Comments received on poems by jim56
robin melody
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful poem of nature Jim. Loved it
October 8th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful poem of nature Jim. Loved it
October 8th, 2025 07:03
guide dogs
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - they are saviours for sure
October 8th, 2025 00:54
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - they are saviours for sure
October 8th, 2025 00:54
sunshine happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written Jim the poem as well as the sun brings a little brightness
October 7th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written Jim the poem as well as the sun brings a little brightness
October 7th, 2025 06:50
doggie friend
sorenbarrett said:
A poem close to the heart in that I love dogs. Nicely said Jim
October 6th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem close to the heart in that I love dogs. Nicely said Jim
October 6th, 2025 06:36
life
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices and the freedom to make them a most lovely write
October 5th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices and the freedom to make them a most lovely write
October 5th, 2025 07:38
children
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed Jim this poem speaks to the innocence of children and how refreshing that is. Very nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed Jim this poem speaks to the innocence of children and how refreshing that is. Very nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2025 06:20
robin song
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the joy and beauty of nature, specifically the delight brought by a robin singing in an apple tree. It reflects themes of happiness, the appreciation of simple pleasures, and the hope for nature\'s return.
October 3rd, 2025 06:51
Friendship said:
The central idea of the poem revolves around the joy and beauty of nature, specifically the delight brought by a robin singing in an apple tree. It reflects themes of happiness, the appreciation of simple pleasures, and the hope for nature\'s return.
October 3rd, 2025 06:51
robin song
sorenbarrett said:
An image so clear that I have seen so many times myself that it was as if I was there. Nicely rhymed it flowed onward to the end. Well done Jim
October 3rd, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
An image so clear that I have seen so many times myself that it was as if I was there. Nicely rhymed it flowed onward to the end. Well done Jim
October 3rd, 2025 04:52
live and learn
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message to this poem Jim it speaks of the value of life. Nicely said
October 2nd, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message to this poem Jim it speaks of the value of life. Nicely said
October 2nd, 2025 06:08
time and tide
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Jim yes time never flows backward but goes onward like a river and as for the tide it comes and goes in its cycle as does time never the same waters but always the same flow. Very nicely written
October 1st, 2025 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Jim yes time never flows backward but goes onward like a river and as for the tide it comes and goes in its cycle as does time never the same waters but always the same flow. Very nicely written
October 1st, 2025 07:06
guide dogs
Friendship said:
Your poem is an invaluable role of guide dogs in assisting visually impaired individuals. The subject matter revolves around the dedication, intelligence, and kindness of these dogs, highlighting their essential tasks in helping their human companions navigate the world.
September 30th, 2025 09:01
Friendship said:
Your poem is an invaluable role of guide dogs in assisting visually impaired individuals. The subject matter revolves around the dedication, intelligence, and kindness of these dogs, highlighting their essential tasks in helping their human companions navigate the world.
September 30th, 2025 09:01
guide dogs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to the service dog a true friend and helper for the blind. Nicely written
September 30th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to the service dog a true friend and helper for the blind. Nicely written
September 30th, 2025 06:34
ding a ling
sorenbarrett said:
A fun song Jim but too early for me I like Orchi don\'t want to hear that word until December and then grudgingly. It did bring another song to mind Chuck Berry and (My ding a ling) but then that is another subject all together. Good read Jim
September 29th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
A fun song Jim but too early for me I like Orchi don\'t want to hear that word until December and then grudgingly. It did bring another song to mind Chuck Berry and (My ding a ling) but then that is another subject all together. Good read Jim
September 29th, 2025 06:52
age
Paul Bell said:
Those were the days when you drank all night and still made your work.
Now two drinks take a week to get out your system.
September 28th, 2025 08:41
Paul Bell said:
Those were the days when you drank all night and still made your work.
Now two drinks take a week to get out your system.
September 28th, 2025 08:41
age
Friendship said:
The poem reflects on the passage of time and the inevitability of aging. It explores the contrast between youthful freedom and the physical decline that comes with age, while also emphasizing the importance of memories.
September 28th, 2025 08:21
Friendship said:
The poem reflects on the passage of time and the inevitability of aging. It explores the contrast between youthful freedom and the physical decline that comes with age, while also emphasizing the importance of memories.
September 28th, 2025 08:21
age
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, this poem takes one on memory\'s journey through the past. A lovely write Jim
September 28th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, this poem takes one on memory\'s journey through the past. A lovely write Jim
September 28th, 2025 06:06
photo memory
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will always be seen Jim.
Andy
September 28th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will always be seen Jim.
Andy
September 28th, 2025 01:10
photo memory
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words Jim memories are pictures in the mind that may fade like photos in the drawer they may distort for good or bad just as wrinkled pictures do but always there. This poem takes the bright side and I love its upbeat feel
September 27th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words Jim memories are pictures in the mind that may fade like photos in the drawer they may distort for good or bad just as wrinkled pictures do but always there. This poem takes the bright side and I love its upbeat feel
September 27th, 2025 07:00
no rules
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Jim, you never know what is coming your way.
Andy
September 27th, 2025 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Jim, you never know what is coming your way.
Andy
September 27th, 2025 00:57
no rules
Friendship said:
The poem aims to provide insight into the nature of life, encouraging readers to embrace uncertainty and acknowledge the emotional highs and lows that accompany the journey of living. It serves as a reminder that while life is unpredictable, acceptance of this reality can lead to a more fulfilling experience.
September 26th, 2025 10:35
Friendship said:
The poem aims to provide insight into the nature of life, encouraging readers to embrace uncertainty and acknowledge the emotional highs and lows that accompany the journey of living. It serves as a reminder that while life is unpredictable, acceptance of this reality can lead to a more fulfilling experience.
September 26th, 2025 10:35
no rules
sorenbarrett said:
Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you will get. Go with the flow and ride the fide till the end. Nicely written Jim
September 26th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you will get. Go with the flow and ride the fide till the end. Nicely written Jim
September 26th, 2025 05:34
prairie moon
coracaodacripta said:
You have a demeanor I lost long ago. Kudos. Never let that inspiration fade.
September 25th, 2025 19:44
coracaodacripta said:
You have a demeanor I lost long ago. Kudos. Never let that inspiration fade.
September 25th, 2025 19:44
prairie moon
sorenbarrett said:
This one is most beautiful Jim. It casts a mood of wistfulness reminding me nostalgically of places I\'ve been. Lovely a fave
September 25th, 2025 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one is most beautiful Jim. It casts a mood of wistfulness reminding me nostalgically of places I\'ve been. Lovely a fave
September 25th, 2025 06:02
happy love
RSM0812 said:
A very enjoyable read about love and its reasons. Nicely done.
September 24th, 2025 20:30
RSM0812 said:
A very enjoyable read about love and its reasons. Nicely done.
September 24th, 2025 20:30
happy love
Friendship said:
Beautifully said, your poem revolves around the enduring and uplifting nature of love. It emphasizes love as a source of happiness, security, and joy, portraying it as a precious and eternal emotion that enriches life. The subject matter focuses on the transformative power of love and its ability to create lasting happiness in one\'s heart.
September 24th, 2025 08:59
Friendship said:
Beautifully said, your poem revolves around the enduring and uplifting nature of love. It emphasizes love as a source of happiness, security, and joy, portraying it as a precious and eternal emotion that enriches life. The subject matter focuses on the transformative power of love and its ability to create lasting happiness in one\'s heart.
September 24th, 2025 08:59
happy love
sorenbarrett said:
Love and happiness somewhat tied and nicely unified in verse here. Well done Jim
September 24th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love and happiness somewhat tied and nicely unified in verse here. Well done Jim
September 24th, 2025 04:54
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