Comments received on poems by heatherbee
Jewels and Treassures
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'jewels and treasures\' will always be there to remind you of joyous days in the past and tell you that life was good. You may struggle to do them now but at least you did them and that is good.
Andy
February 2nd, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'jewels and treasures\' will always be there to remind you of joyous days in the past and tell you that life was good. You may struggle to do them now but at least you did them and that is good.
Andy
February 2nd, 2021 01:55
Jewels and Treassures
dusk arising said:
I\'m 100% with you on this.... in my heart i am a fell walker but in my boots i struggle to walk around town (lockdown permitting).
When lockdown is over I plan to go travelling all over the place - I wonder how far my ailments will allow me to go.
February 1st, 2021 11:38
dusk arising said:
I\'m 100% with you on this.... in my heart i am a fell walker but in my boots i struggle to walk around town (lockdown permitting).
When lockdown is over I plan to go travelling all over the place - I wonder how far my ailments will allow me to go.
February 1st, 2021 11:38
My hobbie and me
heatherbee said:
Thankyou so much such kind words. Carry on baking.
January 31st, 2021 03:56
heatherbee said:
Thankyou so much such kind words. Carry on baking.
January 31st, 2021 03:56
My hobbie and me
Goldfinch60 said:
I too am passionate about cooking and can get completely lost in it so any problems that may be with me just seem to disappear.
During the first lockdown when we went out every Thursday to clap I started to bake bread for my neighbours and at one time was know as the baker of the street. I still make bread for others and if they are lucky they get homemade digestives, shortbread and ginger snaps.
I do hope that your pain eases Heather and that you can cook without pain but just with love.
Andy
January 31st, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I too am passionate about cooking and can get completely lost in it so any problems that may be with me just seem to disappear.
During the first lockdown when we went out every Thursday to clap I started to bake bread for my neighbours and at one time was know as the baker of the street. I still make bread for others and if they are lucky they get homemade digestives, shortbread and ginger snaps.
I do hope that your pain eases Heather and that you can cook without pain but just with love.
Andy
January 31st, 2021 01:44
My hobbie and me
FredPeyer said:
The things we do..... You said it well. My wife had a small bakery for years. She closed it and retired just before Covid started. Best decision ever! You say you did it for a living, so you know how different home baking and professional baking are.
But getting back to your poem. I like the way you write, your pain but also your feelings of accomplishment shine through.
January 30th, 2021 21:52
FredPeyer said:
The things we do..... You said it well. My wife had a small bakery for years. She closed it and retired just before Covid started. Best decision ever! You say you did it for a living, so you know how different home baking and professional baking are.
But getting back to your poem. I like the way you write, your pain but also your feelings of accomplishment shine through.
January 30th, 2021 21:52
My hobbie and me
dusk arising said:
Sometimes our hobbies become us. We become know as a baker etc with little else about our colourful lives being known or cared about.
January 30th, 2021 07:20
dusk arising said:
Sometimes our hobbies become us. We become know as a baker etc with little else about our colourful lives being known or cared about.
January 30th, 2021 07:20
Through the looking glass
Goldfinch60 said:
You never see the real you in a mirror, it is only a reflection of the real you and the real you will be that princess.
Like d a I too see my Dad lookin at me in the mirror!
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
You never see the real you in a mirror, it is only a reflection of the real you and the real you will be that princess.
Like d a I too see my Dad lookin at me in the mirror!
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:36
Through the looking glass
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes one must. When the hairs sprouting out my nose start poking me in the eye, I\'m forced to check it out...
January 29th, 2021 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Sometimes one must. When the hairs sprouting out my nose start poking me in the eye, I\'m forced to check it out...
January 29th, 2021 18:25
Through the looking glass
heatherbee said:
Hahahah yup I blame my mirror for everything lol.
January 29th, 2021 17:44
heatherbee said:
Hahahah yup I blame my mirror for everything lol.
January 29th, 2021 17:44
Through the looking glass
dusk arising said:
LOL. My mirror plays tricks too. Some old stranger who looks a bit like my dad has taken over.
January 29th, 2021 17:39
dusk arising said:
LOL. My mirror plays tricks too. Some old stranger who looks a bit like my dad has taken over.
January 29th, 2021 17:39
A restless night
L. B. Mek said:
yup, a good depiction of a very common problem in this unending \'age of anxiety\'
January 29th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
yup, a good depiction of a very common problem in this unending \'age of anxiety\'
January 29th, 2021 04:52
A restless night
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame about your pain, I feel so lucky as I normally sleep quite well and am grateful for that.
Good words Heather.
Andy
January 29th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame about your pain, I feel so lucky as I normally sleep quite well and am grateful for that.
Good words Heather.
Andy
January 29th, 2021 01:28
A restless night
heatherbee said:
You write what you know is what they say thankyou.
January 28th, 2021 19:13
heatherbee said:
You write what you know is what they say thankyou.
January 28th, 2021 19:13
A restless night
Doggerel Dave said:
Real, measured and described, your poem. I have more than a nodding acquaintance with just such a night; quite a few, in fact.
January 28th, 2021 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Real, measured and described, your poem. I have more than a nodding acquaintance with just such a night; quite a few, in fact.
January 28th, 2021 16:59
A restless night
FredPeyer said:
Great writing HeatherBee! I do have arthritis but I am one of the lucky ones who can sleep right through the pain. The hurt starts after I get up, but goes away after moving around a little.
January 28th, 2021 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Great writing HeatherBee! I do have arthritis but I am one of the lucky ones who can sleep right through the pain. The hurt starts after I get up, but goes away after moving around a little.
January 28th, 2021 11:45
A restless night
Jerry Reynolds said:
Certainly can identify with that.
Good write and read. Hearherbee.
January 28th, 2021 10:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Certainly can identify with that.
Good write and read. Hearherbee.
January 28th, 2021 10:33
The First Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
nicely done, well chosen details to highlight and more importantly - left out,
a wonderfully vivid read
January 28th, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
nicely done, well chosen details to highlight and more importantly - left out,
a wonderfully vivid read
January 28th, 2021 05:03
The First Bloom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Heather, I have the first blooms in my garden, I have two daffodils flowering.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Heather, I have the first blooms in my garden, I have two daffodils flowering.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:49
The First Bloom
Doggerel Dave said:
Now I\'ve started (second time today - you are not alone!!) I may be doing this frequently:
Delete \'too\'
Substitute \'to\'
This nice little picture you painted helps me cool down after the 33 degree heat I\'ve been experiencing .
January 27th, 2021 19:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Now I\'ve started (second time today - you are not alone!!) I may be doing this frequently:
Delete \'too\'
Substitute \'to\'
This nice little picture you painted helps me cool down after the 33 degree heat I\'ve been experiencing .
January 27th, 2021 19:24
Lockdown
Fay Slimm. said:
Pain certainly isolates and especially in lockdown needs to be admonished just as you write here dear Heather - - hoping your Mr Pain takes the hint and stays well away.
January 27th, 2021 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Pain certainly isolates and especially in lockdown needs to be admonished just as you write here dear Heather - - hoping your Mr Pain takes the hint and stays well away.
January 27th, 2021 02:58
Lockdown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Heather in these Strange Times, may that pain soon go and your companionship be the very good words that you write.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 15:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Heather in these Strange Times, may that pain soon go and your companionship be the very good words that you write.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 15:31
Lockdown
dusk arising said:
Pain filled words indeed.
Have you considered writing without rhyme. Most of my stuff doesn\'t rhyme these days and i find it frees me up to say much more than i can when i have to find a rhyme. You are obviously a natural writer and i make this suggestion as a way of hopefully giving food for thought.
January 26th, 2021 09:31
dusk arising said:
Pain filled words indeed.
Have you considered writing without rhyme. Most of my stuff doesn\'t rhyme these days and i find it frees me up to say much more than i can when i have to find a rhyme. You are obviously a natural writer and i make this suggestion as a way of hopefully giving food for thought.
January 26th, 2021 09:31
Good People
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Heather, there are many good people around us and many have come to the fore during these Strange Times.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words Heather, there are many good people around us and many have come to the fore during these Strange Times.
Andy
January 26th, 2021 01:40
Good People
FredPeyer said:
We are all surrounded by good people and you say it well heatherbee. Unfortunately sometimes we don\'t realize it and should make more of an effort to reach out.
January 25th, 2021 19:42
FredPeyer said:
We are all surrounded by good people and you say it well heatherbee. Unfortunately sometimes we don\'t realize it and should make more of an effort to reach out.
January 25th, 2021 19:42
Good People
Philip said:
Nice words here. We all need good people in our lives. I see good going on all around if I stop and look past all the madness
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:17
Philip said:
Nice words here. We all need good people in our lives. I see good going on all around if I stop and look past all the madness
Phil
January 25th, 2021 12:17
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