Comments received on poems by heatherbee



Groundhog day
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day may be the same but we get through them knowing that there will always be tomorrow and that tomorrow will be wonderful

Andy

February 15th, 2021 01:37

My valentine
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words of love Heather and may it always be so.

Andy

February 15th, 2021 01:14

My valentine
FredPeyer said:

short, to the point, and true! So well done, Heather!

February 14th, 2021 05:37

My valentine
Doggerel Dave said:

A perfectly polished valentine - you can post that one to me anytime you like....

February 14th, 2021 03:48

My valentine
orchidee said:

A lovely write Heather.

February 14th, 2021 03:16

My valentine
dusk arising said:

And ain\'t that just the way it is. Heartfelt and honest without the frilly bits. Love knows what it is and needs no firework display.

February 13th, 2021 22:34

Home
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Heather. I like the line \'somewhere do lovers spoon\'!

February 11th, 2021 17:13

Home
L. B. Mek said:

beautifully worded, an immersive read
thanks for sharing dear Poet

February 11th, 2021 05:27

Home
orchidee said:

A fine write Heather.

February 11th, 2021 02:50

Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Heather.

Andy

February 11th, 2021 01:13

A Day out in Brighton
orchidee said:

Good write heather.
Dunno why it needed to be marked at 18+, unless it was about the nudist beach at Brighton! Swoon! heehee.

February 10th, 2021 02:57

A Day out in Brighton
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful memories for me Heather, living in the Midlands (used to live in Kent) now is a long way from any seaside.

Andy

February 10th, 2021 01:25

A Summer Love
Goldfinch60 said:

That past will always be with you and that love will always be there.

Andy

February 8th, 2021 01:14

A Summer Love
heatherbee said:

Thankyou

February 6th, 2021 10:28

A Summer Love
orchidee said:

Good write Heather.

February 6th, 2021 09:47

A Creepy Bedtime Tale
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Heather, reading can lose us inside each book.

Andy

February 6th, 2021 01:35

A Creepy Bedtime Tale
dusk arising said:

Was that a creak upon the stair? Why are you suddenly awake. Silence brings the sound of heartbeat to your ears. What...., from corner of your eye in the darkness...., was that movement....

Wooooo... we all love a spook story. I definitely enjoyed yours.

February 5th, 2021 10:29

A Creepy Bedtime Tale
orchidee said:

I\'ll not read this before bedtime! heehee.

February 5th, 2021 04:52

Grandkids
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Heather and so true.

\"If I had known that grandchildren could be so much fun I would have had them first!\"

Andy

February 5th, 2021 01:24

Grandkids
dusk arising said:

Oh yes, I mis the little treasures too. Luckily I get some videos on whatsapp from daughter in law.

February 4th, 2021 18:42

Words
AlitaOpal said:

Written or spoken, my heart heard and now is awoken.. Fantastic 🌹

February 4th, 2021 11:10

Grandkids
orchidee said:

Good write Heather.

February 4th, 2021 10:41

My world
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Heather.

February 4th, 2021 02:57

My world
AlitaOpal said:

Your poem is amazing and so is your world.. I woke up really early this morning and was graced with your poem. 🌹

February 4th, 2021 02:03

My world
Goldfinch60 said:

Not just part of you is in the world of your poetry, it is here for us all to see. Our kindness is yours Heather.

Andy

February 4th, 2021 01:45

My world
dusk arising said:

You dear soul, are very much a part of this world and will never be left far behind whilst you can share such lovely thoughts with us as you do today.
You haven\'t been here on MPS for many days, but when I am here, i now look for your posts. You have a rich way of saying \'the living life of things\'.

February 3rd, 2021 23:16

My world
Chick said:

I love this poem it\'s so well written very beautiful!

February 3rd, 2021 22:52

Our family pet
heatherbee said:

More a cat person been great company right now. And as for your neighbours cat visiting maybe it\'s a break of lockdown rules no visitors lol.

February 3rd, 2021 06:19

Our family pet
orchidee said:

We\'ve had cats ourselves. Now we see a neighbour\'s cat. We got told off for feeding it. Oops! It seems to do a low hum rather a loud purr! lol. You\'ll be OK with a cat, or dog, or both, around.

February 3rd, 2021 03:03

Jewels and Treassures
L. B. Mek said:

I like how you used a rather up-tempo beat within your rhyme scheme, to ease the dreary of the read, insuring I engage beyond my kneejerk reaction to \'readers fatigue\' for write\'s with \'complaining\' tones,
cleverly executed, I think if you can craft such creative works of self-expression you\'re more likely on the right track,
a good read, thanks for sharing

February 2nd, 2021 04:57

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