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The Eighth Lap
Doggerel Dave said:

Perhaps you are better off out there - providing you can avoid the wolves. The song may not be so wondrous when you are in amongst it.
Clear picture painted.
Take care .

August 14th, 2021 21:38

Kettle
Doggerel Dave said:

Well you have certainly stimulated some whimsy, if the entries directly above are anything to go by.
I have kettle problems of my own - mine splutters and stops if I am in any way in error and sulks for at least half an hour. Ruins my breakfast.
What about a swap - postage costs to be negotiated......

August 11th, 2021 05:42

Kettle
Classicmister said:

When I was boy our kettle used to whistle - Perhaps kettles were happier then!!

August 11th, 2021 03:14

Kettle
Lorna said:

But you do it again! I have one that sputters when I pour it and have to talk to it very severely to make it stop.

August 11th, 2021 03:13

Sorry I Can\'t Do This
Accidental Poet said:

Well, you certainly can write of your emotions jo. Well penned. 👍

August 10th, 2021 19:06

Where Were You?
Lorna said:

I think there is someone in everyone\'s life that we could yearn to say this to - I just loved it\'s lonely message.

August 9th, 2021 06:29

Where Were You?
Doggerel Dave said:

I like what you are saying and how you are saying it.
For me it could do with some (and that doesn\'t mean column yards) context. To whom are you addressing this?

August 9th, 2021 04:14

Yet To Get
Goldfinch60 said:

Fight on Jo, we are all behind you.

Andy

August 9th, 2021 00:10

Yet To Get
Accidental Poet said:

You\'re not alone jo, you\'re here on MPS with all of us. We\'re here with you. But a very emotive write. 👍

August 8th, 2021 19:27

How To Touch A Heart
Accidental Poet said:

\"Hold gently\", look on with appreciating eyes. Very beautiful write here Jo. 😉

August 4th, 2021 18:40

How To Touch A Heart
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh come on - don\'t keep me in suspenders. - what was in there?
Ah - there\'s a title... still beating, was it?
Neat little piece, appealing in a funny kind of way...Thanks.

August 4th, 2021 05:59

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