Comments received on poems by Dharchika
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Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem “The Indian soldiers” by “Nature” and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:33
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem “The Indian soldiers” by “Nature” and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:33
Scent of flower
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful yet sad writing . It’s very difficult to be in a place where we don’t feel good enough , wandering why others are moving forward .. makes one sad / and jealous of others
A good poem
August 6th, 2023 14:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful yet sad writing . It’s very difficult to be in a place where we don’t feel good enough , wandering why others are moving forward .. makes one sad / and jealous of others
A good poem
August 6th, 2023 14:16
Living dead
spilleronsheet said:
When sorrow makes sound….when cries create the beautiful sounds…why art comes to the broken hearts and shattered minds….well written
June 19th, 2023 08:26
spilleronsheet said:
When sorrow makes sound….when cries create the beautiful sounds…why art comes to the broken hearts and shattered minds….well written
June 19th, 2023 08:26
Living dead
ashlyyn1 said:
\'I thought I became strong,
was it a fake smile all along?\' wowww
June 14th, 2023 21:52
ashlyyn1 said:
\'I thought I became strong,
was it a fake smile all along?\' wowww
June 14th, 2023 21:52
The choice
L. B. Mek said:
all, the same person
this, that Jekyll and Hyde
of concussive, whiplash
personality switches
in those, we anchor our hopes upon
our love
their assumptive, platform
to twist our guts between
heaven n hell
by push n pull games or
hunt wrenching confessions
all in a minute...
living through all five season
in every hour we\'re together..
lol
why do we do it to ourselves?
because we choose, to love
and believe, in finding that one
who will make our sacrifices
worthwhile
May 12th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
all, the same person
this, that Jekyll and Hyde
of concussive, whiplash
personality switches
in those, we anchor our hopes upon
our love
their assumptive, platform
to twist our guts between
heaven n hell
by push n pull games or
hunt wrenching confessions
all in a minute...
living through all five season
in every hour we\'re together..
lol
why do we do it to ourselves?
because we choose, to love
and believe, in finding that one
who will make our sacrifices
worthwhile
May 12th, 2023 03:54
MY LOVE...
shaa said:
Amazing 😍. Spectacular to say the least. Love is always such an emotive subject and your words bring those emotions to life.
August 31st, 2022 10:18
shaa said:
Amazing 😍. Spectacular to say the least. Love is always such an emotive subject and your words bring those emotions to life.
August 31st, 2022 10:18
Ignorance
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This is really good,..and each first letter of each word spelling out your name!! Very talented,..I\'ve tried but without success.
January 16th, 2022 02:35
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
This is really good,..and each first letter of each word spelling out your name!! Very talented,..I\'ve tried but without success.
January 16th, 2022 02:35
Regret
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'m sorry,I just realized it finished to day,..but you can write your own😊✌️🕊
January 15th, 2022 20:19
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'m sorry,I just realized it finished to day,..but you can write your own😊✌️🕊
January 15th, 2022 20:19
Regret
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Wonderfully penned! I started a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go? Your welcome to contribute to it if you like?,..and if you\'re able to,..😊✌️🕊
January 15th, 2022 20:07
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Wonderfully penned! I started a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go? Your welcome to contribute to it if you like?,..and if you\'re able to,..😊✌️🕊
January 15th, 2022 20:07
Regret
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful
Yet true
Struggling and striving is the deal
Gonna make that seal
January 15th, 2022 11:45
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful
Yet true
Struggling and striving is the deal
Gonna make that seal
January 15th, 2022 11:45
True Revenge
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
That’s powerful
I know how sad it is to backstabbed
But I am glad you could achieve your sweet revenge
Let go the hatred that causes chaos inside
Happy and sonnet healing and loads of happiness dear poet
November 24th, 2021 12:19
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
That’s powerful
I know how sad it is to backstabbed
But I am glad you could achieve your sweet revenge
Let go the hatred that causes chaos inside
Happy and sonnet healing and loads of happiness dear poet
November 24th, 2021 12:19
You people will never understand me…never
spilleronsheet said:
I am sure nobody will dislike you
Let your thoughts out
Don’t store these frustrations inside
It’s quite natural to have such thoughts
It’s a generation gap which can’t be understood so easily
I hope they can understand
It’s already hurtful inside when trying to accomplish the desires outside
But it’s more painful when one is misunderstood
Remember my friend life may be given by others, but it can’t be lived by others
Best of luck dear friend
Stand fir your dreams
While staying humble on your feet
Try to patiently make them understand
And happiness is achieved by building bridges, and not walls
If they can’t make bridge
You break the walls and make the bridges
Best of luck buddy
Hope to read more and more of your poetry
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
spilleronsheet said:
I am sure nobody will dislike you
Let your thoughts out
Don’t store these frustrations inside
It’s quite natural to have such thoughts
It’s a generation gap which can’t be understood so easily
I hope they can understand
It’s already hurtful inside when trying to accomplish the desires outside
But it’s more painful when one is misunderstood
Remember my friend life may be given by others, but it can’t be lived by others
Best of luck dear friend
Stand fir your dreams
While staying humble on your feet
Try to patiently make them understand
And happiness is achieved by building bridges, and not walls
If they can’t make bridge
You break the walls and make the bridges
Best of luck buddy
Hope to read more and more of your poetry
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
