Unending, Forever
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful dedication
made, even more poignant
by the context you added
thanks for sharing
(you should share with her these words
may help you find your \'good\'
in her goodbye, finding closure
is a necessity, not a choice
something we have to do
not only for ourselves
but for the next, kind soul
who is willing
to take a chance on us)

November 25th, 2021 04:51

Pasts Like Stars
L. B. Mek said:

found this to be a really poignant read
wonderful imagery, loved this line
\'their light moves on eternally
and gracefully un-mired.\'
thanks for choosing to share

August 17th, 2021 04:41

Innocent Feet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A well expressed poem . Good choice of words )

August 9th, 2021 11:51

Small Wonders
Coyote said:

As children we see. As adults we forget how. Brilliant write. Loved it.

August 5th, 2021 20:28

Small Wonders
Accidental Poet said:

Only as a child grows older do they lose that wonderment of what we adults take for granted. What a treasure it would be to hold onto that wonderment as we age. Great write cs 😉

August 5th, 2021 18:53

Small Wonders
Freni Karaluthara said:

Lovelly Poem. Most liked lines:
Such a small set of eyes
only they could have spotted
the small, magnificent wonder.

August 5th, 2021 11:17

The Tree
Goldfinch60 said:

That tree will always be there and come to life in Spring. Good words.

Welcome to MPS

August 3rd, 2021 00:39