Comments received on poems by MDStone



The Affair
lalalaEulalie said:

Relatable. Nice expressions.

July 18th, 2022 23:40

Smörgåsbord
L. B. Mek said:

abundance of choice, itself
can become a burden..
thanks for sharing

July 15th, 2022 02:35

Thunder Storm
a thousand wishes said:

Beautiful and intriguing poem. very insightful

July 12th, 2022 22:01

The Wake Up Call
lalalaEulalie said:

Enjoyable poem. Thanks for sharing. I liked the drawing on Humpty Dumpty, and I appreciate that the wake up call was unnamed as to its issue, (drugs, greed, etc... Makes it more vague, yet widely relatable.) Looking forward to other gems.

Love. 💕 Joy. 🍕 Peace.✌️
-Eulalie

July 11th, 2022 08:38

Tender Warrior
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing
this a theme/topic
I could relate with, easily..
(personally, at time\'s of similarly
duelling, duality
born from my contrasting sense
of self, I search
for that feminine pool of logic
and balance
resting innately, somewhere deep
within me
and seek its, calming wisdom.
so i may better, hear
myself...)

July 5th, 2022 03:54

Clouds
fkoshk said:

It\'s a cute poem. Kind of like the sort you would see in primary school, with the fluffy themes and rhymes. Great Job!

July 2nd, 2022 22:27

The Wormhole
Hollow Enigma said:

A great couplet poem (my fav kind). I a classic telling of life spiraling you down for what seems like forever. I heard a guy say it is used to find rock bottom.

July 1st, 2022 00:26

Things Thought Dead
L. B. Mek said:

(like, a shattered heart, awaking
to feelings
of Spring, once again
because
someone\'s laughter, penetrated
our ears, at that perfect decibel
and we, remembered
what it felt like, to smile
from the bottom of our heart\'s
once, Again...!)
just a lovely read, thank you
dear poet

June 30th, 2022 04:18

Yesterday’s Strife
Raven333 said:

liked your poem, I think every one has that one person in their life that they just can not get out of there mind. nicely penned

June 27th, 2022 13:33

Mighty Lincoln At The Bat
L. B. Mek said:

lovely read, thank you

June 24th, 2022 03:46

The Days of Summer Now Long Gone
verona said:

relatable content

June 18th, 2022 21:01

The Whisper of Our Soul
tallisman said:

This is good, thanks for sharing!

June 18th, 2022 02:55

Life Can Change So Fast
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
\'having our children
learn
this essential, Truth\'s
of life
is more valuable than
any degree\'


June 17th, 2022 04:07

The Desert Day Unwinds
L. B. Mek said:

\'The brush dots the landscape of rock and sand
Colors like a rainbow striated through the land\'..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing

June 9th, 2022 03:54

Weathered
L. B. Mek said:

\'It’s thick and scarred and has a past
With roots down deep it’s firmly tethered
And stands there strong and majestically weathered
It’s seen its share of powerful storms come
Even thought it might not survive some
But yet it stands like a warrior feathered
Its mystic enhanced by being weathered
There is wisdom in its mighty branches
And compassion from so many chances\'..
(what a powerful image of enduring
Hope
and a sincerely worded dedication
to that which anchors
our Resolve!)
a great write and empowering
message, dear Poet

June 6th, 2022 07:05

Satisfied
L. B. Mek said:

so happy for you
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
dear poet

June 2nd, 2022 03:30

Wrong Turn On A Mountain Trail
tallisman said:

Very good, scanned and rhymed well, enjoyed this!

June 1st, 2022 00:55

No Peace Is Found
L. B. Mek said:

in those, sudden
typhoon\'s of life
all we can do, is hold on
and breathe
and entrust our hope
in something, in
anything...
(such a relatable write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'m sorry if you\'re going through
one of those darker climbs of life..
stay strong!

May 31st, 2022 04:51

I Long For Yesterday
Accidental Poet said:

That rear-view mirror is like a drug MD. Great write. 😉

May 27th, 2022 21:06

The Cowboy’s Deed
L. B. Mek said:

makes me remember the westerns I enjoyed as a kid
it was so black n white, simple
on my tv screens
bad guys, defeated by good guys
and then end screen, credits..
its good
to escape into fictional, realms
from time to time
as the real stories are never so simple
in history\'s, gangrene and starvation
reality..
(such an enjoyable reading experience
thank you! for the gifted journey
through my treasured youth, dear Poet)

May 27th, 2022 04:57

The Cowboy’s Deed
arqios said:

This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to mind a thought about the cowboy now being \'dead,\' as the classic kind is a rare find. Thanks for sharing this stirring poem. /Rik.

May 27th, 2022 04:43

The Cowboy’s Deed
Jonas Robinson said:

I love the idea of a Western poetic vision. I\'ve had ideas like this myself but have not been successful. Thank you for sharing. :)

May 26th, 2022 22:05

The Little Ones
L. B. Mek said:

Such morose tragedies
breaks a part of me, every time
and it\'s a part I can never get back
I
can accept, that life
is gonna Fck with us
till it kills us;
it is what it is, there\'s a cost
to everything born of matter..
but
I beg, can we Please, please
PLEASE
just give our children a chance
PLEASE!!!
Fck each other up
morning till night
and call that, living
I\'ll take that, square
on the chin..
but this callous, inhumane
desecration
of that innate duty and loyalty
to the children \'We\' bring
into the world
must end!
we\'ve got to stop using them
as bullets for our life\'s, guns
of vengeance or redemption
just let them, find their way
give them a chance
at experiencing, A life
not warped, by our venomous
words and fingers..
ahhhhh
the futility of it all, Just kills me..


May 26th, 2022 04:27

The Little Ones
Rozina said:

Yes so heinous. So heartbreaking.

May 26th, 2022 00:18

Treading Water
Nebnaod said:

As do we all...

May 24th, 2022 20:43

We Maim & Mar
L. B. Mek said:

so very, True!
even with my feeble attempt
at sensitivity and pre-emptive apologies
I fear, the hurt
my words, can cause..
(in Your words, exists
the wisdom that I, seek
dear Poet)
I read and learn, thank you!

May 24th, 2022 04:49

Guilty Pleasure
L. B. Mek said:

loved the metaphor and great imagery, throughout
such a relatable read, thanks for sharing

May 19th, 2022 04:17

Guilty Pleasure
_Daisy said:

what a lovely piece.

May 18th, 2022 21:05

The Call
L. B. Mek said:

thought provoking, so very well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet

May 17th, 2022 05:04

THE MARK
Saxon Crow said:

Very nicely penned MD.

May 14th, 2022 23:55

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