Comments received on poems by jim56
let the fireworks fly
arqios said:
Fireworks do fire up childhood memories. I\'ve always found a strong drawing appeal from the anthem: \"And the rockets\' red glare / The bombs bursting in air / Gave proof in the night .....\"
October 29th, 2024 05:14
arqios said:
Fireworks do fire up childhood memories. I\'ve always found a strong drawing appeal from the anthem: \"And the rockets\' red glare / The bombs bursting in air / Gave proof in the night .....\"
October 29th, 2024 05:14
let the fireworks fly
sorenbarrett said:
Such an upbeat and fun poem of celebration. Loved it.
October 29th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such an upbeat and fun poem of celebration. Loved it.
October 29th, 2024 05:04
let the fireworks fly
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
A moment of celebration and childhood memories. Let the fireworks fly!
October 29th, 2024 04:53
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
A moment of celebration and childhood memories. Let the fireworks fly!
October 29th, 2024 04:53
snowfall
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be wonderful to see snow lying all around Jim.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:47
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be wonderful to see snow lying all around Jim.
Andy
October 29th, 2024 03:47
snowfall
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely sight welcomed by me in my childhood. Well written and rhymed
October 28th, 2024 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely sight welcomed by me in my childhood. Well written and rhymed
October 28th, 2024 09:41
winters night
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Jim. That happened to me when my wife of forty years passed five years ago but things can change as they have for me.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Jim. That happened to me when my wife of forty years passed five years ago but things can change as they have for me.
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:08
my best friend
Caring dove said:
We have a cat that comes into our house .. we call her ‘ boots ‘ lovely cat ..
October 27th, 2024 12:59
Caring dove said:
We have a cat that comes into our house .. we call her ‘ boots ‘ lovely cat ..
October 27th, 2024 12:59
winters night
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts when there is a loss. Powerful.
October 27th, 2024 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts when there is a loss. Powerful.
October 27th, 2024 05:54
angel love
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly away together into that wonderful world of love Jim.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly away together into that wonderful world of love Jim.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:29
angel love
sorenbarrett said:
Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
October 26th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
October 26th, 2024 08:19
good days bad days
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jim but I consider that all my days will be good.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jim but I consider that all my days will be good.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:07
good days bad days
sorenbarrett said:
Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a surprise waiting to be opened. Anticipation is the best part. Loved the poem Jim
October 25th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a surprise waiting to be opened. Anticipation is the best part. Loved the poem Jim
October 25th, 2024 05:07
a guide dogs story
sorenbarrett said:
A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal rhyme madeit all the better.
October 24th, 2024 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal rhyme madeit all the better.
October 24th, 2024 07:30
back in my memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring absolute joy to our lives Jim.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can bring absolute joy to our lives Jim.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:24
back in my memories
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic verse it reaches out to me and I too feel touched by it.
October 23rd, 2024 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic verse it reaches out to me and I too feel touched by it.
October 23rd, 2024 07:01
lifes school
jim56 said:
life is there to learn as we go along
thanks for comment means a lot
October 22nd, 2024 06:06
jim56 said:
life is there to learn as we go along
thanks for comment means a lot
October 22nd, 2024 06:06
lifes school
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a child learning. Well done
October 22nd, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a child learning. Well done
October 22nd, 2024 06:02
empty heart
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that place when my wife dies five years ago, but luckily life moves on.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been in that place when my wife dies five years ago, but luckily life moves on.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:40
we dont die
sorenbarrett said:
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always loved that song. A beautiful thought
October 21st, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always loved that song. A beautiful thought
October 21st, 2024 06:31
empty heart
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why solitary confinement is reserved for the worst offenses.
October 20th, 2024 06:25
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why solitary confinement is reserved for the worst offenses.
October 20th, 2024 06:25
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