Comments received on poems by Ajax (he/xe)
Do they even realize?
L. B. Mek said:
(I think you\'ve shared a portion of this write before, but I\'m not sure)..
The frustrations you word, stem
from a simple core, of a common Societal disease:
its that same Ignorance, that allows for MTV\'s \'Teen Parents\'
to go from being vilified, to Glorified
in a single generation,
and acting like, there will be no consequences, as a result..
ergo: the future before us
where \'Parentless\' children, give birth
to parentless children,
and so this cyclical reality
of hellish beginnings to a generation of innocent children, is perpetuated: endlessly, knowingly!
a shameful loop of abject Hypocrisy!
Tell me,
if Our parent\'s
never witnessed \'Good Parenting\'
how do we expect them, to be \'good\' at parenting?
anyone, can have a child
even if its by adoption...
but not Everyone: Knows
how to be a Father and a Mother.
So many start families
without preparation, knowingly
cursing their children to a life of futile Desperation..
and Yes, we All mean well
and Our love was sincere (in the moment), but really
can anyone act ignorant of the consequences to bringing children in the world
when the parent\'s \'Themselves\'
are still Recovering, from their Own childhood Traumas...?
(anyway, forgive my rant
this is the second \'triggering\' child themed write, I have read this morning and I couldn\'t control my reaction,
I\'m very sorry for my Opinionated and lengthy comment!)
thanks for sharing
keep writing and expressing and shedding,
don\'t keep your frustrations hidden or repressed,
they\'ll only fester and hurt you even more, in the future
October 8th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
(I think you\'ve shared a portion of this write before, but I\'m not sure)..
The frustrations you word, stem
from a simple core, of a common Societal disease:
its that same Ignorance, that allows for MTV\'s \'Teen Parents\'
to go from being vilified, to Glorified
in a single generation,
and acting like, there will be no consequences, as a result..
ergo: the future before us
where \'Parentless\' children, give birth
to parentless children,
and so this cyclical reality
of hellish beginnings to a generation of innocent children, is perpetuated: endlessly, knowingly!
a shameful loop of abject Hypocrisy!
Tell me,
if Our parent\'s
never witnessed \'Good Parenting\'
how do we expect them, to be \'good\' at parenting?
anyone, can have a child
even if its by adoption...
but not Everyone: Knows
how to be a Father and a Mother.
So many start families
without preparation, knowingly
cursing their children to a life of futile Desperation..
and Yes, we All mean well
and Our love was sincere (in the moment), but really
can anyone act ignorant of the consequences to bringing children in the world
when the parent\'s \'Themselves\'
are still Recovering, from their Own childhood Traumas...?
(anyway, forgive my rant
this is the second \'triggering\' child themed write, I have read this morning and I couldn\'t control my reaction,
I\'m very sorry for my Opinionated and lengthy comment!)
thanks for sharing
keep writing and expressing and shedding,
don\'t keep your frustrations hidden or repressed,
they\'ll only fester and hurt you even more, in the future
October 8th, 2021 05:25
Loving you
L. B. Mek said:
\'I know you don\'t feel the same\'
\'I know you\'re better than me\'..
what\'s seemingly unattainable,
doesn\'t equate to its superiority...
in-fact
maybe, if we were to shed our own sense of inadequacy
well find that person much closer than we thought the were, initially
and our feelings, reciprocated
more frequently...
(I really liked the bravery
liked, the sincerity
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
October 7th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'I know you don\'t feel the same\'
\'I know you\'re better than me\'..
what\'s seemingly unattainable,
doesn\'t equate to its superiority...
in-fact
maybe, if we were to shed our own sense of inadequacy
well find that person much closer than we thought the were, initially
and our feelings, reciprocated
more frequently...
(I really liked the bravery
liked, the sincerity
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)
October 7th, 2021 04:41
Help me
IamUnicorn said:
I really appreciate this poem. I\'ve only done this myself twice but it was a very dark time and I felt trapped so... I cut. It doesn\'t fix things but it makes you feel something and it\'s something you feel you deserve. I\'m here if you ever need someone. We actually have very common interests based on your profile.
October 7th, 2021 00:26
IamUnicorn said:
I really appreciate this poem. I\'ve only done this myself twice but it was a very dark time and I felt trapped so... I cut. It doesn\'t fix things but it makes you feel something and it\'s something you feel you deserve. I\'m here if you ever need someone. We actually have very common interests based on your profile.
October 7th, 2021 00:26
Loving you
iAli said:
I have no words to describe my feelings on this writing. Just love it...❤
Feel it relatable 🙂
October 7th, 2021 00:14
iAli said:
I have no words to describe my feelings on this writing. Just love it...❤
Feel it relatable 🙂
October 7th, 2021 00:14
Help me
Lyriclitty said:
Hey it’s good thing to express your feelings period but especially if you are facing troubles and need help. I commend you on your bravery to share such a intimate piece and it is beautifully written. Sending love and light your way keep going don’t give up you are worth it love❤️
October 1st, 2021 10:57
Lyriclitty said:
Hey it’s good thing to express your feelings period but especially if you are facing troubles and need help. I commend you on your bravery to share such a intimate piece and it is beautifully written. Sending love and light your way keep going don’t give up you are worth it love❤️
October 1st, 2021 10:57
Hiding Beneath a Mask
Accidental Poet said:
LB and Ron nailed it Depressed. It is exactly as they said it is. You\'re not a mistake. And neither is your poetry. Read enough poetry and you\'ll begin to find your own groove so to speak. 😉
October 1st, 2021 08:18
Accidental Poet said:
LB and Ron nailed it Depressed. It is exactly as they said it is. You\'re not a mistake. And neither is your poetry. Read enough poetry and you\'ll begin to find your own groove so to speak. 😉
October 1st, 2021 08:18
Help me
orchidee said:
You have your whole life to live in front of you, seeing your age on your profile......
October 1st, 2021 02:01
orchidee said:
You have your whole life to live in front of you, seeing your age on your profile......
October 1st, 2021 02:01
Hiding Beneath a Mask
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no one is a mistake,god don`t make mistakes
September 30th, 2021 17:38
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no one is a mistake,god don`t make mistakes
September 30th, 2021 17:38
Hiding Beneath a Mask
L. B. Mek said:
personally, I feel none of us are \'a stupid mistake\'
maybe, we\'ve been made to feel that we are, but
that doesn\'t mean that, that\'s in actuality: what we are..
it takes a lot of humility to speak about the traits we all utilise to lie to ourselves, so that we can wear a mask \'For\' the world,
when in actuality, we wear masks and disguises
to \'blend-in\'
hoping, we don\'t get singled out, and noticed
by the bad/scary strangers of the world
who we know can cause us so much suffering...
and there\'s no such thing as being \'good at poetry\'
there\'s just different branches of poetry,
elitist, enraged, commercial, activist, didactive, artistic, private etc
or simply personal,
and your writing style is definitely very personal,
thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
personally, I feel none of us are \'a stupid mistake\'
maybe, we\'ve been made to feel that we are, but
that doesn\'t mean that, that\'s in actuality: what we are..
it takes a lot of humility to speak about the traits we all utilise to lie to ourselves, so that we can wear a mask \'For\' the world,
when in actuality, we wear masks and disguises
to \'blend-in\'
hoping, we don\'t get singled out, and noticed
by the bad/scary strangers of the world
who we know can cause us so much suffering...
and there\'s no such thing as being \'good at poetry\'
there\'s just different branches of poetry,
elitist, enraged, commercial, activist, didactive, artistic, private etc
or simply personal,
and your writing style is definitely very personal,
thanks for sharing
September 30th, 2021 04:29
Hiding Beneath a Mask
jarcher54 said:
Moving and charming. A universal emotion very well described. Brava.
September 30th, 2021 01:16
jarcher54 said:
Moving and charming. A universal emotion very well described. Brava.
September 30th, 2021 01:16
Hiding Beneath a Mask
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in different circumstances of our lives.
Welcome to MPS.
September 30th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in different circumstances of our lives.
Welcome to MPS.
September 30th, 2021 00:39
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