Comments received on poems by jo
The Further Down, The Less You Can See
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how deep you dig that hole if you just look up the light is there for you so start to climb towards the light.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how deep you dig that hole if you just look up the light is there for you so start to climb towards the light.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:17
The Further Down, The Less You Can See
Doggerel Dave said:
Now there\'s a salutary warning about social media if ever I\'ve read one....
September 21st, 2021 05:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Now there\'s a salutary warning about social media if ever I\'ve read one....
September 21st, 2021 05:53
The Further Down, The Less You Can See
rebmasters said:
Love the concept & your modern style. Keep experimenting & expanding minds - I\'d like to read more from you x
September 21st, 2021 03:41
rebmasters said:
Love the concept & your modern style. Keep experimenting & expanding minds - I\'d like to read more from you x
September 21st, 2021 03:41
The Further Down, The Less You Can See
dusk arising said:
Hmmm if this is for real - a part of your life ... then...
When you\'re in a hole that deep, stop digging.
September 21st, 2021 03:03
dusk arising said:
Hmmm if this is for real - a part of your life ... then...
When you\'re in a hole that deep, stop digging.
September 21st, 2021 03:03
Actual Reality
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful
glad you\'ve experienced something so impactful but in a good way,
thanks for sharing
September 20th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful
glad you\'ve experienced something so impactful but in a good way,
thanks for sharing
September 20th, 2021 07:19
Hard To Read
Goldfinch60 said:
As d a has said some people are hard to read, they obviously have something to hide and if that is the case trust is a hard thing to giver them. If you just be yourself in this world trust becomes a great thing in life.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
As d a has said some people are hard to read, they obviously have something to hide and if that is the case trust is a hard thing to giver them. If you just be yourself in this world trust becomes a great thing in life.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:25
Hard To Read
Doggerel Dave said:
Very much agree with dusk\'s PS. And if after, there is no change then to walk away is a very viable option - no use in the continuation of a relationship with you know not what.
PS: Punctuation marks - wot about the occasional full stop?. _love a little argument - pay no heed 😊
September 17th, 2021 18:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Very much agree with dusk\'s PS. And if after, there is no change then to walk away is a very viable option - no use in the continuation of a relationship with you know not what.
PS: Punctuation marks - wot about the occasional full stop?. _love a little argument - pay no heed 😊
September 17th, 2021 18:16
Hard To Read
dusk arising said:
Nicely composed. Some people are hard to read because what you see is a facade they have created either to hide behind or they think its a better version of what they are. Usually this is because they simply don\'t know themselves well enough to know they are hiding something which is attractive and worthy anyway.
P.S. pointing that out to them in the right circumstances can be a winner to reaching the true feelings in another person (hint).
September 17th, 2021 14:39
dusk arising said:
Nicely composed. Some people are hard to read because what you see is a facade they have created either to hide behind or they think its a better version of what they are. Usually this is because they simply don\'t know themselves well enough to know they are hiding something which is attractive and worthy anyway.
P.S. pointing that out to them in the right circumstances can be a winner to reaching the true feelings in another person (hint).
September 17th, 2021 14:39
Hard To Read
L. B. Mek said:
yup, and they say studying is supposed to end with your school days
they lied, its only after that it begins: life\'s lessons are far too real...
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
September 17th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
yup, and they say studying is supposed to end with your school days
they lied, its only after that it begins: life\'s lessons are far too real...
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
September 17th, 2021 05:19
Sudden Death
L. B. Mek said:
such a haunting read,
when we hear some of the unimaginable atrocities that occur in the world, everyday
and we\'re stunned, aghast and made speechless, this is how we feel I think:
\' bottom layer of my guts suddenly got taken away
So everything dropped and went out of place
And had a very feint ache
And in my head
Things started tightening
A little bit of twisting too
And grey and black started seeping in
And seeping out from what was already there
To hear it was a shock
To speak it made it real
So the tears came
But words didn’t release it
It stayed there all day\'
(if this write, was about people
who were close to you
I\'m sorry for your loss, dear poet)
September 16th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
such a haunting read,
when we hear some of the unimaginable atrocities that occur in the world, everyday
and we\'re stunned, aghast and made speechless, this is how we feel I think:
\' bottom layer of my guts suddenly got taken away
So everything dropped and went out of place
And had a very feint ache
And in my head
Things started tightening
A little bit of twisting too
And grey and black started seeping in
And seeping out from what was already there
To hear it was a shock
To speak it made it real
So the tears came
But words didn’t release it
It stayed there all day\'
(if this write, was about people
who were close to you
I\'m sorry for your loss, dear poet)
September 16th, 2021 05:49
What Happened
Goldfinch60 said:
May your vine grow into the light of life that is there before you Jo.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May your vine grow into the light of life that is there before you Jo.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:29
Fish Rush
L. B. Mek said:
were you in a rhyming mood? lol
thanks for sharing, fun
September 14th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
were you in a rhyming mood? lol
thanks for sharing, fun
September 14th, 2021 05:09
Sick Of Waiting
Fozzy said:
They say you never find your dreams where you expect them to be.
September 13th, 2021 09:33
Fozzy said:
They say you never find your dreams where you expect them to be.
September 13th, 2021 09:33
Cheesecake
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
this reminds me of one my favourite short poems, from one of the all-time great\'s, titled
\'This, is just to say\':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34483 )
September 13th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
this reminds me of one my favourite short poems, from one of the all-time great\'s, titled
\'This, is just to say\':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34483 )
September 13th, 2021 07:23
Cheesecake
orchidee said:
Yummy! Did you have 5 mins to write this poem before the cheesecake was all scoffed?! lol.
September 13th, 2021 05:38
orchidee said:
Yummy! Did you have 5 mins to write this poem before the cheesecake was all scoffed?! lol.
September 13th, 2021 05:38
Sick Of Waiting
aDarkerMind said:
have you tried looking rather than just waiting?
September 12th, 2021 05:37
aDarkerMind said:
have you tried looking rather than just waiting?
September 12th, 2021 05:37
Sick Of Waiting
Doggerel Dave said:
That is because you are waiting, Jo.....Get on and do life... Extraordinary times, I agree - but just do it.
September 12th, 2021 05:32
Doggerel Dave said:
That is because you are waiting, Jo.....Get on and do life... Extraordinary times, I agree - but just do it.
September 12th, 2021 05:32
A Palette Of Colours
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, and offers so much depth for personalised interpretation..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
September 10th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, and offers so much depth for personalised interpretation..
thank you for sharing, dear poet
September 10th, 2021 05:35
A Palette Of Colours
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this on such a grey day ............ very muchly enjoyed too I must say ................ You are a little ray of :) Neville
September 10th, 2021 04:10
Neville said:
I am so glad I found this on such a grey day ............ very muchly enjoyed too I must say ................ You are a little ray of :) Neville
September 10th, 2021 04:10
The Silent House
L. B. Mek said:
someone moving-in or are you moving out, either way I think you captured that uncertainty which accompanies any new beginning or chapter of our lives, really well
thanks for sharing
September 7th, 2021 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
someone moving-in or are you moving out, either way I think you captured that uncertainty which accompanies any new beginning or chapter of our lives, really well
thanks for sharing
September 7th, 2021 05:59
Boring Tasks
L. B. Mek said:
why do I like these?
I nod not knowing why
maybe, trying to convince myself
the chores that await me
\'won\'t las long\': mercifully... lol
thanks for sharing
September 6th, 2021 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
why do I like these?
I nod not knowing why
maybe, trying to convince myself
the chores that await me
\'won\'t las long\': mercifully... lol
thanks for sharing
September 6th, 2021 07:25
Boring Tasks
Thekkinkkattil said:
You are right they have to be done and they wont last long. Nice read thank you
September 6th, 2021 06:43
Thekkinkkattil said:
You are right they have to be done and they wont last long. Nice read thank you
September 6th, 2021 06:43
Headphones
Caring dove said:
Creative In your words ... liked this poem . It’s engaging to read
Almost makes me think of someone we can’t stop thinking about ... or thoughts which won’t leave
September 5th, 2021 09:47
Caring dove said:
Creative In your words ... liked this poem . It’s engaging to read
Almost makes me think of someone we can’t stop thinking about ... or thoughts which won’t leave
September 5th, 2021 09:47
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