Comments received on poems by MDStone



White Fang
arqios said:

This speaks both of Discovery Channel stuff and other things that parallel in feel and result. Much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊️

May 11th, 2025 06:30

White Fang
sorenbarrett said:

This pulls up pictures of Jack London but I feel that outside the wonderful images and story told there is more a metaphor as well and so well written.

May 11th, 2025 04:31

White Fang
Poetic Licence said:

Tales of natures night and it\'s life cycle, enjoyed the read

May 11th, 2025 02:37

The Flight of The Butterfly
arqios said:

The somewhat short lifecycle also shortens the window of appreciability 🙏🏻🕊️

May 9th, 2025 08:03

The Flight of The Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:

This well could be a metaphor for beauty in general as it changes over time. Women always try to preserve a youthful appearance and men do hair implants. Age changes us all. A wonderful write

May 9th, 2025 03:58

The Flight of The Butterfly
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write about a beautiful part of nature, that sadly does not hang around to long, enjoyed the read

May 9th, 2025 02:27

Tangled Memories
Poetic Licence said:

A great read, packed to the rafters with wonderful imagery, really enjoyed the read

May 7th, 2025 08:03

Satisfied
sorenbarrett said:

Quite creative MD I assume it is intended due to the separation in the sixth line that lets the reader continue to read it line to line or read down the separation to the end then return and read down the right column to the end. Very nice and I imagine that difficult to do.

May 4th, 2025 19:28

Satisfied
Cheeky Missy said:

Oh! How deliciously beautiful! Every line chockful of details fit to make the reader swoon, how happily I lose myself herein. Very, very lovely. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. I love it!

May 4th, 2025 19:10

The Water Never Burned
sorenbarrett said:

I faved this poem for its hypnotic feel given by its returning line of the title in slightly altered fashion and meter. It was mesmerizing and strangely hypnotic with a mystical feel. I found it lovely in a dark type of way.

May 4th, 2025 04:08

NIGHT MUSE
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed they do. There is nothing like a muse to give one life and they hide in everything around us. A lovely write MD.

May 2nd, 2025 04:02

NIGHT MUSE
dimpy said:

superfine...

May 2nd, 2025 03:47

Unseen Realms
Skally said:

wow. so pure and warm. love this. keep writing

May 1st, 2025 09:49

Unseen Realms
arqios said:

The constellations tell these stories which the night Sky was a kind of Netflix of the olden days. 🕊🙏🏻

May 1st, 2025 08:33

Unseen Realms
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting approach in battle format nicely done

April 30th, 2025 20:18

Tangled Memories
sorenbarrett said:

Memories as sweet as the berries. A good write

April 28th, 2025 20:56

Tangled Memories
Cheeky Missy said:

Perfection! I love this!!! Chockful of details and imagery, evocative and inspiring, this is downright gorgeous! Beautiful and winsomly rendered with a delightful, hauntingly sweet yet bittersweet poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

April 28th, 2025 20:10

True Love Never Dies
sorenbarrett said:

Erotic and sensual this poem speaks to renewal of love. Nicely worded

April 25th, 2025 20:18

Spring Storms
arqios said:

New life and the after-storm; brings me to that special fragrance of fresh air that the storm’s washing leaves behind. 🙏🏻🕊️

April 24th, 2025 05:37

Spring Storms
sorenbarrett said:

I particularly liked the metaphor of the storm in this and how out of our life storms new life emerges. It was very nice to end on an upbeat as well. The rhyme and flow of the poem added to its power and I think well done. Loved it

April 24th, 2025 04:22

Where Swallows Play
nephilim56 said:

beautiful

April 23rd, 2025 05:16

When Somebody’s Dead
Poetic Licence said:

There are no winners in death, nicely crafted and enjoyable read

April 18th, 2025 02:04

When Somebody’s Dead
sorenbarrett said:

A truth and a nice set of quadruple rhymes. Well done

April 17th, 2025 20:47

When Somebody’s Dead
arqios said:

“Nobody wins,” now ain’t that the truth!🙏🏻🕊

April 17th, 2025 20:28

Where Swallows Play
Poetic Licence said:

They are an amazing sight, especially when in their thousands they put on the magical arial display in early evening, enjoyed the read

April 16th, 2025 02:10

Where Swallows Play
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful depiction of nature and a picture of watching life as it unfurls. Lovely

April 15th, 2025 21:33

Lost At Sea
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 15th, 2025 09:16

Lost At Sea
arqios said:

This poem will stay with me for quite a while 🙏🏻🕊️

April 15th, 2025 07:50

Lost At Sea
sorenbarrett said:

A good poem on the surface but in its metaphoric depths it rages. A poem that anyone that has a relationship and has tied themselves to another should take to heart. A definite fave

April 15th, 2025 03:35

Lost At Sea
Poetic Licence said:

A strong message in a bit nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read

April 15th, 2025 01:33

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