Comments received on poems by jim56



cruel and kind
Caring dove said:

Life doesn’t make sense .. half the time ….

November 3rd, 2024 09:00

lifes journey
Caring dove said:

Life should be good .. not full of struggles

November 2nd, 2024 11:12

lifes journey
sorenbarrett said:

So true it is. Life full of twists and turn and more than anything else a never ending cycle.

November 2nd, 2024 10:16

lifes journey
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

November 2nd, 2024 06:08

homeless winter
Demar Desu said:

Good poem

November 1st, 2024 08:52

everybody ages
Dan Williams said:

Not sure; still waiting for the \'Golden Years\' after 75. Nice work.

October 31st, 2024 23:50

break up
2781 said:

Don\'t let the sun go down on your anger.

October 31st, 2024 06:50

break up
sorenbarrett said:

A very positive approach and lovely write

October 31st, 2024 06:11

everybody ages
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Jim, age is just a number.

Andy

October 31st, 2024 02:27

tell someone
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we need to ask for help if we’re struggling with how we feel …

October 30th, 2024 16:53

everybody ages
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we’re older but feel young . Other times we are young but feel old . Sometimes we can even feel unlike ourselves . We can feel all kind of ways . I sometimes still feel like a child and can get triggered into feeling like one .

October 30th, 2024 16:05

everybody ages
Tony36 said:

Brilliant write Jim

October 30th, 2024 09:49

everybody ages
Demar Desu said:



October 30th, 2024 06:22

everybody ages
Demar Desu said:

Do you reminisce a lot of your younger days?

October 30th, 2024 06:22

everybody ages
sorenbarrett said:

So true Jim I keep asking where has the time gone?

October 30th, 2024 06:00

autumn picture
Caring dove said:

The leaves are nice in autumn but spring is my favourite season really ..

October 29th, 2024 14:05

bad day love
Caring dove said:

some people aren’t even in relationships … your lucky if you can experience that ..

October 29th, 2024 14:04

become a man
Caring dove said:

Yeah I know someone who likes to write poetry and songs .. sadly he won’t talk to me at the moment . 🤔

Love from parents is important isn’t it

October 29th, 2024 13:01

its never easy
Caring dove said:

Well
Some people have never even been in relationships so yeah it’s lucky to have that .. but sad I guess . Some people don’t experience what they should in life .. and miss out on many many things which is also sad and painful

October 29th, 2024 12:57

let the fireworks fly
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 29th, 2024 09:52

let the fireworks fly
arqios said:

Fireworks do fire up childhood memories. I\'ve always found a strong drawing appeal from the anthem: \"And the rockets\' red glare / The bombs bursting in air / Gave proof in the night .....\"

October 29th, 2024 05:14

let the fireworks fly
sorenbarrett said:

Such an upbeat and fun poem of celebration. Loved it.

October 29th, 2024 05:04

let the fireworks fly
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

A moment of celebration and childhood memories. Let the fireworks fly!

October 29th, 2024 04:53

snowfall
Goldfinch60 said:

It can be wonderful to see snow lying all around Jim.

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:47

snowfall
Tony36 said:

Great write Jim

October 28th, 2024 09:58

snowfall
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely sight welcomed by me in my childhood. Well written and rhymed

October 28th, 2024 09:41

winters night
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Jim. That happened to me when my wife of forty years passed five years ago but things can change as they have for me.

Andy

October 28th, 2024 02:08

kindness is free
Caring dove said:

Kindness matters …

October 27th, 2024 13:05

my best friend
Caring dove said:

We have a cat that comes into our house .. we call her ‘ boots ‘ lovely cat ..

October 27th, 2024 12:59

winters night
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts when there is a loss. Powerful.

October 27th, 2024 05:54



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