Comments received on poems by depressionofbecca



Cuts
hotidris said:

Sad fictional poem about you committing suicide.

November 26th, 2021 07:39

Cuts
Paul Bell said:

Painful one, becca, yet cutting is very common and for some reason brings relief. You write it how it is.

November 24th, 2021 12:25

Blood
spilleronsheet said:

The emotions you carry
Is so heavy
Unloaded them as much as you can
Here by your powerful words
Your priceless my dear friend


November 23rd, 2021 15:55

Blood
Nicholas Browning said:

I understand very well this state of mind. Not yours specifically because that\'s impossible, but I\'ve been in similar situations. What lies underneath the surface of a person is usually what\'s most interesting to see. It really depends on how other people take it when they discover it, if they ever do. Best regards.

November 23rd, 2021 11:41

Blood
dusk arising said:

You describe something which I have to admit is beyond my understanding. But I wish i could understand. Please write more and help me (and others) understand the motivation of self harming.
It\'s easy to sympathise but I\'d like to be able to empathise, to feel along with you.

November 23rd, 2021 08:03

Jump
hotidris said:

That\'s a very sad poem about a girl committing suicide.

November 22nd, 2021 21:23

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orchidee said:

If it was not such a serious theme - I jumped off, but landed on a trampoline. I shot 50 feet back into the air! heehee.

November 22nd, 2021 11:44

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Teddy.15 said:

Very dark and emotional. You have certainly achieved the X factor here especially with your last line. X

November 22nd, 2021 09:34

Jump
Coyote said:

A very powerful and moving piece. Nice work.

November 22nd, 2021 09:15

Jump
spilleronsheet said:

Dear poet
Jump out of those emotions that hold you back
Jump from emotions that stops you from loving yourself
Waver your heart
Hug it around
Rise from ashes my dear friend
Your a shining streak in darkness around

November 22nd, 2021 08:06

Dead
dusk arising said:

Let it out and tell the world. The MPS world here will listen and seek more from you....
.... It\'s good to write through our pains here, MPS is a safe place to be.

November 19th, 2021 11:17

Dead
MDStone said:



November 19th, 2021 10:47

Dead
spilleronsheet said:

Itโ€™s really tragic to read
Please have hope dear poet
Your the shine
Write and let the paper bleed but donโ€™t get hurt dear friend
Vent out all your griefs, your anguish and pain
Let go of your sufferings
I wish to gradually see hope in your lines
I know itโ€™s hard
Your trying
Best of luck dear poet

November 19th, 2021 10:39

Buzzing
fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

I was out riding my bike one time and had a head on collision with a bee,lol. It bounced off my lip,within seconds I noticed my lip beginning to swell up. In that split it second it took to bounce off my lip,it managed to sting me. I couldn\'t believe how fast they\'re able to sting.๐Ÿค—โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ

November 18th, 2021 10:53

Buzzing
Paul Bell said:

Remember putting my sock on and there was a bee inside it. You should have seen me dancing when it stung me.

November 18th, 2021 10:29

Voices echoing
melellendixon said:

this is so powerful. i understand where you\'re coming from and it\'s comforting being able to relate to something like this. \"I burn\" is such a beautiful line.

November 17th, 2021 13:38

Baby Claire
fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Only a feeble minded person would think your making it up because your \"too young\". Age is one of many things mental illness has no boundaries for. Stay strong๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ•Š

November 17th, 2021 12:24

Baby Claire
orchidee said:

I \'like\' this, in the expression of the situation.
Hope you find peace and acceptance of yourself. :)

November 17th, 2021 10:10

Baby Claire
Paul Bell said:

This is a tough one.
We all have those little voices, that for some reason never ask you to do good things. This is when you need an over-riding mechanism to countereact the voices.

November 17th, 2021 09:11

Just breathe, a little less
Rachel Laurene said:

Also painting, drawing and writing. Obviously it is important to still get professional help too - but these are all good outlets. When I went to treatment when I was 12/13, it was common to have meditating, yoga and art therapy as well as traditional therapy and medication.

November 16th, 2021 21:12

Just breathe, a little less
Rachel Laurene said:

When I was a teenager and a preteen I was suicidal. I haven\'t been for a very long time, but sometimes the thoughts will come back in my early twenties and I would have to breathe my way through them. It is very important to get help if you are having these feelings love. One thing which helped me the most was God, meditation, yoga and remembering how this act would effect those I leave behind more than me. It\'s sort of morbidly and twisted self guilting in a sense, but it got me through. Stay strong and remember that there is so much more in life to look forward to, even if it does not feel that way now โค

November 16th, 2021 20:49

Just breathe, a little less
Rachel Laurene said:

When I was a teenager and a preteen I was suicidal. I haven\'t been for a very long time, but sometimes the thoughts will come back in my early twenties and I would have to breathe my way through them. It is very important to get help if you are having these feelings love. One thing which helped me the most was God, meditation, yoga and remembering how this act would effect those I leave behind more than me. It\'s sort of morbidly and twisted self guilting in a sense, but it got me through. Stay strong and remember that there is so much more in life to look forward to, even if it does not feel that way now โค

November 16th, 2021 20:49

Just breathe, a little less
Paul Bell said:

A lot of people will relate to this, and a lot of people have ended this way. Hopefully you can help others on your journey of hope.



November 16th, 2021 11:26

Just breathe, a little less
fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

I found this to be very difficult to read,the depth of sadness is astounding,and it\'s power even more so. I\'m sorry your in such a degree of pain,and sorrow. I also suffer from depression,but I have this belief that suicide is the ultimate sin,the one sin God does not under any circumstances forgive,no matter what. The one sin that\'s guaranteed to to land my ass in hell,because that\'s how precious life is,mine yours,everything that lives. Just think of all our neighbouring planets with no life,and then there\'s earth,with its abundance of life,..each and every one precious in own unique way. Please stay strong,and know you are very special. Thank you for sharing Becca๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’

November 16th, 2021 10:17

Just breathe, a little less
Garth Rakumakoe said:

An almost lethal affliction, I can only imagine, when one has no desire to go on... Very sad, and soberly depicted. Very real.

November 16th, 2021 10:01

Just breathe, a little less
Teddy.15 said:

So very sad yet extremely powerful.

November 16th, 2021 08:56

Voices echoing
Doggerel Dave said:

This is perhaps a \'where fools rush in....\' type contribution:
I know nothing about your group home or the kind of care provided where you are, but on the evidence of just your poem, I\'d suggest you need more intervention than mere residence in a group home. Perhaps you are receiving this...

Take care of yourself.

November 16th, 2021 00:28

Voices echoing
fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

I\'m sorry for your unfortunate situation,I find poetry to be a great crutch because it provides a source of so many words to express ourselves. I hope it works for you as it does for me,..and many others I\'m sure. Thank you for having the courage to share. Stay strong๐ŸŒŸ

November 15th, 2021 22:22