Comments received on poems by jo
Lonely Nights
Paul Bell said:
Never an exit when you need one.
A bit like the uncircle of life.
July 26th, 2022 04:18
Paul Bell said:
Never an exit when you need one.
A bit like the uncircle of life.
July 26th, 2022 04:18
Suitcases, Backpacks and Satchels
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the past, where they belong...!\'
(a relatable topic
and a question, we\'ve all
asked
a million time\'s before, I\'m sure..)
thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2022 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'in the past, where they belong...!\'
(a relatable topic
and a question, we\'ve all
asked
a million time\'s before, I\'m sure..)
thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2022 06:18
A Cushion For The Heart
dusk arising said:
The safe place we all need at those times we are broken.
Beautifully written. Into my favourites.
December 16th, 2021 03:04
dusk arising said:
The safe place we all need at those times we are broken.
Beautifully written. Into my favourites.
December 16th, 2021 03:04
A Cushion For The Heart
L. B. Mek said:
what a lovely poem, thank you
for choosing to share
December 14th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
what a lovely poem, thank you
for choosing to share
December 14th, 2021 05:07
A Cushion For The Heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Truly lovely words 🙂
December 14th, 2021 03:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Truly lovely words 🙂
December 14th, 2021 03:36
Today\'s Tune
Goldfinch60 said:
May that duet flourish in your world Jo.
Andy
October 14th, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
May that duet flourish in your world Jo.
Andy
October 14th, 2021 01:06
Lose To Gain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we cannot be trapped in one place.
Andy
October 11th, 2021 15:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we cannot be trapped in one place.
Andy
October 11th, 2021 15:02
Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\')
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Jo, we all have our weaknesses but hope that we can overcome them.
Andy
October 5th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Jo, we all have our weaknesses but hope that we can overcome them.
Andy
October 5th, 2021 00:56
Heart of a Girl (A response to the film: \'The Other Boleyn Girl\')
L. B. Mek said:
every time I come across that film, I think
there\'s no way, anyone who doesn\'t know that period of History
can fathom,
just how Influential these events were, to determining
an entire Nation\'s future
in factual based, Reality...
(but I really enjoyed reading your
poetic interpretation,
a great write, thanks for sharing)
October 4th, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
every time I come across that film, I think
there\'s no way, anyone who doesn\'t know that period of History
can fathom,
just how Influential these events were, to determining
an entire Nation\'s future
in factual based, Reality...
(but I really enjoyed reading your
poetic interpretation,
a great write, thanks for sharing)
October 4th, 2021 06:59
The Ascent
Goldfinch60 said:
Joy is always there
When your life is full of love
In all life stages.
Good one Jo but I have found joy in all my life\'s highs and lows.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Joy is always there
When your life is full of love
In all life stages.
Good one Jo but I have found joy in all my life\'s highs and lows.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 00:43
The Ascent
orchidee said:
Erm, I started from the top, then I fell down the hill! lol.
October 1st, 2021 06:32
orchidee said:
Erm, I started from the top, then I fell down the hill! lol.
October 1st, 2021 06:32
It May Take Taking A Chance
Goldfinch60 said:
In the UK when the lottery first started in the 1990s until the day I retired in 2012 I was always in a lottery syndicate of a dozen or so people and in all that time the most we won was £100.
Good write jo, Teddy was write it is more a senryu than haiku, she described the difference between the two.
Andy
October 1st, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
In the UK when the lottery first started in the 1990s until the day I retired in 2012 I was always in a lottery syndicate of a dozen or so people and in all that time the most we won was £100.
Good write jo, Teddy was write it is more a senryu than haiku, she described the difference between the two.
Andy
October 1st, 2021 00:29
It May Take Taking A Chance
L. B. Mek said:
Ha!
and still some walk around with their hands outstretched brazenly, Expecting
and Waiting
and Demanding...
(in the wise words of Forest Gump
\'stupid is: as stupid does
and that\'s all I gotta say \'bout daat\') lol
September 30th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
Ha!
and still some walk around with their hands outstretched brazenly, Expecting
and Waiting
and Demanding...
(in the wise words of Forest Gump
\'stupid is: as stupid does
and that\'s all I gotta say \'bout daat\') lol
September 30th, 2021 05:15
Do You Like Me?
orchidee said:
Do I like you? Yes and No!
Doh! Do make up your mind, Orchi! lol.
Fat lot of help I am.
September 28th, 2021 02:02
orchidee said:
Do I like you? Yes and No!
Doh! Do make up your mind, Orchi! lol.
Fat lot of help I am.
September 28th, 2021 02:02
Do You Like Me?
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when those first times near each other. They will be answered.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions when those first times near each other. They will be answered.
Andy
September 28th, 2021 00:17
Do You Like Me?
Trenz Pruca said:
Well I like you Jo and your poetry also. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:54
Trenz Pruca said:
Well I like you Jo and your poetry also. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 17:54
Do You Like Me?
Eugene said:
You will know
By the fruit
But don\'t wait for Harvest.
Stand back
Observe
Let the grass emerge
But save those precious moments
They are the gems of time.
September 27th, 2021 08:22
Eugene said:
You will know
By the fruit
But don\'t wait for Harvest.
Stand back
Observe
Let the grass emerge
But save those precious moments
They are the gems of time.
September 27th, 2021 08:22
Do You Like Me?
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, been there got the t-shirt
burnt-it to a crisp, after
tenderly caressed it, after - the after
cherished its presence in my skeleton cupboard,
after - the after: from salvaged nothingness, for what matters in the lessons, after...
then resuscitated, for it to all start again, at that quintessential - new. New: Beginning
(connected with this write so effortlessly, mainly due to your ease of wording, thank you for sharing)
September 27th, 2021 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, been there got the t-shirt
burnt-it to a crisp, after
tenderly caressed it, after - the after
cherished its presence in my skeleton cupboard,
after - the after: from salvaged nothingness, for what matters in the lessons, after...
then resuscitated, for it to all start again, at that quintessential - new. New: Beginning
(connected with this write so effortlessly, mainly due to your ease of wording, thank you for sharing)
September 27th, 2021 06:49
And So, The Battle Begins
dusk arising said:
it\'s the christian way of things, ever since the crusades of the middle ages. Look at the mess that created, there would have been no 9/11 if not for christian war mongering.
September 24th, 2021 09:26
dusk arising said:
it\'s the christian way of things, ever since the crusades of the middle ages. Look at the mess that created, there would have been no 9/11 if not for christian war mongering.
September 24th, 2021 09:26
And So, The Battle Begins
Seek said:
In a nutshell, you speak of a reality cast aside by many, much to their chagrin. The power of truth should never, ever surrender to the truth of power. Because truth does not belong to power. Thank you for this evocative piece.
September 24th, 2021 07:24
Seek said:
In a nutshell, you speak of a reality cast aside by many, much to their chagrin. The power of truth should never, ever surrender to the truth of power. Because truth does not belong to power. Thank you for this evocative piece.
September 24th, 2021 07:24
And So, The Battle Begins
L. B. Mek said:
in a word: \'Overwhelmed\'
is how it feel at times
and that\'s what your write managed to accentuate and distil, thank you
September 24th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
in a word: \'Overwhelmed\'
is how it feel at times
and that\'s what your write managed to accentuate and distil, thank you
September 24th, 2021 05:50
And So, The Battle Begins
rebmasters said:
A beautiful & haunting image:
\'The world still turns
Like a giant carousel without the smiles.\'
A wonderful poem x
September 24th, 2021 03:50
rebmasters said:
A beautiful & haunting image:
\'The world still turns
Like a giant carousel without the smiles.\'
A wonderful poem x
September 24th, 2021 03:50
Chasing Your Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
that out of body, surreal experience
of trepidation, right
at that final doorstep, where all our aspirations await, to be realised..
Trepidation, born out of years of failure\'s pot noodle meals, where
mirages, adorned our every waking scene: of Blinkered hope...
(a relatable write, thanks for sharing)
September 23rd, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
that out of body, surreal experience
of trepidation, right
at that final doorstep, where all our aspirations await, to be realised..
Trepidation, born out of years of failure\'s pot noodle meals, where
mirages, adorned our every waking scene: of Blinkered hope...
(a relatable write, thanks for sharing)
September 23rd, 2021 06:17
One Day, Lord
Noah said:
\"Let me appreciate but not rely\"
love this. keep it up!
September 22nd, 2021 03:35
Noah said:
\"Let me appreciate but not rely\"
love this. keep it up!
September 22nd, 2021 03:35
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