Comments received on poems by Chris Duffy
Uncle Arthur and the Snail.
tallisman said:
Chris, you’ve done bit again! Brill!
April 29th, 2022 13:41
tallisman said:
Chris, you’ve done bit again! Brill!
April 29th, 2022 13:41
The Maze.
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
The Maze.
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
The Maze.
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks you. Did kinda throw it down.
I will revisit and tidy it up.
I get so caught up in the subject matter, I forget to format.
Very kind feedback.
Thanks again.
April 15th, 2022 23:07
The Maze.
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
took me by the hand and
lead me along a rhythmic
trail
I was not expecting the
sudden ending such
contrast as abrupt as
the discovery
Most enjoyable
have you considered losing commas and full stops?
Here is a verse but unfortunately
this text input will not allow me double spaces Please imagine the replaced spaces
Do you remember the maze? he asked The thing the old farmer made?
Of bushes and hay bales and wood
I’d hate to get lost in the maze he said I’d get out as soon as I could
I often do this unless I specifically want a comma for emphasis
suspense or visual effect
2spaces comma Three spaces for a period
Two spaces in place of quotation marks I say
I feel it easy to read without hooks and dots clutter The eyes naturally
suggest pausing at a longer break between words for about a comma length
April 15th, 2022 18:28
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
took me by the hand and
lead me along a rhythmic
trail
I was not expecting the
sudden ending such
contrast as abrupt as
the discovery
Most enjoyable
have you considered losing commas and full stops?
Here is a verse but unfortunately
this text input will not allow me double spaces Please imagine the replaced spaces
Do you remember the maze? he asked The thing the old farmer made?
Of bushes and hay bales and wood
I’d hate to get lost in the maze he said I’d get out as soon as I could
I often do this unless I specifically want a comma for emphasis
suspense or visual effect
2spaces comma Three spaces for a period
Two spaces in place of quotation marks I say
I feel it easy to read without hooks and dots clutter The eyes naturally
suggest pausing at a longer break between words for about a comma length
April 15th, 2022 18:28
Linford the fugitive tortoise,
Rozina said:
This is so funny! Had a good laugh. Your poem has brightened my morning. Have a good day!
April 13th, 2022 21:03
Rozina said:
This is so funny! Had a good laugh. Your poem has brightened my morning. Have a good day!
April 13th, 2022 21:03
Linford the fugitive tortoise,
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Nice rhythmic flow and humour that dampened my eyes
If I may offer suggestion suit within doesn\'t sound right because it is without
wearing a shell that fits him
adds to the absurdity of searching
and wearing a suit that fits blends one in as does a tortoise\'s shell
What do you think?
April 13th, 2022 17:55
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
Nice rhythmic flow and humour that dampened my eyes
If I may offer suggestion suit within doesn\'t sound right because it is without
wearing a shell that fits him
adds to the absurdity of searching
and wearing a suit that fits blends one in as does a tortoise\'s shell
What do you think?
April 13th, 2022 17:55
Linford the fugitive tortoise,
Dahlia said:
Brilliantly penned, an enjoyable witty short story, with an awesome mischievous character, a super read, enjoyed through and through...
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 14:53
Dahlia said:
Brilliantly penned, an enjoyable witty short story, with an awesome mischievous character, a super read, enjoyed through and through...
Dahlia
April 13th, 2022 14:53
Linford the fugitive tortoise,
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahahahaha I love this one, it\'s hilarious and my daughter\'s name is Nelly, hahahaha, definitely going in my favorites, thank you for a great piece Chris
April 13th, 2022 14:25
Crowns4Christ said:
Hahahahaha I love this one, it\'s hilarious and my daughter\'s name is Nelly, hahahaha, definitely going in my favorites, thank you for a great piece Chris
April 13th, 2022 14:25
The Maze.
Chris Duffy said:
Good morning Rosina.
Thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings and for the kind words.
Regards
Chris Duffy.
April 13th, 2022 01:33
Chris Duffy said:
Good morning Rosina.
Thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings and for the kind words.
Regards
Chris Duffy.
April 13th, 2022 01:33
The Maze.
Chris Duffy said:
Good morning Rosina.
Thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings and for the kind words.
Regards
Chris Duffy.
April 13th, 2022 01:33
Chris Duffy said:
Good morning Rosina.
Thank you for taking the time to read my ramblings and for the kind words.
Regards
Chris Duffy.
April 13th, 2022 01:33
The Maze.
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing.
April 13th, 2022 00:44
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing.
April 13th, 2022 00:44
The Maze.
Dahlia said:
such a well written story with a tragic ending
I\'m sure this plays a role on why so
many people off themselves during
the worst of pandemic so sad, they simply
cannot figure out the slopes of life.....
Dahlia
April 12th, 2022 19:15
Dahlia said:
such a well written story with a tragic ending
I\'m sure this plays a role on why so
many people off themselves during
the worst of pandemic so sad, they simply
cannot figure out the slopes of life.....
Dahlia
April 12th, 2022 19:15
The Maze.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remember
when we were kids” he said
“Taking chances
whilst admiring glances
made those endless evenings
full of fun.
We didn’t know our lives had just begun,”
“But life is full of obstacles,” he sighed,
“ They stop you getting to the other side.”
You simply can’t remember
how you reached
the place you find yourself right now.
You don’t know when,
you don’t know how.\'
(so much wisdom
you\'ve weaved into this, heartachingly
acute, portrayal of so many people\'s
daily, realities..)
and if your words were inspired by real life events
I\'m sorry for what you\'ve had to go through..
this is a read, I\'ll remember for a long time
thank you! for choosing to share with us..
Brilliant!
April 12th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Remember
when we were kids” he said
“Taking chances
whilst admiring glances
made those endless evenings
full of fun.
We didn’t know our lives had just begun,”
“But life is full of obstacles,” he sighed,
“ They stop you getting to the other side.”
You simply can’t remember
how you reached
the place you find yourself right now.
You don’t know when,
you don’t know how.\'
(so much wisdom
you\'ve weaved into this, heartachingly
acute, portrayal of so many people\'s
daily, realities..)
and if your words were inspired by real life events
I\'m sorry for what you\'ve had to go through..
this is a read, I\'ll remember for a long time
thank you! for choosing to share with us..
Brilliant!
April 12th, 2022 04:58
The Maze.
Fay Slimm. said:
Life can appear like that maze to some on the edge of ending it all - - - sad but familiar in these troublesome days Chris - - a tale that gives much food for thought -
April 12th, 2022 01:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Life can appear like that maze to some on the edge of ending it all - - - sad but familiar in these troublesome days Chris - - a tale that gives much food for thought -
April 12th, 2022 01:02
Weird Family
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your humour and rhyming ability in this chuckle-a-minute tale of a fairly familiar family or two I swear I have known.......... great stuff.
April 12th, 2022 00:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Love your humour and rhyming ability in this chuckle-a-minute tale of a fairly familiar family or two I swear I have known.......... great stuff.
April 12th, 2022 00:54
Black Dog.
tallisman said:
Hi Chris, discovered your works this morning and Thankyou. A real pleasure to read,
April 12th, 2022 00:42
tallisman said:
Hi Chris, discovered your works this morning and Thankyou. A real pleasure to read,
April 12th, 2022 00:42
The Maze.
tallisman said:
Thanks Chris, a good tale and enjoyed the rhythm and flow, good job!
April 12th, 2022 00:22
tallisman said:
Thanks Chris, a good tale and enjoyed the rhythm and flow, good job!
April 12th, 2022 00:22
Weird Family
Chris Duffy said:
Morning Dave.
I hope you’re well.
Thanks for the kind comments.
I must admit I was laughing whilst writing this nonsense.
Incidentally, I was once told that every family has at least one strange member and if you’re sat there thinking who it could be.
If you’re really trying to think and you cannot recall who it might be…………
It’s probably you 😀
Have a nice day.
March 23rd, 2022 01:37
Chris Duffy said:
Morning Dave.
I hope you’re well.
Thanks for the kind comments.
I must admit I was laughing whilst writing this nonsense.
Incidentally, I was once told that every family has at least one strange member and if you’re sat there thinking who it could be.
If you’re really trying to think and you cannot recall who it might be…………
It’s probably you 😀
Have a nice day.
March 23rd, 2022 01:37
Weird Family
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t believe a word of it Chris, in your case: but as a forensic study of feral folk, let me tell ya - them do exist.
Great laugh. Prize goes to Uncle George in the cinema........
March 22nd, 2022 19:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t believe a word of it Chris, in your case: but as a forensic study of feral folk, let me tell ya - them do exist.
Great laugh. Prize goes to Uncle George in the cinema........
March 22nd, 2022 19:56
Weird Family
Chris Duffy said:
Thank you very much.
It was just a bit of silliness really but I laughed as I was writing it so I thought I’d publish.
Thanks again.
March 22nd, 2022 09:22
Chris Duffy said:
Thank you very much.
It was just a bit of silliness really but I laughed as I was writing it so I thought I’d publish.
Thanks again.
March 22nd, 2022 09:22
Weird Family
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful celebration of reality
no pretence, just a sincere squeezing
of life\'s bittersweet, gifts
demonstrating perspective\'s, wisdom
that we utilise, in choosing to accept
our circumstances in life..
really like how you, welded
the jagged edges of your spiky poetry, bravely
like your Auntie Maud
and boldly, revelled in all your quirky gaiety
like your Uncle George...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
loved this!
lmao! 🤣
March 22nd, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful celebration of reality
no pretence, just a sincere squeezing
of life\'s bittersweet, gifts
demonstrating perspective\'s, wisdom
that we utilise, in choosing to accept
our circumstances in life..
really like how you, welded
the jagged edges of your spiky poetry, bravely
like your Auntie Maud
and boldly, revelled in all your quirky gaiety
like your Uncle George...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
loved this!
lmao! 🤣
March 22nd, 2022 07:55
Booze.
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks. All my writings are a reflection of things I’ve either seen or experienced, so I use real photos. Mostly.
Thanks again for the kind feedback.
March 14th, 2022 22:58
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks. All my writings are a reflection of things I’ve either seen or experienced, so I use real photos. Mostly.
Thanks again for the kind feedback.
March 14th, 2022 22:58
Booze.
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks. All my writings are a reflection of things I’ve either seen or experienced, so I use real photos. Mostly.
Thanks again for the kind feedback.
March 14th, 2022 22:58
Chris Duffy said:
Thanks. All my writings are a reflection of things I’ve either seen or experienced, so I use real photos. Mostly.
Thanks again for the kind feedback.
March 14th, 2022 22:58
Booze.
James Michael said:
Great poem that many of us can relate to. Booze can be many things. In the end, a poor choice.
An appropriate photo by the way.
March 14th, 2022 22:38
James Michael said:
Great poem that many of us can relate to. Booze can be many things. In the end, a poor choice.
An appropriate photo by the way.
March 14th, 2022 22:38
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