Comments received on poems by depressionofbecca
Hello Hell
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Hi,it\'s so good to see you back. You\'ve been missed! It good to hear your feeling better.🤗🌹✌🕊
February 9th, 2022 19:46
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Hi,it\'s so good to see you back. You\'ve been missed! It good to hear your feeling better.🤗🌹✌🕊
February 9th, 2022 19:46
Aunt Anna May
Rocky Lagou said:
Loss is one of the most difficult things to write about in my opinion. I can say this with experience as I lost my mother 3 years ago and it took me awhile before I was able to express what it felt like through poetry. Lovely poem, keep on fighting! 💖
February 4th, 2022 09:55
Rocky Lagou said:
Loss is one of the most difficult things to write about in my opinion. I can say this with experience as I lost my mother 3 years ago and it took me awhile before I was able to express what it felt like through poetry. Lovely poem, keep on fighting! 💖
February 4th, 2022 09:55
Blue
spilleronsheet said:
The sky isn’t blue
I look at it
It keeps changing without whispering me
I decided I won’t rely on it
I shall choose the colours for it
Dear poet paint the sky with the colour you want
Be it pink, red, black or grey
Don’t stop painting it
December 9th, 2021 11:09
spilleronsheet said:
The sky isn’t blue
I look at it
It keeps changing without whispering me
I decided I won’t rely on it
I shall choose the colours for it
Dear poet paint the sky with the colour you want
Be it pink, red, black or grey
Don’t stop painting it
December 9th, 2021 11:09
Black
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Poet !!
Death is black because it takes away all the colours of Life...
Black is the result of absorption of all colours. So you hold all of them in your favorite colour.
So Black is Not Bad !!
( its just Brightness-LACK)
November 30th, 2021 13:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Poet !!
Death is black because it takes away all the colours of Life...
Black is the result of absorption of all colours. So you hold all of them in your favorite colour.
So Black is Not Bad !!
( its just Brightness-LACK)
November 30th, 2021 13:18
Black
spilleronsheet said:
Well
The colours you wove
What’s wrong with the black you hold
Truly black is my fav
But why so disgraced
No black isn’t bad
It hides my sadness
No black isn’t bad
People call it glamorous
No black isn’t bad
It tells me today it maybe dark
But tomorrow will be bright
Black tells me at the end every night revolves
The black holds the moon
So I guess black isn’t that bad
November 30th, 2021 13:09
spilleronsheet said:
Well
The colours you wove
What’s wrong with the black you hold
Truly black is my fav
But why so disgraced
No black isn’t bad
It hides my sadness
No black isn’t bad
People call it glamorous
No black isn’t bad
It tells me today it maybe dark
But tomorrow will be bright
Black tells me at the end every night revolves
The black holds the moon
So I guess black isn’t that bad
November 30th, 2021 13:09
Cuts
Paul Bell said:
Painful one, becca, yet cutting is very common and for some reason brings relief. You write it how it is.
November 24th, 2021 12:25
Paul Bell said:
Painful one, becca, yet cutting is very common and for some reason brings relief. You write it how it is.
November 24th, 2021 12:25
Blood
spilleronsheet said:
The emotions you carry
Is so heavy
Unloaded them as much as you can
Here by your powerful words
Your priceless my dear friend
November 23rd, 2021 15:55
spilleronsheet said:
The emotions you carry
Is so heavy
Unloaded them as much as you can
Here by your powerful words
Your priceless my dear friend
November 23rd, 2021 15:55
Blood
Nicholas Browning said:
I understand very well this state of mind. Not yours specifically because that\'s impossible, but I\'ve been in similar situations. What lies underneath the surface of a person is usually what\'s most interesting to see. It really depends on how other people take it when they discover it, if they ever do. Best regards.
November 23rd, 2021 11:41
Nicholas Browning said:
I understand very well this state of mind. Not yours specifically because that\'s impossible, but I\'ve been in similar situations. What lies underneath the surface of a person is usually what\'s most interesting to see. It really depends on how other people take it when they discover it, if they ever do. Best regards.
November 23rd, 2021 11:41
Blood
dusk arising said:
You describe something which I have to admit is beyond my understanding. But I wish i could understand. Please write more and help me (and others) understand the motivation of self harming.
It\'s easy to sympathise but I\'d like to be able to empathise, to feel along with you.
November 23rd, 2021 08:03
dusk arising said:
You describe something which I have to admit is beyond my understanding. But I wish i could understand. Please write more and help me (and others) understand the motivation of self harming.
It\'s easy to sympathise but I\'d like to be able to empathise, to feel along with you.
November 23rd, 2021 08:03
Jump
orchidee said:
If it was not such a serious theme - I jumped off, but landed on a trampoline. I shot 50 feet back into the air! heehee.
November 22nd, 2021 11:44
orchidee said:
If it was not such a serious theme - I jumped off, but landed on a trampoline. I shot 50 feet back into the air! heehee.
November 22nd, 2021 11:44
Jump
spilleronsheet said:
Dear poet
Jump out of those emotions that hold you back
Jump from emotions that stops you from loving yourself
Waver your heart
Hug it around
Rise from ashes my dear friend
Your a shining streak in darkness around
November 22nd, 2021 08:06
spilleronsheet said:
Dear poet
Jump out of those emotions that hold you back
Jump from emotions that stops you from loving yourself
Waver your heart
Hug it around
Rise from ashes my dear friend
Your a shining streak in darkness around
November 22nd, 2021 08:06
Dead
dusk arising said:
Let it out and tell the world. The MPS world here will listen and seek more from you....
.... It\'s good to write through our pains here, MPS is a safe place to be.
November 19th, 2021 11:17
dusk arising said:
Let it out and tell the world. The MPS world here will listen and seek more from you....
.... It\'s good to write through our pains here, MPS is a safe place to be.
November 19th, 2021 11:17
Dead
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really tragic to read
Please have hope dear poet
Your the shine
Write and let the paper bleed but don’t get hurt dear friend
Vent out all your griefs, your anguish and pain
Let go of your sufferings
I wish to gradually see hope in your lines
I know it’s hard
Your trying
Best of luck dear poet
November 19th, 2021 10:39
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really tragic to read
Please have hope dear poet
Your the shine
Write and let the paper bleed but don’t get hurt dear friend
Vent out all your griefs, your anguish and pain
Let go of your sufferings
I wish to gradually see hope in your lines
I know it’s hard
Your trying
Best of luck dear poet
November 19th, 2021 10:39
Buzzing
Paul Bell said:
Remember putting my sock on and there was a bee inside it. You should have seen me dancing when it stung me.
November 18th, 2021 10:29
Paul Bell said:
Remember putting my sock on and there was a bee inside it. You should have seen me dancing when it stung me.
November 18th, 2021 10:29
Voices echoing
melellendixon said:
this is so powerful. i understand where you\'re coming from and it\'s comforting being able to relate to something like this. \"I burn\" is such a beautiful line.
November 17th, 2021 13:38
melellendixon said:
this is so powerful. i understand where you\'re coming from and it\'s comforting being able to relate to something like this. \"I burn\" is such a beautiful line.
November 17th, 2021 13:38
Baby Claire
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this, in the expression of the situation.
Hope you find peace and acceptance of yourself. :)
November 17th, 2021 10:10
orchidee said:
I \'like\' this, in the expression of the situation.
Hope you find peace and acceptance of yourself. :)
November 17th, 2021 10:10
Baby Claire
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough one.
We all have those little voices, that for some reason never ask you to do good things. This is when you need an over-riding mechanism to countereact the voices.
November 17th, 2021 09:11
Paul Bell said:
This is a tough one.
We all have those little voices, that for some reason never ask you to do good things. This is when you need an over-riding mechanism to countereact the voices.
November 17th, 2021 09:11
Just breathe, a little less
Paul Bell said:
A lot of people will relate to this, and a lot of people have ended this way. Hopefully you can help others on your journey of hope.
November 16th, 2021 11:26
Paul Bell said:
A lot of people will relate to this, and a lot of people have ended this way. Hopefully you can help others on your journey of hope.
November 16th, 2021 11:26
Just breathe, a little less
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An almost lethal affliction, I can only imagine, when one has no desire to go on... Very sad, and soberly depicted. Very real.
November 16th, 2021 10:01
Garth Rakumakoe said:
An almost lethal affliction, I can only imagine, when one has no desire to go on... Very sad, and soberly depicted. Very real.
November 16th, 2021 10:01
Voices echoing
Doggerel Dave said:
This is perhaps a \'where fools rush in....\' type contribution:
I know nothing about your group home or the kind of care provided where you are, but on the evidence of just your poem, I\'d suggest you need more intervention than mere residence in a group home. Perhaps you are receiving this...
Take care of yourself.
November 16th, 2021 00:28
Doggerel Dave said:
This is perhaps a \'where fools rush in....\' type contribution:
I know nothing about your group home or the kind of care provided where you are, but on the evidence of just your poem, I\'d suggest you need more intervention than mere residence in a group home. Perhaps you are receiving this...
Take care of yourself.
November 16th, 2021 00:28
