Comments received on poems by MDStone
The Apparition
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all specks in the scheme of life.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all specks in the scheme of life.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:38
Playing Hooky
dusk arising said:
May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in mine.
November 10th, 2021 08:17
dusk arising said:
May days like that thrill you through the rest of your life. They have in mine.
November 10th, 2021 08:17
A Man’s Man
MDStone said:
Dusk Arising,
Glad you could have a chuckle at my expense. I have ridden bikes most of my life, so I guess it appealed to my sense of freedom and the open road. I appreciate what you brought out. Thank you for your input. I appreciate the insight you shared. Thank You
November 9th, 2021 19:48
MDStone said:
Dusk Arising,
Glad you could have a chuckle at my expense. I have ridden bikes most of my life, so I guess it appealed to my sense of freedom and the open road. I appreciate what you brought out. Thank you for your input. I appreciate the insight you shared. Thank You
November 9th, 2021 19:48
A Man’s Man
dusk arising said:
Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in in these LGBT days.
Giggling at connotations of your chosen image at top of page .... yesterday\'s macho.
November 9th, 2021 18:35
dusk arising said:
Very narrow description of what a man is. LOL @ title, very misleading in in these LGBT days.
Giggling at connotations of your chosen image at top of page .... yesterday\'s macho.
November 9th, 2021 18:35
Through The Battle
L. B. Mek said:
\'The landscape of my mind
Now and forever marred
You can’t unsee war’s scene
You can’t un-hear *its sound
The warrior forever changed
Just for standing their ground
Do others see their valor
Do they recognize their heroic frame
Or do they simply think,
“They’re just not the same”
(a Timely and meaningful write
thanks for sharing)
November 9th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'The landscape of my mind
Now and forever marred
You can’t unsee war’s scene
You can’t un-hear *its sound
The warrior forever changed
Just for standing their ground
Do others see their valor
Do they recognize their heroic frame
Or do they simply think,
“They’re just not the same”
(a Timely and meaningful write
thanks for sharing)
November 9th, 2021 04:37
Through The Battle
dusk arising said:
Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and savagery of close combat. The silence which follows. Shaking hands and limbs as adrenaline floods.
Who else can know.
November 8th, 2021 17:13
dusk arising said:
Who can know this but those who survived. The blood, stink, noise and savagery of close combat. The silence which follows. Shaking hands and limbs as adrenaline floods.
Who else can know.
November 8th, 2021 17:13
Through The Battle
Paul Bell said:
Soldiers come through wars unscathed, but the scars are still there. Time to remember the ones who didn\'t make it.
November 8th, 2021 13:51
Paul Bell said:
Soldiers come through wars unscathed, but the scars are still there. Time to remember the ones who didn\'t make it.
November 8th, 2021 13:51
Freak Show
Lorna said:
I shut if off a long while back.... we don\'t have to live like that.... but it is not for the faint of heart because it means you walk alone a good part of the time.
November 8th, 2021 06:27
Lorna said:
I shut if off a long while back.... we don\'t have to live like that.... but it is not for the faint of heart because it means you walk alone a good part of the time.
November 8th, 2021 06:27
Sibling Bond
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful and thank you so much dear poet for reminding us this priceless bond…thanks for sharing
November 6th, 2021 17:00
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful and thank you so much dear poet for reminding us this priceless bond…thanks for sharing
November 6th, 2021 17:00
The Human Race
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I absolutely love the light emanating from this piece. It cares not for rhyme but for reason and truth. It speaks in unison from the hearts of all. We really need more peacemakers in this world, and this piece is one such. A new found favourite of mine. Never stop spreading the light. Thank you.
November 5th, 2021 09:55
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I absolutely love the light emanating from this piece. It cares not for rhyme but for reason and truth. It speaks in unison from the hearts of all. We really need more peacemakers in this world, and this piece is one such. A new found favourite of mine. Never stop spreading the light. Thank you.
November 5th, 2021 09:55
Earth Wind & Fire
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Served sizzling hot I see... Flammable! - Thank you, dear hot writer. :-)
November 4th, 2021 08:16
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Served sizzling hot I see... Flammable! - Thank you, dear hot writer. :-)
November 4th, 2021 08:16
VIRTUOSO
Florence Red said:
This poem has my heart. Subtly reinforced the fact that virtual world can never be replaced by the real world come what may.
November 3rd, 2021 03:54
Florence Red said:
This poem has my heart. Subtly reinforced the fact that virtual world can never be replaced by the real world come what may.
November 3rd, 2021 03:54
VIRTUOSO
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
How intelligently you weld the imagery to the present scenario
There we are lost to the keyboards of our devices
Where memory keeps fading, over depending on the devices we hold
These little devils might connect us to the other souls
But in reality we lie aloof
In this chaos we run to possess more and more
Forgetting how simple were the days when the mankind were not slave to this more and more
November 2nd, 2021 12:48
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted dear poet
How intelligently you weld the imagery to the present scenario
There we are lost to the keyboards of our devices
Where memory keeps fading, over depending on the devices we hold
These little devils might connect us to the other souls
But in reality we lie aloof
In this chaos we run to possess more and more
Forgetting how simple were the days when the mankind were not slave to this more and more
November 2nd, 2021 12:48
VIRTUOSO
dusk arising said:
I like this and the truths contained. It is indeed a warning not to become complacent about virtual reality and good old grandma\'s reality on the tongue etc.
November 2nd, 2021 12:37
dusk arising said:
I like this and the truths contained. It is indeed a warning not to become complacent about virtual reality and good old grandma\'s reality on the tongue etc.
November 2nd, 2021 12:37
VIRTUOSO
Mermaid said:
So many truths in this thought provoking gem.
Love:
\"...The particulars of sunset on the beach
out performs the highest defined pixels.
One tantalizing tingle on the tongue
exceeds stimulation of sensory simulation....\"
Superb imagery and metaphors from start to finish .
November 2nd, 2021 10:38
Mermaid said:
So many truths in this thought provoking gem.
Love:
\"...The particulars of sunset on the beach
out performs the highest defined pixels.
One tantalizing tingle on the tongue
exceeds stimulation of sensory simulation....\"
Superb imagery and metaphors from start to finish .
November 2nd, 2021 10:38
You Are Not The Sea
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully and meaningfully expressive
imbued with an important message, thanks for sharing
November 2nd, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully and meaningfully expressive
imbued with an important message, thanks for sharing
November 2nd, 2021 04:16
You Are Not The Sea
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We are not our feelings .. we are way more than that
Sorry to hear you’ve been struggling with these type of feelings
November 1st, 2021 13:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We are not our feelings .. we are way more than that
Sorry to hear you’ve been struggling with these type of feelings
November 1st, 2021 13:12
You Are Not The Sea
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good poem . Nice expression. Spiritual awakening ? I too am going through one of those . Sometimes I feel so peaceful , other times I get so sad or even scared
November 1st, 2021 13:11
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good poem . Nice expression. Spiritual awakening ? I too am going through one of those . Sometimes I feel so peaceful , other times I get so sad or even scared
November 1st, 2021 13:11
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