Comments received on poems by heatherbee
Uninvited
L. B. Mek said:
\'We hope to get away from you.\'
Amen!
mercifully soon: we beg...
April 2nd, 2021 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'We hope to get away from you.\'
Amen!
mercifully soon: we beg...
April 2nd, 2021 05:36
Uninvited
Goldfinch60 said:
One day soon we will be free of the disease and be able to hug family and friends.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
One day soon we will be free of the disease and be able to hug family and friends.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:41
Pressing the pause button
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Heather - So good to see you back here and ready to take up the pen again - - I am looking forward to reading your welcome work.
April 1st, 2021 02:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Heather - So good to see you back here and ready to take up the pen again - - I am looking forward to reading your welcome work.
April 1st, 2021 02:01
Pressing the pause button
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need th odd \'pause\' in our lives, so good to see you back Heather.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need th odd \'pause\' in our lives, so good to see you back Heather.
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:32
Schooldays
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Hats off to those teachers who could actually teach us something when all we wanted to do was fool around. Enjoyed your expressive writing Heatherbee.
March 21st, 2021 19:20
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Hats off to those teachers who could actually teach us something when all we wanted to do was fool around. Enjoyed your expressive writing Heatherbee.
March 21st, 2021 19:20
Schooldays
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of schooldays a very long time ago, for the most part for me they are good memories, I left school in 1965 and then worked unstopped for 47 years and one month.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of schooldays a very long time ago, for the most part for me they are good memories, I left school in 1965 and then worked unstopped for 47 years and one month.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 02:55
Schooldays
dusk arising said:
Formative years. I reflected back to some of my schoolday experiences upon reading this. Many stay with you don\'t they. Plenty were milestones in learning subjects not on the syllabus. So much learning crammed into our young lives, not just at school though, where does learning ever stop?
February 20th, 2021 00:41
dusk arising said:
Formative years. I reflected back to some of my schoolday experiences upon reading this. Many stay with you don\'t they. Plenty were milestones in learning subjects not on the syllabus. So much learning crammed into our young lives, not just at school though, where does learning ever stop?
February 20th, 2021 00:41
Schooldays
Doggerel Dave said:
They are - or rather, for me. were (a very long time ago). True though.
February 20th, 2021 00:17
Doggerel Dave said:
They are - or rather, for me. were (a very long time ago). True though.
February 20th, 2021 00:17
Funfair
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, nostalgic indeed
thanks for sharing dear poet, I agree its not always good to go back, some memories are best kept as mementos, for reliving and retracing tends to lessen our reverie\'s perception
February 19th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read, nostalgic indeed
thanks for sharing dear poet, I agree its not always good to go back, some memories are best kept as mementos, for reliving and retracing tends to lessen our reverie\'s perception
February 19th, 2021 04:57
Funfair
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of Dreamland in Margate come to mind when I was a kid so many, many years ago.
Thank you for bringing back those memories. Never did win a goldfish!
Andy
February 19th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of Dreamland in Margate come to mind when I was a kid so many, many years ago.
Thank you for bringing back those memories. Never did win a goldfish!
Andy
February 19th, 2021 01:45
Funfair
dusk arising said:
Over tired kiddies with sticky pink candy floss stained faces sob and complain before back seat sleep finds them being carried to bed. Older sister wants a jam jar for yer poly bag goldfish. Mum\'s stuffed toy placed next to a sleeping head. Smiles of parental contentment and a cup of tea.
I like it when posted poetry takes me there and i live a bit of it. See what you did?
February 18th, 2021 07:13
dusk arising said:
Over tired kiddies with sticky pink candy floss stained faces sob and complain before back seat sleep finds them being carried to bed. Older sister wants a jam jar for yer poly bag goldfish. Mum\'s stuffed toy placed next to a sleeping head. Smiles of parental contentment and a cup of tea.
I like it when posted poetry takes me there and i live a bit of it. See what you did?
February 18th, 2021 07:13
Funfair
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought back so many childhood memories Heather - - those bumpers always brought up more than one candyfloss for me....... loved your write on the thrill of a funfair.
February 18th, 2021 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought back so many childhood memories Heather - - those bumpers always brought up more than one candyfloss for me....... loved your write on the thrill of a funfair.
February 18th, 2021 06:02
Emotion
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand you feelings in these times, not being able to meet with family is so hard on us all.
Andy
February 18th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand you feelings in these times, not being able to meet with family is so hard on us all.
Andy
February 18th, 2021 01:32
Emotion
Jerry Reynolds said:
Not qualified to treat, teach or critique anyone.
Have some experience, however, with depression it can be very challenging.
If it is a chemical imbalance there are meds to correct if not
Dusk is correct get help form people who are having the
same experience you are not alone.
February 17th, 2021 16:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Not qualified to treat, teach or critique anyone.
Have some experience, however, with depression it can be very challenging.
If it is a chemical imbalance there are meds to correct if not
Dusk is correct get help form people who are having the
same experience you are not alone.
February 17th, 2021 16:35
Emotion
dusk arising said:
I read your \'authors comment\'. It\'s so important to keep in communication when a loved one is low. Mum\'s and sons aren\'t always the easiest of relationships and i know that can be very trying when all mum wants to do is be loving and caring.
Hard though it is, sometimes it can be easier for a male feeling low to talk to someone outside the family scene.
There is help and a listening ear available through the local authority backed \'Here2Help\' set up in all areas. Just a thought.
You poem, in conversational style, really brings home the dilemma.
February 17th, 2021 15:39
dusk arising said:
I read your \'authors comment\'. It\'s so important to keep in communication when a loved one is low. Mum\'s and sons aren\'t always the easiest of relationships and i know that can be very trying when all mum wants to do is be loving and caring.
Hard though it is, sometimes it can be easier for a male feeling low to talk to someone outside the family scene.
There is help and a listening ear available through the local authority backed \'Here2Help\' set up in all areas. Just a thought.
You poem, in conversational style, really brings home the dilemma.
February 17th, 2021 15:39
The Dancer
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the last century where the girls danced around their handbags and the boys stood around the edges with their pints in their hands drinking up the courage to ask a girl to dance.
Great write and memories Heather.
Andy
February 17th, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That takes me back to the last century where the girls danced around their handbags and the boys stood around the edges with their pints in their hands drinking up the courage to ask a girl to dance.
Great write and memories Heather.
Andy
February 17th, 2021 01:20
The Dancer
dusk arising said:
Oh to have those young experiences again. I used to love to go dancing.
February 16th, 2021 20:43
dusk arising said:
Oh to have those young experiences again. I used to love to go dancing.
February 16th, 2021 20:43
The Dancer
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A fun enjoyable read ) it flowed really nicely
February 16th, 2021 18:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A fun enjoyable read ) it flowed really nicely
February 16th, 2021 18:12
Groundhog day
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow yeah this is a superb poem on the routine and replay of life, its nitty gritty and all. You expressed that in a fab way even if in a wry sigh so poetically. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow yeah this is a superb poem on the routine and replay of life, its nitty gritty and all. You expressed that in a fab way even if in a wry sigh so poetically. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:21
Groundhog day
dusk arising said:
The story of all our sad lives at the moment Heatherbee, though aptly told here.
I\'m going to have to try and put your arm up your back to get you to comment on some of the other good and regular poetry posted here on MPS you know. You are a good and welcome member of this lil old community of writers and it would be grand to see you interacting with some of us with your comments..... nudge nudge.
February 15th, 2021 04:09
dusk arising said:
The story of all our sad lives at the moment Heatherbee, though aptly told here.
I\'m going to have to try and put your arm up your back to get you to comment on some of the other good and regular poetry posted here on MPS you know. You are a good and welcome member of this lil old community of writers and it would be grand to see you interacting with some of us with your comments..... nudge nudge.
February 15th, 2021 04:09
My valentine
L. B. Mek said:
What a brilliantly relatable dedication you\'ve penned dear Poet
so grounded, as true as that feel of grass in your grasp, as wonderous as that sunshine warmth on your cheeks: whilst toiling over your fields...
superheroes all: who
choose to do add value
to everything in their lives
by simply, admiring it - for what it is
not needing to glorify
or valuate, in order to appreciate...
February 15th, 2021 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
What a brilliantly relatable dedication you\'ve penned dear Poet
so grounded, as true as that feel of grass in your grasp, as wonderous as that sunshine warmth on your cheeks: whilst toiling over your fields...
superheroes all: who
choose to do add value
to everything in their lives
by simply, admiring it - for what it is
not needing to glorify
or valuate, in order to appreciate...
February 15th, 2021 04:03
Groundhog day
Doggerel Dave said:
like it very much - you have certainly tuned into the zeitgeist today. Or was it yesterday, or tomorrow?
February 15th, 2021 03:42
Doggerel Dave said:
like it very much - you have certainly tuned into the zeitgeist today. Or was it yesterday, or tomorrow?
February 15th, 2021 03:42
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