Comments received on poems by MDStone
Boxes In The Attic
Lorna said:
Beautiful and haunting - I really enjoyed it.
December 7th, 2021 11:28
Lorna said:
Beautiful and haunting - I really enjoyed it.
December 7th, 2021 11:28
Boxes In The Attic
Draven said:
This is brilliant. Beautiful rhythm.
Just one note, by QUITE you mean QUIET?
December 6th, 2021 09:29
Draven said:
This is brilliant. Beautiful rhythm.
Just one note, by QUITE you mean QUIET?
December 6th, 2021 09:29
I’m Cold
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s definitely getting a bit cold, lol
wonderful flow, a fun read
thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s definitely getting a bit cold, lol
wonderful flow, a fun read
thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 04:37
A Real Who Done It
mdrogers said:
Reminds me of the Dylan song about the boxer. Hurricane
December 1st, 2021 14:05
mdrogers said:
Reminds me of the Dylan song about the boxer. Hurricane
December 1st, 2021 14:05
A Real Who Done It
dusk arising said:
But i bet she\'ll be propping up a bar or two.
December 1st, 2021 09:13
dusk arising said:
But i bet she\'ll be propping up a bar or two.
December 1st, 2021 09:13
TOO HOT TO HOLD
Doggerel Dave said:
OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well penned, MD.
November 30th, 2021 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well penned, MD.
November 30th, 2021 19:18
Help In The Frey
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, being positive in a bad situation can bring you into a better way and will do soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, being positive in a bad situation can bring you into a better way and will do soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:45
Help In The Frey
dusk arising said:
It\'s good to read your realistic vision of this hell you are going through. Yes there will come a time when you realise you have walked free, though hopefully a wisdom will remain with you.
Time will do its healing thing.
Really refreshing to see this aspect of our lives written in a positive way and from a novel viewpoint.
November 29th, 2021 08:49
dusk arising said:
It\'s good to read your realistic vision of this hell you are going through. Yes there will come a time when you realise you have walked free, though hopefully a wisdom will remain with you.
Time will do its healing thing.
Really refreshing to see this aspect of our lives written in a positive way and from a novel viewpoint.
November 29th, 2021 08:49
A Day At The Beach
Goldfinch60 said:
Each of those days by the beach is there for you to enjoy.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Each of those days by the beach is there for you to enjoy.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 01:43
A Day At The Beach
Nicholas Browning said:
What a fantastic simile to top off a mysteriously straightforward observation. Two thumbs up!
November 26th, 2021 10:54
Nicholas Browning said:
What a fantastic simile to top off a mysteriously straightforward observation. Two thumbs up!
November 26th, 2021 10:54
The Whisper
Nicholas Browning said:
Reflection is a beautiful thing. Best Regards MD.
November 23rd, 2021 11:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Reflection is a beautiful thing. Best Regards MD.
November 23rd, 2021 11:16
Eight Seconds
L. B. Mek said:
Hemingway-esque
love the detailed portrayal
and the analogy
to how, we survive
this Pamplona - run, of a Life...
great read, thanks for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
Hemingway-esque
love the detailed portrayal
and the analogy
to how, we survive
this Pamplona - run, of a Life...
great read, thanks for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 05:01
Spontaneous Combustion
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, your overall metaphor is apt
and intensely vivid,
I also really like your tightrope routine, between
flagrant wording and suggestively bold imagery..
a clever write, an immersive read
and a poetic depiction
of that innate animalistic element of humanity\'s natural sensuality, of sexual desire..
a good read/depiction, thanks for sharing
November 22nd, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, your overall metaphor is apt
and intensely vivid,
I also really like your tightrope routine, between
flagrant wording and suggestively bold imagery..
a clever write, an immersive read
and a poetic depiction
of that innate animalistic element of humanity\'s natural sensuality, of sexual desire..
a good read/depiction, thanks for sharing
November 22nd, 2021 05:32
The Bottom
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
We wish to unravel the mysteries
But at times answers unfound
Yet we wonder did other opened the knot
Sometimes it’s better to let them be mysteries
Your poetry made me nostalgic of my swimming classes though, the feeling of exploding of lungs…felt it
November 19th, 2021 12:09
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
We wish to unravel the mysteries
But at times answers unfound
Yet we wonder did other opened the knot
Sometimes it’s better to let them be mysteries
Your poetry made me nostalgic of my swimming classes though, the feeling of exploding of lungs…felt it
November 19th, 2021 12:09
LEFTOVERS
dusk arising said:
OMG another christian claiming jesus speaks to him.
\"What he did he\'ll do it again\".... like disappearing after the so called resurrection.... he had a lot to say before it so why so quiet afterwards????
November 17th, 2021 10:23
dusk arising said:
OMG another christian claiming jesus speaks to him.
\"What he did he\'ll do it again\".... like disappearing after the so called resurrection.... he had a lot to say before it so why so quiet afterwards????
November 17th, 2021 10:23
Say I Love You
Hana randre said:
i love it! totally i was wanting to hear such a poem for dayss
and i read it i totally love it
amazing
i understand how like you know how for one it gets so hard to say, but we dont realise the time that is always passing. i loved your poem. thankss!
November 16th, 2021 22:10
Hana randre said:
i love it! totally i was wanting to hear such a poem for dayss
and i read it i totally love it
amazing
i understand how like you know how for one it gets so hard to say, but we dont realise the time that is always passing. i loved your poem. thankss!
November 16th, 2021 22:10
Say I Love You
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful Rhyme and feel !! Good one poet !!!
November 16th, 2021 11:40
Vamsi Sudha said:
Wonderful Rhyme and feel !! Good one poet !!!
November 16th, 2021 11:40
Say I Love You
Paul Bell said:
Totally agree with you. Never understood, why I love you is so hard to say.
November 16th, 2021 11:22
Paul Bell said:
Totally agree with you. Never understood, why I love you is so hard to say.
November 16th, 2021 11:22
Trapped In A State Of Mind
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really haunting to live with that
May you gain immense strength to come out of this slowly again
And since you let out your most dark pains, am sure your on way of healing
Best of luck dear poet
It’s a very dark phase
Feel free to extend your thoughts
Don’t keep yourself strained
Have a great day ahead
November 15th, 2021 12:38
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really haunting to live with that
May you gain immense strength to come out of this slowly again
And since you let out your most dark pains, am sure your on way of healing
Best of luck dear poet
It’s a very dark phase
Feel free to extend your thoughts
Don’t keep yourself strained
Have a great day ahead
November 15th, 2021 12:38
The Apparition
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all specks in the scheme of life.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all specks in the scheme of life.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:38
Playing Hooky
dusk arising said:
May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in mine.
November 10th, 2021 08:17
dusk arising said:
May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in mine.
November 10th, 2021 08:17
A Man’s Man
MDStone said:
Dusk Arising,
Glad you could have a chuckle at my expense. I have ridden bikes most of my life, so I guess it appealed to my sense of freedom and the open road. I appreciate what you brought out. Thank you for your input. I appreciate the insight you shared. Thank You
November 9th, 2021 19:48
MDStone said:
Dusk Arising,
Glad you could have a chuckle at my expense. I have ridden bikes most of my life, so I guess it appealed to my sense of freedom and the open road. I appreciate what you brought out. Thank you for your input. I appreciate the insight you shared. Thank You
November 9th, 2021 19:48
A Man’s Man
dusk arising said:
Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in in these LGBT days.
Giggling at connotations of your chosen image at top of page .... yesterday\'s macho.
November 9th, 2021 18:35
dusk arising said:
Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in in these LGBT days.
Giggling at connotations of your chosen image at top of page .... yesterday\'s macho.
November 9th, 2021 18:35
Through The Battle
L. B. Mek said:
\'The landscape of my mind
Now and forever marred
You can’t unsee war’s scene
You can’t un-hear *its sound
The warrior forever changed
Just for standing their ground
Do others see their valor
Do they recognize their heroic frame
Or do they simply think,
“They’re just not the same”
(a Timely and meaningful write
thanks for sharing)
November 9th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'The landscape of my mind
Now and forever marred
You can’t unsee war’s scene
You can’t un-hear *its sound
The warrior forever changed
Just for standing their ground
Do others see their valor
Do they recognize their heroic frame
Or do they simply think,
“They’re just not the same”
(a Timely and meaningful write
thanks for sharing)
November 9th, 2021 04:37
Through The Battle
dusk arising said:
Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and savagery of close combat. The silence which follows. Shaking hands and limbs as adrenaline floods.
Who else can know.
November 8th, 2021 17:13
dusk arising said:
Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and savagery of close combat. The silence which follows. Shaking hands and limbs as adrenaline floods.
Who else can know.
November 8th, 2021 17:13
Through The Battle
Paul Bell said:
Soldiers come through wars unscathed, but the scars are still there. Time to remember the ones who didn\'t make it.
November 8th, 2021 13:51
Paul Bell said:
Soldiers come through wars unscathed, but the scars are still there. Time to remember the ones who didn\'t make it.
November 8th, 2021 13:51
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