Comments received on poems by MDStone
The Back Closet (True Confessions)
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking that back closet is a gift from god. Actually, I\'ve already bagged it in my will, it\'s where I\'m happiest, me and the junk.
December 28th, 2021 12:22
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking that back closet is a gift from god. Actually, I\'ve already bagged it in my will, it\'s where I\'m happiest, me and the junk.
December 28th, 2021 12:22
Rip Tides In The Sea
L. B. Mek said:
emotionality is often likened
to the sea, especially
those sudden tsunami feelings
that overwhelm us
in the name of Love..
(a wonderfully poetic concept
really well executed,
thanks for sharing
and Happy holidays)
December 24th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
emotionality is often likened
to the sea, especially
those sudden tsunami feelings
that overwhelm us
in the name of Love..
(a wonderfully poetic concept
really well executed,
thanks for sharing
and Happy holidays)
December 24th, 2021 04:16
Sticks And Stones
L. B. Mek said:
\'our intensions and actions
are usually a maturation
of our words
even if they be, those
unvoiced words in our thoughts...\'
but
we must make sure
while minimising the pain they cause
we never, restrict
our blood spilled, freedom
for saying
whatever words, we choose...
because
forcing someone, in-to silence
even \'for the greater good\'
is that tried and tested
slippery slope
of the oppressive minded..
(a wonderful deep dive
into such a murky topic
and yet
your points and arguments
are unfurled with such clarity...
a great read, thanks for sharing)
December 23rd, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'our intensions and actions
are usually a maturation
of our words
even if they be, those
unvoiced words in our thoughts...\'
but
we must make sure
while minimising the pain they cause
we never, restrict
our blood spilled, freedom
for saying
whatever words, we choose...
because
forcing someone, in-to silence
even \'for the greater good\'
is that tried and tested
slippery slope
of the oppressive minded..
(a wonderful deep dive
into such a murky topic
and yet
your points and arguments
are unfurled with such clarity...
a great read, thanks for sharing)
December 23rd, 2021 03:51
Sticks And Stones
woundedheart said:
Indeed words can cut deep and crush people\'s spirits, well penned
December 22nd, 2021 10:20
woundedheart said:
Indeed words can cut deep and crush people\'s spirits, well penned
December 22nd, 2021 10:20
The Blues
Kim C. said:
Absolutely loved it! You are certainly a skilled writer✨
December 21st, 2021 12:32
Kim C. said:
Absolutely loved it! You are certainly a skilled writer✨
December 21st, 2021 12:32
Stirred Not Shaken
Nilanjana Singh said:
\"Seems we’ve found our psychotropic drug\"
This one is amazing
December 17th, 2021 08:35
Nilanjana Singh said:
\"Seems we’ve found our psychotropic drug\"
This one is amazing
December 17th, 2021 08:35
Still Dealing With The Sad
Rozina said:
This is very true and sad. So many in this situation. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 19:37
Rozina said:
This is very true and sad. So many in this situation. Thank you for sharing.
December 16th, 2021 19:37
Still Dealing With The Sad
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
Covid has left us estranged
So poetic yet so teary
December 16th, 2021 13:42
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
Covid has left us estranged
So poetic yet so teary
December 16th, 2021 13:42
Still Dealing With The Sad
Nilanjana Singh said:
I like the way you have put out this so creatively
December 16th, 2021 08:57
Nilanjana Singh said:
I like the way you have put out this so creatively
December 16th, 2021 08:57
Boxes In The Attic
Lorna said:
Beautiful and haunting - I really enjoyed it.
December 7th, 2021 11:28
Lorna said:
Beautiful and haunting - I really enjoyed it.
December 7th, 2021 11:28
Boxes In The Attic
Draven said:
This is brilliant. Beautiful rhythm.
Just one note, by QUITE you mean QUIET?
December 6th, 2021 09:29
Draven said:
This is brilliant. Beautiful rhythm.
Just one note, by QUITE you mean QUIET?
December 6th, 2021 09:29
I’m Cold
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s definitely getting a bit cold, lol
wonderful flow, a fun read
thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s definitely getting a bit cold, lol
wonderful flow, a fun read
thanks for sharing
December 6th, 2021 04:37
A Real Who Done It
mdrogers said:
Reminds me of the Dylan song about the boxer. Hurricane
December 1st, 2021 14:05
mdrogers said:
Reminds me of the Dylan song about the boxer. Hurricane
December 1st, 2021 14:05
A Real Who Done It
dusk arising said:
But i bet she\'ll be propping up a bar or two.
December 1st, 2021 09:13
dusk arising said:
But i bet she\'ll be propping up a bar or two.
December 1st, 2021 09:13
TOO HOT TO HOLD
Doggerel Dave said:
OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well penned, MD.
November 30th, 2021 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
OK, OK, OK I got there in the end..... Good quality entertainment well penned, MD.
November 30th, 2021 19:18
Help In The Frey
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, being positive in a bad situation can bring you into a better way and will do soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, being positive in a bad situation can bring you into a better way and will do soon.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 01:45
Help In The Frey
dusk arising said:
It\'s good to read your realistic vision of this hell you are going through. Yes there will come a time when you realise you have walked free, though hopefully a wisdom will remain with you.
Time will do its healing thing.
Really refreshing to see this aspect of our lives written in a positive way and from a novel viewpoint.
November 29th, 2021 08:49
dusk arising said:
It\'s good to read your realistic vision of this hell you are going through. Yes there will come a time when you realise you have walked free, though hopefully a wisdom will remain with you.
Time will do its healing thing.
Really refreshing to see this aspect of our lives written in a positive way and from a novel viewpoint.
November 29th, 2021 08:49
A Day At The Beach
Goldfinch60 said:
Each of those days by the beach is there for you to enjoy.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Each of those days by the beach is there for you to enjoy.
Andy
November 27th, 2021 01:43
A Day At The Beach
Nicholas Browning said:
What a fantastic simile to top off a mysteriously straightforward observation. Two thumbs up!
November 26th, 2021 10:54
Nicholas Browning said:
What a fantastic simile to top off a mysteriously straightforward observation. Two thumbs up!
November 26th, 2021 10:54
The Whisper
Nicholas Browning said:
Reflection is a beautiful thing. Best Regards MD.
November 23rd, 2021 11:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Reflection is a beautiful thing. Best Regards MD.
November 23rd, 2021 11:16
Eight Seconds
L. B. Mek said:
Hemingway-esque
love the detailed portrayal
and the analogy
to how, we survive
this Pamplona - run, of a Life...
great read, thanks for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
Hemingway-esque
love the detailed portrayal
and the analogy
to how, we survive
this Pamplona - run, of a Life...
great read, thanks for sharing
November 23rd, 2021 05:01
Spontaneous Combustion
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, your overall metaphor is apt
and intensely vivid,
I also really like your tightrope routine, between
flagrant wording and suggestively bold imagery..
a clever write, an immersive read
and a poetic depiction
of that innate animalistic element of humanity\'s natural sensuality, of sexual desire..
a good read/depiction, thanks for sharing
November 22nd, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, your overall metaphor is apt
and intensely vivid,
I also really like your tightrope routine, between
flagrant wording and suggestively bold imagery..
a clever write, an immersive read
and a poetic depiction
of that innate animalistic element of humanity\'s natural sensuality, of sexual desire..
a good read/depiction, thanks for sharing
November 22nd, 2021 05:32
The Bottom
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
We wish to unravel the mysteries
But at times answers unfound
Yet we wonder did other opened the knot
Sometimes it’s better to let them be mysteries
Your poetry made me nostalgic of my swimming classes though, the feeling of exploding of lungs…felt it
November 19th, 2021 12:09
spilleronsheet said:
Well penned dear poet
We wish to unravel the mysteries
But at times answers unfound
Yet we wonder did other opened the knot
Sometimes it’s better to let them be mysteries
Your poetry made me nostalgic of my swimming classes though, the feeling of exploding of lungs…felt it
November 19th, 2021 12:09
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