Comments received on poems by jim56
dreamer
Caring dove said:
This makes me think of a little child .. wishing for something nicer .. or inner child feeling safe .. almost makes me feel a bit sad , really . Life isn’t always like ‘ rainbows
November 12th, 2024 16:38
Caring dove said:
This makes me think of a little child .. wishing for something nicer .. or inner child feeling safe .. almost makes me feel a bit sad , really . Life isn’t always like ‘ rainbows
November 12th, 2024 16:38
shopping spree
Young Fella said:
Nicely written. Really enjoyed reading these verses.
November 12th, 2024 16:36
Young Fella said:
Nicely written. Really enjoyed reading these verses.
November 12th, 2024 16:36
dreamer
Caring dove said:
Do you paint your dreams or draw them ? I knew someone who said to me they paint their dreams or something ..
November 12th, 2024 16:35
Caring dove said:
Do you paint your dreams or draw them ? I knew someone who said to me they paint their dreams or something ..
November 12th, 2024 16:35
never stop believing
Caring dove said:
Well , life shouldn’t be a struggle .. really
November 12th, 2024 16:07
Caring dove said:
Well , life shouldn’t be a struggle .. really
November 12th, 2024 16:07
shopping spree
sorenbarrett said:
The blending of commercialism with the true meaning of Christmas, that of peace and love, forgiveness and future hope. Nicely said.
November 12th, 2024 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
The blending of commercialism with the true meaning of Christmas, that of peace and love, forgiveness and future hope. Nicely said.
November 12th, 2024 14:36
bottled troubles
Caring dove said:
Yeah if we’re troubled by something or by how we feel .. we should ask for help . Some people don’t bother tho
November 12th, 2024 11:17
Caring dove said:
Yeah if we’re troubled by something or by how we feel .. we should ask for help . Some people don’t bother tho
November 12th, 2024 11:17
grief
Caring dove said:
Well yeah , we can grieve over many things . Sometimes I grieve over the things I’ve missed out on .. or the feeling like I’ve ‘ lost myself ‘ life can be very sad sometimes .
November 12th, 2024 11:15
Caring dove said:
Well yeah , we can grieve over many things . Sometimes I grieve over the things I’ve missed out on .. or the feeling like I’ve ‘ lost myself ‘ life can be very sad sometimes .
November 12th, 2024 11:15
shopping spree
Cassie58 said:
Christmas is such an exciting time for children, not so much for grown ups. You reminded me here Jim of all the things that I loved best at Christmas as a child. Your second stanza is my favourite. A lovely image laden poem. Hope you are having a good day.
November 12th, 2024 10:42
Cassie58 said:
Christmas is such an exciting time for children, not so much for grown ups. You reminded me here Jim of all the things that I loved best at Christmas as a child. Your second stanza is my favourite. A lovely image laden poem. Hope you are having a good day.
November 12th, 2024 10:42
unconditional love
Caring dove said:
You can care about someone .. doesn’t always mean you should have to accept it when someone treats you wrong ..
November 12th, 2024 09:57
Caring dove said:
You can care about someone .. doesn’t always mean you should have to accept it when someone treats you wrong ..
November 12th, 2024 09:57
reach out
Caring dove said:
Some people don’t think they have a problem when really they do
November 12th, 2024 09:50
Caring dove said:
Some people don’t think they have a problem when really they do
November 12th, 2024 09:50
reach out
Caring dove said:
Some people won’t reach out for help even tho they have problems .. sad , really
November 12th, 2024 09:49
Caring dove said:
Some people won’t reach out for help even tho they have problems .. sad , really
November 12th, 2024 09:49
miracles
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we wait years for the life we should have had or are meant ti have
November 12th, 2024 09:47
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we wait years for the life we should have had or are meant ti have
November 12th, 2024 09:47
belfast shore
Caring dove said:
Some things are meant ti be .. and some things are just not ‘
November 12th, 2024 09:46
Caring dove said:
Some things are meant ti be .. and some things are just not ‘
November 12th, 2024 09:46
home to ireland
Caring dove said:
Your from Ireland .. it says in another poem your from America ..🤔
November 12th, 2024 06:58
Caring dove said:
Your from Ireland .. it says in another poem your from America ..🤔
November 12th, 2024 06:58
nearly santa time
Caring dove said:
You have grandchildren …....
well some people do .. Christmas is more for kids .. anyway
November 12th, 2024 06:48
Caring dove said:
You have grandchildren …....
well some people do .. Christmas is more for kids .. anyway
November 12th, 2024 06:48
as we begin to age
Caring dove said:
We are as young or as old as we feel .. Someone may be young but feel old but the ‘ truth ‘ is their young and their still thenselves
November 11th, 2024 16:17
Caring dove said:
We are as young or as old as we feel .. Someone may be young but feel old but the ‘ truth ‘ is their young and their still thenselves
November 11th, 2024 16:17
people write poetry
Caring dove said:
Yeah writing helps sometimes but I’m no longer that interested in posting my poems on here as not many people seem interested in commenting .. joined this site years ago too , I think I’ve got a bit bored of posting poems .
November 11th, 2024 15:41
Caring dove said:
Yeah writing helps sometimes but I’m no longer that interested in posting my poems on here as not many people seem interested in commenting .. joined this site years ago too , I think I’ve got a bit bored of posting poems .
November 11th, 2024 15:41
heart friendship
Caring dove said:
I had a friend once .. don’t talk to him anymore .. some things just don’t work out really do they .
November 11th, 2024 14:37
Caring dove said:
I had a friend once .. don’t talk to him anymore .. some things just don’t work out really do they .
November 11th, 2024 14:37
broken hearts
Caring dove said:
Well some people are lucky to be in relationships .. some people don’t get the chance . I guess sometimes things just don’t work out , not everything is ‘ meant to be ‘
Life’s difficult .. confusing .
November 11th, 2024 14:35
Caring dove said:
Well some people are lucky to be in relationships .. some people don’t get the chance . I guess sometimes things just don’t work out , not everything is ‘ meant to be ‘
Life’s difficult .. confusing .
November 11th, 2024 14:35
nearly santa time
orchidee said:
Yes! I had a first Christmas card today! True - bit early for cards. lol.
November 11th, 2024 12:42
orchidee said:
Yes! I had a first Christmas card today! True - bit early for cards. lol.
November 11th, 2024 12:42
nearly santa time
Cassie58 said:
The lead up to Christmas an exciting time for children. Your poem brought back many happy memories Jim. Memories of my own childhood and that of my own daughter and my grandchildren. A lovely poem. I took a break because there was alot going on and I needed a breather. All good wishes to you.
November 11th, 2024 11:32
Cassie58 said:
The lead up to Christmas an exciting time for children. Your poem brought back many happy memories Jim. Memories of my own childhood and that of my own daughter and my grandchildren. A lovely poem. I took a break because there was alot going on and I needed a breather. All good wishes to you.
November 11th, 2024 11:32
break up
Caring dove said:
Well I guess some relationships / friendships just go wrong or don’t last .. do they .
November 10th, 2024 13:53
Caring dove said:
Well I guess some relationships / friendships just go wrong or don’t last .. do they .
November 10th, 2024 13:53
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