Comments received on poems by MDStone
The Cowboy’s Deed
arqios said:
This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to mind a thought about the cowboy now being \'dead,\' as the classic kind is a rare find. Thanks for sharing this stirring poem. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:43
arqios said:
This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to mind a thought about the cowboy now being \'dead,\' as the classic kind is a rare find. Thanks for sharing this stirring poem. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:43
The Cowboy’s Deed
Jonas Robinson said:
I love the idea of a Western poetic vision. I\'ve had ideas like this myself but have not been successful. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:05
Jonas Robinson said:
I love the idea of a Western poetic vision. I\'ve had ideas like this myself but have not been successful. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:05
The Little Ones
L. B. Mek said:
Such morose tragedies
breaks a part of me, every time
and it\'s a part I can never get back
I
can accept, that life
is gonna Fck with us
till it kills us;
it is what it is, there\'s a cost
to everything born of matter..
but
I beg, can we Please, please
PLEASE
just give our children a chance
PLEASE!!!
Fck each other up
morning till night
and call that, living
I\'ll take that, square
on the chin..
but this callous, inhumane
desecration
of that innate duty and loyalty
to the children \'We\' bring
into the world
must end!
we\'ve got to stop using them
as bullets for our life\'s, guns
of vengeance or redemption
just let them, find their way
give them a chance
at experiencing, A life
not warped, by our venomous
words and fingers..
ahhhhh
the futility of it all, Just kills me..
May 26th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
Such morose tragedies
breaks a part of me, every time
and it\'s a part I can never get back
I
can accept, that life
is gonna Fck with us
till it kills us;
it is what it is, there\'s a cost
to everything born of matter..
but
I beg, can we Please, please
PLEASE
just give our children a chance
PLEASE!!!
Fck each other up
morning till night
and call that, living
I\'ll take that, square
on the chin..
but this callous, inhumane
desecration
of that innate duty and loyalty
to the children \'We\' bring
into the world
must end!
we\'ve got to stop using them
as bullets for our life\'s, guns
of vengeance or redemption
just let them, find their way
give them a chance
at experiencing, A life
not warped, by our venomous
words and fingers..
ahhhhh
the futility of it all, Just kills me..
May 26th, 2022 04:27
We Maim & Mar
L. B. Mek said:
so very, True!
even with my feeble attempt
at sensitivity and pre-emptive apologies
I fear, the hurt
my words, can cause..
(in Your words, exists
the wisdom that I, seek
dear Poet)
I read and learn, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
so very, True!
even with my feeble attempt
at sensitivity and pre-emptive apologies
I fear, the hurt
my words, can cause..
(in Your words, exists
the wisdom that I, seek
dear Poet)
I read and learn, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 04:49
Guilty Pleasure
L. B. Mek said:
loved the metaphor and great imagery, throughout
such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
loved the metaphor and great imagery, throughout
such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 04:17
The Call
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, so very well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 17th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, so very well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 17th, 2022 05:04
She Calls Me BoBo
arqios said:
BoBo reminds me of a clown, now clouded in the memory of former days.
May 10th, 2022 06:51
arqios said:
BoBo reminds me of a clown, now clouded in the memory of former days.
May 10th, 2022 06:51
There Is No Room For Hate
Rozina said:
I agree with your sentiments, good advice.
May 6th, 2022 22:03
Rozina said:
I agree with your sentiments, good advice.
May 6th, 2022 22:03
The Path Complacency Paves
L. B. Mek said:
complacency, best friends
with that assumptive arrogance
of peace and happiness
being our life\'s, normal
when all of existence
hints at us, all the time
that chaos and strife
are our status-quo
everything else, merely visits
once in a while...
\'If only I had heard your heart so softly moan
And your cries for love I had quickly heeded
Then perhaps I would not be standing here alone
With memories crashing in like ocean waves
In a place and time of love that is now forgone\'..
I wonder what percentage of the world, can relate to these words
as-if they were inked, using their very blood...?!
(just a great read
thank you! dear Poet)
April 29th, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
complacency, best friends
with that assumptive arrogance
of peace and happiness
being our life\'s, normal
when all of existence
hints at us, all the time
that chaos and strife
are our status-quo
everything else, merely visits
once in a while...
\'If only I had heard your heart so softly moan
And your cries for love I had quickly heeded
Then perhaps I would not be standing here alone
With memories crashing in like ocean waves
In a place and time of love that is now forgone\'..
I wonder what percentage of the world, can relate to these words
as-if they were inked, using their very blood...?!
(just a great read
thank you! dear Poet)
April 29th, 2022 03:46
Serendipitous Connection
L. B. Mek said:
it can indeed!
good to read some genuine poetry
for a change
some choice phrasing and imagery:
\'That started with a desultory conversation
Where beans are brewed into liquid gold
With a choice of breakfast, mild, or bold
She was a barista with stories to tell\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
it can indeed!
good to read some genuine poetry
for a change
some choice phrasing and imagery:
\'That started with a desultory conversation
Where beans are brewed into liquid gold
With a choice of breakfast, mild, or bold
She was a barista with stories to tell\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 03:34
Serendipitous Connection
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem and truthful subject. Never judge a book....
April 28th, 2022 00:04
Saxon Crow said:
A lovely poem and truthful subject. Never judge a book....
April 28th, 2022 00:04
Serendipitous Connection
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right and beautiful,a very beautiful way to meet
April 27th, 2022 21:05
Crowns4Christ said:
Absolutely right and beautiful,a very beautiful way to meet
April 27th, 2022 21:05
The Circle Of Life
L. B. Mek said:
that callousness, Nature
of nature
that levelling, equality
in Nature
that wondrous, nerve inducing
unknowingness of chance
ethereal, encounters
while wading through nature...
Beauty, in its contrasting - capacity
to nurture and steal, that very life
gifted
by Nature...!
(just such a deep and meaningful read
to ponder and let, seep-in
thank you!
an acceptance of the Nature, of things
if you will..
a lovely message of the morbid beauty
in our reality
of featherweight, gripped
existence
a mere, slip and broken neck
ever-present, distance
to our demise, imbued
in our every, step
of progress..
so be it then! let\'s smile
at that awaiting misfortune
declaiming its capacity for sinister
while proclaiming
our willpower, to dance in the face
of ill-fate
and still, cherish
this taste
of mythically divine, experience
we\'ve titled, existence..)
April 25th, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
that callousness, Nature
of nature
that levelling, equality
in Nature
that wondrous, nerve inducing
unknowingness of chance
ethereal, encounters
while wading through nature...
Beauty, in its contrasting - capacity
to nurture and steal, that very life
gifted
by Nature...!
(just such a deep and meaningful read
to ponder and let, seep-in
thank you!
an acceptance of the Nature, of things
if you will..
a lovely message of the morbid beauty
in our reality
of featherweight, gripped
existence
a mere, slip and broken neck
ever-present, distance
to our demise, imbued
in our every, step
of progress..
so be it then! let\'s smile
at that awaiting misfortune
declaiming its capacity for sinister
while proclaiming
our willpower, to dance in the face
of ill-fate
and still, cherish
this taste
of mythically divine, experience
we\'ve titled, existence..)
April 25th, 2022 05:01
The Sea Wall
L. B. Mek said:
\'The smell of sweet perfume at bay\'
(salty mineral, earthiness
and a thudding tide\'s, waves
of frothing sweetness
invading those senses
like an ethereal, presence)
yes, dear poet
I too have a memento, I recall
in my hours of overwhelming
lonesome, yearning
for when she, was merely
a fingertips - reach, away..
(thank you, these words
I relate to, on so many levels
what a triumphantly vivid wording
what practised skill, you posses
to craft such a luminous, poem)
April 19th, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'The smell of sweet perfume at bay\'
(salty mineral, earthiness
and a thudding tide\'s, waves
of frothing sweetness
invading those senses
like an ethereal, presence)
yes, dear poet
I too have a memento, I recall
in my hours of overwhelming
lonesome, yearning
for when she, was merely
a fingertips - reach, away..
(thank you, these words
I relate to, on so many levels
what a triumphantly vivid wording
what practised skill, you posses
to craft such a luminous, poem)
April 19th, 2022 05:10
Tattoo
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I think no one, should dictate
what you can or should
or should not, do
with your body
be it, tattoo\'s or anything else..
some of the most, considerate
and wise people
I have met in my life, have tattoos and piercings
galore..
yet, its just a form of expression
to them
a way to deal-with or release or immortalise
something they\'re going through
or have survived..
(but, tattoo\'s
as trend frenzy, fashion fads
is just an idiotic notion, to me
forgive me..)
so well reasoned and written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 18th, 2022 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
personally
I think no one, should dictate
what you can or should
or should not, do
with your body
be it, tattoo\'s or anything else..
some of the most, considerate
and wise people
I have met in my life, have tattoos and piercings
galore..
yet, its just a form of expression
to them
a way to deal-with or release or immortalise
something they\'re going through
or have survived..
(but, tattoo\'s
as trend frenzy, fashion fads
is just an idiotic notion, to me
forgive me..)
so well reasoned and written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 18th, 2022 04:33
Repose
L. B. Mek said:
suppose, it would be rude to
propose maybe we too may find, that
repose, excavated from within our
prose if we but heed, your poetic
compose...
(just a joy to read!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
April 14th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
suppose, it would be rude to
propose maybe we too may find, that
repose, excavated from within our
prose if we but heed, your poetic
compose...
(just a joy to read!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
April 14th, 2022 03:23
Accidental Coma
L. B. Mek said:
great message! an important topic
(every driver should be reminded
as soon as the get in driver\'s, seat
\'do Not drink and drive
do Not take drugs and drive
do Not text and drive
that vehicle, you\'re manoeuvring
with mere fingertips, thanks
to those
power assisted, steering wheels
is a weapon
of mass destruction! that can ruin
hundred of lives
in a millisecond, of bad judgement!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
great message! an important topic
(every driver should be reminded
as soon as the get in driver\'s, seat
\'do Not drink and drive
do Not take drugs and drive
do Not text and drive
that vehicle, you\'re manoeuvring
with mere fingertips, thanks
to those
power assisted, steering wheels
is a weapon
of mass destruction! that can ruin
hundred of lives
in a millisecond, of bad judgement!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 8th, 2022 04:26
ODE TO THE BLUE JAY
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, great rhymes. I do love a cardinal too, but much harder to rhyme to, right? Great job!
April 6th, 2022 00:40
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem, great rhymes. I do love a cardinal too, but much harder to rhyme to, right? Great job!
April 6th, 2022 00:40
ODE TO THE BLUE JAY
voices of ghosts said:
very nice, you painted a great outdoor scenery
April 6th, 2022 00:21
voices of ghosts said:
very nice, you painted a great outdoor scenery
April 6th, 2022 00:21
WEARY
L. B. Mek said:
what comforting thoughts, to share
with the world
in these - most embattled, Times
waged-in, between warmongering
inhumanity
and an endlessly incessant, plague..
we need , all the wise words
of solace, we can get
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
April 5th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
what comforting thoughts, to share
with the world
in these - most embattled, Times
waged-in, between warmongering
inhumanity
and an endlessly incessant, plague..
we need , all the wise words
of solace, we can get
thank you! dear empathetic Poet
April 5th, 2022 03:45
Dad Was My Best Man
Dahlia said:
wholehearted memories, well penned, enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:16
Dahlia said:
wholehearted memories, well penned, enjoyed through & through
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:16
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