Comments received on poems by MDStone
The Wormhole
Hollow Enigma said:
A great couplet poem (my fav kind). I a classic telling of life spiraling you down for what seems like forever. I heard a guy say it is used to find rock bottom.
July 1st, 2022 00:26
Hollow Enigma said:
A great couplet poem (my fav kind). I a classic telling of life spiraling you down for what seems like forever. I heard a guy say it is used to find rock bottom.
July 1st, 2022 00:26
Things Thought Dead
L. B. Mek said:
(like, a shattered heart, awaking
to feelings
of Spring, once again
because
someone\'s laughter, penetrated
our ears, at that perfect decibel
and we, remembered
what it felt like, to smile
from the bottom of our heart\'s
once, Again...!)
just a lovely read, thank you
dear poet
June 30th, 2022 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
(like, a shattered heart, awaking
to feelings
of Spring, once again
because
someone\'s laughter, penetrated
our ears, at that perfect decibel
and we, remembered
what it felt like, to smile
from the bottom of our heart\'s
once, Again...!)
just a lovely read, thank you
dear poet
June 30th, 2022 04:18
Yesterday’s Strife
Raven333 said:
liked your poem, I think every one has that one person in their life that they just can not get out of there mind. nicely penned
June 27th, 2022 13:33
Raven333 said:
liked your poem, I think every one has that one person in their life that they just can not get out of there mind. nicely penned
June 27th, 2022 13:33
Life Can Change So Fast
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'having our children
learn
this essential, Truth\'s
of life
is more valuable than
any degree\'
June 17th, 2022 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'having our children
learn
this essential, Truth\'s
of life
is more valuable than
any degree\'
June 17th, 2022 04:07
The Desert Day Unwinds
L. B. Mek said:
\'The brush dots the landscape of rock and sand
Colors like a rainbow striated through the land\'..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'The brush dots the landscape of rock and sand
Colors like a rainbow striated through the land\'..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
June 9th, 2022 03:54
Weathered
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s thick and scarred and has a past
With roots down deep it’s firmly tethered
And stands there strong and majestically weathered
It’s seen its share of powerful storms come
Even thought it might not survive some
But yet it stands like a warrior feathered
Its mystic enhanced by being weathered
There is wisdom in its mighty branches
And compassion from so many chances\'..
(what a powerful image of enduring
Hope
and a sincerely worded dedication
to that which anchors
our Resolve!)
a great write and empowering
message, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s thick and scarred and has a past
With roots down deep it’s firmly tethered
And stands there strong and majestically weathered
It’s seen its share of powerful storms come
Even thought it might not survive some
But yet it stands like a warrior feathered
Its mystic enhanced by being weathered
There is wisdom in its mighty branches
And compassion from so many chances\'..
(what a powerful image of enduring
Hope
and a sincerely worded dedication
to that which anchors
our Resolve!)
a great write and empowering
message, dear Poet
June 6th, 2022 07:05
Satisfied
L. B. Mek said:
so happy for you
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
so happy for you
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 03:30
Wrong Turn On A Mountain Trail
tallisman said:
Very good, scanned and rhymed well, enjoyed this!
June 1st, 2022 00:55
tallisman said:
Very good, scanned and rhymed well, enjoyed this!
June 1st, 2022 00:55
No Peace Is Found
L. B. Mek said:
in those, sudden
typhoon\'s of life
all we can do, is hold on
and breathe
and entrust our hope
in something, in
anything...
(such a relatable write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'m sorry if you\'re going through
one of those darker climbs of life..
stay strong!
May 31st, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
in those, sudden
typhoon\'s of life
all we can do, is hold on
and breathe
and entrust our hope
in something, in
anything...
(such a relatable write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
I\'m sorry if you\'re going through
one of those darker climbs of life..
stay strong!
May 31st, 2022 04:51
I Long For Yesterday
Accidental Poet said:
That rear-view mirror is like a drug MD. Great write. 😉
May 27th, 2022 21:06
Accidental Poet said:
That rear-view mirror is like a drug MD. Great write. 😉
May 27th, 2022 21:06
The Cowboy’s Deed
L. B. Mek said:
makes me remember the westerns I enjoyed as a kid
it was so black n white, simple
on my tv screens
bad guys, defeated by good guys
and then end screen, credits..
its good
to escape into fictional, realms
from time to time
as the real stories are never so simple
in history\'s, gangrene and starvation
reality..
(such an enjoyable reading experience
thank you! for the gifted journey
through my treasured youth, dear Poet)
May 27th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
makes me remember the westerns I enjoyed as a kid
it was so black n white, simple
on my tv screens
bad guys, defeated by good guys
and then end screen, credits..
its good
to escape into fictional, realms
from time to time
as the real stories are never so simple
in history\'s, gangrene and starvation
reality..
(such an enjoyable reading experience
thank you! for the gifted journey
through my treasured youth, dear Poet)
May 27th, 2022 04:57
The Cowboy’s Deed
arqios said:
This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to mind a thought about the cowboy now being \'dead,\' as the classic kind is a rare find. Thanks for sharing this stirring poem. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:43
arqios said:
This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to mind a thought about the cowboy now being \'dead,\' as the classic kind is a rare find. Thanks for sharing this stirring poem. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:43
The Cowboy’s Deed
Jonas Robinson said:
I love the idea of a Western poetic vision. I\'ve had ideas like this myself but have not been successful. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:05
Jonas Robinson said:
I love the idea of a Western poetic vision. I\'ve had ideas like this myself but have not been successful. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:05
The Little Ones
L. B. Mek said:
Such morose tragedies
breaks a part of me, every time
and it\'s a part I can never get back
I
can accept, that life
is gonna Fck with us
till it kills us;
it is what it is, there\'s a cost
to everything born of matter..
but
I beg, can we Please, please
PLEASE
just give our children a chance
PLEASE!!!
Fck each other up
morning till night
and call that, living
I\'ll take that, square
on the chin..
but this callous, inhumane
desecration
of that innate duty and loyalty
to the children \'We\' bring
into the world
must end!
we\'ve got to stop using them
as bullets for our life\'s, guns
of vengeance or redemption
just let them, find their way
give them a chance
at experiencing, A life
not warped, by our venomous
words and fingers..
ahhhhh
the futility of it all, Just kills me..
May 26th, 2022 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
Such morose tragedies
breaks a part of me, every time
and it\'s a part I can never get back
I
can accept, that life
is gonna Fck with us
till it kills us;
it is what it is, there\'s a cost
to everything born of matter..
but
I beg, can we Please, please
PLEASE
just give our children a chance
PLEASE!!!
Fck each other up
morning till night
and call that, living
I\'ll take that, square
on the chin..
but this callous, inhumane
desecration
of that innate duty and loyalty
to the children \'We\' bring
into the world
must end!
we\'ve got to stop using them
as bullets for our life\'s, guns
of vengeance or redemption
just let them, find their way
give them a chance
at experiencing, A life
not warped, by our venomous
words and fingers..
ahhhhh
the futility of it all, Just kills me..
May 26th, 2022 04:27
We Maim & Mar
L. B. Mek said:
so very, True!
even with my feeble attempt
at sensitivity and pre-emptive apologies
I fear, the hurt
my words, can cause..
(in Your words, exists
the wisdom that I, seek
dear Poet)
I read and learn, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
so very, True!
even with my feeble attempt
at sensitivity and pre-emptive apologies
I fear, the hurt
my words, can cause..
(in Your words, exists
the wisdom that I, seek
dear Poet)
I read and learn, thank you!
May 24th, 2022 04:49
Guilty Pleasure
L. B. Mek said:
loved the metaphor and great imagery, throughout
such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
loved the metaphor and great imagery, throughout
such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2022 04:17
The Call
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, so very well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 17th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, so very well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 17th, 2022 05:04
She Calls Me BoBo
arqios said:
BoBo reminds me of a clown, now clouded in the memory of former days.
May 10th, 2022 06:51
arqios said:
BoBo reminds me of a clown, now clouded in the memory of former days.
May 10th, 2022 06:51
There Is No Room For Hate
Rozina said:
I agree with your sentiments, good advice.
May 6th, 2022 22:03
Rozina said:
I agree with your sentiments, good advice.
May 6th, 2022 22:03
The Path Complacency Paves
L. B. Mek said:
complacency, best friends
with that assumptive arrogance
of peace and happiness
being our life\'s, normal
when all of existence
hints at us, all the time
that chaos and strife
are our status-quo
everything else, merely visits
once in a while...
\'If only I had heard your heart so softly moan
And your cries for love I had quickly heeded
Then perhaps I would not be standing here alone
With memories crashing in like ocean waves
In a place and time of love that is now forgone\'..
I wonder what percentage of the world, can relate to these words
as-if they were inked, using their very blood...?!
(just a great read
thank you! dear Poet)
April 29th, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
complacency, best friends
with that assumptive arrogance
of peace and happiness
being our life\'s, normal
when all of existence
hints at us, all the time
that chaos and strife
are our status-quo
everything else, merely visits
once in a while...
\'If only I had heard your heart so softly moan
And your cries for love I had quickly heeded
Then perhaps I would not be standing here alone
With memories crashing in like ocean waves
In a place and time of love that is now forgone\'..
I wonder what percentage of the world, can relate to these words
as-if they were inked, using their very blood...?!
(just a great read
thank you! dear Poet)
April 29th, 2022 03:46
Serendipitous Connection
L. B. Mek said:
it can indeed!
good to read some genuine poetry
for a change
some choice phrasing and imagery:
\'That started with a desultory conversation
Where beans are brewed into liquid gold
With a choice of breakfast, mild, or bold
She was a barista with stories to tell\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
it can indeed!
good to read some genuine poetry
for a change
some choice phrasing and imagery:
\'That started with a desultory conversation
Where beans are brewed into liquid gold
With a choice of breakfast, mild, or bold
She was a barista with stories to tell\'..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 28th, 2022 03:34
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