Comments received on poems by Ajax (he/xe)
Little bird
Rocky Lagou said:
Relatable. Birds are so free and happy. I would want a pinch of their splendor as well.
March 16th, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Relatable. Birds are so free and happy. I would want a pinch of their splendor as well.
March 16th, 2022 13:26
Little bird
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poem ) we all want to feel free and peaceful away from things that hurt us
March 15th, 2022 15:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your poem ) we all want to feel free and peaceful away from things that hurt us
March 15th, 2022 15:29
Laughter hides tears
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The most influential people were different,and stood out in the crowd. They were original,and that seems to be hard to find these days. It seems everyone is following someone. Keeping up with the latest trends just because everyone else is. Blaze your own trail,and be the star that stands out in the night sky.🌟🌹🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 18:31
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The most influential people were different,and stood out in the crowd. They were original,and that seems to be hard to find these days. It seems everyone is following someone. Keeping up with the latest trends just because everyone else is. Blaze your own trail,and be the star that stands out in the night sky.🌟🌹🕊🌞
March 2nd, 2022 18:31
Laughter hides tears
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I remember those days at school and what beautiful flow. We all have that darkness but now you\'ve written it, I can see a bit more light in it. As we all have that too!
One day you\'ll see the clown will serve you..
Thank you for sharing
Keep up the write
March 2nd, 2022 16:39
Poetic Dan said:
Wow...I remember those days at school and what beautiful flow. We all have that darkness but now you\'ve written it, I can see a bit more light in it. As we all have that too!
One day you\'ll see the clown will serve you..
Thank you for sharing
Keep up the write
March 2nd, 2022 16:39
Snapped
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
While I\'m sure this is an exaggeration, I hope you truly don\'t feel as though this is an life worth escaping. We all hate our lives at one point, it\'s human to want more than what we\'ve been give, and when we have no known life after death the unknown is more mentally pleasing than the horrors we are forced to live through. Keep your head up and out of that belt, and keep moving along, because eventually it will be worth the tired effort. You will find that happiness, especially when we never feel we can. Your profile is quite fitting this poem as well, that scene messed me up for a week or two.
February 25th, 2022 12:05
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
While I\'m sure this is an exaggeration, I hope you truly don\'t feel as though this is an life worth escaping. We all hate our lives at one point, it\'s human to want more than what we\'ve been give, and when we have no known life after death the unknown is more mentally pleasing than the horrors we are forced to live through. Keep your head up and out of that belt, and keep moving along, because eventually it will be worth the tired effort. You will find that happiness, especially when we never feel we can. Your profile is quite fitting this poem as well, that scene messed me up for a week or two.
February 25th, 2022 12:05
Snapped
L. B. Mek said:
\'even this: I can\'t do right\'
is the warped mindset
of those who survive, such tragedies
at least initially, later though
if they heed, their reprieve\'s
fortunes
they hear that whisper, of noises
only the living can indulge in
and maybe
just maybe, there\'s enough left
within them
to make something more
out of their lives
than a mere, stat sheet addition
to defeat\'s, spreadsheet
of all-thing, finality - Bleak...
(I\'m just glad such horrific notions are so absurd to you
you make fun of them
it\'s a healthy sign, hope you never
get to understand
the horror imbued
in these words you share
with your fellow survivors
of such a broken world)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 25th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'even this: I can\'t do right\'
is the warped mindset
of those who survive, such tragedies
at least initially, later though
if they heed, their reprieve\'s
fortunes
they hear that whisper, of noises
only the living can indulge in
and maybe
just maybe, there\'s enough left
within them
to make something more
out of their lives
than a mere, stat sheet addition
to defeat\'s, spreadsheet
of all-thing, finality - Bleak...
(I\'m just glad such horrific notions are so absurd to you
you make fun of them
it\'s a healthy sign, hope you never
get to understand
the horror imbued
in these words you share
with your fellow survivors
of such a broken world)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 25th, 2022 05:58
Coming out
RainningHearts said:
Exactly. It\'s so unfair (and I know that word is kinda childish, but there isn\'t really a better word) that I have to hide the fact that I like boys, girls and other just because people say it\'s gross. I used to be homophobic so I understand how they think, but when I was 11 I realized it didn\'t matter. Why does it matter to me if a girl likes a girl, or if a boy likes a boy? Or if a girl isn\'t really a girl but a boy? That answer is, it doesn\'t.
I was 11. Parents are like 40 something (most of the time), so aren\'t you supposed to be more \"mature\"?
February 24th, 2022 18:28
RainningHearts said:
Exactly. It\'s so unfair (and I know that word is kinda childish, but there isn\'t really a better word) that I have to hide the fact that I like boys, girls and other just because people say it\'s gross. I used to be homophobic so I understand how they think, but when I was 11 I realized it didn\'t matter. Why does it matter to me if a girl likes a girl, or if a boy likes a boy? Or if a girl isn\'t really a girl but a boy? That answer is, it doesn\'t.
I was 11. Parents are like 40 something (most of the time), so aren\'t you supposed to be more \"mature\"?
February 24th, 2022 18:28
Women\'s Struggles
RainningHearts said:
Sexism sucks. Rape sucks. Sexual harassment sucks. And all because we were born with a vagina. (I get that men get raped too, don\'t come at me)
February 23rd, 2022 18:25
RainningHearts said:
Sexism sucks. Rape sucks. Sexual harassment sucks. And all because we were born with a vagina. (I get that men get raped too, don\'t come at me)
February 23rd, 2022 18:25
3 mental breakdowns away
hapadalecki said:
This is beautiful. I’ve been there too hun. You’ve got this.
February 23rd, 2022 14:44
hapadalecki said:
This is beautiful. I’ve been there too hun. You’ve got this.
February 23rd, 2022 14:44
3 mental breakdowns away
Rocky Lagou said:
Honestly I\'m BIG behind on my schoolwork as well. Continue working!!! 💖💖😅
February 23rd, 2022 10:09
Rocky Lagou said:
Honestly I\'m BIG behind on my schoolwork as well. Continue working!!! 💖💖😅
February 23rd, 2022 10:09
Silence
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I can\'t say I no longer cry,but I do fake many smiles and hide. Only I know what goes on in my mind. Your not alone.🌟🌟🌟🌹🌹🌹🕊🕊🕊🤗🤗🤗🌞
February 22nd, 2022 15:36
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I can\'t say I no longer cry,but I do fake many smiles and hide. Only I know what goes on in my mind. Your not alone.🌟🌟🌟🌹🌹🌹🕊🕊🕊🤗🤗🤗🌞
February 22nd, 2022 15:36
My last day alive
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I read this with the thought of my niece giving birth this morning to a beautiful baby boy. I couldn\'t help but shed a few tears. Some happy ones,some sad. Please stay strong🌟🌟🌟🌞🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹🕊🕊🕊
February 22nd, 2022 15:21
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I read this with the thought of my niece giving birth this morning to a beautiful baby boy. I couldn\'t help but shed a few tears. Some happy ones,some sad. Please stay strong🌟🌟🌟🌞🤗🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹🕊🕊🕊
February 22nd, 2022 15:21
Wish I was young
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay we\'re all young at heart! Don\'t downplay yourself. You are amazing! Also don\'t worry about the \"short\" poems. Most people LOVE the brevity of shorter poems, including me! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay we\'re all young at heart! Don\'t downplay yourself. You are amazing! Also don\'t worry about the \"short\" poems. Most people LOVE the brevity of shorter poems, including me! 💖💖
February 22nd, 2022 11:12
The day of lovers
Rocky Lagou said:
Preach the message! Also the last line was so plain-spoken and I laud you for that. Most people shy away from such brusque speech but I love it when poets go all in. I can relate to the loneliness and the crush that you just can\'t have. Bravo! 💖🌟
February 14th, 2022 14:11
Rocky Lagou said:
Preach the message! Also the last line was so plain-spoken and I laud you for that. Most people shy away from such brusque speech but I love it when poets go all in. I can relate to the loneliness and the crush that you just can\'t have. Bravo! 💖🌟
February 14th, 2022 14:11
The day of lovers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Valentine’s Day is just a label .. we can give gifts to those we love on any day . I understand why you might hate it tho ., if we are without someone , we can feel jealous I guess
February 14th, 2022 13:46
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Valentine’s Day is just a label .. we can give gifts to those we love on any day . I understand why you might hate it tho ., if we are without someone , we can feel jealous I guess
February 14th, 2022 13:46
My last day alive
depressionofbecca said:
I felt this way very often. Until I went to the hospital. i feel so much better now. It might seem worth it then but all it causes is pain and sorrow for others,
February 8th, 2022 08:23
depressionofbecca said:
I felt this way very often. Until I went to the hospital. i feel so much better now. It might seem worth it then but all it causes is pain and sorrow for others,
February 8th, 2022 08:23
Women\'s Struggles
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Society is fucked up. I couldn\'t have said it better myself. We encourage it,and then call them out on it. Now if that\'s not fucked,I don\'t know what is. You are not a toy or just for show. You have to be strong and be your own person. Don\'t give up the fight. 🤗🕊
February 3rd, 2022 16:37
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Society is fucked up. I couldn\'t have said it better myself. We encourage it,and then call them out on it. Now if that\'s not fucked,I don\'t know what is. You are not a toy or just for show. You have to be strong and be your own person. Don\'t give up the fight. 🤗🕊
February 3rd, 2022 16:37
My last day alive
Paul Bell said:
When I tried that, I just spoke in a funny voice. On a serious note, how you doing.
February 2nd, 2022 14:10
Paul Bell said:
When I tried that, I just spoke in a funny voice. On a serious note, how you doing.
February 2nd, 2022 14:10
Liars
L. B. Mek said:
more rather Pain, is anathema
to Beauty;
instead, why not Choose, to believe in Keats\' wisdom:
\'Truth is Beauty
and Beauty: Truth\'
and nothing like Love
to convey Truth and Beauty,
so give yourself a break, and Love yourself
be True, to that reflection
and see all the Beauty
you bring to the world, just as you are..
and so what, if you need to lose some weight
its just, cookie goodness
you indulged-in, to survive
the stresses in life;
why, you can even
sit comfortably, in a sauna
and sweat it away...
but that Beauty, that can never be diminished
lest you Choose, to refuse
its Truth....
January 27th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
more rather Pain, is anathema
to Beauty;
instead, why not Choose, to believe in Keats\' wisdom:
\'Truth is Beauty
and Beauty: Truth\'
and nothing like Love
to convey Truth and Beauty,
so give yourself a break, and Love yourself
be True, to that reflection
and see all the Beauty
you bring to the world, just as you are..
and so what, if you need to lose some weight
its just, cookie goodness
you indulged-in, to survive
the stresses in life;
why, you can even
sit comfortably, in a sauna
and sweat it away...
but that Beauty, that can never be diminished
lest you Choose, to refuse
its Truth....
January 27th, 2022 06:26
8th period (version one)
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetry\'s, blossoming
self assurance..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 25th, 2022 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetry\'s, blossoming
self assurance..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 25th, 2022 06:31
Coming out
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Being used to it doesn\'t make it ok😢 🌈 🌹💝🌞 REACH OUT!!! We,and I really mean WE,..live in a time of change. There are resources,please seek them out and contact them😉✌🕊
January 19th, 2022 20:34
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Being used to it doesn\'t make it ok😢 🌈 🌹💝🌞 REACH OUT!!! We,and I really mean WE,..live in a time of change. There are resources,please seek them out and contact them😉✌🕊
January 19th, 2022 20:34
Dead inside
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
WOW! All that in a mere 55 words. I feel so much coming out of your words here,..disappointment,anger,defeat,sadness,a scence of being lost,..and alone. To express,and evoke so much in so few words ,..is a tell tale sign of a true poetess. Extremely well done.🏆🌹Take a bow and shine💎bright🌟
January 17th, 2022 22:11
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
WOW! All that in a mere 55 words. I feel so much coming out of your words here,..disappointment,anger,defeat,sadness,a scence of being lost,..and alone. To express,and evoke so much in so few words ,..is a tell tale sign of a true poetess. Extremely well done.🏆🌹Take a bow and shine💎bright🌟
January 17th, 2022 22:11
It all sounds so nice
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I know all too well how it feels to have those thoughts. But I see,..I feel through your words you have a beautiful mind full of talent accompanied by a big heart with so much love to give. Thank you for having The courage to share these deep feelings,..their very touching and really pulled at my heartstrings🌟🌟🌟 That is the mark of a truly talented writer,to evoke emotion from the reader. Brovo! Now take a bow and shine bright🌟 P.s.your contribution to \"If you had a time machine,...\" was absolutely fantastic,thank you so much!🌹💞✌️🕊
January 14th, 2022 23:04
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I know all too well how it feels to have those thoughts. But I see,..I feel through your words you have a beautiful mind full of talent accompanied by a big heart with so much love to give. Thank you for having The courage to share these deep feelings,..their very touching and really pulled at my heartstrings🌟🌟🌟 That is the mark of a truly talented writer,to evoke emotion from the reader. Brovo! Now take a bow and shine bright🌟 P.s.your contribution to \"If you had a time machine,...\" was absolutely fantastic,thank you so much!🌹💞✌️🕊
January 14th, 2022 23:04
Dead inside
Buzz Bray said:
Please get help. Tell someone. To write verse like this, you must have beauty inside.
January 14th, 2022 19:44
Buzz Bray said:
Please get help. Tell someone. To write verse like this, you must have beauty inside.
January 14th, 2022 19:44
Dead inside
Laura🌻 said:
Dear DepressedMess24,
NO not death, definitely NOT death!
Laura🌻
January 14th, 2022 18:38
Laura🌻 said:
Dear DepressedMess24,
NO not death, definitely NOT death!
Laura🌻
January 14th, 2022 18:38
The Boy With Hanafuta Earrings
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s the cutest anime sister - ever
the way she shrunk herself
and how she runs, great fun..
Thanks for sharing
and I second your recommendation!
Happy holidays, dear poet
December 24th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s the cutest anime sister - ever
the way she shrunk herself
and how she runs, great fun..
Thanks for sharing
and I second your recommendation!
Happy holidays, dear poet
December 24th, 2021 04:49
The Boy With Hanafuta Earrings
screaming goat. said:
Who is this strange being you describe? Hmm. Eh, I\'ll figure it out eventually.
December 23rd, 2021 20:48
screaming goat. said:
Who is this strange being you describe? Hmm. Eh, I\'ll figure it out eventually.
December 23rd, 2021 20:48
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