Comments received on poems by BusyB



Don\'t let the buggers beat you...
Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful write BusyB. In spite of the pain of the passed you have shown your resilience and come forward as a stronger person and that strength will always be with you taking you into a better time. Well done.

Andy

September 18th, 2021 00:20

Don\'t let the buggers beat you...
dusk arising said:

The wonders of what poetry can do for us with its cathartic ways. More especially joining in with the spirit of other poets who have trod a similar path of life, wherever they may be along that path, can be a reassuring, comforting place to be.

September 17th, 2021 14:43

Don\'t let the buggers beat you...
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, we have to watch out for the b*****s in life!

September 17th, 2021 10:28

Don\'t let the buggers beat you...
L. B. Mek said:

\'I forge my way through with positivity
I enjoy time with those who understand me
I have found a way to voice my life
Through the art of putting pen to paper
And I Won\'t let the buggers beat me....\'
Awesome!
what great energy to put out into the world, worded so relatable and sincere!
thank you for sharing, dear poet

September 17th, 2021 05:14

My dearest father, forever with me
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for sharing this darkness in your life and like the comment say above, even bigger thanks for brave enough to put this in the light.

Much peace and respect
Keep up the write

September 14th, 2021 13:20

My dearest father, forever with me
BusyB said:

Thanks, this happened 20 years ago. My brothers and I have learnt to live with it, even though it seems like it happened yesterday. X

September 14th, 2021 07:06

My dearest father, forever with me
L. B. Mek said:

how horrid, a reminder
that there\'s no Nightmare, as brutal and reprehensibly sudden: as reality..
\'Brutally they covered his head, with a strip from a brown belt
Their knives causing most of the damage
They throttled the life out of a defenceless
Family loving man
They insulted him with their careless actions
And left him to die, alone\'
I\'m so sorry for your tragic loss, I laud your bravery for sharing something so raw and personal, in such a frank and stark manner..
I pray the universe gifts you the strength to find a path forward,
you and the rest of your hurting family and friends..

September 14th, 2021 05:08

Panic attack
BusyB said:

Thank you everyone!!

September 14th, 2021 02:41

Panic attack
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes you will do it BusyB, moving into a new part of your life is a wonderful adventure that will bring so much happiness for you.

Andy

September 14th, 2021 00:50

Panic attack
Fozzy said:

Have never suffered from panic attacks but you have given me a powerful insight into them...good luck

September 13th, 2021 09:21

Panic attack
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Anxiety is difficult to deal with . I’m sorry you feel this way .

September 13th, 2021 08:00

Panic attack
L. B. Mek said:

imbued with a wonderful message, write\'s like yours
are why \'poetically humanist\' site\'s like MPS
can be utilised to impact and help peoples, everyday lives
in a genuinely meaningful way..
thanks for choosing to share

September 13th, 2021 07:26

Panic attack
orchidee said:

A separate comment, so as not to pinch your \'reply box\' to Teddy!
Teddy knows all she gotta be panicky over is my singing! lol. You too, I hope.

September 13th, 2021 05:01

Panic attack
orchidee said:

It\'s understandable B.
Maybe think of who those b******s are who are trying to grind you down, as the saying goes. Is the fear of doing something, meeting someone, etc worse than actually doing the thing or meeting in-person?
Most people are more concerned, even if over-concerned, about themselves. Or just going on with their daily lives, I find.
Pep talk over! lol.

September 13th, 2021 04:59

Red Hat
Goldfinch60 said:

You have mentioned that \'C\' word before December.
But let us Samba anyway.

Andy

September 8th, 2021 00:16

Red Hat
BusyB said:

🤣

September 7th, 2021 07:51

Red Hat
Saxon Crow said:

No ooooooooo ooooooo...... Not Christmas poems yet! Arrrrghhhhhh

September 7th, 2021 07:50

Spooning
L. B. Mek said:

kitchen politics, devolving
to our human reality, levels...
like Neil said, very clever
thanks for sharing

September 7th, 2021 03:48

Noodle
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write BusyB.

Andy

September 5th, 2021 01:03

Triangular garden
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A lovely poem ... liked reading this 🙂

September 3rd, 2021 04:09

Triangular garden
rebmasters said:

A lovely reverie & timeless memory. Beautiful ❤️

September 3rd, 2021 04:08

Triangular garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Those stories captured by nature must be so wonderful BusyB.

Andy

September 3rd, 2021 03:24

Partners
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words and a great relationship BusyB

Andy

September 3rd, 2021 02:50

Swaziland
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words BusyB, may that warmth be forever with you.

Andy

September 2nd, 2021 00:38

Swaziland
BusyB said:

Yes Neil!!

September 1st, 2021 06:14

Swaziland
Lorna said:

How nice of you to take us there! I can feel the freedom!

September 1st, 2021 06:11

Swaziland
Thekkinkkattil said:

Nostalgic about your land have you left it. Your poem retains the essence of your land

September 1st, 2021 04:34

Swaziland
Doggerel Dave said:

Good for you - I don\'t know why you left.
Don\'t worry - I\'m a notorious party pooper; but much poetry, for me, could do with a little less romance and a little more realism.

September 1st, 2021 04:28

COVID-19
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately we may have to accept this as always being with us.

Andy

August 31st, 2021 14:43

COVID-19
L. B. Mek said:

true words
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing

August 31st, 2021 06:04

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