Comments received on poems by MDStone
Knight’s Tale
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved the legend of Arthur and the metaphoric messages woven into the tales. Each knight a virtue. Here in this poem some of this carries through and in good rhyme and meter it becomes personalized into a single individual. A wonderful write.
April 13th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved the legend of Arthur and the metaphoric messages woven into the tales. Each knight a virtue. Here in this poem some of this carries through and in good rhyme and meter it becomes personalized into a single individual. A wonderful write.
April 13th, 2025 04:09
Knight’s Tale
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write on a moment in history, written on the positive of those days, but there many darker days for the knights, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write on a moment in history, written on the positive of those days, but there many darker days for the knights, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 02:16
Knight’s Tale
arqios said:
Brings me to the opening scene of the film with a similar title, where a young Heath Ledger (r.I.p.) takes on the “identity”/station of his freshly deceased liege, Sir Hector. A very moving poem of an oft glamourised period of our past history. 🙏🏻🕊
April 12th, 2025 22:23
arqios said:
Brings me to the opening scene of the film with a similar title, where a young Heath Ledger (r.I.p.) takes on the “identity”/station of his freshly deceased liege, Sir Hector. A very moving poem of an oft glamourised period of our past history. 🙏🏻🕊
April 12th, 2025 22:23
Where The Willows Grow
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is a journey from and towards growth birthing and rebirthing through life. The willow speaks through this poem, I enjoyed the read!
April 12th, 2025 06:31
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is a journey from and towards growth birthing and rebirthing through life. The willow speaks through this poem, I enjoyed the read!
April 12th, 2025 06:31
Where The Willows Grow
sorenbarrett said:
A wistful longing fills the heart with this poem\'s reading. Nostalgic with a tender sadness it echoes its message with each verse. Like a stone thrown in a pond it ripples outward. Although I am not much for repetitive rhymes in this case it enhances the message and like those concentric rings grows larger with it progress. It is an echo of the heart. Very nicely done a fave
April 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A wistful longing fills the heart with this poem\'s reading. Nostalgic with a tender sadness it echoes its message with each verse. Like a stone thrown in a pond it ripples outward. Although I am not much for repetitive rhymes in this case it enhances the message and like those concentric rings grows larger with it progress. It is an echo of the heart. Very nicely done a fave
April 12th, 2025 04:10
Where The Willows Grow
arqios said:
Ah, the atmosphere of poetry! I too sometimes converse with crows; but only when they initiate the dialogue🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. The title reminds me of that long ago story \"Where the Redfern Grows.\"
April 11th, 2025 21:58
arqios said:
Ah, the atmosphere of poetry! I too sometimes converse with crows; but only when they initiate the dialogue🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. The title reminds me of that long ago story \"Where the Redfern Grows.\"
April 11th, 2025 21:58
Shellf Life
arqios said:
Brings to mind the shells 🐚 hermit crabs vacate and move into, they would have a sort of shellf life. 🙏🏻🕊️
April 10th, 2025 06:48
arqios said:
Brings to mind the shells 🐚 hermit crabs vacate and move into, they would have a sort of shellf life. 🙏🏻🕊️
April 10th, 2025 06:48
Shellf Life
sorenbarrett said:
Clever title and the poem itself is very nicely written with rhyme and good meter. A metaphor as well and a lesson to teach. Loved it
April 10th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever title and the poem itself is very nicely written with rhyme and good meter. A metaphor as well and a lesson to teach. Loved it
April 10th, 2025 03:43
Shellf Life
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write of going through a bad time, but coming out the other side starting a fresh, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:22
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write of going through a bad time, but coming out the other side starting a fresh, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 02:22
Normalcy
arqios said:
The norm and what is considered normal rarely find themselves exactly on the same page. Strange even if there is some logic in expecting them to be🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
The norm and what is considered normal rarely find themselves exactly on the same page. Strange even if there is some logic in expecting them to be🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 06:09
Normalcy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the perception and hunt for what is classed as normal, each person will have their own version, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 02:38
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the perception and hunt for what is classed as normal, each person will have their own version, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 02:38
Normalcy
sorenbarrett said:
What a great question What is normalcy. Beautiful images in this poem that represent the ideal of the normal world. Normalcy is so variable and depends on what you measure it against and is always from your point of view. Very nicely stated in this poem.
April 8th, 2025 20:55
sorenbarrett said:
What a great question What is normalcy. Beautiful images in this poem that represent the ideal of the normal world. Normalcy is so variable and depends on what you measure it against and is always from your point of view. Very nicely stated in this poem.
April 8th, 2025 20:55
Racing Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:
The mind at full speed,not allowing anytime to think properly and probably making it feel like it is going to explode, nicely expressed and written
April 8th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
The mind at full speed,not allowing anytime to think properly and probably making it feel like it is going to explode, nicely expressed and written
April 8th, 2025 05:37
Racing Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Racing thoughts well depicted in this poem well penned. Anxiety in action. Hard to grow accustomed to.
April 8th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Racing thoughts well depicted in this poem well penned. Anxiety in action. Hard to grow accustomed to.
April 8th, 2025 04:11
The Mystical
sorenbarrett said:
Well defined before mentioned this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Well defined before mentioned this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
April 5th, 2025 05:28
The Mystical
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely over the mystery of tears, we have all heard people say i don\'t know why I\'m crying at some stage, enjoyed the read
April 5th, 2025 01:11
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely over the mystery of tears, we have all heard people say i don\'t know why I\'m crying at some stage, enjoyed the read
April 5th, 2025 01:11
The Color of Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is seen. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 02:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is seen. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 02:59
The Color of Pain
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write,as with emotions, feelings and pain I think it would a rainbow of colours, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write,as with emotions, feelings and pain I think it would a rainbow of colours, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 02:14
Toasting Our Love
Poetic Licence said:
As with having the companionship of a loved one the evening is also satisfying and calming, very enjoyable read
April 2nd, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
As with having the companionship of a loved one the evening is also satisfying and calming, very enjoyable read
April 2nd, 2025 04:32
Toasting Our Love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of companionship and its comfort. Although could be literal I take metaphor from this with evening being the end of life. Peaceful, calming and satisfying.
April 2nd, 2025 03:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of companionship and its comfort. Although could be literal I take metaphor from this with evening being the end of life. Peaceful, calming and satisfying.
April 2nd, 2025 03:12
SCULPTED
Poetic Licence said:
We all have this feeling as we discard things we have worked on and then believe it\'s no good, I imagine it applies to the whole art sector, lovely read
April 1st, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
We all have this feeling as we discard things we have worked on and then believe it\'s no good, I imagine it applies to the whole art sector, lovely read
April 1st, 2025 02:21
SCULPTED
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. Poetry in stone would ensure that it would last for future generations. Art is art no matter the medium and such a work would be like the supposed ten commandments or a Rosetta stone. To bad it didn\'t work out but nothing ventured nothing gained they say. A most lovely write without the stone. How many times I start a poem that I discard after seeing it doesn\'t work. Loved it
March 31st, 2025 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. Poetry in stone would ensure that it would last for future generations. Art is art no matter the medium and such a work would be like the supposed ten commandments or a Rosetta stone. To bad it didn\'t work out but nothing ventured nothing gained they say. A most lovely write without the stone. How many times I start a poem that I discard after seeing it doesn\'t work. Loved it
March 31st, 2025 20:36
Eyes Wide Open
Poetic Licence said:
When the comes alive when all you want to do is sleep,very relatable, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
When the comes alive when all you want to do is sleep,very relatable, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 03:12
Eyes Wide Open
sorenbarrett said:
Racing thoughts preventing sleep. Been there.
March 27th, 2025 20:59
sorenbarrett said:
Racing thoughts preventing sleep. Been there.
March 27th, 2025 20:59
SORDID
Poetic Licence said:
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if sordid was censored and sanctioned, what a better world it would be, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 04:36
Poetic Licence said:
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if sordid was censored and sanctioned, what a better world it would be, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 04:36
SORDID
sorenbarrett said:
I am usually quite picky about the reuse of words in a poem but this is an exception due to the emphasis the use of the word puts on the meaning of the poem. Well worded and rhymed it has a strong message that is well sent. A fave
March 27th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I am usually quite picky about the reuse of words in a poem but this is an exception due to the emphasis the use of the word puts on the meaning of the poem. Well worded and rhymed it has a strong message that is well sent. A fave
March 27th, 2025 04:20
Ghost Ship
sorenbarrett said:
Now this was a fun poem with great images and rhyme but even more a novel twist at the end. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Now this was a fun poem with great images and rhyme but even more a novel twist at the end. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:14
Ghost Ship
Poetic Licence said:
I found an interesting, well written and enjoyable write
March 26th, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
I found an interesting, well written and enjoyable write
March 26th, 2025 03:20
Stalemate
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with good lines as well as wisdom wrapped up in a short piece. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with good lines as well as wisdom wrapped up in a short piece. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 03:57
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