Comments received on poems by MDStone
The Sea Wall
L. B. Mek said:
\'The smell of sweet perfume at bay\'
(salty mineral, earthiness
and a thudding tide\'s, waves
of frothing sweetness
invading those senses
like an ethereal, presence)
yes, dear poet
I too have a memento, I recall
in my hours of overwhelming
lonesome, yearning
for when she, was merely
a fingertips - reach, away..
(thank you, these words
I relate to, on so many levels
what a triumphantly vivid wording
what practised skill, you posses
to craft such a luminous, poem)
April 19th, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'The smell of sweet perfume at bay\'
(salty mineral, earthiness
and a thudding tide\'s, waves
of frothing sweetness
invading those senses
like an ethereal, presence)
yes, dear poet
I too have a memento, I recall
in my hours of overwhelming
lonesome, yearning
for when she, was merely
a fingertips - reach, away..
(thank you, these words
I relate to, on so many levels
what a triumphantly vivid wording
what practised skill, you posses
to craft such a luminous, poem)
April 19th, 2022 05:10
Tattoo
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I think no one, should dictate
what you can or should
or should not, do
with your body
be it, tattoo\'s or anything else..
some of the most, considerate
and wise people
I have met in my life, have tattoos and piercings
galore..
yet, its just a form of expression
to them
a way to deal-with or release or immortalise
something they\'re going through
or have survived..
(but, tattoo\'s
as trend frenzy, fashion fads
is just an idiotic notion, to me
forgive me..)
so well reasoned and written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 18th, 2022 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I think no one, should dictate
what you can or should
or should not, do
with your body
be it, tattoo\'s or anything else..
some of the most, considerate
and wise people
I have met in my life, have tattoos and piercings
galore..
yet, its just a form of expression
to them
a way to deal-with or release or immortalise
something they\'re going through
or have survived..
(but, tattoo\'s
as trend frenzy, fashion fads
is just an idiotic notion, to me
forgive me..)
so well reasoned and written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 18th, 2022 04:33
Repose
L. B. Mek said:
suppose, it would be rude to
propose maybe we too may find, that
repose, excavated from within our
prose if we but heed, your poetic
compose...
(just a joy to read!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
April 14th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
suppose, it would be rude to
propose maybe we too may find, that
repose, excavated from within our
prose if we but heed, your poetic
compose...
(just a joy to read!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
April 14th, 2022 03:23
Accidental Coma
L. B. Mek said:
great message! an important topic
(every driver should be reminded
as soon as the get in driver\'s, seat
\'do Not drink and drive
do Not take drugs and drive
do Not text and drive
that vehicle, you\'re manoeuvring
with mere fingertips, thanks
to those
power assisted, steering wheels
is a weapon
of mass destruction! that can ruin
hundred of lives
in a millisecond, of bad judgement!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
great message! an important topic
(every driver should be reminded
as soon as the get in driver\'s, seat
\'do Not drink and drive
do Not take drugs and drive
do Not text and drive
that vehicle, you\'re manoeuvring
with mere fingertips, thanks
to those
power assisted, steering wheels
is a weapon
of mass destruction! that can ruin
hundred of lives
in a millisecond, of bad judgement!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:26
ODE TO THE BLUE JAY
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, great rhymes. I do love a cardinal too, but much harder to rhyme to, right? Great job!
April 6th, 2022 00:40
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, great rhymes. I do love a cardinal too, but much harder to rhyme to, right? Great job!
April 6th, 2022 00:40
ODE TO THE BLUE JAY
voices of ghosts said:
very nice, you painted a great outdoor scenery
April 6th, 2022 00:21
voices of ghosts said:
very nice, you painted a great outdoor scenery
April 6th, 2022 00:21
WEARY
L. B. Mek said:
what comforting thoughts, to share
with the world
in these - most embattled, Times
waged-in, between warmongering
inhumanity
and an endlessly incessant, plague..
we need , all the wise words
of solace, we can get
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
April 5th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
what comforting thoughts, to share
with the world
in these - most embattled, Times
waged-in, between warmongering
inhumanity
and an endlessly incessant, plague..
we need , all the wise words
of solace, we can get
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
April 5th, 2022 03:45
Dad Was My Best Man
Dahlia said:
wholehearted memories, well penned, enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:16
Dahlia said:
wholehearted memories, well penned, enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:16
SCARS
MDStone said:
Thank You, LB
You are quite the encourager. Oh how this world needs more people like you.
March 31st, 2022 06:08
MDStone said:
Thank You, LB
You are quite the encourager. Oh how this world needs more people like you.
March 31st, 2022 06:08
SCARS
L. B. Mek said:
\'Scars say to others, *that I\'m: badass!
I having a fighting spirit that don’t quit
I don’t give up, I don’t give in or give out
I make it through, and I find a way\'..
(100% pure - unfiltered, Veracity
shared so as to empower
waning, life weary hearts!
thank you, dear poet)
March 31st, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'Scars say to others, *that I\'m: badass!
I having a fighting spirit that don’t quit
I don’t give up, I don’t give in or give out
I make it through, and I find a way\'..
(100% pure - unfiltered, Veracity
shared so as to empower
waning, life weary hearts!
thank you, dear poet)
March 31st, 2022 03:33
Quicksand
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes we merely stumble
in our path of life
but, when the more severe
of our obstacles
blockades our path to progression
it can feel like
all we can do is lay still, play dead
wait for the hurt to recede
and that sinking feeling, to cease
and hope we can edge our way out, eventually
or a helping hand will come along
to pull us, free..
a wonderful use of classic poetic imagery..
thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes we merely stumble
in our path of life
but, when the more severe
of our obstacles
blockades our path to progression
it can feel like
all we can do is lay still, play dead
wait for the hurt to recede
and that sinking feeling, to cease
and hope we can edge our way out, eventually
or a helping hand will come along
to pull us, free..
a wonderful use of classic poetic imagery..
thanks for sharing
March 21st, 2022 06:16
It’s Your Call
L. B. Mek said:
\'modernity\'s social networking
zealotry
that pariah cesspool of depraved
inhumanity
where those schoolyard bullies
and masochist, victim hierarchy\'s
reign supreme, adhering to nihilism\'s
futility\'...
so yeah, basically
I\'m not a huge fan, lol
(thanks for sharing)
March 10th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'modernity\'s social networking
zealotry
that pariah cesspool of depraved
inhumanity
where those schoolyard bullies
and masochist, victim hierarchy\'s
reign supreme, adhering to nihilism\'s
futility\'...
so yeah, basically
I\'m not a huge fan, lol
(thanks for sharing)
March 10th, 2022 04:28
Stained Glass
Christina8 said:
I like this poem and I like the happy message at the end. Aren\'t we all fragile beautiful works of stained glass? Wonderful!
March 5th, 2022 18:28
Christina8 said:
I like this poem and I like the happy message at the end. Aren\'t we all fragile beautiful works of stained glass? Wonderful!
March 5th, 2022 18:28
Destinations
L. B. Mek said:
wise words,
\'don\'t ignore Spring
waiting, for that
Summer of promise\'
indeed...
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
wise words,
\'don\'t ignore Spring
waiting, for that
Summer of promise\'
indeed...
thanks for sharing
March 1st, 2022 03:58
What Do Your Eyes See
Rozina said:
I felt a lump in my throat reading this. Remembering my parents too. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2022 22:11
Rozina said:
I felt a lump in my throat reading this. Remembering my parents too. Thank you for sharing.
February 18th, 2022 22:11
What Do Your Eyes See
A Boy With Roses said:
\"what are you doing today, Dad
And What Do Your Eyes See\"
perfectly sad
February 18th, 2022 19:57
A Boy With Roses said:
\"what are you doing today, Dad
And What Do Your Eyes See\"
perfectly sad
February 18th, 2022 19:57
Yesterday
L. B. Mek said:
genuine wry wit, with deeply insightful commentary
and worded so accessibly relatable..
a great write!
made me lol
\'I’m lying awake in the middle of the night
Tears in my eyes from acid reflux’s plight
Hair grew where it was supposed to grow
Skin was smooth with its youthful glow
I could write my name in the sand or dirt
Now all I can muster is little bitty squirt\'
February 18th, 2022 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
genuine wry wit, with deeply insightful commentary
and worded so accessibly relatable..
a great write!
made me lol
\'I’m lying awake in the middle of the night
Tears in my eyes from acid reflux’s plight
Hair grew where it was supposed to grow
Skin was smooth with its youthful glow
I could write my name in the sand or dirt
Now all I can muster is little bitty squirt\'
February 18th, 2022 04:10
The Wonder of Life
L. B. Mek said:
fun read, thanks for sharing..
\'Busted my lip *on* cut up my face
One day I hope I’ll learn how to race
And this is the wonder of life\'
February 17th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
fun read, thanks for sharing..
\'Busted my lip *on* cut up my face
One day I hope I’ll learn how to race
And this is the wonder of life\'
February 17th, 2022 04:22
The Wonder of Life
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very true story nicely penned Enjoyed reading it
February 16th, 2022 23:14
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very true story nicely penned Enjoyed reading it
February 16th, 2022 23:14
Second Wind
L. B. Mek said:
well written and a comforting message..
thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
well written and a comforting message..
thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2022 05:03
A Piece Of The Wind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem .. so nicely expressed ))
February 1st, 2022 16:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem .. so nicely expressed ))
February 1st, 2022 16:53
Tweedle-Lee-Dee-Dee-Dee
L. B. Mek said:
timely commentary, and demoralizingly, poignant
thanks for sharing..
and yes, I too agree
a pinch of fun, makes our reality
so much more palatable
February 1st, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
timely commentary, and demoralizingly, poignant
thanks for sharing..
and yes, I too agree
a pinch of fun, makes our reality
so much more palatable
February 1st, 2022 05:43
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