sharing, such a rewarding read!
(well worth the 5 mins, of 5 page length
endless scrolling
for a quarter page of writing, lol)
August 2nd, 2021 04:23
Fountain of Immortality
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Samer, the heart is the safe where your love is kept.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Samer, the heart is the safe where your love is kept.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:19
Trust Issues
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Samer.
Danger comes slowly then suddenly.
July 30th, 2021 09:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Samer.
Danger comes slowly then suddenly.
July 30th, 2021 09:36
A Dormant Volcano
L. B. Mek said:
\'A dormant volcano
that resides among the muffled rhythms
of our hearts\' drums.
We fight back
not only to win; Fighting back
is written lines on the palms of our hands.\'
some great insight\'s
and imagery, fuelled by lived-in words
of life\'s, overcome obstacles - insuring
empathy, for those we witness - experiencing
that same ill-fated, strife of life.
thanks for sharing, such a wonderful read
July 26th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'A dormant volcano
that resides among the muffled rhythms
of our hearts\' drums.
We fight back
not only to win; Fighting back
is written lines on the palms of our hands.\'
some great insight\'s
and imagery, fuelled by lived-in words
of life\'s, overcome obstacles - insuring
empathy, for those we witness - experiencing
that same ill-fated, strife of life.
thanks for sharing, such a wonderful read
July 26th, 2021 05:13
Get on Your Feet Son of Bitch!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A strong poem, motivating in a firm push . Indeed the creator loves us. And He tests us but gives us ease as well. Thumbs up.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A strong poem, motivating in a firm push . Indeed the creator loves us. And He tests us but gives us ease as well. Thumbs up.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:25
The Delayed Harvest
Goldfinch60 said:
That harvest will be there for you Samer and the yield will be so fruitful.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That harvest will be there for you Samer and the yield will be so fruitful.
Andy
July 22nd, 2021 00:33
The Melodies of the Waves
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams from the sea can fill our hearts with wonder.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams from the sea can fill our hearts with wonder.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:02
The Devil\'s Tail
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Samer and love the last line. This is all so true in organised religion.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Samer and love the last line. This is all so true in organised religion.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:18
Silver Lining
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Samer, we can all get through any troubles with love as our strength.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Samer, we can all get through any troubles with love as our strength.
Andy
July 8th, 2021 00:49
Silver Lining
flyingfish said:
Yes resilience can have a silver lining if not overstayed like a yacht\'s mast.
Well done. Good write.
July 7th, 2021 14:13
flyingfish said:
Yes resilience can have a silver lining if not overstayed like a yacht\'s mast.
Well done. Good write.
July 7th, 2021 14:13
Where the Sun Always Shines
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that sun will never stop shining Samer.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that sun will never stop shining Samer.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:48
Tree of Life
iAli said:
Like your other writings, it also has a deep and heart touching meaning my dear brother ❤
July 3rd, 2021 05:57
iAli said:
Like your other writings, it also has a deep and heart touching meaning my dear brother ❤
July 3rd, 2021 05:57
Tree of Life
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded
contemplative in tone, immersive in detail
a rejuvenating reminder, that we are more
than mere flesh and breath
we too: belong to the legacy
that our generation tattoos, in the annals
of humanity\'s evolution,
we too, are more
than those decaying remnants of brick
we live behind,
we too: survive and thrive
by our connection to that Timeless, existence...
thanks for sharing, such an empowering message
July 2nd, 2021 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded
contemplative in tone, immersive in detail
a rejuvenating reminder, that we are more
than mere flesh and breath
we too: belong to the legacy
that our generation tattoos, in the annals
of humanity\'s evolution,
we too, are more
than those decaying remnants of brick
we live behind,
we too: survive and thrive
by our connection to that Timeless, existence...
thanks for sharing, such an empowering message
July 2nd, 2021 03:50
Tree of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Samer, if only those Ancient walls could talk?
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Samer, if only those Ancient walls could talk?
Andy
July 2nd, 2021 00:29
Eternal Healer
L. B. Mek said:
\'After my deep wounds started to stop bleeding
and proved not fatal enough,\'
and the morose reality of true suffering, begins..
It\'s so easy to interpret the Grace
in our chosen belief systems
within all the Mercy, we hypothesise
when, in actuality - War, teaches us
the pragmatic concept
that there truly may be: a Hell on Earth!
and that\'s the only legacy, of War
I can accept..
that we are so far - removed, from that \'Ideal\'
wishfully conceptualised by nature
during humanity\'s evolutionary rise to power
we no longer, have the capacity - to see
just how much the Hurt, we\'re capable of
inflicting on each other
as being the rotting corruption
of our \'humanity\', it truly is...
and what, in all of Time
has accrued
the most horrendous crimes
against the sanctity of \'a Life\'s: Worth\'
than those wars, fought
over our maliciously corrupted representation
of organised Religion?!
Faith-in
Believing-in, something: anything
is a laudable
and somewhat necessary trait for survival, but
confusing that - with blind zealotry devotion
to inked words - \'Interpreted\'
by your fellow - fallible human,
is just ludicrous
in my humble - yet rudely opinionated, opinion
especially, with all that Historical evidence
we now possess and can so easily, access...
July 1st, 2021 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'After my deep wounds started to stop bleeding
and proved not fatal enough,\'
and the morose reality of true suffering, begins..
It\'s so easy to interpret the Grace
in our chosen belief systems
within all the Mercy, we hypothesise
when, in actuality - War, teaches us
the pragmatic concept
that there truly may be: a Hell on Earth!
and that\'s the only legacy, of War
I can accept..
that we are so far - removed, from that \'Ideal\'
wishfully conceptualised by nature
during humanity\'s evolutionary rise to power
we no longer, have the capacity - to see
just how much the Hurt, we\'re capable of
inflicting on each other
as being the rotting corruption
of our \'humanity\', it truly is...
and what, in all of Time
has accrued
the most horrendous crimes
against the sanctity of \'a Life\'s: Worth\'
than those wars, fought
over our maliciously corrupted representation
of organised Religion?!
Faith-in
Believing-in, something: anything
is a laudable
and somewhat necessary trait for survival, but
confusing that - with blind zealotry devotion
to inked words - \'Interpreted\'
by your fellow - fallible human,
is just ludicrous
in my humble - yet rudely opinionated, opinion
especially, with all that Historical evidence
we now possess and can so easily, access...
July 1st, 2021 04:04
Eternal Healer
Goldfinch60 said:
May that embrace always be there for you no matter how hard life is.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May that embrace always be there for you no matter how hard life is.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 14:44
Enchanting Voice
iAli said:
Couldn\'t understand all the lines, but that I could are really great 👌
Dedicated any particular one!??🙃
June 29th, 2021 10:44
iAli said:
Couldn\'t understand all the lines, but that I could are really great 👌
Dedicated any particular one!??🙃
June 29th, 2021 10:44
Brand-New Life
iAli said:
Without faith love is meaningless.
Really a great writing dear brother. ❣
June 28th, 2021 09:37
iAli said:
Without faith love is meaningless.
Really a great writing dear brother. ❣
June 28th, 2021 09:37
The Essence of our Nights
Goldfinch60 said:
May that unity never fail Samer.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that unity never fail Samer.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:36
See You Very Soon!
orchidee said:
I\'m seeing this fine poem soon - now in fact!
June 26th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
I\'m seeing this fine poem soon - now in fact!
June 26th, 2021 01:58
When the Light Shines in the Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
That light shines in all our lives giving us peace, joy, harmony and love Samer.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That light shines in all our lives giving us peace, joy, harmony and love Samer.
Andy
June 26th, 2021 00:25
When the Light Shines in the Darkness
L. B. Mek said:
\'the firm towering pillars of the kingdom of order and balance.\'
that soon cripple and plunge into the dirt of inevitability
in the once trusted hands of natures: most cursed, fallible Humanity...
dear wise and searchingly intuitive writer, I must let you know
I find that absolutist: zealotry of belief
the saddest, corruptive influence on Earth,
because it so conveniently - spinelessly, finds itself bending
in whatever direction it thinks survival\'s winds, are blowing...
June 25th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'the firm towering pillars of the kingdom of order and balance.\'
that soon cripple and plunge into the dirt of inevitability
in the once trusted hands of natures: most cursed, fallible Humanity...
dear wise and searchingly intuitive writer, I must let you know
I find that absolutist: zealotry of belief
the saddest, corruptive influence on Earth,
because it so conveniently - spinelessly, finds itself bending
in whatever direction it thinks survival\'s winds, are blowing...
June 25th, 2021 06:10
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