Comments received on poems by picklesthecat



worse
Rocky Lagou said:

It sure looks rough, know that there\'s always light. It may seem difficult to see it now, but keep your mind positive. If you think optimistically and not dread the past or the \"what if\'s?\" then you\'ll live an easier life. Amazing writing.


April 25th, 2022 12:29

life of worries and stress
Rocky Lagou said:

Suicide is NOT an option. Though life can seem perilous and overwhelming, never lose sense of who you are. We\'re all worth living, there\'s no exception.

April 14th, 2022 12:12

The kid in the back of the room
Pearcemelville 曽達 said:

brings out strong emotions of worry regret spectre of the past looming

April 12th, 2022 13:59

after effect
L. B. Mek said:

indeed
worse than the bruises, that heal
over time, into mere blemishes of skin
are the scars tattooed, to our minds
symptoms, that have us flinching at shadows
or fast hand movements
or loud boisterous voices
long, long
after we\'ve freed ourselves
from our hellish existences..
and all we can do
is bravely, wade through it all
in the hope, that our minds will
decline
and that numbness of forgetting\'s
forgiveness
will finally, allow an - ease
to enter our splintered, breaths...
\'People, often forget
\'Surviving\'
is just the beginning..!\'
(Stay strong, dear poet
count your twilight\'s
as your victory cards
and forgive yourself
twice as much
as you chastise your failings)
I wish you all the best!
thanks for sharing

April 12th, 2022 03:55

after effect
Crystal Hope said:

this is very true. Our minds are worse than the situations we\'re actually in. Amazing write.

April 11th, 2022 16:12

before
ame! said:

This is so pretty! I really liked the verse \"a spiral of tears and discouragement\"

April 8th, 2022 23:03

written on these walls
Paul Bell said:

Three lines hidden under the red paint. What else is hidden.

October 21st, 2021 11:55

memories
Having hope said:

Sometimes our memories, thoughts, and regrets are more painful than of the people related. Liked your writing so much and can relate it. 🙂
Thanks for sharing.

October 7th, 2021 00:21

before
L. B. Mek said:

this is a great summarisation of the covid experience, I think
thanks for sharing

October 5th, 2021 04:41

tick of time
orchidee said:

Do cats understand time?! heehee. Well, they know when it\'s food-time...

October 2nd, 2021 02:25

tick of time
Teddy.15 said:

This is excellent reflection poetry, what I would say is maybe look at the format because if it is presented well it makes even more of an impact.

October 1st, 2021 13:16

us
L. B. Mek said:

reads, very sweet
that rarity of serene simplicity, where everything falls, in place
seemingly, without effort..
thanks for sharing
really liked your flow

October 1st, 2021 03:11

bliss
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m sorry for your loss,
thanks for sharing

September 30th, 2021 03:22