Comments received on poems by jo



Today\'s Tune
Goldfinch60 said:

May that duet flourish in your world Jo.

Andy

October 14th, 2021 01:06

Lose To Gain
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, we cannot be trapped in one place.

Andy

October 11th, 2021 15:02

Été
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine soothing words Jo.

Andy

October 6th, 2021 00:28

Été
rebmasters said:

ta poésie est comme la musique xx

October 5th, 2021 10:14

Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\')
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Jo, we all have our weaknesses but hope that we can overcome them.

Andy

October 5th, 2021 00:56

Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\')
L. B. Mek said:

every time I come across that film, I think
there\'s no way, anyone who doesn\'t know that period of History
can fathom,
just how Influential these events were, to determining
an entire Nation\'s future
in factual based, Reality...
(but I really enjoyed reading your
poetic interpretation,
a great write, thanks for sharing)

October 4th, 2021 06:59

Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\')
Teddy.15 said:

dear Jo, so very elegant, a comparison very well made, we are all delicate in our own way. beautiful.

October 4th, 2021 04:19

Self Care
Lyriclitty said:

Lol good one love it ❤️

October 3rd, 2021 11:23

The Ascent
Goldfinch60 said:

Joy is always there
When your life is full of love
In all life stages.

Good one Jo but I have found joy in all my life\'s highs and lows.

Andy

October 2nd, 2021 00:43

The Ascent
orchidee said:

Erm, I started from the top, then I fell down the hill! lol.

October 1st, 2021 06:32

The Ascent
Teddy.15 said:

Kudos 👍 a brilliant one, my friend. Let\'s start at the bottom to get to the top and such a clever.message . marvelous work.

October 1st, 2021 05:40

It May Take Taking A Chance
Goldfinch60 said:

In the UK when the lottery first started in the 1990s until the day I retired in 2012 I was always in a lottery syndicate of a dozen or so people and in all that time the most we won was £100.
Good write jo, Teddy was write it is more a senryu than haiku, she described the difference between the two.

Andy

October 1st, 2021 00:29

It May Take Taking A Chance
L. B. Mek said:

Ha!
and still some walk around with their hands outstretched brazenly, Expecting
and Waiting
and Demanding...
(in the wise words of Forest Gump
\'stupid is: as stupid does
and that\'s all I gotta say \'bout daat\') lol

September 30th, 2021 05:15

It May Take Taking A Chance
Teddy.15 said:

This is a senryu because it is to do with emotion? A good one too. And may I say vice versa

How to guarantee
You will win the lottery:
Do buy a ticket

I hope you don\'t mind I adore 5/7/5 poems

September 30th, 2021 05:09

Do You Like Me?
orchidee said:

Do I like you? Yes and No!
Doh! Do make up your mind, Orchi! lol.
Fat lot of help I am.

September 28th, 2021 02:02

Do You Like Me?
Goldfinch60 said:

So many questions when those first times near each other. They will be answered.

Andy

September 28th, 2021 00:17

Do You Like Me?
Trenz Pruca said:

Well I like you Jo and your poetry also. Thank you.

September 27th, 2021 17:54

Do You Like Me?
Eugene said:

You will know
By the fruit
But don\'t wait for Harvest.
Stand back
Observe
Let the grass emerge
But save those precious moments
They are the gems of time.

September 27th, 2021 08:22

Do You Like Me?
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, been there got the t-shirt
burnt-it to a crisp, after
tenderly caressed it, after - the after
cherished its presence in my skeleton cupboard,
after - the after: from salvaged nothingness, for what matters in the lessons, after...
then resuscitated, for it to all start again, at that quintessential - new. New: Beginning
(connected with this write so effortlessly, mainly due to your ease of wording, thank you for sharing)

September 27th, 2021 06:49

Why Choose My Table?
ron parrish aka wordman said:

we never forget

September 26th, 2021 13:54

And So, The Battle Begins
dusk arising said:

it\'s the christian way of things, ever since the crusades of the middle ages. Look at the mess that created, there would have been no 9/11 if not for christian war mongering.

September 24th, 2021 09:26

And So, The Battle Begins
Seek said:

In a nutshell, you speak of a reality cast aside by many, much to their chagrin. The power of truth should never, ever surrender to the truth of power. Because truth does not belong to power. Thank you for this evocative piece.

September 24th, 2021 07:24

And So, The Battle Begins
L. B. Mek said:

in a word: \'Overwhelmed\'
is how it feel at times
and that\'s what your write managed to accentuate and distil, thank you

September 24th, 2021 05:50

And So, The Battle Begins
rebmasters said:

A beautiful & haunting image:

\'The world still turns
Like a giant carousel without the smiles.\'

A wonderful poem x

September 24th, 2021 03:50

Chasing Your Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

that out of body, surreal experience
of trepidation, right
at that final doorstep, where all our aspirations await, to be realised..
Trepidation, born out of years of failure\'s pot noodle meals, where
mirages, adorned our every waking scene: of Blinkered hope...
(a relatable write, thanks for sharing)

September 23rd, 2021 06:17

One Day, Lord
Noah said:

\"Let me appreciate but not rely\"
love this. keep it up!


September 22nd, 2021 03:35

The Further Down, The Less You Can See
Goldfinch60 said:

No matter how deep you dig that hole if you just look up the light is there for you so start to climb towards the light.

Andy

September 22nd, 2021 00:17

The Further Down, The Less You Can See
Doggerel Dave said:

Now there\'s a salutary warning about social media if ever I\'ve read one....

September 21st, 2021 05:53

The Further Down, The Less You Can See
rebmasters said:

Love the concept & your modern style. Keep experimenting & expanding minds - I\'d like to read more from you x

September 21st, 2021 03:41

The Further Down, The Less You Can See
dusk arising said:

Hmmm if this is for real - a part of your life ... then...
When you\'re in a hole that deep, stop digging.

September 21st, 2021 03:03

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