Comments received on poems by Dharchika
Zero o\'clock
sonal monhyung said:
Do you know BTS? That is my happiness and if you like you can all feel itšš
June 23rd, 2024 06:36
sonal monhyung said:
Do you know BTS? That is my happiness and if you like you can all feel itšš
June 23rd, 2024 06:36
Moon
sonal monhyung said:
I hope we can be friends so you can share your feelings with me and I can with youāŗļøyes you\'re the moon and I belive you\'ll shine once again.šāØ
June 23rd, 2024 06:33
sonal monhyung said:
I hope we can be friends so you can share your feelings with me and I can with youāŗļøyes you\'re the moon and I belive you\'ll shine once again.šāØ
June 23rd, 2024 06:33
With my
peto said:
A brutal honesty that only enhances the write
I enjoy a lot of poetry
But for me you can\'t beat real and this is as real as it gets
Keep writing
Stunning
June 9th, 2024 12:31
peto said:
A brutal honesty that only enhances the write
I enjoy a lot of poetry
But for me you can\'t beat real and this is as real as it gets
Keep writing
Stunning
June 9th, 2024 12:31
With my
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and full of emotional power. The last line \"With my neck slitted with a rusted knifeā¦\" is very powerful.
June 9th, 2024 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and full of emotional power. The last line \"With my neck slitted with a rusted knifeā¦\" is very powerful.
June 9th, 2024 08:37
Reunite...
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem āThe Indian soldiersā by āNatureā and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:33
Soman Ragavan said:
Please see the poem āThe Indian soldiersā by āNatureā and my comments.
Soman Ragavan. 3 September, 2023 //
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September 3rd, 2023 07:33
Scent of flower
Caring dove said:
Beautiful yet sad writing . Itās very difficult to be in a place where we donāt feel good enough , wandering why others are moving forward .. makes one sad / and jealous of others
A good poem
August 6th, 2023 14:16
Caring dove said:
Beautiful yet sad writing . Itās very difficult to be in a place where we donāt feel good enough , wandering why others are moving forward .. makes one sad / and jealous of others
A good poem
August 6th, 2023 14:16
Living dead
spilleronsheet said:
When sorrow makes soundā¦.when cries create the beautiful soundsā¦why art comes to the broken hearts and shattered mindsā¦.well written
June 19th, 2023 08:26
spilleronsheet said:
When sorrow makes soundā¦.when cries create the beautiful soundsā¦why art comes to the broken hearts and shattered mindsā¦.well written
June 19th, 2023 08:26
Living dead
ashlyyn1 said:
\'I thought I became strong,
was it a fake smile all along?\' wowww
June 14th, 2023 21:52
ashlyyn1 said:
\'I thought I became strong,
was it a fake smile all along?\' wowww
June 14th, 2023 21:52
The choice
L. B. Mek said:
all, the same person
this, that Jekyll and Hyde
of concussive, whiplash
personality switches
in those, we anchor our hopes upon
our love
their assumptive, platform
to twist our guts between
heaven n hell
by push n pull games or
hunt wrenching confessions
all in a minute...
living through all five season
in every hour we\'re together..
lol
why do we do it to ourselves?
because we choose, to love
and believe, in finding that one
who will make our sacrifices
worthwhile
May 12th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
all, the same person
this, that Jekyll and Hyde
of concussive, whiplash
personality switches
in those, we anchor our hopes upon
our love
their assumptive, platform
to twist our guts between
heaven n hell
by push n pull games or
hunt wrenching confessions
all in a minute...
living through all five season
in every hour we\'re together..
lol
why do we do it to ourselves?
because we choose, to love
and believe, in finding that one
who will make our sacrifices
worthwhile
May 12th, 2023 03:54
MY LOVE...
shaa said:
Amazing š. Spectacular to say the least. Love is always such an emotive subject and your words bring those emotions to life.
August 31st, 2022 10:18
shaa said:
Amazing š. Spectacular to say the least. Love is always such an emotive subject and your words bring those emotions to life.
August 31st, 2022 10:18
Ignorance
FallenAngel1š said:
This is really good,..and each first letter of each word spelling out your name!! Very talented,..I\'ve tried but without success.
January 16th, 2022 02:35
FallenAngel1š said:
This is really good,..and each first letter of each word spelling out your name!! Very talented,..I\'ve tried but without success.
January 16th, 2022 02:35
Regret
FallenAngel1š said:
I\'m sorry,I just realized it finished to day,..but you can write your ownšāļøš
January 15th, 2022 20:19
FallenAngel1š said:
I\'m sorry,I just realized it finished to day,..but you can write your ownšāļøš
January 15th, 2022 20:19
Regret
FallenAngel1š said:
Wonderfully penned! I started a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go? Your welcome to contribute to it if you like?,..and if you\'re able to,..šāļøš
January 15th, 2022 20:07
FallenAngel1š said:
Wonderfully penned! I started a fusioned poem called If You Had A Time Machine,Which Way Would You Go? Your welcome to contribute to it if you like?,..and if you\'re able to,..šāļøš
January 15th, 2022 20:07
Regret
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful
Yet true
Struggling and striving is the deal
Gonna make that seal
January 15th, 2022 11:45
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful
Yet true
Struggling and striving is the deal
Gonna make that seal
January 15th, 2022 11:45
True Revenge
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
Thatās powerful
I know how sad it is to backstabbed
But I am glad you could achieve your sweet revenge
Let go the hatred that causes chaos inside
Happy and sonnet healing and loads of happiness dear poet
November 24th, 2021 12:19
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh
Thatās powerful
I know how sad it is to backstabbed
But I am glad you could achieve your sweet revenge
Let go the hatred that causes chaos inside
Happy and sonnet healing and loads of happiness dear poet
November 24th, 2021 12:19
You people will never understand meā¦never
spilleronsheet said:
I am sure nobody will dislike you
Let your thoughts out
Donāt store these frustrations inside
Itās quite natural to have such thoughts
Itās a generation gap which canāt be understood so easily
I hope they can understand
Itās already hurtful inside when trying to accomplish the desires outside
But itās more painful when one is misunderstood
Remember my friend life may be given by others, but it canāt be lived by others
Best of luck dear friend
Stand fir your dreams
While staying humble on your feet
Try to patiently make them understand
And happiness is achieved by building bridges, and not walls
If they canāt make bridge
You break the walls and make the bridges
Best of luck buddy
Hope to read more and more of your poetry
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
spilleronsheet said:
I am sure nobody will dislike you
Let your thoughts out
Donāt store these frustrations inside
Itās quite natural to have such thoughts
Itās a generation gap which canāt be understood so easily
I hope they can understand
Itās already hurtful inside when trying to accomplish the desires outside
But itās more painful when one is misunderstood
Remember my friend life may be given by others, but it canāt be lived by others
Best of luck dear friend
Stand fir your dreams
While staying humble on your feet
Try to patiently make them understand
And happiness is achieved by building bridges, and not walls
If they canāt make bridge
You break the walls and make the bridges
Best of luck buddy
Hope to read more and more of your poetry
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
